Pyaar Toh Hona Hi Tha

By Cute_Devil_05

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The is based on Kanchanjunga Military Academy where soldiers are trained to serve the nation.The story narrat... More

Introduction
New Cadets of KMA
Rajveer re entry KMA
Rajveer named as Shahrukh
Suggestion request
Major Nair drill
Cadets Party 🥳
Rajveer rescue the Cadets
S6 Support System
Confidential Meeting
Secret Revealed
The Club Party 🥳
Introduction 2
Emotional Outbreak
Naveen learns the truth
Rajveer came back KMA
A love letter
New entry
Entry of Major Mohan Bhargav
Planning against Ritu
Prank on Mogambo
Prank on Mogambo continues
Nandani entry
The Fresher's Ball
Attack on KMA
Naina accepted her love ❤
Planning of a Surprise
Gunny Birthday
First day of Mentorship program
Brigadier and Rajveer conversation
Rajveer Ki Lagi Class
The Obstacle Race
Past came back
The Mentorship Camp
Illegal Movement in Forest
The Attack
Captain's are save
Mogambo Allegations
Prank on Nandani
Confession
The Kidnapping
Disappearance of Rajveer
The run away
The come back
The Punishments
The Date
Engagement Finalized
Shopping

Holidays

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AFTER ✌ TWO MONTHS

Cadets completed their six months of their training with their theory exam. As theory exam are over so BC announced 2 week of holiday. The holidays were organized for the renovation work in KMA. As holidays were announced all cadets and faculty went to their homes to enjoy their holidays.

AS MANSION
DELHI

A girl was chasing a boy who running ahead her to save his life.

Girl....... rukh ja aaj main tujhe zinda nhi chhorugi teri himat kaise huyi meri favorite chocolates khane ki.

Boy....... freezer main pari huyi thi aab mujhe thori pata tha ki tune rakhi hai.

Girl...... juth mat bol.

Boy....... mujhe apni jaan pyaari nhi hai kya jo tujhse juth bol ke apne jaan se haath dholu.

Girl...... aab mujhe chocolate kaha se milegi.

Boy...... Naveen bhai ko bol na wo le aayege.

Nai...... Aalekh tujhe sach main lagta hai bhai mere liye chocolate layege agar karid bhi liye toh ghar aate aate wo invisible ho jayege aur mujhe milega baba ji ganta.

Naina pick cushions from the sofa and start aiming Aalekh.

They were continuing there Tom and Jerry chase till than Advik and Randhir entered the living area.

Ad..... ye chuhe billi ki tarah kyu bhaag rahe ho tum dono.

Nai..... baba isne mere chocolates kha liye.

Ran...... toh naye maga lo isme larne ki kya zarurat hai.

Nai...... wo meri monthly pocket money katam ho gyi hai.

Ad..... mujhe jitna yaad hai aaj 2 tarik hai aur 500 rupee tune katam bhi kar diye toh acedmey main kaise ghuzare 2 mahine tune wo bhi 1000 main.

Aa(murmured)....... mamu aapke hone wale damad karche utha rahe hai 2 mahine iske.

Ran...... apni bakbak band karo dono aur Jake ready ho jao aur Naveen ko bhi bolo ready hone ke liye.

Aa...... Dad ham kahi ja rahe hai kya.

Ad....... ham nhi tum tino ja rahe ho wo bhi airport.

Nai...... aur ham airport kyu ja rahe hai.

Ran.......Santi buaa ko recive karne.

Nai...... no way main nhi ja rahi unhe recive karne.

Aa........ mujhe bhi nhi jaana.

Just than they saw Naveen comming done with a trolley bag.

Ad....... tere sawari kaha ke liye nikal rahi hai.

Na....... Maa ne bataya unhone Santi buaa dadi meri engagement main aarahi hai. Isse pehle mera jina haram kare wo usse pehle 9 do 11 hona hi achha hai.

Nai(while making a puppy face)....... bhai akele akele bhaag rahe ho hamare baare main toh soch liya hota ek baar bechare nadan bachhe ham kya karege.

Aa(while making baby pout and side hug Naina)...... mujhe nhi pata tha aap itne selfish nikloge bhai aur hamare baare main ek baar sochoge bhi nhi.

Ad....... tum kahi nhi jane wale ho Naveen samjhe.

Ran........ yaha se bhaag ke hotel hi jaoge na toh main 100% guarantee deta hu tumari booking cancel kara duga.

Na....... mujhe pata tha fufa ji aap aisi damki jarur doge par iska itejam maine pehle hi kar liya hai.

Aa........ chal Naina hamara koye bhai nhi hai hamhe apna intejam khud karna parega.

Nai....... chal Aalu kahi jhopri banane ka intejam karte hai kyuki apne paas toh hotel booking karns ke bhi paise nhi hai.

Aa...... aur koye chara bhi nhi hai apne paas iske alawa.

Ad...... tum tino band hi karo apni nautanki tum tino toh aise react kar rahe ho jaise Buaa ji ke aane se tum tino ko hi problem hai ham toh maze se rehte hai jaise unke aane ke baad se.

Ran...... jo tum log ka haal hai wahi haal hamara bhi hai par hamne halat se samjhota kar liya hai aur tum tino hamesa ghar se bhaag jaate ho jab bhi Buaa ji ghar aati hai.

Na....... agar itni hi problem hai toh bulate kyu ho aap unhe ghar.

Ran...... apni Buaa se puch itna pyaar kyu aata hai unhe apni Buaa pe jo jab dekho tab bula leti hai wo ghar unhe.

Na........ aap log continue karo apni baate main nikalta hu warna unke aane ke baad bhaag bhi nhi pauga.

Naina immediately took Naveen trolley bag.

Na....... Gudiya paresan mat kar aur mujhe mera bag wapas kar.

Nai....... ek hi sart pe bag wapas karugi main jab aap hamhein bhi apne saath le jaoge.

Aa........ hamhein apne saath le chalo ya apne bag ko bhul jao aap bhai.

Na...... thik hai agar 5 minutes main tum dono aagye apne bags leke toh le jauga warna Buaa dadi ke parwachan mubarak tum dono ko.

Within a second they both left from there and came back in just 4 minutes.

Ran....... Naveen apne shri mukh se apne hotel ka naam baato jo jaldi se uski booking cancel karau.

Na....... Dreams Villa.

Nai....... ye koun sa hotel hai bhai maine toh aaj tak naam bhi nhi suna.

Aa....... bhai kiske sapno ke mahal main le ja rahe ho hamhein.

Na....... chalna hai toh chal warna jhopri main chala ja.

Like usual they three left the house before the arrival of Dadi Buaa ji.

As the children escaped from the house having no other option Randhir and Advik left for airport to receive Buaa ji.

AT AIRPORT

Advik and Randhir were waiting at the arrival section when they spot a lady who was nearly in starting of her seventies, wearing heavy jewelery and the saare drape properly in the traditional way. With one hand she was holding her saare ka pallu.

Coming towards them.

Mrs Santi Jindal

A lady who always follow traditional and by pressing her family have to also follow her traditional rules. The Ahluwalia's and Sharma's are afraid of her. She is an old-fashioned woman who believes that girls should not go outside the four walls of the house.

Advik and Randhir both fell at her feet as soon as she arrived.

Ad...... pranam Buaa ji.

San...... khade ho jao tum dono dudho naho puto falo.

Ran..... aapko aane main koye taklif toh nhi huyi na Buaa ji.

San...... agar dikkat hogi bhi toh ham seh lege damad ji akhir kar Naveen ki sagai jo hai.

Ran(murmured)...... Achha hai Adu inhone ye nhi pucha ki bache kaha hai kyuki inhone kaha tha ki ye chahti hai ki bachhe inka swagat kare.

Ad(murmured)....... tu chup reh kali juban tu jo bolta hai wo jarur hota hai.

San...... ab hamhe aise hi ghurte rahoge ya hamara saman le kar ghar chalne ka bandobast karoge.

Ad....... ji Buaa ji.

They collect Buaa ji luggage and leave for home.

DREAMS VILLA


Aa........ bhai ye aap hamhein army colony main kaha le aaye.

Nai........ bhai ye car kiske ghar main ghusa rahe ho.

Na....... chup rahoge tum dono mujhe pata hai ki ham kaha hai. Agar jaada bakwas ki toh jaha le ja waha se nikalwa duga.

Naveen parked the car and they came out with there luggage.

Nai....... bhai are you sure ki ham sahi jagah pe aaye hai.

Aa........ bhai agar kisi ne complain kar di without permission entry ki toh jail chale jayege ham.

Na....... waise tum dono ke liye ye option bhi sahi hai waha tum dono free main reh bhi loge. Waise is ghar ke owner ko tum dono bhi achhe se jante ho.

They came at the main gate.

Raj(while coming from behind with some grocery bags)...... abe sale itne der se kyu aaya tera intejar ham 2 gante se kar rahe the (After seeing Naina & Aalekh with him) Abe tune bataya kyu nhi ki tere saath Naina aur Aalekh bhi aarahe hai.

Na....... in dono ke chakkar main hi late huaa hai mujhe warna main toh bahut pehle aagya hota.

Nai... Rajveer_____(Alekh cough little to remind Naina that Naveen is also there) Sir aap yaha.

Aa...... ha Sir aap yaha kya kar rahe hai aur bhai ye kiska ghar hai.

Gu(who just open the main door)....... baskismati se ye ghar hamara hai.

Raj...... banda apka swagat kar raha hai ghar me.

Nai...... mtlb Rajveer_____ Sir ye ghar aapka hai.

Gu........ agar on paper ki baat kare toh ye ghar dad ke naam pe hai.

Raj...... yahi kadhe rehne ka irada hai ya ghar ke ander bhi aana hai.

Aa(whispered)...... chal tera swagat hai tere hone wale sasural main.

Nai...... chup reh warna pitega tu.

They came inside the house and Rajveer ordered the servant to keep the luggage in guest room.

Gunny came to Naina.

Gu(whispered)...... Naina tera luggage bhai ke room main shift kara du toh koye dikkat nhi hai tujhe.

Nai...... agar main tumara saman ghar se bahar fhekwa du toh tumhe bhi koye dikkat nhi hogi.

Gu...... yrr main ab tujhse mazak bhi nhi kar sakta kya.

EVENING

All gathered in the living hall and were sitting with different bowl of cold drinks because they plan to play never have I ever.

Gun....... Naina I think you should start.

Nai........ main kyu tum bhi toh start kar sakte ho.

Na...... behas kyu kar rahi hai Gudiya start kar na.

Nai(while fumbling)........ never have I ever cheat in exams.

She.......... seriously Naina you never cheated.

All were surprised after hearing Naina confession.

Gun....... sab tere jaise chor paida nhi hote Sherry.

She........ Raj bhai dekho na.

Raj........ Gunny kabardar agar tune darling ko tease kiya toh.

Execpt Naina all drank cold drink from their respective bowl and Naina was seeing them with pop out eyes.

Nai....... all of you.

Gun........ tujhe pehle hi samjh jana chahiye tha Naina agar Naveen cheating nhi karta toh best cadet passout kabhi nhi banta.

Na...... agla shikar koun (He said while pointing fingers and stop at Aalekh) Aalekh.

Aa....... Never have I ever played hooky from school and college.

Except Aalekh and Sherry everyone drank cold drink from their respective bowl.

Gun...... Sherry it's your turn.

She....... Never have I ever lied to my parents.

Raj...... tu itni sachhi sach main hai ya aise hi bol rahi hai I doubt.

She...... bhai you really doubting me.

Gun....... apni nautanki band kar samjhi kyuki tere is baat pe mujhe 1% bhi bharosa nhi hai.

All drank cold drink from their respective bowl except Sherry.

Na....... Never have I ever got seriously hungover.

Raj....... ye bola beware ne sabse bara juth.

Na...... tune aisa kyu bola Raj.

Aa...... I agree with Sir bhai kyuki maine kud aapko druken state mein aapke room main transfer kiya hai Mamu se bachane ke liye.

Nai...... waise bhai aapke bowl main clod drink hi hai ya isme bhi hard drink mix kiya hai.

Na....... tum sab ne mujhe samjh kya rakha hai.

Gun.... jaisa bhai ne kaha but main kuch changes ke saath kahuga no 1 bewra of our group.

She...... leave it na we should continue the game further. I think bhai will be the best person to nominate.

Raj........ Never have I ever been on a blind date.

Na........ tension na le Raj teri ye dil ki tamana main khud teri partner ko pass on karuga.

Gu...... Navu agar tu ye pass on na bhi karega toh bhai ki ye wish puri ho jayegi (He winked at Naina).

Naina pass a deadly glance to Gunny or assuring him that she will definitely going to kill him after the game.

She(whispered)....... Gunny bhai apne harkato be lagam lagao warna raat main bhai kahi apki haddiyan tor rahe hoge.

Na....... Raj ki partner antaryami thori hogi jo uske man ki baat samjh jayegi.

Aa........ ab ye toh hamhe future main pata chalega aur iske liye abhi behas karne ka kya fayada.

Only Naveen drank the cold drink from the bowl.

Nai...... bhai mujhe nhi pata tha bhabhi itni romantic type hai.

Raj........ agar aisi baat hai toh tum Shalini ko janti hi nhi ho Naina kyu she has the title of love guru in our batch.

Gu...... never have I ever reached the first page.

Nai...... ye first page kya hai.

Na...... kiss, never have I ever kissed.

Naveen took his bowl and drank cold drink.

As Naveen finished Naina and Rajveer had a eyelock on the other hand their lip lock scene came in their mind and both of then blush a little. Both of them drank the cold drink at the same time.

Na......... Gudiya tune kise kiss kar diya.

Hearing Naveen Gunny and Aalekh had a mischievous smile on there face because they had the answer of Naveen question.

Gu........ haa Naina tumne apni first kiss kiske saath ki.

Aa....... tu kitni gandi hai main apne saare secrets tujhe baata hu aur tune itna baara raz chupaya mujhse.

Rajveer pass a deadly glance to both of them and they stop teasing Naina.

Nai....... main nhi baatane wali jaise aapne mujhse bahut saare secrets chupaye hai waise hi main is baat ko secret hi rakhne wali hu.

Gunny thought as much as he has done, Rajveer is definitely going to beat him, so he should do the work for which justifies his condition.

Gu..... bhai I am just impressed while knowing the current progress in you.

Raj....... Abe teri toh.

Rajveer just pour his bowl of cold drink on Gunny and he also did the same with Rajveer.

This scene of pouring cold drink was just witnessed by Sanjana who just entered the living hall.

Soon Rajveer and Gunny chasing start in living area. Clod drink were dripping from them and creating mess.

San....... khabardar agar tum dono ne aise bhaaga dauri main ghar ka satyanas kiya toh. Shaadi ki umar ho gyi hai dono ki par harkatein aaj bhi kindergarten ke bachho se bhi gyi guzari hai.

Hearing Sanjana both of them immediately stopped where they were.

Raj..... mom ye saara isne (pointing finger towards Gunny) kiya hai.

Gu...... par bhai ne mere upar cold drink bowl khali kiya tha.

San..... tum dono achhe se jante ho ki mujhe ghar mein mess bilkul bhi pasand nhi hai par tab bhi apne harkat se baj nhi aaye dono. Raj tujhe toh safai pasand thi toh tu kab se mess create karne laga.

Gu(whispered)...... jab se bhai Naina ke saath relationship main aaye.

San........ tum dono ye saaf karne wale ho.

They both agreed and start cleaning like a obedient child.

AFTER DINNER

Naina entered Rajveer's bedroom.

She finds that his bedroom has attached bathroom, walking wardrobe and balcony.

Just then he came out from washroom while changing in night wears and he find Naina in his bedroom.

Raj....... Naina tum yaha kya kar rahi ho.

Nai........ Gunny ne jis room main mera luggage rakhwaya hai mujhe wo room pasand nhi aaya.

Raj......... don't  say me that you are on a hunt to find a room which you like.

Nai....... ofcourse you are right aur mujhe ye room pasand aaya.

Raj........ Naina ye mera room hai tum koye dusra room dekh lo.

Nai....... aapne nhi suna hai atithi devo bhava aur ye bhi ki atithi ko koye cheez ke liye mana nhi karte.

Raj........ Naina mujhe mere room ke alawa kisi room main neend nhi aati aur agar tumhein sach main problem hai toh main Ramu kaka se keh ke dusra room ready karwa deta hu.

Nai (she went close and while adjusting his shirt collar)........ jab future main ye room mera hone hi wala hai toh abhi kyu nhi. 

She left him and the next moment she jumped onto the bed.

Raj....... agar tum yaha rahogi toh main kaha jau.

Nai (she said while covering herself with blanket)........ you have three options first you can share bed with me and I will not mind.

Raj........ but I will definitely mind so proceed.

Nai (said while peeping her head outside the blanket)........ Second I saw a swing in your balcony you can adjust your self there.

Raj........ no way main balcony main kyu souga.

Nai........ you can move to opposite room in which my luggage are kept. Par ab main ye room chhor ke kahi nhi jaane wali.

Raj........ ye sahi hai tumara ghar main entry lete hi mujhe mere hi room se nikal rahi ho.

Nai....... maine kab nikala aapko room se bahar balki ap mujhe mere room se nikalna chahte ho.

Raj........ mera room tumara kab huaa.

Nai........ abhi nhi par future main toh ye room mera hoga isliye abhi hi isse apna room man liya maine.

There banter for the room continues but after sometime, Rajveer accepts his defeat and goes to sleep in the balcony.

NEXT DAY

All were getting ready as Naveen had told them that after half an hour they are leaving for shopping as his mother instructed him.

After half an hour they left for mall.

They all entered different stores and started there shopping.

Naina took Rajveer with her for selecting lehenga.

Raj........ Naina mujhe is ladies store main kis liye layi ho mera yaha kya kaam.

Nai........ mujhe apne liye dress select karni hai but mujhe toh pura store pasand aarha hai.

Raj........ Naina main apne kapre kud nhi kharedta toh tumari help kya karuga.

Nai........ aap suggestion toh de sakte ho mujhe. Please select some light weight lehenga. I will help you in selecting your clothes.

Raj....... ok done.

They roam the hole store and select 4 different types of lehenga.

Naina made him stand outside the trial room. She went inside the trial room and came out wearing Blue & Peach-Coloured Embroidered Sequinned Shibori Lehenga.

Nai...... kaise lag rahi hu.

Raj....... the floral prints are too broad Naina try the next one.

She smiles and went inside. After few minutes she again came out while wearing Grey Embellished Sequinned Lehenga.

Nai....... ab kaisi lag rahi hu.

Raj....... this color doesn't suits you.

She smiles and went inside again to change. She came out wearing Floral Printed Embroidered White Organza Silk Lehenga.

Nai....... ab.

Raj....... it's too light Naina.

She shakes her head in disbelief and again moved inside trial room. She came out wearing Pink Butterfly Mono Neted Embroidered Sequence Work Lehenga.

Nai..... ab.

Raj....... it's good but not the best try something different.

Nai........ ab mujhe pata chala ap shopping kyu nhi karte.

Raj......... maine toh pehle hi kaha tha.

Nai....... aapne kaha tha ki aap apne kapre khud nhi kharedte par mujhe ye nhi pata tha ki aap itne bare choosy insaan ho. Jo ek simple cheez bhi bina tantrum ke select nhi kar sakte.

Raj........ Naina inme se jo tumhe pasand hai tum wo lelo. It doesn't important ki hamari choice bhi same ho.

Nai........ aab main aapki select ki huyi dress leni wali hu.

Raj......... Naina ye kaisi zid hai tumhe jo pasand hai wo lelo.

Nai........ maine inhe select kiya tha but aab ye mujhe hi pasand nhi aarahe. Main ye isliye nhi keh rahi kyuki aapko koye bhi pasand nhi aayi main ye isliye keh rahi hu infact mujhe bhi ab ye pasand nhi aarahe.

Raj........ toh aab kya karna hai.

Nai........ jada kuch nhi aap mere liye lehenga select karne wale. Ab please ye mat kehna ki aapse nhi hoga kyuki aapne khud mujhe shikhaya hai ki main sab kuch kar sakti isliye aapse bhi mere liye lehenga select karna jarur hoga. Main change karke aati hu tab tak next trial lehengs aapke haath main hona chahiye.

Having no other option he roam in the store again and a light purple and pink lehenga with golden embroidery caught his eyes. It was simple and elegant. The same thing which Naina told him earlier to find.

Naina came out from the trial room and find Rajveer standing with a lehenga.

Nai........ thank god aapne select kiya warna mujhe laga tha ki pura din main yahi katne wali hu.

Raj........ pehle try karke toh karo.

She took the lehenga from him and went to try his choice. After few minutes she came out and hugs Rajveer and kisses him on his cheek.

Raj....... kya main jaan sakta hu tumare itne romantic hone ki wajah aur wo bhi  sare aam mall mein.

She broke the hug and kisses him on another cheek.

Nai........ you got me the perfect dress which I wanted toh thank you kehne ke jagah pe I kissed your check. Kyuki mujhe pata hai main thank you bolugi toh aapko achha nhi lagega.

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Precap: A rishta came for Naina.

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