Onnangotte anangy nadakk ente Bebo.. (ente daivame raavile ithineyum kond nadakkaan irangiya enne venam thallaan.!🙄)
Ah.. wait wait..
Dhe... Sthalam ethy. Board kandille? Vendakka aksharathil alle "GREEN VALLEY" ennu ezhuthy vachekkunne?? Vaa vegam..(bebonem pidichond njaan green valleylott nadakkunnu...)
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Samayam raavile 6 mani.
2 vashathum villakal niranju nilkkunna "GREEN VALLEY" roadile valathu sideil ulla 4 aamathe veed. Athaane nammude naayakanmaarude bhavanam.
"CHAKKAAKKAL VEED" - gateinu sideilulla mathilil swarnachaayamadicha falakathil kothi vachittund, ee veettuperu.
Varu.. namukk ullilekk praveshikkaam..
Aadhyam adukkalayilekk thanne aavatte..
At adukkala -
Shaanthechi is already present in the kitchen and she's making coffee. (Shaanthechi aarannu chodhichaal, ividuthe all in all maid aane. Ethaand 50-55 age ulla oru paavam sthree. Aal raavile 6 manikk varum, joliyokke theerth evening 6 manikk pokum.)
Angane shaanthechi avide aalde paniyil busy aayi nilkkumbo aane avidekk oraal mudiyokke ketti clip ittu vach oru kottuvaa okkeyitt kadannu varunne. Vellayil violet pookkalude design ulla nighty aanu vesham, kazhuthil kidakkunna nalla polichayulla kurish locketinte swarnachain onnu nereyitt avar nere vannu fridgeinte door thurannu.
Shaantha : dosa maavaano nokkunne? Njaan atheduthu purath vachittunde..
Susan : ahh.. Puli adhikam illalo, dosayil Puli koodiya pinne Jimmy athu kazhikkathilla.
Shaantha : athenikkariyaallo, aavashyathinu puliye ullu. (Stoveil nonstick pan vakkunnu)
Susan : kaappi aayo chechi?
Shaantha : ahh. Kattan ittu vachittund. Aa paathrathil paalum irippunde..
Susan : ah.
Susan kurach paal eduth kattan kaappiyil mix cheyth oru coffee mugilekk ozhichu.
Susan : njaanith avanu kondoi koduthitt varaave.
Shaantha nodded and dosa undaakki thudangy. Susan aa mugum kond adukkalakk purathekku poyi. Nere hallilekk nadannu, avidennu stairs kayari mukalilethi. And she door thurannu nere kayarichellal to the first room in the first floor.
Susan : ahha, Sir innu nerathe aanallo?
Susan oru niranja chiriyoode kayyile mugum kond aa roomil oru sideilaayi ittirunna tableinaduthekk nadannu.
Aa tableil kuree answer sheets parathi ittittund, pinne kuree booksum sideil irippund. Avide ittirunna oru stoolil irunnu tableilekk chaanjirunnukond paper correctionil erppettirikkuvaane Jimmy.
Susante shabdham kett Jimmy mukhamuyarthi avare nokki, onnu punchirichu. Ennitt avarude kayyilninnum aa coffee mug vaangy.
Susan : (iduppil kayyum koduth answer sheetilekk nokki nilkkunnu) ennathaada ith? Class testinte paper aano?
Jimmy : (takes a sip of coffee) alla susammo.. ith University examinte papersaa..
Susan: athu sheri! Ennittaanoda cherukka nee ithingane valichu vaari ittekkunne!😲
Jimmy carelessly oru sip koode eduthathinu shesham aa mug paperinte aduthaayi vachu. Ithukanda Susan vegam atheduthu kayyil pidichu.
Susan : ingane oru sookshmam illaatha cherukkan! Ente karthaave..🙄
Jimmy : oh, ee paper nokkaan ithra sookshmathayokke mathy. Cinema paatt vare ezhuthy vachekkuva answer sheetil.. vaayich chirichu maduthu njaan..🤭
Susan : eeshoye.. ee pillerokke pinne ennaa padikkaana collegil pokunne? Ithungaleyokke padippich veruthe appantem ammedem kaash kalayunnath micham. (Thaadikk kai koduth nilkkunnu)
Jimmy : susammo, innenthaa kaappikk palahaaram?
Susan : dosa.
Jimmy : sheyy.. appavum muttacurryum mathiyaarnn..🌝
Susan : innale athalle undaakkiye?🙄
Jimmy : (stood up and susante shoulderil pidich nilkkunnu) ente susammade kai kondundaakkunna appam.. ahhaa..🤤
Susan : (jimmyde kai thatti maatti thirinj nadakkunnu) mathi mone soaping. Nee ithokke eluppam kazhichitt thaazhekk vaa.. ah pinne, avaneyum vilichekk..
Jimmy : okay susammo.. alla, ente coffee..?👀
Susan: (turns back) oh.. innaa pidikk..
And susamma mug avante kayyil koduthitt roomil ninnum irangy poyi. Jimmy answer sheets okke othukki vachitt table vrithiyaakkaan thudangy.
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Psychology says that, oraalude room kandaal ayaalude personality ariyaan pattumathre....
Ath erekkure sheriyaanennu taevinte room kandaal manassilaakum.
Taevinte muri -
Pastel blue paint adicha chuvarinod chernnulla book shelfil neat aayi adakki vachirikkunna books kaanam. Left sideil study area aane, oru cheriya wooden table and chair avide ittittund. Right sideil cupboard, athinood chernnu thanne oru dressing tableum und. Pinne ullath bed, windowinod chernnaane bed arrange cheythirikkunne.. ellam valare neat and clean!
Taevin valare adukkum chittayumokke ulla koottathilaa, contrast to the personalities of his siblings.
Ah athokke avide nilkkatte, chekkan avide enthedukkuvaanenn poyi nokkam.. baa..👀
White bed, white blanket, white curtain.. ente ponno ithaake motham white aanallo.. Oh, bedil kidappund kakshi. Nalla urakkava..
Pettennu evide ninnoo oru music! Ningalu kelkkunnille??🤔👀
🎶Dum daraa dum daraa mast mast daraa
Dum daraa dum dum
O, hum dum bin tere kya jeena🎶
Taevin melle puthappokke maatti ezhunnett pillowinte adiyil vachirunna phone parathaan thudangy.
Taevin: ithevidekkond vach njaanith..😴 (in urakkappich)
Avan kannadachond thanne parathi parathi last phone enganeyo kandpidichu. Caller ID onnum nokkaathe thanne chekkan phone eduthu cheviyil vach.
On the phone 📱 -
Taevin : mmm... (Raspy morning voice)
: Good morning ichaaya!
A sweet, energetic female voice was heard from the other end. Aa shabdham kettathum taevinte chundil oru chiri vidarnnu.
Taevin : morning Nadiiyee..😍 (kannuthirummal)
Nadi : ithuvare ezhunnettilla? Time enthaayennu nokk!
Taevin : ah.. njaan eneekkuva.. (bedil irunnond thanne windowsideile curtain maatti.)
Curtain maattiyathum avante mukhathekk sooryaprakaasham adichu. Avante kannukal cheruthaayonnu chimmi, aa gothambuniramulla charmam sooryarashmikalaal thilangaan thudangy. (He's so handsome even in that just-woke-up look y'all 😍. Paranjitt kaaryamilla.. committed aayippoyille..🙂)
Nadi : sherikkum ezhunnetto?
Taevin: (got up and phoneum kond bathroomilekk nadannu) ahm.. dhe.. brush cheyyaan pokuva..
Nadi : hmm.. ennaa sheri njaan vakkuvaane..
Taevin : ey..vekkalle vekkalle!
Nadi : mm?
Taevin : morning kiss 😌.. (takes brush and paste thechitt mirroril nokki chirichond nilkkunnu)
Nadi : sho ee ichaayan..😌
Taevin: vegam thaa.. njaan late aavunn..
Nadi : mm.. ummaaaa! 😘
Taevin: (blush 🙈) hmm.. enna ini mol phone vachitt vegam poyi ready aakaan nokk.
Nadi : ha..bye
Taevin : love you😍
Nadi : love you too..
Taevin cuts the call with a smile on his face and avante daily routines cheyyaan vendi poyi.
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After 15 minutes..
Jimmy collegeil pokaan ready aayi roomilninnu purathirangy. Oru side bag tholath ittittund, phone eduth kayyil pidichirikkunnu, and he's busy wearing his watch while walking towards a room.
(Ithaane outfit)
And.. Avan nadannu nadannu aa roomil ethy. Door thurannu akathu kadannathum avan chuttum onnu kannoodichu.
Jimmy : ithenthuvaa ith, valla chanthayo!👀
Aa roominte kolam kanditt Jimmy angane chodhichillel aane albudham ullu ..
Jimmy sookshich, shradhayode oro chuvadum vach munnott nadannu, kaaranam floor motham niraye saadhanangal valichu vaari ittekkuvaanallo..
At last,he reached near the bed.
Jimmy : achoda... Kunjuvava uranguvaano..🤗
Bedil kidakkunna aale kand Jimmy oru innocent smile pass aakki.
Jimmy : settan eneeppikkaalloo kochine.... 😌
Athum paranj Jimmy avide tableil vachirunna jugile vellam eduth joede thala vazhi kamizhthi. 🤗
Within a second, joe chaadippidanj eneettu, mel veena vellam okke onnu kudanj avan nilath ninnu. Ennitt nere nokkiyappo athaa nilkkunnu, angelinte faceum aayi... Oraal..😌
Joe : (gritting teeth) eda paranaariii! Jimmichhaa..😡
Jimmy : (wide smile+ hair flip) enthoo~~😁
Joe : ninnod pala thavana njaaan paranjittund ingane thala vazhi vellam kamizhthalleenn.. sheyy.. (ittirikkunna nananja baniyan onnu kudayunnu) 😖
Jimmy : ingane allaathe engane vilichaalum ponnumon eneekkathillallo.. 🤗
Joe : ennumparanj? Ingane aano oraale vilikkunne? Thendii😖.. ichaayanaayippoyi.. illenki njaan pachakk thanthakk vilicheene..😏
Jimmy : ohhoo..(mockingly) poyi kulikkeda shavi..😏
Joe : oh ennaathina.. iniyippo 2 divasathekk kulikkuvonnum vendanne...😉
Jimmy : eww.. ingane oru vrithiyillaatha janthu..🙄
Joe : oh.. nummakk ithra vrithi okke mathy jimmichoo..🌝
Jimmy : (points to the floor) enthuvaa da cherukka ith? Ninakkee room okkeyonnu vrithiyaakki vekkaan mele? 🙄
Joe : (picks a tshirt from the floor) eyyy.... No no.. ee room ingane kidakkunnatha athinte oru ith.. eth? 😌
Jimmy : uvva...ithoru vallaatha ith aane. Nee chenne kulich ready aayikke... Njaan pokuva, bye.
Jimmy athum paranj avidennu left aayi. Joe oru moolippaattokke paadi phoneum kond bathroomilekk nadannu.
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At 8.48 am.
Dining room -
Jimmyum taevinum koode dining tableil orumichaayirunnu breakfast kazhikkuvaane. Taevin idakkidakk watch nokkiyaane drithiyil food kazhikkunne. Jimmy ith shraddhikkunnund..
Jimmy : innu late aayo kutta..?🤔
Taevin : haa..kurach.. (food mathiyaakki ezhunnettu)
Jimmy : (looks at taevin's plate) eda ithu full kazhichitt poda..
Taevin: time illaa..aval waiting aa...
Athum paranj avan minnal vegathil poyi kai kazhuki vannu, tableil vachirunna avante bulletinte key eduthu.. kitchenilekk oodi.. avide ninnirunna susammede kavilil oru Umma koduth tata yum paranj nere purathekk oodi ...
Jimmy nods his head with a smile, watching his brother's actions.
Taevin poyikkazhinju susan angotte vannu. Appozhekkum jimmyum kazhich kazhinj ezhunnettu.
Susan : ha, nee ithra pettennu mathiyaakkiyo? 2 dosa koode kazhikkeda..
Jimmy : Venda susammoo... Ippo thanne vayar full aaye..
Jimmy poyi kai kazhuki vannu, nere avante kayyile vellam muzhuvan susante udupp (nighty)il thudachu.
Susan : huh! Ee cherukkanekkond njaan..😖
Jimmy susane nokki 32 pallum kaatti oru chiri chirichond avidennu muttathekkirangy. Susan follows him. Avan muttath vannu shoes okke itt kazhinj carinte aduthethi.
Jimmy : aish.. key eduthilla..😐 susammoo ~~~
Meanwhile ithu jimmyde oru pathiv aayirunnond susamma already carinte key eduth kayyil pidichirunnu.
Susan : ah.. enikkariyaam. Nee marakkumenn.. innaa.. key..🙄
Jimmy key vaangy onnu ilichu kaanichu. 😁
Jimmy : appo tata bye bye 👋 (flying kiss)
Susan : ah.. povaan nokk cherukka.
Jimmy pinne car start cheyth roadilekk irakkiyathum ethire oru scooter vannu ninnathum orumichaayirunnu.. Just idichu idichilla ennu paranjapole aane aa red Vespa scooter avante carinu ethiraayi vannu ninnath..
Jimmy deshyathil thala purathitt aa scooterinte ownerine onnu nokki..
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At Chakho memorial bus stop (aaraanavo ee chakho😌)
Samayam ethaand 9.30yod adukkunnu.. jolikk pokunna chechimaarum, school pillerum, college studentsum.. angane kurachadhikam aalukal busstopil nilppund. And.. avarude koottathil avalum...
Aval idakkide kayyile watchil samayam nokkikondirikkunnund..
Nadi pov : aish... Varaarulla time kazhinjalloo... 🙁
Pettennu oru bulletinte sound kett aval roadilekk nokki.. and aval kaathu ninnirunn aal athaa varunnu.
A wide smile appears on her face, making a cute dimple show up on her left cheek.
Aval vegam busstopil ninnum roadilekk irangy ninnu. Appozhekkum aa bullet avalude angott ethiyirunnu. Ayaal avalude thottaavaadi kondvannu bike nirthy, helmat oori avale onnu nokki chirichu. A boxy smile.
(I know edit myaarakam aanenne.. time illaathond pettenn oppichatha.. next time set aakkam..😌)
Nadi : enthaa late aaye ichaaya? (Pouts cutely)
Taevin : ah. Ath njaan...veetilninnirangaan thanne late aayi.😬 Sorry...
Nadi : hmm..🙁
Taevin: ini ninnu late aakkanda. Nee kayare..
Nadi smiles and avante backil kayari, one-side aayi irunnu. Aval oru kai kond avante shoulderil pidichu, and settled herself comfortably on the seat.
Taevin: povaam?
Nadi : ahh ichaya..☺️
And he wears the helmat and starts the bike, they both drove off from there to their college.
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Meanwhile at "manimangalam" veed🏠 -
Come on.. let's peek inside.. 👀
Living roomil centreil thanne ittirikkunna teapoyil kuree files adukki perukki vachittund. Aduthaayi ittirikkunna sofayil oru black leather ladies bag irikkunnu..
Dining and living roomine seperate cheyyunna orange- tinted design ulla curtains vakanjumaattikkond aval drithiyil living roomilekk nadannu vannu. Nadakkunnathinidakk kayyilulla bottleil ninnu vellam kudikkunnumund..
Vanna udane aval sofayil vachirunnu bag eduth tholil ittu. Files ellaam onnude check cheytha shesham kayyileduthu pidichu. Pinne kayyilulla bottle teapoyinmel vach aval akathekk nokki vilichu paranju..
Ammaa... Njaaan iranguvaa...
Aah moleee....
Akathu ninnu marupadi Vanna kshanam thanne aparna sofayil vachirunna carinte keyum eduth purathekkirangy..
Aval muttathekkirangy cherippittu kondirikkumbo amma vannu doorum chaari avale nokkikkond ninnu.
Nandini : appu, nee uchakk varuvo?
Aparna : illa. Innithiru thirakkulla divasamaa.. njaan purath ninn kazhicholaam..
Nandini gave a nod and akathekk thanne poyi. And aparna avalude carinaduthekku nadannu.
Aval Caril kayari car start cheythathum avalude phone ring cheythu. She took a glance at the caller id and quickly picked up the call.
Yes sir... Haa.... Njaanitha ethy... Oru.. 5 minute.... Okay sir... Sure... Okay..
And she ends the call and places the phone in her bag. Then she drives off to her workplace.
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So that's it!
The first chapter!
We're starting this story here..
Genuinely, I don't know how's this. Enthaayalum thudangyallo, so aa flowil angu poyekkaam.. 😌
Ok bye.
Take care. 💜