Finally, another update.. it's been long, but here I'm, I didn't forget about this.. yes this time yeh wala toh poora kar hi lenge.. iske liye your support and feedback is needed and there's something very amazing in the next one and I'm very excited for the feedback on that one especially.
DD has come to meet Neil. He comes to know everything.
DD- Bhabhi chali gayi aur apne unko roka tak nahin?
Neil- Main usse kyun rokun bhala? Uski bhi apni life hai.. woh apne decisions khud le sakti hai.
DD - Mowgli ka kya sir? Woh aap donon ka beta hai.
Neil- Haan, toh main jab chahun usse mil sakta hun na.. and Avni se zyada achhi tarah uski upbringing koi nahin kar sakta.. I trust her.
DD looks at him unbelievably and goes from there.
...
Everyone get shocked to know about Avni leaving as they had gone out for shopping.
Shweta - Yeh donon.. pata nahin kab samjhenge?
Mitali- kuch toh karna hoga.. lekin DD abhi chalo.. woh enquiry baaki hai.
DD nods and they leave.
Prakash- agar donon iss tarah kadam nahin badhaenge.. toh kaise chalega?
Everyone sigh.
...
Next morning, Mitali and DD are standing outside Neil's room, who is promptly joining the mangalsutra.
Mitali- kya fayda Neil?
Neil turns to look at her, confused. He doesn't even try to hide what he's doing, because he trusts Mitali with everything.
Mitali- Exactly Neil.. what's the use? Jab tum donon alag alag rehne ka faisla kar hi chuke ho toh ab isse jodne ka kya fayda?
DD- Ma'am sahi hi toh keh rahi hain sir.. ab aap isse kyun jod rahe hain?
Neil- tum donon jao yahan se.. dimaag nahin kharab karo.
Mitali again looks at him, and she snatches the mangalsutra from his hand, making all the pieces fall. Neil looks at her shocked and gets up in anger.
Neil- Yeh.. have you lost it?
He quickly bends to pick up the pieces.
Mitali- Itna gussa.. itni frustration? Sirf iske liye?
Neil- Yeh sirf mangalsutra nahin hai.. humare rishtey ki nishaani hai.
Mitali- konsa rishta Neil? Woh rishta jo toot chuka hai? Ab iska kya fayda? Jab kuch bacha hi nahin hai toh..
Neil- Pyaar toh hai na? Kaafi hai?
Neil says interrupting her.
Mitali and DD smile at this.
Mitali- Jab pata hai ki pyaar hai toh phir iss sabki kya zarurat?
Neil- Woh.. woh Avni nahin chahti..
DD- yeh pata kaise chalega ki woh kya chahti hain jab tak unse baat nahin karenge aap?
Mitali- woh tumhari khushi.. tumhare sukoon ke liye gayi hai Neil.. aur tum donon kya zindagi bhar pyaar hi karte rahoge.. izhaar nahin?
Neil looks at her.
Mitali- Main bass itna hi bol sakti hun.. aage agar ab bhi tumhe samajh nahin aata na.. toh tumse bada idiot koi hai hi nahin.
...
Sunheri is also trying to convince Avni.
Sunheri- Avni.. woh aj bhi tujhse pyaar karta hai.
Avni- Waqt ke saath sab badal jaata hai.. pyaar bhi!
Sunheri- par tera pyaar toh nahin badla na.. tu ek baar apne pyaar ka izhaar toh..
Avni- Dimaag kharab ho gaya hai tumhara? Kya sochega woh?
Sunheri- yahi ki tu usse pyaar karti hai.
Avni- humesha se karti aayi hun aur humesha karungi.
Sunheri- pehle ki baat alag thi.. ab roz saamna hoga, Mowgli hai.. tu samajh rahi hai?
Avni- jo hoga dekha jayega. Tum mera chhodo apna batao.
Sunheri- hain? Mera kya?
Avni- tu DD se pyaar karti hai na? Yeh tune usse kabhi bataya?
Sunheri becomes speechless at this.
Avni- tumhe kya laga? Agar nahin bataogi toh pata nahin chalega?
Sunheri- Yahan baat meri nahin teri chal rahi hai.. ek hi mod par nahin reh sakte saari zindagi.. kabhi na kabhi toh kadam badhana padega na. Meri baat par dhyaan dena.
...
At afternoon, Mitali, DD & Sunheri are sitting in a park.
Sunheri- aisa karna sahi rahega kya? Matlab thoda zyada nahin ho jaega?
DD- Sunheri, jab tak donon ko ek dusre ke dard aur akelepan ka ehsaas nahin hoga na.. unpe koi asar nahin hoga.
Mitali- Exactly! Apne dard se toh unhe koi fark nahin pad raha, par ek dusre se padega.
DD- Aur hum yeh sab unki bhalai ke liye hi toh kar rahe hain.
Sunheri- woh toh hai.
Mitali- So the plan is on!
...
Next day around evening,
Avni gets a call, she picks it up. Hearing it, she gets shocked.
Avni- yeh kaisi baat kar rahe hain ap? Nahin.. ek minute ap hain kon? Who's calling?
And the call cuts abruptly. Avni is very tensed and tears form in her eyes. She hurriedly takes her phone and leaves, while Sunheri watches her go and makes a call.
...
Avni reaches the Avneil cliff. She worriedly looks here and there. Her steps falter as she sees a body turned over (face wasn't visible), and blood around it.
She moves forward scared, and sits on her knees only to notice a locket peeking, on closer look she realises its Neil's! She gets shocked.
Avni - Neil!
She's about to remove the cloth on the face, when she feels a hand on her shoulder. She turns only to find out its Neil, looking at her with tears in his eyes.
Flashback..
Neil gets a call as well and someone tells him that Avni is kidnapped by them and they will kill her if he doesn't reach there ASAP. Without a second thought he rushes to that address only to breathe a sigh of relief on seeing Avni there, and she's safe.
Flashback ends..
Avni gets up and hugs him tightly on seeing him fine, Neil hugs her back.
Tere dar par sanam plays..
Avni- Thank God.. thank God ki tum theek ho!
Neil gets confused, but he feels tears on his shirt.
Neil- Avni.. Avni kya hua? Tum ro kyun rahi ho?
Neil breaks the hug and holds her shoulders.
Avni- tum theek ho Neil.
Neil- haan.. mujhe kya hua tha?
Avni- woh mujhe.. mujhe call aya tha ki tum.. tum yahan pe..
She says while hiccuping.
Neil- Infact relieved toh main hun ki tum theek ho. Kon they woh log?
Avni- kon log? Aur woh.. woh body..
Avni turns to see the body and uncovers the face, only to find DD smiling meekly. Avneil get shocked.
Avneil- DD?
DD gets up and looks at them nervous.
Avni- yeh tum the? Kya tha yeh?
Neil- koi batayega mujhe ki ho kya raha hai yahan pe?
DD- akele mujhe daant nahin khaani.. bahar aao donon!
Sunheri and Mitali come from behind the tree.
Avneil get even more confused and shocked.
Neil- Mitali?
Avni- Sunheri..Mitali.. DD! Sach batao kya hai yeh sab?
She asks understanding a bit.
Mitali- hum bataenge but tum donon zyada gussa mat hona.
Sunheri- Darasal..
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Sunheri- haan main aungi.. Avni ke liye jo mar sakti hun, zarur karungi main.
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DD- Phir humne..
They reveal all about their plan and how they called both of them, by changing their voice and DD was supposed to act like a body and how they got a dummy locket, and also they told Avni that "humne tere Neil ko maar diya hai".
Neil shocked hearings the last part and realises why Avni was crying. Avni, on the other hand, was fuming with anger.
Avni- pagal ho tum sab? Yeh koi tareeqa hota hai?
Neil- Mitali tum bhi? Kya tha yaar? Pata hai kitni tension ho gayi thi mujhe?
Avni- tum logon ko idea bhi hai.. meri jaan nikal gayi thi.. aisi harkat..
Neil looks at Avni at that.
Avni- tum teenon ko toh main..
She looks around and finds a stick. Sunheri and Mitali run.
DD- Bhabhi.. bhabhi nahin!
DD looks around to find Sunheri and Mitali escaping. Neil smiles a bit.
DD too runs after being hit a couple of times.
Avni sighs leaves the stick. She stumbles and Neil catches her. They have an eyelock. She stands up and catches her head.
Neil- Avni tum theek ho?
In response, Avni just hugs him tightly.
Avni- 10 saal pehle maine kaha tha ki 'main theek hun', nahin thi main tab theek aur aj sach keh rahi hun.. nahin hun main theek Neil!
Avni holds him tighter and Neil reciprocates.
She breaks the hug and looks at him emotionally.
Avni- I'm sorry Neil.. I'm so so sorry, maine tumhe kitna dard diya hoga na.. aj jab ek pal ke liye yeh laga ki tum.. toh meri kya haalat ho gayi thi. Tum toh 10 saal issi dard mein rahe ho, I'm sorry.
She falls on her knees saying this, Neil too sits opposite her. His eyes are filled with tears.
Neil- sach toh yeh bhi hai ki maine bhi kabhi tumhare dard ko nahin samjha, tum jaanti thi ki main zinda hun, kahaan hun, par phir bhi mere paas nahin aa sakti thi. Khudko rokne mein kitna dard hua hoga na? Main hi samajh nahin paaya.
They look at each other, while tears fall from their eyes.
Avni realises the situation, stands up to leave, but Neil holds her hand stopping her.
Neil- phir nazrein churake jaa rahi ho?
Avni- Main.. kahan nazrein chura rahi hun?
Neil- Phir apni feelings se muh mod rahi ho?
Avni- konse feelings Neil? Aur haath chhodo.
Neil- tum jaanti ho ki kya matlab hai par samajhna nahin chahti.
Avni- Neil, maine kahan haath chhodo.
Neil pulls Avni's hand and she falls on his lap, with her hand around his neck.
Neil- nahin chhodunga tumhara haath main!
They share an intense and teary eyelock and Avneil tune starts playing.
Avni- chhodungi nahin main tumhe!
Neil- pakka?
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Neil- jab tum door jaati ho na toh dil ki dhadkan le jaati ho.
Regards,
Zeezones.