EHSAAS- A Feeling Of L...

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Koi Itna Chahe Tumhe Toh Batana,Pyaar Toh Har Koi Ker Lega Tumse,Koi Meri Terha Nibhaye Toh Batana.... 🖤 More

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Shaah mansion:
Avni bid bye to everyone & coming out of the house where she saw Neil is waiting for her, Avni went to him where he opened front seat door, while sitting Avni went close to Neil where he feel Avni, Avni looked at him & seated in to the car, after he closed her side of door & he came & sat in drive seat wearing seat belt He just looking at Avni…where Avni just turned & looked at him
Avni: Neil,
but no sign.
Avni: Neil
Still no sign.
Avni puts her hand on his shoulder
Avni: Neillllllll
At a moment Neil come out of his taught,, he just avoide his gaze towards her
Neil: Iam sorry  woh tumhe dher ho rahi hai na,,,,
Neil and Avni are driving to the airport.
Neil  himself : Avni, kaash main tumse keh sakta ki main tumse kitna pyaar karta hoon. Kaash main tumhe rok sakta. Lekin main yeh bhi toh nahin janta ki kya tum bhi wahin feel karti ho jo main tumhare liye apne dil mein feel  kar raha hoon. Avni, main tumhara jawaab sunne ke liye puri zindagi tumhara intazaar kar sakta hoon. Lekin mere dil mein tumhare siva kisi aur ko jagah nahin deh sakta because I love so so much Avni.
Avni herself:  Kyun Neil kyun?? Kyun  tum kuch samaj nahin rahe,,, Kyun tum nahin dekh sakte ki main tumse kitna pyaar karti hoon,,,, Maine toh apni taraf se ishara bhi kar diya hain,, maine yeh tumhari dhi huyi choodiyan bhi pehn li while she thinking she looked at her hand where she wore the bangels which is given by Neil,
main toh puri tarah se tumhare pyaar ke rang mein rangne ke liye kabse taiyaar hokar baiti thi,,,,,mujhe bilkul pata nahin tha ki aaj ka din  main apni zindagi se milnewali hoon,,, nahin pata tha…..lekin mili tumse mili apni zindagi se mili haa, Neil main tumse bahot pyaar karti hoon. I love you Neil.,.,.. I love u sooooo much….
While Avni lost in her taught Neil just put the car break very fast….
Avni: Kya hua Neil.
Neil: Woh airport aa gaya, chale.
Avni  just noddes her head in positive way,,, while Avni stepped down from the car & moving towards Airport, where Neil standing just standing near car & just looking the way where Avni leaving

(Song in the background)

Do pal ruka

Khwaabon ka karwan

Aur phir chal diye

Tum kahan hum kahan
( Avni airport ke andar ja rahi hai aur Neil sirf use dekhta hi rehta hai.)

Do pal ki thi

Yeh dilon ki dastaan

Aur phir chal diye

Tum kahan hum kahan
( Avni pichche mudkar Neil ko dekhti hai lekin Neil uss waqt pichche mud gaya hota hai.)

Tum the ke thi koyi ujli kiran

Tum the ya koyi kali muskaayi thi
( Avni chalte chate achanak ruk jati hai jaise ki uski zindagi woh pichche chodkar ja rahi ho.)

Tum the ya tha sapnon ka tha saawan

Tum the ke khushiyon ki ghata chhaayi thi
( Neil ki aankhon se aansoo behne hi wale hote hai ki woh dekhta hai ki Avni uski taraf mud ke dekh rahi hai.)

Tum the ke tha koyi phool khila

Tum the ya mila tha mujhe naya jahaan
( Avni Neil ki aur aage badti hai aur Neil Avni ki aur)

Do pal ruka

Khwaabon ka karwan

Aur phir chal diye

Tum kahan hum kahan
( Neil Avbi ki aankhon mein kahi kho jata hai.)

Do pal ki thi

Yeh dilon ki dastaan

Aur phir chal diye

Tum kahan hum kahan
(Avni Neil ki aankhon mein dekh rahi hoti hai ki koi use pichche se dhakka deta hai aur woh sujal ke baahon me jakar girti hai)

Aa.. aa.. aa.. aa..

While holding her,
Neil : kya baat hai Avni? sab kuch thik toh hai na mera matlab tumhari flight.
While Avni free from his hold, she just correcting her hair,
Avni :  Woh main tumhe.........woh main yahaan thanks kehene aayi thi.
Neil: thanks kis liye.
Avni: Meri waje se tumhe kafi taqleef huyi hai toh main sirf tumhe thanks kehna chahti thi.
Neil: Avni, jab joot bolna na aaye toh  joot nahin bolna chahiye.
Hearing him Avni just surprisingly looking at him
Neil: aisa kya dekh rahin ho mujhe kaisa pata chala tumare joot ki baare mein yahin hai na so simple Avni,wo kya hain tum joot bolte waqt Tumhari aankhein tumhare zubaan ka saath nahin deh rahe hain,,,.
Before Avni speak The Announcement held as,
" The flight from delhi to Mumbai is ready to board. I request all the passengers to come to the gate no 3. thank you........... ''
Hearing this Announcement Avni turned to leave where Neil hold her hand
Neil: Avni, tumse ek baat poochu.
Avni : Neil, meri flight ka time ho raha hai.
Neil : Tumne toh kaha tha ki tum choodiyan nahin pehnti ho, toh  phir yeh  kyun pehni.
Avni: Neil, kabhi kabhi humhe apne dil ki baat lafzon mein baatane ki zaroorat nahin hoti kyunki hamari aankhein hi hamare dil ki baatein keh jati hai, whereas saying this Avni just leave,while leaving Avni turned back & looked at him & smiled in Alvida way,, & Neil also smiled towards her & losted himself
Neil returned to Shaah mansion,
Dd: kahan reh gaya tha tu. kabse teri rah dekh rahe the. aab jaldi jaa prachi ki bidaai ka time ho raha hai.
Neil: thik hai tu chal main aata hoon
Dd: Ek minute Neil. muje tumse kuch baat karni hai.
Neil: Kya baat hai sab kuch thik toh hai na,
Dd: Yahin toh main puchna chahta hoon tumari baat hui Avni  se,
Neil: baat toh nahin huyi lekin uski aankhein sab kuch keh gayi.
Dd: main kuch samja nahin.
Neil: Maine uski aankhon mein apne liye bahot sara pyaar dekha hai aur muje pura vishwas hai ki ek din main usey apna banakar hi rahunga.
Hearing him Dd get happy
Dd: waah beta! tu toh humse bhi aage nikla,,ladki dekhi nahin ke propose bhi kar liya.
Neil: bas wahi nahin kar paya.
Dd: Kyun???
Neil: Ring nahin thi na, warna toh main usey ring pehnakar usey hamesha ke liye apna kar deta.
Dd; koi baat nahin jab ladki mil gayi hai toh ring bhi pehna denge.
Neil: thik hai aab chal mom hamara intazar kar rahi hogi.
Saying both leave for praachi's bidaai…
Mumbai Airport:
Mithali was waiting for Avni while she looke Avni far from away, she went to her,
Mithali: Kitni dher kard,Waise bata prachi ko dress pasand aaya, aur uski shaadi kaisi thi.
While all this asking Mithali gaze went on Avni's bangels.
Ek minute Avni,tumhari tabiyat toh thik hain naa.
Avni: Muje kya hua hai,, main toh bilkul thik hoon,,tere samne khadi hoon.
Mithali; Avni tu aur choodiyaan,,,kuch Ajeeb nahin hai.
Hearing her Avni touched her bangels & feel Neil,
Avni : Tu car mein chal main tuje sab kuch batati hoon.
Mithali &  Avni sits in the car and mithali is driving.
Mithali: Aab jaldi se bata yeh choodiyaan ka kya chakar hai.
Avni: Chakar toh usne chalaya hai aur woh bhi seedhe dil pe.
At a moment hearing this mithali get surprised & stopped the car, Avni looked at him
Avni: ghaadi kyun rokh di!!!!
Mithali; O my god please Avni aab  mujhe yeh mat kehna ki tumhe pyaar ho gaya.
Avni just closed her eye’s & smiled,
Avni: kaash main tumse yeh joot bol paati par tu toh jaanti hai na main joot nahin bolti aur na hi mujhse bola jaata hai
Mithali: matlab??
Avni: Exactly mithali, mujhe pyaar ho gaya hai,,,Iam in Love Mithali…. Iam in Love…., ❤️
Mithali: Avni, tu pagal ho gayi hai, kabhi kya ek mulakat mein pyaar hota hai???
Avni: Tune thik kahaan ki pyaar ek mulakat mein nahin hota, balki pyaar ki ek hi pal mein ho jata hai,,, joh  Itne saalon mein main apne aap ko badal na saki woh usne ek hi din muje pura badal diyal,,,woh jiske jane ke baad bhi abhi bhi woh mere dil aur deemagh pe chaya hua hai,, woh jo bina kahe hi meri dil ki baaton ko samaj jata hai,, woh jo muje hamesha girne se pehle hi sambhal leta hai,, woh jise main bahot bahot pyaar karti hoon,,.
Mithali: Abhi woh woh hi karti jayegi ki uska naam bhi batayegi meri Maa
Avni: Neil....Neil Khanna
Mithali: Neillll.....naam toh waqai achcha hai lekin yeh naam kuch zyaada hi achcha nahin Mrs.Avni Neil Khanna.
Avni: Come on mithali yeh mazak ka time nahin hai,,Main sach mein usse bahot pyaar karti hoon,, agar main uski nahin huyi toh main mar jaungi.
Mithali: Khabrdar aaj ke badh kabhi aisa bola toh!!,abhi toh muje tumhare Neil se milna hai,, tumhari shaadi dekhni hai phir tumhare bachche....
Avni: Phir se mazak.
Mithali: I am sorry Avni lekin main bahot khush hoon tumhare aur tumhare pyaar ke liye,, Bhagwan tum dono ko hamesha khush rakhe,, aab chal ghar aa gaya.
Avni: Mithali woh...
Mithali; don't worry Maa ko iss baat ka pata nahin chalega lekin hume Riya ko sabkuch batana hoga.
Avni: of course mithali hum kaise Riya se kuch chupa sakte hai.
Mithali: Aab yahin baatein karogi ki andar bhi chalogi, Maa kab se tumhara intzaar kar rahe hai, while saying this
Both enter their house.

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