Re:zero and the boy who comma...

By Okdhcvng

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Y/N L/N ... This impulsive child was sent to Re:Zero, with the powers of the Ten Commandments from the anime... More

Prologue (new)
Chapter 1 Restarting In Another World
Part 2 Making friends
Part 3 Fighting
Part 4 Getting Carried
Chapter 2 Relaxing In Another World
Part 2 Having Fun
Part 3 Déjà vu
Part 4 Playing Butler
Part 5 Changing Fate
Part 6 Talking
Part 7 Starting The Plot
Part 8 Giving It My All
Part 9 Ending The Arc
Special Snow day in another world
Part 2 Frozen Bonds
Chapter 3 Restarting the plot in another world
Arc 3-4 Bio
Part 2 Tales Of The Capital
Part 3 Politics
Part 4 Calm
Part 6 Guilt
Part 7 Being An Idiot
Part 8 My Actions
Part 9 Consequences
Part 10 Negotiating
Part 11 Whale Hunting
Part 12 Victoery
Chapter 4 Who am I in This World?
Part 2 Castle of Dreams
Part 3 Playing A Game of Chess
Part 4 Second Time's The Charm
Immorality If
Wrath If: Perseverance
Wrath If: Determination
Regret (200 follower special)
Prologue (old)
better Books Premotion
New book
Rewrite Sneak Peek!
Christmas list Re:Zero

Part 5 A Storm

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Rem and Y/N are waiting for Subaru next to a carriage. Luckily it wasn't long, as Subaru had grabbed his things with the help of Wilhelm 

Subaru: Rem, how long until we reach the mansion? 

Rem: about two and a half days, I think 

Subaru: over two days? It took less than half a day to get here!

Rem: we cannot go that way. There is a fog over the road, so we need to take a detour

Subaru: who cares about fog?

Rem: the fog is created by the White Whale. Should we encounter it, we would not survive 

Subaru and Wilhelm seem distraught by the news 

Rem: thank you for lending us your dragon-drawn carriage 

Rem bowed to Wilhelm 

Rem: in my master's stead, I offer my gratitude for the favor you have shown is till today 

Wilhelm: it's nothing. Please take care 

Y/N: until we meet again 

Y/N and Subaru got into the back, Rem got in the drivers seat. 

Subaru: are you getting anything from Ram? 

Rem: no, our shared sense is consciously controlled, to an extent. This morning, I think that what I sensed was something that exceeded my sister's control 

Y/N: so Ram didn't want us to know 

Subaru: is she trying to keep us away? 

Y/N: maybe 

Subaru: but why?

Y/N: well it is Ram, so she might not want to worry Rem about it 

Subaru: DAM IT! 

Subaru kick the floor of the carriage 

Y/N: calm down

Subaru: how can I be calm right now! Emilia could be in trouble and I can't do anything!

Y/N: getting mad isn't going to help us 

Subaru: I know it's just...

Y/N: you care, I get it. But getting mad now isn't going to help us, you can get mad all you want once we get back, for now though we need to stay calm 

Subaru: how are you so calm?

Y/N: oh no, I am angry. I'm just ignoring it 

Subaru: that can't be healthy

Y/N: it's not don't do it 

Subaru: so why are you doing it?

Y/N: it was how I coped 

Subaru: owe... 

Y/N:....

Rem:...

Subaru:....

Y/N: I'm going to take a quick nap 

Y/N lies down on his seat, using his coat as a pillow 

Y/N: wake me up if you want anything 

Y/N closed his eyes and drifted off to sleep

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Rem: Y/N

Y/N shot up and looked to Rem. Who is now sitting where Subaru was

Y/N: yes

Rem: we're stopping for the night 

Y/N: wait night!

Y/N looked around and it was indeed night

Y/N: I slept through the whole day

Rem: that is right 

Y/N was about to leave carriage

Ram: wait

Y/N: hmm? 

Rem: I was thinking that we could leave without Subaru early in the morning 

Y/N: why?

Rem: Subaru is a good man. But I don't want him to push himself and damage his gate

Y/N: Rem

Rem: yes

Y/N hugged Rem

Rem: Y-Y/N!

Y/N: Please don't leave

Rem: b-but...

Y/N: please... Don't go... 

Rem hugged Y/N back 

Rem: okay Y/N, I won't go 

Y/N and Rem continued to hug. Until Rem broke it

Rem: shall we get settled in?  

Y/N: yeah

Y/N left that carriage to go to the inn, with Rem following behind. Y/N turned to Rem, who gave the boy a smile back. Y/N did return the smile

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Y/N: 'she's lying'


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time skip brought to you by Y/N carrying the wight of all the deaths he didn't stop 

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Y/N is lying in his bed. He had woken up early, but didn't leave instead he was just thinking about why he could remember loops, to distract himself 

Y/N: it can't be time travel, it has to be something specific. How can you travel to the past to effect the future, because no matter how you look at it, it's you trying to effect event that had already happened. If the past has already happened, then travailing to it can't change the future because you've already traveled to the past

Y/N put his arms in the air 

Y/N: then if it works where the past you travel too becomes your present, then you can't change the future because that's now the past, which can't be change by the present 

Y/N puts his hands on his face 

Y/N: meaning, Subaru has to be reversing time, but not erasing it from happening, but also is effecting peoples memory's, except Subaru and me to and existent. Subaru I understand, since he is the trigger to the rewind, but I can somehow? It might be because I'm not from the world or Subaru's, and time effects me diffrently- wait the theory of relativity... No that wouldn't work

Y/N sat up on the bed and continued to try to explain how he can vividly remember loops  

Subaru: *knock* *knock* *knock* Y/N!

Y/N opened the door 

Y/N: ye-

Subaru: Rem's gone!

Y/N grabbed his stuff

Y/N: let's go after her then

Subaru: how!?

Y/N: you still got money in you?

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Otto: I'll accept your payment, but I think this is very reckless!

Y/N: we know, but our hands are tide 

Subaru got into the back of Otto's carriage 

Y/N: thank you for accepting 

Otto: it's no problem 

Y/N joined Subaru in the back 

Otto: I'll be back in a bit 

Y/N gives Otto a thumbs up 

Subaru: why would she do this?

Y/N: because she cares about you

Subaru: how can you be so sure?

Y/N: she asked me last night to join her

Subaru: why didn't you stop her!

Y/N: I ask her to stay, she told me she would, but that as clearly a lie 

Subaru: damn it! Why am I so useless

Y/N: useless? Subaru, your far from useless 

Subaru: your the only one who seems to think so 

Y/N: I think that's do to the fact no one knows who dose all the important stuff 

Subaru: you?

Y/N: I do the heavy lifting. You do all the gathering and planning 

Subaru: I know. I just feel so useless 

Y/N: aaa, enough of this useless talk. This isn't helping, it's just making us feel like shit 

Subaru: *sigh* your right 

Y/N put his arm around Subaru's shoulders 

Y/N: how about this. When we get back, I'll ask Elsa to give you some personal training

Subaru: I would rather die, then have to train with Elsa 

Y/N: why do people say that? I wish people who said "I'd rather die" actually die........ Wait a minute

Subaru gives a chuckle to the joke 

Subaru: okay, dark, but good 

Y/N: like our life? 

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Y/N and Subaru: hahahahaha! 

Otto: alright I'm done!

Otto sat at the drivers seat, and started the journey ahead 


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time skip brought to you by Chibi Y/N singing 99 duel monster cards on the wall 

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Y/N: 4 duel monster cards on the wall

Subaru: 4 duel monster cards 

Y/N: take one down and trade it around 

Subaru: 3 duel monster cards on the- WALL!

the carriage came to a sudden stop, both of the boys were flung around 

Otto: I'm sorry-

Y/N: it's fine

Otto: -but can we please turn back now? 

Subaru: huh? Why?

Otto: my ground dragon is frightened. It instinctively knows that this place is too dangerous to approach 

Y/N: where are we exactly?

Otto pulled out a map

Otto: we're already in the Mathers domain, near a village called Arlam

Subaru: got it!

Subaru jumped out of the carriage

Otto: Natsuki-san, you can't go out there! Let's turn back! 

Subaru didn't listen and continued to run the rest of the way 

Y/N: god damn it

Y/N jumped out as well

Y/N: thank you for the lift Otto

Y/N followed Subaru

Y/N: stay safe! 

Otto: wait! Y/N-sa- and he's gone 

Otto sight 

Otto: come on, let's get out of here 

he ground dragon pulling the carriage turned around to get out of there 

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Subaru was running to the village. Bu stopped when her realized something 

Subaru: it's too quiet... 

Subaru looked around to find anything. Until



Subaru found himself surrounded by these people 

Subaru: 'what the hell'

 Subaru waited for something to happen, he expected his death

Y/N: Subaru!

but Y/N had finally caught up to Subaru 

Subaru: Y/N! Watch out! 

all the cultist turned to where Y/N was 

Y/N: shit

the two were at a stand off. Y/N reached for his dragon sword 

Y/N: so... Do you have anything to get off your chest? 

the cultist charged at Y/N. Y/N grabbed his sword, and lifted it above his head 


(like this but on a smaller scale) 


Y/N had missed one

Y/N: anything you want to say?

the cultist turned to Subaru, bowed, and made an attempted to run 

Y/N: nope

the cultist was stabbed the same attack 

Subaru: holy shit! You good!?

Y/N sheathed his sword 

Y/N: I'm not passing out if that's what you mean. But. OW! MY FUCKING HEART!

Y/N puts a hand to his chest and deactivates the commandment 

Y/N: I think I found a new limit! God damn that hurts  

Subaru: can you still run?

Y/N: yea, yea, let's go 

Y/N and Subaru continued to run to the village 

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it had been several minutes until the two had made it to the village. It was quiet. Way to quiet

Subaru: we're too late 

Y/N: let's check for survivors 

Y/N and Subaru split up 

Y/N: anyone there! 

Y/N waked up to a house and knock on the door

Y/N: hello!

Y/N opened the door, only to see nothing wrong with the inside 

Y/N: hey! Anyone home!? 

after a while Y/N checked the over house

Subaru: AAAAAAAA! 

Y/N ran to where he heard the scream

Y/N: what's wor- 




there were bloodied and burned corpses everywhere. Y/N eventually snaped out of his shock 

Y/N: the mansion 

Subaru: Emilia

Subaru ran in the direction of the mansion, Y/N followed behind him 

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when the two made it to the gate, they where met with a very surprising sight

Y/N: wow 

the lawn was filled with the body's of cultists and mabeasts 

Subaru: what happened here?

Y/N: Meili 

Y/N and Subaru made there way through all the body's

Subaru: Y/N

Y/N: yeah?

Y/N looked to Subaru. Subaru was pointing to the door to the mansion. Y/N looked to the door

Y/N: Elsa

Y/N saw Elsa's bloody and twisted body, lying on the door 

Y/N: Elsa! 

Y/N ran towards Elsa, ignoring the body's he stepped on

Y/N: hey, Elsa

Y/N kneeled down to Elsa. He moved Elsa's hair to get a clearer view of her face. Y/N had never seen Elsa's face so lifeless before, even when she had to do maid work, she still had that eerie smile of hers

Y/N: I'm sorry

Y/N moved her body to lean on the side so he could get into the mansion  

Y/N: hello! 

Y/N walked into the surprisingly clean mansion  

Y/N: anyone! 

Subaru walked in with him

Subaru: I'll check up stairs 

Y/N: alright 

Y/N and Subaru went there sepret ways 

Y/N: Meili was involved in the fight, but I would of thought she would of died with Els-

Y/N saw an opened door

Y/N hello?

Y/N walked into the room, which was a familiar library  

Y/N: no

Meili's dead body was lying on the floor, with a knife stabbed in her back 

Y/N Beatrice! 

Y/N went further into the Library 

Y/N: Beatrice! 

Y/N remembered something Beatrice cared about 

Y/N: the book

Y/N ran to the stool Beatrice always sits on, and destroys it, grabbing the book kept within it 

Y/N: Beatrice! If you don't come out now! You can say bye bye to your mothers book! 

???: so you do know

Y/N turned around to he voice, only to be met with 

Kadomon: hey what are you two staring at? 

Subaru: what?

Kadomon: don't what me. What's with you suddenly spaced out 

Subaru: oh

Subaru looked at his hand, then to Y/N 

Subaru: Y/N do yo-

Y/N fell down to the floor 

Y/N: what the fuck, why am I overloading? 

Subaru: Y/N, you good?

Y/N: what am I processing? 

 Y/N puts his head on his knees 

Y/N: what the fuck. whatthefuckwhatthefuckwhatthefuckwhatthe fuckwhatthefuckwhatthefuckwhatthefuck

Subaru: h-hey Y/N!

Rem: Y/N, is everything all right 

Y/N: yeah. I'm just, overwhelmed 

Subaru: perhaps we should head back then? 

Y/N: y-yeah, let's head back 

Subaru helped Y/N up

Y/N: hey, by any chance, did you... You know?

Subaru: later. I just need to... 

Y/N: yeah I get it

Y/N, Subaru and Rem made there way back to Crusch's mansion 

Y/N: 'what the hell was that! One minute I'm fine, and the next, I'm overloading. Subaru must of died, but it wasn't like this before at the mansion so why? Why? Why? Why? Why? Why? Why? Why? Why? Why? Why? Why? Why? Why? Why? Why? Why? Why? Why? Why? Why? Why?' 

Rem: Y/N 

Y/N turned to Rem

Rem: are you sure your okay? 

Y/N: 'liarliarliarliarliarliarliarliarliarliarliar' in perfect conduction  

Rem: Y/N...

Y/N: I think I was just overwhelmed by the amount of people. Don't worry I'm starting to calm down

Rem:... If you say so 







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