Raj's House
~~Calling bell sound~~
Raj : Aah kinnan vannunnu thonnunnu...
Lakshmi : Aah etta.... ( Kitchenil ninn Lakshmi vilichu paranju)
Raj chenn vaathil thurakkunnu....
JK: Hellooiii.... evide evide lakshmyechi evide...?
Raj : Onnu adangu chekka.... ninakkullatharum kondu pooyittilla
JK : Aah atharinjal mathi....
Raj : Adhyam nee onn akathekk kereda chekka...
JK : Aah onn side aaye...
Rajum Jkum hallil irunn bhayankara varthamaanathil aayirunnu... appolann Lakshmi adukkaliyil ninn vannath... avar vann rajinte oppam irunnu...
JK : Entha lakshmyechi ith... njan karuthi enthengilum special (*cut off)
Lakshmi : Aah ...dhoo vann special item...
Appolan Jk ath shredichath aaro oral kitchenil ninnum irangi varunu.....ayale kand avan aadhyam onn njettiyengilum pineed ntho cheriyoru deshyam avanu thonni...avan 'ivelentha ivide' ennoru look raj nn koduthu...ath manassilakkiyennonam lakshmi paranju thudangi....
Lakshmi : Ninakk arinjude ee kuttiye.... Pinne enthina ingane nookunne... (To taeta) kutti .... Ath avanu kodukku...
Ith kettu taeta kaiyyilirunna dish JK de neere kaatti....avna athil ninn oru glass eduthu... Athil avanu ettavum priyapetta dish aayitt poolum avan ath aswadhikkan kazhiyunnundayirunnilla.... Avan avide undayirunna time muzhuvan taeta avarod idapedunnath shredhikkayirunnu.... Aval ippol thanne avaril oral aayi kazhinjirunnu.... Aval thante sthanam veendum tattiyedukkunnath Poole avanu thooni.... Ithokke kaanumbol avanu Avalodulla deshyam koodikkonde irunnu.... Dinnerinn shesham roomilethiya Jk ann urangiyittilla...Avante manassil ninnu aval maanjathe illa ennathann sathyam....pandu muthale avan aagrahichathellam aval thattiyeduthu.... Ini avan athin sammathikkilla ennoru theerumaanam eduthittanu avanu urangan aayath...
Pittenn ravile alarm sound kettittanu Jk unarnnath.... Kannu thurannappol thanne Avante mughath oru chiri undaayirunnu....thalenn rathriyil avan edutha theerumaanangal orthittavanam avan chirichath... Avan Avante routine work okke cheythathin shesham teamine meet cheyyan aayi pooyi.....
Avan avide ethiyappol thanne ellavarum avide present aayirunnu.... Aadhyam thanne Avante kannukkal thiranjath avale aanu..... Avalde mughathulla excitement kand avan chiri vannu....ellavarkkum ulla duties and responsibilities okke paranju koduthu...shesham training start cheyunnathin munne avark kurach free time koduthu avan cabinilekk pooyi...kurach kazhinj oral vannu taetaye vilichu kond jkde cabinilekk pooyi... Aval ullilekk kayariyappole deshyam kadichamarthi irikkunna Jk ne aanu kaanunnath...avalde ullonnu pidanju... Avale kandathum Avante kannukal onnude chuvannu....Avante randu kayikkalum meshamel shakthamaayi adichkond avan avalkk neere Avante mugham onn uyarthi.... Aah shabdhathil thanne aval onn nadungi....appolanu avalkk nere ulla Avante noottam aval shredhikkunnath ...athinte theevrathayil aval uruki pookunnath Poole avalkk thonni.... Virakkunna chuvadukaloode aval Avante munbil nishchalamaayi ninnu.... Enthann than cheythath ennum poolum manassillakathe....ippol nadakkunnath midhya aano atho yadharthyam aano ennum poolum thirichariyan aavathe aval avide ninnu.Appolum avante shakthamaaya noottam avalude meel undaayirunnu...aval ullil nalla pedi undaayittum athonnum purath kaanikathe thante virakkunna chundukal paramavadhi control cheythu kondu samsaarichu thudangi...
Taeta : Sir....Enne ..(cut off )
Jk : What do you think of yourself ...??
Jk deshyam kond onnude thilach mariyan thudangii...avan avale thalarthan vendi nookumbol avalkk athil oru mattom illa nn kandappol avan veendum avalod deshyam thonni.... Eth vidhenayum avale thakarkkanam enna otta udheshame avan ippol ullu....
Taeta : Sir.... Njan ntha chey(cut off)
Jk : Yes....than onnum cheythilla.... Innale nthina sir thanne nte kude paranj ayache... !!!
Aval onnum manassilaavathe avane thanne nooki ninnu avante noottam sahikkan aavathe vannappol aval avide thala thazhthi ninnu...
Jk : Answer me Ms Taeta ....
Taeta : Sorry sir....enikk ariyilla...
Jk : Because .....thaan aanu ini muthal enne assist cheyyan pookunne....
Ithu kettu aval melle thala uyarthi avane onnu nooki...like oru njettaloode ....avalkk ath kettappol Avante deshyathinte munpil erinjukondirunna avalde aathmaavil aake oru kulirma padarunna Poole thooni....jk thuradnnu...
Jk : That means...than aayirikkum ini teaminte full responsibility ettedukkende.....thanikk ithinte responsibilities arinjudengil ini ivide thudaranam ennilla.... Ith kunjukalikkan ulla place alla.... Special force enne oru thamashakk itte peru alla...athin athrekkum responsibilities und....ithonnum spoon feed cheyyenda karyam enikk illa.... Sir paranjath kondu maathram ee thavana thannod njan shemmikkunnu...ini nthengilum oru tettu thante bhagathunn undayyal njan appole thanne teamil ninn thanne out aakkum.... Do you understand...??
Taeta : Yes sir...
Avidam aake oru silence padarnnu....jk oru neduveerppedutha shesham chairilekk onn chanju irunnu...shesham avide irunna oru file eduthu nookkam thudangi...ennitt avalod purath wait cheyyan paranju.Aval avide ninnum thirinju nadakkan thudangi....aval pookunnath nooki Avan avide irunn ..bt Avante mughath oru chiri vidarnnu...oru prethikaarathinte chiri...
Kurach kazhinj avan teamine meet cheyyan aayi vannu...oppam taetayum undaayirunnu... Avan teaminodu onnude karyangal Ellam paranju koduthitt avarkk oru leader aayi taetaye thiranjeduthu....ellavarum valare happy aayi.... Appollum jk de mughathe aah chiriyil mattetho oru bhavam olichirunnu...shesham training start cheyyan aayi ellarum ready aayi...taetayum avarkkoppam chernnu....
Jk : Ok taem...let's start.... Wait...taeta....than ntha avide nikkunne....?? Come here... ( Avante aduth oru place Kannu kond action kaanikkunnu )
Taeta with big smile Avante aduthekk pookunnu...
Jk : Team....ennikk ningalodu oru kariyam parayan und... Taeta oru tett inn kaanichu ...aalde responsibility onn cherithaayitt marannu... Athin aalkk oru punishment und...ith njan inn thanne nadathunnath ith ellavarkkum oru paadam aavan vendiyaan...
Ithellam kettu taeta avide tharachu ninnu pooyi....
Jk : So.... Thante punishment...inn than store roomil aanu duty avide records entry cheyyanam...inn full day...
Taeta : Sir....( Aval ippolum oru njettalil aanu....avalkk ullil aake kude oru vingal ...athellam purath kaanikkatte aval reply koduthu...she is very good at hiding her emotions.... Avanu salute koduthathin shesham aval store roomilekk pooyi ...bt pookunna vazhi ithellam kude orth avalkk karachil vannu...ithavan ath hide cheyyan avalkk pattunnundayirunnilla...)
Aval avide ninnum nadann maarunnath nooki jk avide ninnu with smiling inside ....bt aval pookunnathinte idayil kayikkal kondu face thudakkunnath avan kandu...aval karayuvaann avan manassillayi...ath kannan aanu avan aagrahichath...bt ntho ath kanditt avanu happiness thonniyilla....pakaram vere ntho oru feeling....ath nthanenn manassillakkan Avante manass sammathikkathe Poole....
Annathe day angane kadann pooyi...valare late aayi aanu store roomile avalde duty kazhinje... Athinte kude innathe teaminte performance reports Ellam ready aakiyappol nalla late aayi... Bt avale njettichu kond avalde teammates avalkk vendi wait cheythu annathe training session vallipulli thettathe avalkk paranju koduth....ith kandappol aval nalla happy aayi....bt ithellam kandu kond vere oral dhoorath undaayirunnu...
ntho ayalkk ithonnum disturb aakkan thonniyilla...
Next day muthal aval avane njettichukond Ellam valare perfect aayi cheythukonde irunnu....bt avanum pinmaaran ready aayirunnilla.... Avalkk nalla reethiyil avan torture koduthonde irunnu....aaru nth cheythalum avarkk kittunnathinekkal kuduthal vazhakkum punishmentum aval avan koduthu....oro punishment ettuvangumbol avalil kaanunna sangadam next day avalil kaanilla... Ath avane vellathe alattunnundayirunnu....
6 months later....( Break time)
Traininil parikku pattiya oru memberinte karyangal Ellam nookukkayaanu taeta. Ithellam avide maari ninn jk kaanunnund. Aval ellavarum aayi company aayathum , avale ellavarum support cheyunnathum onnum avan ishttamaavunnilla...Entho onn manassil urappich avan cabinilekk pooyi...thirich vannu training thudangi. Valare kadinamaaya traning aanu...ellavarum nanne thalarnnirunnu...Ellam kazhinju ellavarum thirike pooyi ...but taetakk ineem joliyund...Ella karyangalum check cheytha shesham report Ellam prepare cheythu, athum aayi aval jk de cabinil ethi. Avan avalkk vendi waiting aayirunnu enn venamengil parayam....avale kandathum avanonn chirichu...
Jk : Aah ...than vanno....njan thanikk vendi waiting aayirunnu.... Actually oru important karyam parayan und..
Taeta : Enthan sir !!
Jk : Ath ... Nale muthal ningalkk outdoor duty alle.... Njan teaminte duty neeruthe schedule cheuthirunnu...ath official listum aakiyirunnu.... Appolalle inn aah accident nadanne...ini ippo oralde duty ....(sigh) entha cheyya... !!
Ithu kettu taeta nth cheyyanam nn aalochikkan thudangi... Jk ithellam oru side eye vech kaanunnund.... Avan melle paranju thudangi...
Jk : But... Avanu maathram njan nit duty aayirunnu ittirunne... correct avanu thanne inn angane aayi.... Oral Avante duty kude ettedukkayirunnengil kuzhappamillayirunnu (avan melle kann uyarthi avale onn nooki...avalde nilpp kand avanu chiri vannu....oru pakshe aduthath aval ntha parayan poovunnath enn avanu ariyam...)
Taeta : Sir.... Njan cheythollam....
Oru leader moreover oru army officer ennulla nilakkann aval onnum aalochikkathe anagne oru decision eduthath...but for him ...avan erinja koluth correct aayi koluthiya sandhoshathil aanu..ithu kettu Avante chundinte koonil oru chiri virinju....
Jk : Really....than ath cheyyumo !!! Wahh...ath nalla oru theerumaanam aanu...oru army officer ennulla nilakk enthum ottekk neridan ulla manobhavam aanu vendath...
(Avante vaakkukalil aval santhoshikkunnath avan kandu...ath kandu avanu avalodu sahathapam thonni)
Jk : Enthayalum inn kondu ningagule training kazhinju 2 weeks special duty kude kazhinjal ningalkk posting aavum... Appo velya kuzhappam varanilla...2 weeks alle thanikk manage cheyyan pattum ... I know...
Oru pakshe ithrem naalinte idakk aadhyamaayittavum avan avalod ingane happy aayi samsaarikkunnath..athukond thanne Avante vaakkukalude maayavalayathil aval kudungi ennonam avan parayunnath Ellam aval anusarikkan thudangi oduvil avalude poorna sammardham avan vaangi.... Pakshe athille chathikuzhi aval kandilla...
Next day morning
Jk Avante cabinil valare happy aayi irikkanu....inn nit muthal aval anubhavikkan pookunnath orthittavum...pettenn door thalli thurann aaro oral roomilekk Vannu ....aale kand aadhyam undaaya njettal maari avan onn chirichu..
Jk : Rajetta...entha(cut off)
Raj : what the hell is this jaykrishnan ??
Ayalude ee vakkukkal avane sherikkum njettich kalanju...ayal avalkk vendiyaan ippol vannath enn avanu nalla bhodham und...
Jk : Sir.... Njan ...enikk...manassillayilla...
Raj : Kinna .... Nee itrem naalum ee kaatti kuttiyathellam njan kandillann nadichu...pakshe ith...ottum sheriyaavilla....aa kutty ninnod enth tetta cheythe.. !!
Jk : Sir.... Enikk ath njan train cheyikkunna kuttal aanu...avaril ninn best maathre njan aagrahikkunnullu...athil kuduthal onnum aarodum enikk oru attachment illa...
Raj : (shouting) Stop it kinna..... Nee ee paranja attachment illayirunnengil ippo nee nte munpil ingane thala uyarthi nikkillayirunnu.... Yeah...lakshmi is right....you don't deserve h..... (Ath avide nirthunnu...oru neerghaniswasam edukkunnu....ennitt purathekk pookunnu)
Ithum kude aayappol avan onnude deshyam aayi.... Day duty kazhinj aval nit dutikk pooyi.... Avide ethi kazhinjann avan avalkkorukkiya chathikuzhi aval manassilaakiyath...thannod avanu ithrem deshyam und enna vasthutha athilere vishamam avalkk nalki...oru pakshe aah vedhana avalude athmavil aavum tharachath. Oru poola poolum kann adakkan avalkk pattilla... Oru villagum kaadum thammilulla border aanu place ...avide ithinu munp terorist attackum undaayittund...night and day duty okke kazhinj ethand 1hr maathre avalkk rest ullu... Athum kulammakkan avan paramavadhi shremikkum....Ellam kude aayappol aval vellathe weak aayi...pakshe thottu kodukkan aval ready aayirunnilla....enthineyo needanennavannam aval poruthikkonde irunnu....Ella divasathem report ethra vayikiyaalum aval thanne avanu kondu kodukkum.... Entho aval athil othiri santhoahichirunnu...
Angane 1week kadann pooyi....inn mid night nn munpe oru record avanu kondukodukkanam enn avan paranjitundayirunnu. Ann aval night dutikk pooyilla... Pakaram vere oralle paranjayachu.... Koorichoriyunna mazhayil aval recordsumaayi Avante quartersinte munpil ethi... Aval kure wait cheythittan avan Vann door thurannath... Aval aake nanajirunnu....ath kandittavanam avan avalodu akath wait cheyyan paranjitt towel edukkannayi pooyi....pakshe pettennan aval avide sofayil kidakkunne uniform shredhikkunnath ...avalude hridhayam veegathil idikkan thudangi.....than samshayikkunnath sheriyavaruthe enn prarthich aval athilulla name vaayichu.... "Gulabi Singh" oru njettaloode aval avide tharachu ninnu pooyi.... Aa mazhayilum aval kattiyeriyunnath Poole avalkk thonni....
"Taeta...."
Aah vili avale chindhakalil ninn unarthi.... Aval melle thirinju avane onn nooki ....pakshe oru second poolum Avante kannukale nookan ulla Shakthi avalkk kittiyilla.... Aval poolum ariyathe avalude kannukal niranju vannu.... Shareeram motham thalarunnath Poole avalkk thonni...aval veegam thanne aah file avide tabilil vechitt purathekk oodi pooyi....
Ippol enthann nadannathenn manassilaavathe oru kaiyyil towel aayi nikkuaanu jk ...Avante kannukal ippolum aah mazhayathoode iruttilekk oodi marayunna taetayil thanne aanu... Avanu swasam poolum nilakkunnath Poole thooni....avan melle aduthulla oru chairilekk irunnu....kannukkal murukki adach...oru kai kond netti thadavikond Avan avide irunnu....pettenn kurach munpe nadann karyangal avanu orma vannu........ Than vannu vilichappol thirinju nookiya taetaye....avalude kaiyil oru uniform undaayirunnu...avalude kannukkal chuvann thudangiyirunnu...karayanennavannam....swasam edukkan aval valare budhimuttunudayirunnu....kayikkal virachirunnu....
Avalude aah thakarnna roopam avanu aalochikkan kude pattunnilla..... Athreyum naal avalodu thonniya deshyam okke avalude aah avastha kandappol alinju illathe aayath poole.... Pakshe avan vicharichath Poole avalude thakarchal avanu innum aaghoshikkan kazhinjilla....Avante ullu kidann pidakkan thudangi....minnalettu Avante hridhayam karinju pookunnath Poole thonni....avan poolum ariyathe Avante kannukalil kude kannuneer ozhuki irangan thudangi...Avante chundukal vithunbaan orungi......
Avante chindhakalil motham avalude chiricha mugham maathramaayi....
Pettenn randu kaiyikkal purakiloode Vann avane punarnnu.... Entho avanu ath asahaneeyamaayi thooni....avan melle thala pakuthi charich purakilekk onn nooki.... Blanket kondu paathi moodiya oru roopam.....
Jk : Gulabi..... I'm (sigh) I'm sorry....I can't....umm..... Amit (driver) will drop you.
Gulabi : No sir...it's ok ... I'll go myself...
Aval melle avide kidanna uniform aayi roomilekk pooyi....avan ippolum taeta oodi maranja iruttilekk thanne nooki irikkan....enthann thanikk samnhavikkunnath enn poolum manassillakathe.... Annathe nit avan angane irunnu....
Pittenn ravile muthal aval avane avoid cheyunnu enn avanu manassillayi...reports poolum mattarudeyengilum kaiyyil koduthayakkum.... Duty placil chennal mattullavar kude ullath kondu avanu karyamaayi onnum avalod samsaarikkan kazhiyarilla. Avan orikkal poolum karuthiyirunnilla avalude mounam avane ithreyadhikam vedhanippikkum enn.... Aval Avante jeevithathinte oru bhagamaayi kazhinjirunnu ennulla sathyam valare vedhanayode avan manassillakki....aah sathyam ulkkollan avanu kurach samayam vendi vannu.... Pathiye avan manassilaakki Avante ullile egoye poolum aval jayichu kazhinju nn .... Avanu ithuvare mattarodum thonnathoru aduppam avalodu thonniyirunnu ....ath swayam angikkarikkan avanu pattunnundaayirunnilla....athinu vendi aanu than ithrem kattikuttiyathenn aalochichappol avanu avanodu thanne veruppu thonni.... Inn duty kazhinju aval varumbol nthayalum avalodu Ellam thurann parayanam enn avan manassilurappichu....pakshe avane njettichu kond avide ethiyath raj aayirunnu....ayalude mughabhavam avanu manassillayilla.... Ayal avanu oru letter koduthu..... Avanu just 1 week selection campilekk duty mattikkondulla letter aayirunnu..... Avan ayale onn dhayaneeyamaayi nooki....
Raj : Ninnodulla sneham konda kinna.... Ineem nee Karanam aah kutti karanyunnath kaanan vaiyya... Nee ippo thanne irangikko ...engile nale angu ethu...
Jk : Rajetta..... Eni....enikk avale onn kananam.... Please.....
Raj : Ini athin aval sammathikkumenn enikk thonnunilla
Athreyum paranju ayal purathekk pooyi...enth cheyannam ennariyathe avan avide ninnu ..thaan thirich varumbolekkum aval posting kitti maarittundaavum enn sathyam avane onnude thalarthi... oru mappu chodhikkan poolum avanu pattunnilla enna vasthutha avanil aazhathil murivelppichu..... Ini ulla naal thaan avalodu cheytha tettukal orthu pashchathapikkendi varum ennorth avan yathra thirichu.... Divasangal kadannu pooyi.... Raj oru divasam jkye kaanan ethi... Pookunnathin munp nale team camp vidum ennukude ariyikkan marannilla... Ann rathri avan urangiyilla...enthinenn kude ariyathe Avante ullu vingikondirunnu....oduvil ath kannuneerinte roopathil purathekk vannu....Avan thirike campil vannu...vannapade rajinte order kitti taetayude details thappi thaan pookaruthenn... Athin oru achante shasanyumkude kudikalarnnappol ath anussarikkathirikkan avanu saadhichilla....Taeta ennath thante jeevithathile oru apoornamaaya adhyayamayi thudarum ennavan urappichu.....
Months later
Sikkim il malayidichil undaayi ... Oru gramam muzhuvan manniladiyil aayi... Avide rescue missionu vendi jk and taem und.... But ineem oru batch special taemine kude veenam... Hours later new team ethi..... Avare meet cheyyan aayi jk campil ethi ....appolan Vanna 12 peril oru roopathil Avante kann udakkiyath .....oru nimisham avante swasam nilachu pooyi..... Peyye avan manassil mandrichu ........
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"Taeta"
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