EHSAAS- A Feeling Of L...

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Koi Itna Chahe Tumhe Toh Batana,Pyaar Toh Har Koi Ker Lega Tumse,Koi Meri Terha Nibhaye Toh Batana.... 🖤 More

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Evening, Khanna Mansion :,
Neil's Room
Neil just packing his clothes for going Singapore where Dd helping him,
Dd: Neil tumse ek baat poochu toh tu bura mat manna.
Neil: agar main na bhi kahu toh tu kya nahin puchega.
Dd: Agar humare wapas aane tak Avni ne kisi se shaadi karli toh
Neil: Aisa kabhi nahin ho sakta.
Dd: hone ko toh kuch bhi ho sakta hai.
Neil: muje apne se zyaadha Avni pe bharosa hai, aur maine uski aankhon mein sacha pyaar dekha hai,, Woh sirf meri hai, sirf meri!!!! Avni hai toh Neil hai aur Neil hai toh Avnk hai.
Dd: itna pyaar karte ho toh kya uska ata pata kuch hai nahin hai tere paas
Neil: Uske naam ke alawa kuch pata nahin lekin yeh hai na mere pass  saying he shows Avni's  one payal….
Dd: Yeh payal tumhare pass kaise???

(in flashback in Prachi's wedding)
Avni taiyaar hokar Prachi ko leke mandap pe ja rahi thi. aur Neil sirf use dekh raha tha. Phir Avni sidiyon se utarkar prachi ke saath mandap ke pass bethti hai. Tabhi Neil ko sidiyon ke pass se woh payal milti hai.
Neil himself : Arey!!!! yeh payal toh Avni ki hai. lagta hai yahin pe ghir gayi hai. chalo main hi khud usse jakar deh deta hoon.
While moving he just stopped!!!
nahin itni aasani se nahin dunga. Aur waise bhi dene ka mann nahin kar raha. Woh toh chali jayegi lekin kam se kam uski yeh payal toh mere saath rahegi. Saying he puts her payal in his pocket.
Just there Avni comes to him,
Avni: Neil, tum yahan kya kar rahe ho??? tum shaadi mein nahin jaoge kya???
Neil: Waise tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho.
Avni: woh main toh...........
Neil: Woh main toh kya Avni.
Avni: woh main apni payal ko dhoondne aayi hoon lekin tum?
Neil: bas kuch nahin toh payal mil gaya kya???
Avni: Nahin milli abhi tak.
Neil himself : aab milegi bhi nahin.
Avni: tumne kuch kaha.
Neil: nahin toh...
Avni: pata hai Neil woh meri favorite payal thi.
Neil: meri bhi.
Avni: kya???????
Neil; kuch nahin chalo shadi shuru hone hi wali hai.
Avni goes to the mandap leaving smiling Neil behind.
(Flashback ends)
Dd: Oh toh yeh meri pyari bhabi ji ki payal hai.
Neil: hmmmmmmmmmm…saying he lost in Avni's  dream which noticed by dd
Dd: hey you Mr. Sharuhkhan kaha kho gaye????bhulau mom ko.
Neil: mar wana hai kya?
Dd; tuje toh pehle hi bhabhi ji mar kar gayi hai Dil se,,
Neil: dd tu jata hai ki nahin.
Dd: waise main kaha akela ja raha hoon aab chalo tum bhi
Saying both leave for the airport….
Meheta Mansion ::,
Avni's Room:
Avni is getting ready for the sangeet and mehndi party.
She is standing infront of the mirror talking to her self
Avni herself : Pata hai Neil, maine aaj tak kabhi bhi apne pe zyaadha dhayan hi nahin diya,  lekin aab muje sajna sawarna achacha lagta hai, kyunki aab muje lagta hai ki koi hai jiski aankhein hamesha muje dekh rahi hai,, aur waise bhi Muje bhi tumhare liye sawrna achcha lagta hai,, waise aaj main prachi ko dil se thanks kehna chahti hoon kyunki unhiki waje se toh aaj hum mile hai..........,
I LOVE U NEIL❤️
Whereas Mithali standing at the door heard her,
Mithali : woh toh hum bhi jante hai ki tum Neil se kitna pyaar karti ho lekin yeh kya tum abhi tak taiyaar nahin huyi maa hum sab ka kab se intzaar kar rahe hai.
Hearing her Avni turned around and Mithali is shocked to see Avni is looking so pretty.
Mithali: hay… hay… main mar java tere roop per,,,, Kash aaj Neil yahaan hota toj sach meim tumhe dekh ke behosh hi ho jata,, par koi baat nahin Neil nahin toh koi aur hi sahin…..
Avni: mithali, tuje kitni baar kahu ki aab iss Avni ka naam Neil ke saath jud chuka hai aur ise koi alag kar sakta hai toh woh hai meri maut.
Hearing her mithali went to her,
Mithali: Iss baar joh marne ki baat ki hai toh ki hai lekin Avni aainda aisa sochna bhi mat, while saying this her eye’s filled with tears…
Avni: mithali..
Mithali: tum samajthi kyun nahin ho??? mera tumlogo ke siva aur koi nahin hai Avni!!!
Avni: I am sorry aaj phir maine tuje rula diya.
Mithali: aab chal Riya kab se tumhe bula rahi hai.
Avni was walking when mithali notices that Avni is wearing only one payal.
Mithali: Avni  tum apni dusri paayal pehna bhul gayi ho.
Avni: nahin mithali, woh prachi ke shaadi mein kahi kho gayi thi.
Mithali: lekin Avni woh toh tumhari favorite payal thi na.
Avni; wahi toh maine kitni aasani se apni favorite payal ko kho diya.
Mithali: favorite payal ko kho diya hai lekin Neil ko mat khona.
Avni: kabhi bhi nahin kho sakti main apne Neil ko.
Riya's Room:,
She is anger with Avni & Mithali, when she saw they both coming towards her,
Riya: aab tum dono ko time mila hai mere pass aane ka.
Mithali: wahi toh main kab se Avni ko keh rahi hoon ki jaldi karo.
Riya: waise Avni aaj tumko iss tarah sawrke dekhkar bahot achacha lagta hai,bahot pyari lag rahi ho.
Mithali: Avni waise Shaadi Riya ki ho rahi hain, lekin mehek tum rahi ho, Kya Maa se baat karu tumhari shaadi ke bare mein!!!
Avni: Abhi nahin pehle muje khud Neil ko janna pehchan na hai phir main khud Maa se baat karungi.
Riya: Aur main hamesha tumhare saath rahungi.
Mithali: Aur main bhi tum se waadha karti hoon Avni, ki tumko tumhari khushiyaan milke rahegi.
Neelamaa (from the hall downstairs) : mithali.......jaldi aao.......
Mithali: aab Maa ko kya ho gaya.l,,, wasie main ja rahi hoon,, aap log jaldi se aaiyega. Saying shebgoes.
Avni: Riya,aaj main bahot khush hoon ki tumko tumhara pyaar mil gaya.
Riya: Bahot jaldi tumhe bhi mil jayega.
Avni: pata nahin lekin jab bhi main apne aur Neil ke ristey ke bare mein sochti hoon toh ek ajeeb si becheni hoti hai,,Riya  muje sach sach batao kya mujhe mera pyaar mil jayega na.
Riya: Zaroor milega aur kyun nahin milega mere itni pyari khubsurat behehin ko!!!! Aab yeh aansoon poncho aur jaldi se muje taiyaar karo.
While Avni is busy doing Riya's make up.
In the hall:,
Neelamaa: mithali , beta zara yahaan aao.
Mithali: jee maa. aapne muje bhulaya.
Neelamaa: Inse milo mithali yeh hai mere bahot achche dost Ragini pandit aur yeh hai unka beta  Vidhyut.
Mithali: Namaste.
Neelamaa:aur yeh hai meri sabse choti beti mithali.
Ragini pandit: Neela waise tumari dusri beti kahan hai.
Mithali: Woh dekhiyea aa rahin hai.
Avni is coming downstairs with Riya, Where Vidhyut  is lost in Avni's beauty!!!,Avni & Riya comes to Neelamaa.
Neelamaa: Inse milo yeh hai mera dost Ragini pandit aur unki beta Vidhyut.
Riya: Namaste saying she goes & take their blessings.
Ragini pandit: hamesha kush raho.
Neelamaa: yeh hai meri badi beti Riya jis ki parso shaadi hai aur yeh meri dusari beti Avni jis ki baare mein tu abhi abhi pooch rahin thi.
Avni: namaste. aap log aaye iss shaadi mein hume bahot khushi huyi.
Ragini pandit: humhe bhi aap sab se milke bahot khushi huyi. tum sab log choti thi tab maine tum sab ko dekha tha,,,aur ek baat Neela waqai tumari
betiyaan bahot hi khubsurat hai.
Neelamaa: aakhir betiyaan kiski hai….Saying all laughed
Arey,Aap log khade kyun hai baitjaayiea.
Mithali: maa hum log chalte hai waise bhi mehndi shuru hone hi wali hai.
Avni: maa yeh Ali abhi tak nahin aaya.
Neelamaa: meri ussey thodi der pehle baat huyi thi bas woh abhi aata hi hoga.
Just there Ali enters the hall.
Avni and mithali goes to them.
Mithali: yeh kya Ali aaj ke din bhi late,,,,very bad.
Ali: woh bas trafic mein phas gaya tha.
Avni: Ali please aaj ke din toh yeh bahana chod doh…
Ali: sach keh raha hoon,Waise yeh toh batao ki kya Riya mujse naraz hai.
Riya: Itna bhi apni honewwali biwi se puchne mein darte ho kya.
Ali: nahin toh main toh bas aise hi. waise aaj tum bahot khubsurat lag rahin ho.
Mithali: Riya iski baaton mein mat aana. Tumhe bottle mein uttar raha hai. galti karne ke baadh bhi.
Avni: Riya, mithali bilkul thik keh rahi hai. chalo aab tum yahaan se. hume dher ho rahi hai.
Mithali, Avni takes Riya from there and sits on the some kind of stage and both start to put mehandi on Riya's hands.
Riya: Yeh kaisi mehndi na koi shor na koi gaana.
Mithali: Avni ek kaam karte hai mehndi pe tu ghaa dhe aur sangeet mein main ghaa dungi.
Riya: bilkul thik kaha.
Avni: Mujse nahin hoga.
Riya: aaj mere liye please.
Avni: thik hai,,, thik hai itni drame karne ki zaroorat nahin hain
Hearing her both mithali & Riya laughed at her

Mehndi hai rachnewaali, haathon mein gehri laali
Kahin sakhiyaan ab kaliyaan, haathon mein khilne waali hain
Tere manko, jeewan ko, nayi khushiyaan milne waali hai

Oh hariyaali banno…
Le jaane tujhko gooeeyan, aane wale hain saiyaan
Thaamenge aake baiyaan, goonjegi shehnaai
Anganaayi anganaayi

Mehndi hai rachnewaali, haathon mein gehri laali
Kahin sakhiyaan ab kaliyaan, haathon mein khilne waali hain
Tere manko jeevan ko, nayi khushiyaan milne waali hai

Gaaje baaje baraati..ghoda-gaadi aur haathi ko
Laayenge saajan tere aangan hariyaali banni
Teri mehendi woh dekhenge, to apna dil rakh denge woh
Pairo mein tere chupke se hariyaali banni
Mehndi roop sanwaare ho, mehndi rang nikhaare ho
Hariyaali banni ke aanchal mein utrenge taare

Mehndi hai rachnewaali, haathon mein gehri laali
Kahin sakhiyaan ab kaliyaan, haathon mein khilne waali hain
Tere manko jeewan ko, nayi khushiyaan milne waali hai

When she finished song she had some Riya's mehndi on her hand and she was trying to wipe but the color is not coming out.
Where Ragini pandit noticed it
Ragini pandit: Lagta hai tumhare Maa se baat karke tumhari doli bhi sajane ke din aa gaye,
Hearing this Avni looked at her while still wiping mehendi in her hand,
Pata hai Avni dulhan ki mehndi kisi kunwari ladki ke haath mein lagna bahot hi naseebdhar hota hai.
Avni get shy & leave the place
Avni herself : Kya wahi hai woh jiske naam ki mehndi mere haath mein rachegi,,Jiske ghar meri doli jayegi,, jiska naam mere naam se jud jayega,,,kya yahi hai jiska muje barson se intazaar tha,,,,Lekin pata nahin uske naam lene se Dil mein ek ajeeb sa darr  Kyun laga rehta hai.
On the other side Neelamaa looking for Avni.
Neelamaa: Arey yeh Avni bhi na kahan chali gayi,, ek jagha pe nahin reheti yeh ladki
While just Ragini pandit heard her & comes to her,
Ragini pandit: Woh bas aati hi hogi,, bahut pyari bachchi hai. Wasie Neela tumne Avni ki shaadi ke bare mein kabhi socha hai.
Neelamaa: Nahin Ragini abhi toh sirf Riya ki shadi ke bare mein socha tha lekin aab dekh rahin hoon ki Avni aur mithali bhi badi hoti jaa rahi hai.
Ragini pandit: main nahin janti ki Avni ke liye yeh thik hai ya nahin lekin main apne bete Vidhyut ke liye tumari beti Avni ka haath mangna chahti hoon.
At a moment hearing this Neelamaa get surprised
Neelamaa: Ragini…yeh tum…. Kya…..?????
Ragini pandit: koi jaldhi nahin soch kar hi bata dena
Neelamaa: lekin pehle vidhyut se toh phuch lo.
Ragini pandit: shona zara yahan ayiea na.
Vidhyut comes to her,
Shona aapka Avni ke bare mein kya khayal hai???Kya aapko woh pasand hai.
Vidhyut: Jaisa aaplog thik samje maamoni saying  He goes from there and sits next to Ali.
Ragini pandit: Neela aab toh  hamari aur se yeh rista paka hai.
Neelamaa: toh hamari aur se bhi yeh tai hai ki Avni tumare ghar ki bahu banegi.
Ragini pandit: lekin Neela ek baar Avni se toh poocho.
Neelamaa: woh meri beti hai meri baat  kabhi nahin tal sakti.
Ragini pandit: toh thik hai. aaj se thik pandrah din baadh inn dono ki sagaai kar dete hai.
Neelamaa: thik hai.
Ragini pandit: main abhi aati hoon Avni se milke.
Neelamaa: par abhi ussey mat batana. main khud use iss shaadi ke baadh baat karna chaunga.
Ragini pandit: thik hai jaisa tum thik samje filhal main mithai lati hoon  Aab hum dost se samdhi ho gaye.
Neelamaa: tumhe bhi mubarak ho…..saying both hugged each other,And suddenly someone start to sing. and it was Mithali.

Mehndi lagaake aayi, bindiya sajaake aayi
(Mithali start the song in the middle of the hall.)

Choodi khankaake aayi, paayal chhankaake aayi
(Avni Puts her hand on mithali's shoulder and sings with her.)

Ho, ab geet milan ke gaana hai
Gaana hai, gaana hai
Tujhe saajan ke ghar jaana hai
(Avni and mithali are dancing like they have forget that where r they.)

Haan, Tujhe saajan ke ghar jaana hai
( vidhyut is stairing at Avni non stop.)

Tujhe saajan ke ghar jaana hai
Bachpan beeta jawaani aayi
(Mithali sits next to Riya and looks at her finished mehndi)

Saajan ka sandesa laayi
(Avni brings Ali to Riya And made them sit next to each other.)

Saiyyaanji ki sej ko jaake
( mithali puts Ali's hand on Riya's hand)

Phoolon se mahekaana hai
(Riya is blushing )

Tujhe saajan ke ghar jaana hai
(Mithali and Avni goes to the center and start to dance)

Haan tujhe saajan ke ghar jaana hai
Pal mein naata tod chali tu
(Mithali is staning near Neelamaa.)

Baabul ka ghar chhod chali tu
( Avni holds Neelamaa hand and sees tears in Riya's eyes.)

Ab to piya ke des mein
( mithali and Avni both goes to Riya and sits infront of her)

Saara jeevan tujhe bitaana hai
(Avni wipes of Riya's tears and they all three hugs and cry more)

Tujhe saajan ke ghar jaana hai
(Avni and mithali takes Riya's with them to dance.)

Haan tujhe saajan ke ghar jaana hai (then they all are dancing.)

Ho, sajdhajke aaye baaraati, laaye ghode haathi
( Avni and mithali hold Riya and show Ali sitting and smiling at them)

O, teri shaadi ke mauke pe milke sehra gaayenge
(Riya shys and hugs Avni.)

Sada suhaagan rahe tu banno, tujhe duaaein de jaayenge
(Avni holds Rita's face and kiss her forehead)

Aaj ki raina hum logon ko jhoom jhoomke gaana hai
( mithali hugs Riya)

Tujhe saajan ke ghar jaana hai
( At last everyone is dancing.)

Haan Tujhe saajan ke ghar jaana hai
(Vidhyut comes close to Avni and start to dance around her.)

Tujhe saajan ke ghar jaana hai
(Avni sees this and feels very uncomfortable so she went up in her bed room. Where Riya and mithali saw that.)

Avni Room:
Now Avni is busy writing her dairy.
Avni (in her dairy): Aaj maine Neil ko bahut miss kiya lekin miss karne ke bhavajoodh bhi aisa laga ki woh mere aaspass hi hai. Lekin woh mere aaspaas nahin balke mere andar hai. mere dil me. Aaj Riya ke haath me mehndi lagate waqt jo mehndi mere haath pe lagi thi uska woh rang hi mere sache pyaar ka saboot hai. Main janti hoon ki tum jahan bhi honge tum muje sun sakte ho. Meri dil ki dhadkan ko mehsoos kar sakte ho kyunki main tumhe apne aap me mehsoos karti hoon. Neil main tumse bahot pyaar kati hoon. tum please jaldi mere pass wapas aajo na.
Neil ( In plane looking at Avni's payal): Avni, main janta hoon ki tumhare liye yeh teen mahine katne bahot muskil hoga lekin mere liye bhi koi aasan nahin hoga. Main tumse vaada karta hoon jaise hi wapas lautunga tab tumhe apne saath apna Humsafar banake hamesha ke liye apne saath le jaunga. Kyunki tum meri jaan ho aur koi insaan kaisi apne jaan ki bina jee sakta hai.,   Avni I Love U So Much. ❤️😘

Screen freezes on Avni Neil face…
                           Part – 6 Ends….

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