EHSAAS- A Feeling Of L...

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Koi Itna Chahe Tumhe Toh Batana,Pyaar Toh Har Koi Ker Lega Tumse,Koi Meri Terha Nibhaye Toh Batana.... πŸ–€ More

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Mumbai::,
Aab raat ke kareban 9 baje hai Neil kisi shum sham sadak pe udas baita hota hai Aankhe suji huyi hai Kahin na kahin woh Avni ki iss halat ka jimedar khud ko samajta tha.
Tabhi achanak uska cell bajta hai.
Neil apne cell pe dekhta hai toh Shweatha ka hota hai.
Neil( crying ) :

mom main haar gaya, Haar gaya main! Main aaj itna ghir gaya ki apne aap se nazare nahin mila paa raha hoon. Mom Avni ki iss haalat ka ziminidhar sirf main hoon. sirf main.
While hearing all this Shweatha get shocked & confused!!!!
Shweatha : Tillu, tum roh kyun rahe ho aur Avni kaha hai woh teek toh hai na aur tum kya bol rahe ho mujhe kuch samj nahin haa rahin hai
Neil : nahin mom Avni teek nahin hai
At a moment hearing him shweatha get shocked
aur iss sab ki wajah main hoon sirf main!!!!
Shweatha : Tillu yeh tu teek se kuch  batata kyun nahin.???mera dil baitaa jaa raha hai  plzzz muje saaf saaf  batana  kya hua hai Avni ko.
we can see pain in his eyes
Neil:  mom  Avni pichle doh mahine se coma mein hai.
Shweatha: kyaaaa??? Coma……she just stunned & closed her mouth in her hand her eye’s filled with tears….
Yeh tum kya bol raha hai tillu Avni coma mein hai aur yeh saab kaise hua????
Neil: mom.

Woh mujse milne delhi aa rahi thi ki jab uska accident hua aur tabse woh isi halat mein hai meri waje se yeh hua hai sirf meri wajhaa se
Shweatha : sambhalo puttar apne aap ko iss taraha kamzor maat phadne dena… Tumhe pata hai bhagwan ne tumhe yeh mauka diya hai ki tum shayad Avni ko wapas lao bahut hi kum log hote hai jise zindagi mein dubara mauka milta hai aur woh mauka tumhe mila hai,,,, Aur aab tum iss tarah toot jaaoge toh Avni ko kaun sambalegaa?? Aab tumhe khud ke saath saath uska bhi khyal rakhna hai,,, Shayad upperwala tumhare pyaar ka imtihaan le rahe ho, kya Tillu tumhara pyaar itna kamzor hai Kya??? tumne Avni se sirf khushiyon ke liye pyaar kiya tha nahin naa!!! toh usey aab tumhari sab se zyaada zaroorat hai…tumare saath ki tumare pyaar ki issliyea aab tootne ki waqt nahin sambalne ki samjha!!!!
Neil : Haa mom aap sahin kehe rahin jo,

mera pyaar itna kamzor nahin hai. Maine Avni ka saath doonga inn dard bari lamhe mein,,, Main apne pyaar ke imtihaan mein jitke hi rahunga,,, Aab mom main wapas tabhi aaunga jab Avni mere saath hogi.
Shweatha : Tillu , tum jis manzil ko pane jaa rahe ho woh bahut hi mushkil hai lekin yeh manzil tumhari jeene ki wajaah hai aur apne jeene ki wajaah ko iss tarah harne mat dena,, waadha karo ki tu Avni ka saath kabhi nahin chodega.
Neil : Avni ka saath toh main marte dum tak nibhaunga mom!!!
Shweatha : Tillu, aisi baatein nahin karte.. zindagi shuru hone se pehle marne ki baat.
Neil : Aab yeh zindagi toh sirf aur sirf  Avni se shuru hoti hai aur uspe hi khatam accha mom main phone rakhta hoon kafi raat ho gayi hai aur is waqt muje Avni ke pass hona chahiye.
Shweatha : teeke hai,,, Apna aur Avni ka khyal rakhna.
Neil : jee mom, bye.
Shweatha ; bye puttar....
Prakash just working with his laptop while shweatha comes
Prakash : shweatha ji Neil  se baat hui aapki!!!
Shweatha(tensed) : haa khanna saab baat hogayi
Prakash: shweatha ji , aap kuch pareshan lag rahi ho.
Shweatha ; Woh tillu bahot hi dukhi hai wahaan koi nahin hai bilkul akela reh gaya hai.
Prakash : Akhela kaha hai Avni toh hai na phir kaisi dukhi!!!!
Shweatha ; Avni ki hi toh chinta hai.
Prakash : kya matlab hai aapka???
Shweatha: pichle doh mahino se Avnj coma mein hai uski accident ki waje se aur tillu apne aap ko iss saab zimindhaar maan raha hai.
Prakash : yeh toh bahut hi bura hua hai,,, lekin Neil ko toh iss waqt Avni ki taqaat bankar uske saath rehena hogha naa ki iss taraha kamzoor.
Shweatha ; Tillu ne kaha ki aab woh wapas tabhi aayega jab Avni uske saath hogi.
Prakash : bahut hi teek faisla kiya Neil ne aakhir pyaar kiya hai toh nibhana toh padega na usko!!!
Shweatha ; shyaadh aap thik keh rahe ho.h khaana saab, bhagwan unn dono masoom pe rahem kare aur Avni ko jaldh se jaldh teek karade!!
Prakash: Aap chinta mat karo sab kuch thik ho jayega Avni ko kuch nahin hogha dono sahin salamat haa jaayenge
Shweatha: khaana saab jaisa aap bol rahe hai waise hi ho saying she just kept her head on his shoulder
Here Neil comes to Avni,
Dd: Arey Neil kahan chala gaya tha, hum log kitne ghabra gaye the batakar toh jaata na haadh hai yaar!!!
Mithali : achcha hua tum wapis aa gaye muje toh darr laga ki kahin tum bhi...
Neil : Nahin jaunga Avni ko chodke kabhi bhi nahin.
Mithali : Avni bahut  hi naseebwali hai jise tumhare jaisa pyaar mila hai…
Neil: nahin naseebdar toh main hoon jise Avni mili hai…
Dd : waise raat kafi hogayi hai aur Mithali tum toh subaah se yahin hogi na tum thag gayi hogi aur phir tumhare maa bhi ghar pe tumhara intazar kar rahe honge, tum ghar jao main aur Neil yahin rukthe Avni ke paas!!!!
Mithali (crying ): kis ghar mein jaao,,, wahaan aab koi nahin hai intazaar karne wala mera, aab yeh hospital hi mere liye ghar ban gaya hai.
Hearing her Neil & dd get confused
Neil : Maa kaha gayi????
Mithali : Maa aab  iss duniya mein nahin rahin Avni ko iss halat mein dekhkar unko heart attack aaya aur woh hum sab ko chod ke chali gayi Sab muje akela chod ke chale gaye.
At a moment hearing this Neil feel very sad.
Dd : Aisa nahin kehte Mithali, hum sab hai naa tum yeh rona bandh karo aur ghar jake aaram karo.
Neil : Dd tum Mithali ko chod ke hotel chale jana
Mithali : aur tum
Neil : main kuch waqt Avni ke saath akela rehna chahta hoon.
Mithali : lekin..
Dd : chalo mithali, shayad yeh unn dono ke liye achcha hi hogha
Mithali: teeke
While saying both left , Neil just went to Avni & sitted close to her,Tabhi achanak khidki khul jati hai aur hawa ke zonke se Avni ke baal uske chehre pe aa jate hai.

Teri Meri Rahe Sari Milti Hai
(Neil halke se Avni ke baal uske chehre se hatata hai)
Teri Meri Aahon Ka Abhi Mehl Hai
(Neil Avni ka haath apne haath me leta hai)
Jaane Kaisi Haathon Ki Ye Rekha Hai,
(Neil Avni ke chehre ko dekhkar dheere se Avni ke haath ko kiss karta hai.)
Jaane Kaisa Rekhaon Ka Khel Hai
(Neil apna sar Avni ke kandhe pe rakh deta hai.)
Hum Hastey Hastey Rone Lage
(Neil Avni ke forehead pe kiss karta hai)
Tum Milke Humko Khone Lage
(Avni ke sar pe pyaar se haath pherta hai)
Tum Mere Kaun Ho
Tum Mere Kaun Ho
(Neil dekhta hai ki Avni ke chehre se use kitna dard ho raha hai)
Tum Mere Kaun Ho
Tum Mere Kaun Ho
(Neil apni aankhe bandh karta hai aur usme se aansoon behte hai)
Mein Ne Yeh Na Socha Tha Ki Aise Bhi
Zindagi Le Ayegi Iss Mod Pe
(Neil ko Avni ka woh chehra yaad aata jab Avni se woh aakhri bar airport pe mila tha)
Tere Mere Haathon Ki Rekhaon Ko
Jaisi Bhi Hoon Rakh Degi Woh Jod Ke
(khidaki khuli hone ke waje se Avni ka dupatta hil jata hai)
Koi Maane Ya Na Dil Manta
Koi Jaane Ya Na Dil Janta
(Neil use thik karke usko blanket odake use cheek pe kiss karta hai aur khada hokar khidaki bandh karta hai)
Tum Mere Kaun Ho
Tum Mere Kaun Ho
Tum Mere Kaun Ho
Tum Mere Kaun Ho
(wapas Avni ke pass aakar woh Avni ka hath pakad ke Avni ke pass sar rakhke so jata hai)
Tum Mere Kaun Ho
Tum Mere Kaun Ho…..

Citi hospital:::3:00Am
Neil just sleeping beside Avni!!!!!
Avni ko pata nahin kya ho raha hai behoshi mein bhi ussey kuch bechaini ho rahi hai, pasine chut rahe hai aur woh darr ke mare Neil ka haath kas ke pakad leti hai Neil ek dum se neend se jagkar dekhta hai toh Avni ne uska haath kaske pakda hua tha aur Avni ke chehre se saaf saaf pata chalta hai ki use kuch andar hi andar kuch ho raha hai.
Neil (shouted) : doctor, doctor……
lekin koi nahin aata woh wahan se uthkar doctor bulane jaa raha tha lekin Avni behoshi mein bhi uska haath nahin chod rahi hai.
Neil (with very loud shout): doctor, doctor.

docter daute huye Avni ko dekhne aate hai.
Doctor Avni ko dekhta hai aur phir woh kafi koshish karte hai Avni ka haath chudane ke liye, lekin Avni chod hi nahin rahi.
Doctor: Pata nahin kis tarahaa ki pyaar hai tum dono ki,,maine apni service mein kahin logono ko coma mein jaate huea dekha hai aur unn logon ko recover hone mein saalon lagh jaata hai…. Aur yaha jaise hi Avni ne kaha tha ki tum aaoge uske paas aur aaj dekho uski ekin haqeet mein badal gaya hai tum uske saath ho!!,Aaj joh iss waqt usne tumare haath ko aise kasak ke pakadke rakha hai kyun ki ussey tumare haas paas hona meshoos ho raha hai wo khudh ko tumare saath mehfooz samajthi hai,,,
Neil : Doctor yeh aap kya bol rahe hain??
Doctor : haa Mr. Khanna main saach bol raha hu She feel u, she can hear u, she feel safe with u…. Woh iss haalath ko bhi samajne laghi hai wo din zyaada dhur nahin hai ki wo aapke paas zarror lautegi, aapko ajeeb lagega yeh baat sunnkar par yeh saach hain!!,Maine suna tha ki pyaar mein bahut taqat hoti hai lekin aaj maine dekh bhi liya.
Nurse: suniye inse kahiye ki aapke haath chodne inko injection dena hai.
Neil (Avni ke kan ke pass jakar): Kuch nahin hoga tumhe main hoona tumhare pass

Main kahin nahin jaunga tumhe chodke Lekin tumhe bhi toh mere liye jaldi se thik hona hogha Avni. Aab tum aaram karo main yahin hoon tumhare pass mein.
yeh sunte hi Avni behoshi mein bhi dheere se Neil ka haath chodti hai,,,, Nurse aur doctor ek dusre ko dekhte hi reh jate hai. nurse gives an injection to Avni so she can sleep peacefully.
Doctor : Dekhliya aab toh aap vishwas karenge na Mr. Khanna
Neil : ji Doctor yeh kab tak thik ho jayegi.
Doctor: bas kuch hi dino mein,,, kal usne pehli bar response kiya aur aaj toh uske haath ki bhi moment hone lagi hai, I think kuch hi dino mein aap haste haste Avni ko apne saath le ja sakte hai filhaal raat kafi hai aap bhi aaram kare aur Avni ko bhi aaram karne ki zaroorat hai.
While saying all this Doctor & nurse leave the place, where Neil again hold Avni's hand
Neil : main tumse bahot pyaar karta hoon Avni, main tumhe aise nahin dekh sakhta plzzzzz Avni mere liye hi sahi plzzzzzzzz tum pehele jaosa ho jaao plzzzzz bcoz I Love You  Avni.............😘❤️

                   Part – 15 Ends…,….,..,.,

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