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Apne dil ki baat bol li ab chalo story shuru karta hai...🙂
Here we go!
Vipul open the door and comes near purvi she was standing near window and felt lil nervous ! Vipul smiles...
Vipul : Hello Purvi ji... kaisi ha aap..?
Purvi : Mai bilkul achi aap kaise haa?
Vipul : Mai bhi acha hu.. Apke mama ne bataya apke bare mai or tabse hi aapse milne ka bohot mann hone laga
Purvi : Karun mama ne bhi tha apke bare main...
Vipul : Purvi ji mai point pe aake baat karunga main apko sach main bohot zayda pasand karta hu apka nature behavior aap khud bohot khoobsurat ha dil se shakal se... par mai apko na bilkul force nahi karunga ki aap is shadi ke liye ha keh do apko agar mai pasand hu ya aap waqt lena chahti ha to mai intezar karunga...
Purvi : Vipul ji ek ladki ko zindagi me bas acha ek parivar or samjhne wala saathi chaiye hota ha meri Dadi yahi chahti ha ki mai jaha jau khush rahu sukhi rahu or parivar ko sath lekar chalu hamesha mujhe nahi pata apko mere me kya pasand aaya par agar aap mere parivar ki izzat karte hai to mere liye wahi bohot hai
Vipul : Purvi ji mai hamesha apki dadi ki respect karunga kyuki meri khud bhi Dadi ha isiliye mai ache se samjhta hu Dadi ka pyaar unki fikar or rahi baat izzat dene ki agar aap mere parivar ko itni respect de sakti ha to mai kyu nahi... mujhe aap bohot pasand ha ye baat me dil se keh raha hu aage jo apka faisla...
Purvi : Aapne mujhe kuch bhi pucha hi nahi or agar mai haa bhi kehti hu to meri kuch sharte hongi or shayad apko pasand na aaye meri sharte...
Vipul : Aapki sharte hai zarur kuch soch samjh ke hi aap puchnengi or maine apse kaha na apki marzi ho to hi haa kahiyega kisi dabav mai nahi.. or rahi baat aapse kuch puchne ki to mai apko apni wife bana ke apke sath shuru se life Starr karna chahta hu jaha aap mujhe samjhe mai apko samjhu humari dosti ho dheere dheere humara rishta aage badhe...
Purvi : Agar meri dadi is rishte ke liye maan jati ha to mere taraf se bhi Haa samjhiye or tabhi mai apke apni sharte bataungi...
Vipul : (smile) It's ok purv ji mai puri tarah samjh samjh gaya chaliye hum bahar chalte or apki Dadi ko bolengi manzoor hoga...
Purvi (smile) Chaliye...
Both came in hall everybody looked at them Pramila sigh them to sit They sits on sofa Dadi looking at purvi she was smiling little...
Pramila : Vipul ji apko humari purvi pasand ha kya..?
Vipul : Ji mujhe pasand haa purvi ji
Karun : Or purvi beta tumko pasand ha kya vipul ji...?
Purvi : (she nodded lil in yes) Par jab tak Dadi haa nahi karenge hum shadi nahi karenge Dadi aap boliye aap kya chahta ha...
Dadi : Beta jab tujhe pasand haa to mujhe bhi rehna tujhe ha inke sath to tera pasand karna zaruri ha or vipul ko bhi tu pasand ha to mai kaise naa bol sakti hu bas tum dono khush raho
Vipul : Dadi agar apke mann main zara bhi shaq ha to aap waqt le lijiye mujhe koi prblm nahi kyuki shadi ek bohot bada faisla hota ha ladki ke liye or uske ghar walo ke liye main ache se samjh sakta hu...
Karun : Amma agar purvi or vipul dono ek dusre ko passnd karte hai to dikat kya haa...
Rakesh : Karun Amma ko ache se soch lene do aakhir ye unki poti ki zindagi ka sawal haa..
Geeta : Haa beti ki shadi to soch samjh ke hi log karte ha sochne dijiye
Dadi : Mujhe manzoor ha aage purvi or vipul ko rishta meri Haa samjhiye
Purvi : Par meri kuch shartein haa
Geeta : Haa bolo beta
Rakesh : Haa beta...
Purvi : Mai shadi ke bar bhi naukri karna chahti hu jitna bhi paisa mai kamaungi wo sab Dadi ko dungi or Dadi se har hafte milne aaungi bass yahi choti si shartein haa meri...
Vipul : Mujhe manzoor haa ye apki sari shartein or mom dad ko bhi koi prblm nahi hogi kyu mom dad...
Both nodded happily in yes all were smiling ☺ just then karun says...
Karun : To aaj hi sagai karlete haa mahurat bhi acha ha kyu pramila..
Pramila : Haa humne to anguthi le rakhi ha bas haa ka intezar tha...
Rakesh : Humne bhi auguthi le rakhi haa to aaj hi sagai karlete haa baki pandit ji se keh kar shadi ki taarikh nikalav lenge...
All nodded happyily Dadi came forward and put chunni or purvi's head purvi smiles then rituals start soon vipul and purvi got engaged Both take blessings from elders etc
(Ye sab faltu nahi likha ja raha mere bc par detailing karne ki aadat ha🥲)
The scene shifts to Panchayat where vir was feeling restless Mama Sarkar saw him and goes near him He put his hand on his shoulder....
MS : Vir kya hua beta itna bechain kyu lag raha hai tabyat theek nahi lag rahi to ghar chal ke aaram kar..
Vir : Ye aisi bechaini jo aaram se nahi kisi ke didar se shant hogi...
MS : Karle phir didar kyuki teri ye halat dekhi nahi ja rahi hai mujhse apni Maa ko kuch nahi batata mujhe kuch nahi btata kam se kam shikha se to bata sakta hai aakhir kon ha wo ladki kaha rehti hai naam kya hai..
Vir : Kon ha wo..? Wo meri ha Mama sarkar meri zidd mera pagalpan mera aaj mera kal mera bita hua kal mere saanse unhi se chalti haa raato ko neend bhi unhi ki yaadon ko yaad karke aati hai mera subha unhi ke tassvero ke dekh kar hoti hai.... mera har ek rooh mai basi ha wo unka har ek aansu har ek dard har ek hasi ka hisab rakhta ha ye dil ye aankhein or naam unka naam zindagi hai Mama sarkar meri zindagi... Ishq nahi aata mujhe yaad rehta unka naam hai sukoon se 2 pal dekh lu lagta ha umar bhar ka guzara hogaya
MS : Jaa kar kehta kyu nahi ha use itna behpana ishq ha to aakhir 40 gao ka Raja sabko jhuka kar chalne wala aakhir dil ki baat bolne main ye dart kyu tere pyaar ko samjhegi wo...
Vir : Aksar bade bade jung lad kar jeetne wala dil ke jung se har jaate hain wo ek aisi jung ha jise mai tukde tukde ho kar bhi harna nahi chahta... wo ha to meri hi chahe pyaar se ya zabardasti se...
Then he left from there in anger ms was feeling helpless he also goes from there...Vir sit in a car called someone and then he starts the car and goes.... While driving he was open the alcohol bottle and drinking He reached near Lake and came out from car He stand near car and continously drinking.... After sometime one man came he was hell scared but moving towards Vir... Vir saw him
Vir : (drunked voice) Kaisi ha wo ha? Tune pata kiya na unke ghar mai sab theek chal raha ha na koi pareshani mai to nahi..? Ro nahi rahi na wo..? Are bol... bolta kyu nahi ha tu....
Bhola : (scared) Maalik maine pata kiya ha ache se sab kuch or mujhe ye sunne mai aaya ha ki... wo....
Vir : Kya wo...? bol kya hua... meri bechaini ka imtihaan mat le Bhola..
Bhola : Malik ye pata chala Rakesh ka beta ha na Vipul usi ke sath aaj purvi ji ki sagai ho gayi or jaldi hi shadi hone wali hai (scared voice)
Vir's eyes get red and and one tear drop flows from his eyes... He broke the alcohol bottle from his hand and some pieces pricked in his hand His hand were bleeding badly ! Bhola get shocked and going near him just then Vir stopped him and in madness vir started laughing
Bhola : Ye kya hogaya Malik ko itni sharab pi hui ha itna khoon beh raha hai haathon or pagalo ki tarah hase ja rahe hai hey bholenath ye kya ho raha hai ab maalik kya karenge...
Vir : Shadi.. shadi.. shadi wo kisi or se shadi karengi kaise unhe ehsaas nahi mai unka intezar kar raha hu aaj se nahi pichle 15 saalo se har waqt har pal har ghadi unka intezar kiya hai or aaj wo kisi or ki hona chahti hai..?
The he shout loudly : Kyuuuu....!!!!!
Bhola : Maalik ghar chaliye abhi aap hosh main nahi hai or doctor ko bhi bulana padega apka zakham bohot gehra ha chaliye maalik ghar chalte
Vir : Kisi or se shadi karengi wo kaise mumkin ha ye kismat mai kaise likha ha unke mere alawa koi or haa ?
Bhola : Shayad wo apki ha hi nahi 15 saal intezar kiya apne or aaj wo kisi or sagai kar chuki hai Wo apki nahi hai Maalik...
Vir : (see him red eyes) Meri nahi hai? To phir kiski hai ? (Laughed) Wo sirf meri thi ,wo sirf meri ha wo sirf meri hi rahegi.. duniya mai aisa koi paida nahi hua jo unhe mujhse cheen sake... Sagai bhale unhone kisi or se karli ho par sindoor virendra pratap singh naam ka unki kismat mai ha rasme bhale kisi or ke sath karle par shadi ke fhere to mere sath hi lena hoga pasand wo kisi or karle par jism pe haq to mera hi hoga sirf or sirf mera.
He loose his balance coz he drunked Bhola hold him Vir get unconscious ! Bhola open the car and settle him he also sits in driving and start the car and left for haveli... It was night car reached haveli Pd comes bcz he was waiting for vir bhola open the door pd and ms saw him and run towards him pd had tears in her eyes...
Pd : Bhai ji ye kya hua mere bete ko dekhiye na itna khoon beh raha mere bete ke hatho se bhai ji kuch kariye na
MS : Prakshi tu shant hoja vir ko phele uske kamre mai le chalo Bhola jaldi se doctor ko bula le
Bhola : Mama Sarkar maine doctor sahab ko phone kardiya tha yaha aane se phele se aate honge hum maalik ko kamre main lekar chalte haa tab tak doctor aajaenge...
MS : Tum sab vir ko kamre mai lekar jao mai yahi rukta hu doctor ke sath aajaunga...
They nodded bhola helped vir they came in vir's room and settle down on bed Pd sits near him & craessing his hairs soon ms and doctor came.. Doctor checked him properly and done the bandage he open the eyes.. PD helped him to drink water and he fall sleep... Doctor goes from there ms again came in room...
Pd : Bhai ji vir !
MS : Theek ha wo Prakshi use aaram ki zarurat ha abhi kal subha hosh aa jaega to baat karlena
Pd : Kyu aise kar raha ha Vir bhai ji mujhse nahi dekha jaegi mere bete ki aisi halat...
MS : Zayda mat socho ye tu janti hai na ki vir kitna ziddi ha agar use wo ladki chaiye to wo lekar rahega hum use nahi rok paenge Vir abhi so raha ha jaise jungle mai sher sote ha or jab jagta ha to apni manzir ki taraf jata ha Vir bhi wahi karega hume vir ka pura sath nahi dena magar uske sath peeche peeche chalna zarur ha jaha wo galat hoga samjhane ki koshish karenge abhi chal ke tu bhi aaram karle aise der raat jagna theek nahi BP badh jata ha tumhara chalo so jao
Pd : Theek ha bhai ji Bhola yahi rehna yaha se kahi mat jana Vir ko zarurat pade kisi cheez ki mujhe jaga dena...
Bhola : Haa Badi maalkin jaiye aap dono aaram kar lijiye mai hu yaha pe
Both left from his room Bhola sits on sofa silently... In purvi's home Dadi sitting on bed and thinking something purvi came and put the clothes in the cupboard...
Purvi : Dadi maine sudha ko rok liya haa apke kehne pe or uski maa se bhi baat karli phele hi deri ho gayi thi isiliye sudha aaj yahi rukegi waise dadi aaj to chhat pe sona ha na mai bistar laga ke aati hu aap sudha ke sath upar aa jana theek hai
Dadi : Theek ha Beta aajaungi
Purvi goes and then sudha comes with water and put it on table and goes near Dadi...
Sudha : Dadi kya hua kya soch rahi ha chaliye dawai kaha lijiye...
Dadi : Dawai kaha liya ha beta chalo chhat pe jaate haa...
Sudha : Dadi aap ashant kyu ha konsi baat apko pareshan kar rahi bataiye
Dadi : Beta vipul or purvi ki shadi pata nahi kyu mann bechain sa ha theek nahi lag raha ha ye rishta par purvi khush lag rahi hai isiliye main naa nahi keh pai
Sudha : Apki chinta jayaz ha Dadi par ho par mujhe aisa lagta hai ki vipul acha ladka ha warna itne bade ghar ka ladka purvi se shadi kyu hi kanra chahega uske pass ache ache rishte aaenge honge na...
Dadi : Haa beta lagta to aisa hi ha or sabse badi baat purvi aaj khush lagi isiliye main chup rahi par pata nahi kyu mann keh raha ye theek nahi or jab purvi ko dekhti hu to sab dimag se nikal deti hu or sochti hu bhagwaan bura nahi karega mere bacchi ke sath
Sudha : Aap zayda mat sochiye Dadi purvi ke naseeb mai acha hi likha hai ye mujhe hamesha se lagta ha or rahi baat vipul ki to mujhe wo sharif laga ab hume kal se shadi ki baki ki tayari bhi karni ab aap chaliye chal ke so jate ha warna purvi aajegi or bina matlab pareshaan ho jaegi.. chaliye..
Dadi : Haa beta chal
They both goes on terrace where purvi was waiting for them Dadi smiles and laid down purvi cover her with blanket and sleep near her and hold her sudha also sleep near them.. In haveli Vir open his eyes and looked here and there and found himself in his room he see that bandage and remembering Bhola's words Vir's eyes automatically gets red and teary he remove the blanket and goes near cupboard and take red colour kurta In all these Bhola's sleep broken and he looked at VIR ...
Bhola : Maalik aap kaha ja rahe aisi halat main apko aaram karna chaiye
Vir : Bhola phone lagao mere admiyo ko jald or gaadi nikalo
Bhola : Par maalik sab gussa honge mujh par apko aisi halat main bahar lekar gaya to.
Vir : Aisi kaisi halat hath pair nahi toote ha mere ab jaldi se phone lagao or jaisa ma kahunga waisa karne ko bolna samjhe... chalo...
Vir goes Bhola don't have any other option he also goes behind him.. Vir was waiting for him in the car Bhola sits in driving seat and dailed no and he give the mobile phone to Vir.. Bhola driving the car and listening and his eyes get wide and he doesn't have guts to stop him... Vir cuts the call and sitting silently..
Vir : (in mind) Meri saanse cheena ki koshish ki ha na Ab tera tinka tinka barbad karega ye Virendra pratap singh yaad rakhna...
In Rakesh's house Vipul is busy in his rooms with his girlfriend Rakesh and his wife sitting together...
Rakesh : (drinking) Dekhna ab hume waaris bhi milega or pair ke neeche bhi rahegi wo ladki ek bar vipul ki biwi ban kar to aajae....
Geeta : Wo sab to theek hai par 5 crore mera beta ji ji karke baat kar rahe tha us ladki ke samne are itna kya natak karvana duniya bhar ki ladkiya pagal ha uske peeche
Rakesh : Wo sab to theek hai par kabhi kabhi gadhe ko bhi baap banana padta hai 5 crore dunga thodi dunga sirf 50 laakh saste main kaam nipta saanp bhi marjaega lathi bhi naho tootegi...
Geeta : Ye sahi rahega... phele shadi hojane dete ha phir denge paise or phir agar kuch bola uska mama to sabko jooth hi lagega...
Rakesh : Shabash Geeta ji... chaliye so jaate hai kal se drama part 2 shuru karna haa...
Both laughed and goes near bed and switch off the lights and sleep In Vipul room he also sleeping with girlfriend after sometime near 3 am... Rakesh's phone start ringing his open his eyes in frustration and open the lights....
Geeta : Itni raat ko kon phone kar raha hai dekhiye...
Rakesh : Dekh raha hu.. (he pickup the call) Hello Dheeraj kya hua itni raat ko phone kiya (dheeraj tell him the matter Rakesh's forehead sweating) Kyaaa....? Kaise hua ye sab mai mai aa raha hu wahi ruko...
Geeta : Kya hua sab theek ha ?
Rakesh didn't even answer her ques and goes she get confused... Rakesh driving harshly and soon he reached there and see that Dheeraja was putting out the fire Rakesh hand's trembled Dheeraj see him and came near him...
Rakesh : (loud & anger) Dheeraj mere teeno factory main aag kaise lagi ???
Dheeraj : Pata nahi kaise lagi wo 2 factory mai to pura nuksaan hogaya ye wali factory main koshish ha zada nuksaan na ho aap shant hojaiye...
Rakesh : Kaise shant ho jau mera croro ka nuksaa hogaya or tum keh rahe shant hojau (he was hitting his head in anger and frustration)
Dheeraj : Aag bujha raha hu aap chinta mat kariye or dusre wale factory pe Ratan ha...
Rakesh : Are kaise chinta na karu ek ek kaam karo yaha tum sambhalo me dusre factory mai jar dekhta hu...
Dheeraj nodded and Rakesh sits in car and goes.... soon he reached in another factory He came and looked at here and there
Rakesh : Ratan kaha ho.... Ratan.... just then he heard a blast sound in the factory he get scared from the found and looses her balance but one man hold him... Rakesh up her head and gulp the saliva in fear his head was sweating....
Ok that's all for today ignore spelling and grammatical mistakes...
Next part tabhi aaega jab upar jo baat bola ha na wo follow karoge warna theek hai meri marzi jab bhi part likhu or update karu...🙂🙂🙂
Bye bye
To be continued.