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𝐉𝐮𝐝𝐠𝐞- AngelBreeze_
Winner (1st Place)
Palingenesis
Cover - 3/5
Title- 5/5
Blurb- 8/10
Plot- 19/20
Grammar and vocabulary - 19/20
Character and development - 9.5/10
Writing style - 19/20
Overall - 9.5/10
Total- 92/100
Remarks- I loved the way you used "Palingenesis" (which means rebirth; regeneration) for the title. It was such a delight to read your story. All the characters are sooo beautifully written, none of them were overshadowing another. The cover could be a little better because the fonts are kinda eliminating the beauty.
1st Runner up (2nd Place)
Beyond His Evil
Cover - 4/5
Title- 3/5
Blurb- 8/10
Plot- 19/20
Grammar and vocabulary - 19/20
Character and development - 8/10
Writing style - 18/20
Overall - 8.5/10
Total- 87.5/100
Remarks- Your story has a great potential. The storyline is very interesting and characters are well-written but try to rewrite the blurb as it's giving away too much information, this way your story will look less appealing and mysterious to the readers.
2nd Runner up (3rd Place)
The Cursed Bond
Cover - 4.5/5
Title- 5/5
Blurb- 8/10
Plot- 17/20
Grammar and vocabulary - 19/20
Character and development - 8.5/10
Writing style - 17/20
Overall - 8/10
Total- 86.5/100
Remarks- Your story is very well-written although I think the blurb is giving away too much information but the plot was very interesting and characters are well-written as well.
Other Participants
Bood tind on a Black Rose
Cover- 3/5
Title- 4/5
Blurb - 6/10
Plot- 17/20
Grammar and vocabulary - 19/20
Character and development - 9/10
Writing style - 18/20
Overall Enjoyment - 8/10
Total- 84/100
Remarks- You have a great plot but you can make it even better if you edit your title and cover a bit. Characters are well-written but try to shorten the paragraphs, it'll look more neat and tidy.
The Calling
Cover - 2/5
Title- 2/5
Blurb- 7/10
Plot- 18/20
Grammar and vocabulary - 19/20
Character and development - 9/10
Writing style - 18/20
Overall - 8/10
Total- 83/100
Remarks- One beautiful story with such amazing characters and plot is sometimes hard to find but you managed to capture my heart with your writing. Just little changes in your cover and title (because it's not delivering the accurate vibe of the story) and this will turn into an amazing piece of art.
His Queen
Cover - 4/5
Title- 3/5
Blurb- 7/10
Plot- 17/20
Grammar and vocabulary - 18/20
Character and development - 9/10
Writing style - 18/20
Overall - 7.5/10
Total- 83.5/100
Remarks- I really enjoyed reading this book, although being an werewolf category fan this storyline was somewhat common to me. But I have to talk about how beautifully you have written each character. Only if you could shorten the blurb as it's giving away too much information and making the readers less curious about the book.
Freeing Anvi
Cover - 3/5
Title- 3/5
Blurb- 7/10
Plot- 17/20
Grammar and vocabulary - 18/20
Character and development - 9/10
Writing style - 19/20
Overall - 8.5/10
Total- 84.5 /100
Remarks- The only drawback in your book is the cover, I love the colour palette but the fonts in it isn't doing justice to the cover. Contact a good graphic designer if you want any help. I love the way you portrayed every character, they had their own elements without overpowering fellow characters. Keep it up.
Zahn Und Klaue
Cover - 3/5
Title- 4/5
Blurb- 5/10
Plot- 17/20
Grammar and vocabulary - 18/20
Character and development - 5/10
Writing style - 16/20
Overall - 7.5/10
Total- 75.5/100
Remarks- I love the way you used a different language for the story title (Zahn Und Klaue - tooth and claw). I also have to say that your cover is very unique but the fonts are very messy. Now your plot has a good potential, but you're writing way tooo long chapters which may bore the readers. I'd suggest to divide the chapters into two parts then publish it.
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