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This is story of an strict ips training Commander and a cute funny and lazy candidate 😜😜 Om as a commander... More

Prologue
Characters
Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5
Part 6
want to ask something 😭😶😭😶
Part 7
part 8
Part 9
Part 10
part 11
Part 12
Part 13
announcement🙈
Part 14
Part 15
Part 16
Part 17
New story 🤧
Part 18
Part 19
Part 20
Part 21
Part 22
Part 23
Part 24
Part 25
Part 26
Part 27
Part 28
Part 29
Part 30
Part 31
Part 32
Part 33
Part 34
Part 35
Part 36
Part 37
Part 38
Part 39
Part 40
Part 41
Part 42
Part 43
IMPORTANT!!
Part 44
Part 45
Part 46
Part 47
IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENT!
Part 48
Part 49
Part 50

Epilogue 🥺

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Rikara's reception.

Gauri was getting ready for her reception.

Bhavya came to room: Chal yaar....sab wait kar rahe hain.

Gauri: Ruko aa rahe hain.....makeup laga len len aise bhoot ban ke chale jayen😒.

Bhavya: Thopo....thop lena to aa jana.

Gauri: Chal chal...acha sun jab ham aayenge na to sari lights hamare upar dalvana jaa ke bol do uss se jo ye lightning ka kam kar rhe.

Bhavya: Han thik hai.

Gauri: Haan ab jao hamko thopne do.... Omkara ji ko bhej dena.... Sath me entry marenge mast hero heroin jaise.

Bhavya: Han haan bhejti hun. Aur kuch?

Gauri: Nhi ab tum jao.

After few minutes.

Om entered inside the room.

Om: Hayeee..... Mai mar gya.

Gauri blushed.

Om: Shadi ke baad jada sundar lagne lagi ho.

Gauri stands from her place: Oh hello Mr. Pati dev mai shadi se pehle bhi khubsurat thi.

Om: Acha ji.... To chale neeche Mrs. Khubsurat patni ji.

Gauri: Chaliye.

Om hold her hands and went down stairs. All lights and cameras face them.

Samaira: Gauri kitni sundar lag rahi hai na.... Mai bhi apne reception me aise ready hungi.

Harsh chuckled: Shadi to ho jane do.

Samaira: 😶Haan.

Rikara take there seat.

Gauri to cameraman: Bhaiya aap hamari single ki photos lijiye na... Ham jada sundar lag rahe hain.

Everyone chuckled.

Om: 😒Phle couple photo ho jaye.

Gauri: Nhi nhi pehle hamari single ki.... Omkara ji baad me hamara makeup thoda kam ho jayega abhi taza makeup hai na.... Please aap hatiye.

Om stand from his place: Gajab bejati hai.

Rudra: Bhaiya aapki izzat ka faluda ho gya camera man ke samne.

Om: 😒Haan thik hai na.

After clicking more than hundred photo.

Cameraman: Ma'am aapki approximately hundred plus photo hogyi hongi ab please couple photo le lene dijiye.

Gauri: Acha acha ok... Aaiye omkara ji baithiye.

Om sat beside her: Bahot ehsan hoga apka.

Gauri pulled his cheeks: Arre gussa mat kariye na.

Om smiled: Samne dekho photo click karvana hai.

Gauri: Haan.

Naina was searching for Adarsh.

Isha: Kise dhudh rahi ho?

Naina: Yaar wo adarsh abhi to yahin tha kahan chala gya.

Isha: Wo dekho aa rahe hain.

Naina looked behind.

Adarsh: Kya hua ?

Naina: Ye mujhe aapko dikha rahi thi.

Isha: Nhi nhi isne kuch nhi dekha.

Naina: Nhi nhi dekha dekha poora dekha.

Adarsh chuckled: Naina tum bahot cute ho.

Naina: Sachhhii!!

Isha: Mai aati hun.

She left from there.

Naina looked at Adarsh.

Adarsh: Kya hua? Kuch kehna tha kya?

Naina: K... Kya nhi nhi!!

She also left from there .

Naina went to Samaira: Yaar Adarsh kal chala jayega mai to single hi mar jaungi... Kuch idea bata na ki kaise bolun usse.

Gauri came to them: Jaa ke sidha propose kar de.. Tujhe kon mana karega.

Naina: Aise jaa ke?

Gauri: Haan aur ham log hain na tere sath.

Samaira: Wahi na.

Naina: Tum log jana mat thik wahin khadi rehna.

Gauri: Haan han thik hai chalo ab.

They went to Adarsh.

Samaira Gauri stand little far from Adarsh.

Gauri: Hain ham dono idhar.

Naina: Idhar hi rehna.

Samaira: Haan tu tension mat le.

Naina went to Adarsh: Hello!!

Adarsh: Hii... Kya hua? Tum achanak se chali gyi thi.

Naina: Wo mujhe tumse kehna tha ki...

She looked behind Gauri and Samaira was running from there.

Naina in low voice: Sali kamini.

To Adarsh: Baad me batati hun.

She also ran from there.

Naina: Dhokhebaaz😒 .

Samaira: Yaar ham to wahin khade the..

Gauri: Haan Maa ne bula liya tha.

Naina: Dikh raha tha mujhe kaise chori se bhag rahi thi ehsan framoshon. Ab bata bhagi kyun?

Gauri: 😶Wo agar Adarsh tujhe reject kar deta to tu ham log ko peet deti isliye.

Samaira: Aur tu to turant hampe blame dal deti Adarsh se ki hamne idea diya.

Naina: 😒Jao bhago yahan se.

Both left from there with blank face.

In evening.

Youngsters were chit chating.

Girls were whispering.

Shivaay: Kya ? Tum sab kya khusur phusur kar rahi ho?

Girls looked at him.

Anika: Arre kuch nhi shivaay.

Naina angrily: Kya kuch nhi shivaay? Mai batati hun shivaay kabse ye sab dimag kharab kar rahi hain.

Sakshi: Naina control!!

Naina: Kya control... Shivaay dekho ab mai Adarsh ko pasnd karti hun propose karna chahti hun par aise kaise kar dun... Adarsh tum hi batao aise acha thode lagega.... Ye log keh rahi hain ki abhi bol do i love you...... Badi aayi.

All looked at each other controlling their laugh except Adarsh.

Adarsh: 😶😶.

Naina: Han nhi to... Propose karne ka koi dhang hota hai... Tum kya sochoge mere bare me ki kaisi ladki hai.... Badi aayi hattt!!

Gauri controlling her laugh: Thik hai mat karo gussa kyun rahi ho.

Naina realised that she told everything to Adarsh. Her eyes popped out.

Naina: S... Sorry Adarsh sorry sorry mai to... Mere muh se nikal gya.

Adarsh chuckled at her antics.

All: Ohoooo!!

Jhanvi: Kya? Dheere baat karo bahar mehman aaye hain.

All nodded.

Om: Adarsh tujhe naina pasnd hai? Shadi karoge isse?

Gauri: Aap kya Adarsh ke papa vale dialogue maar rahe.

Om: 😒😒.

Rudra: Bejati ho gyi.

Adarsh: Nhi mujhe naina pasnd nhi hai...

Naina: 🙂Bejati... Mujhe pata tha.

Adarsh: Nhi mujhe naina vaise nhi psnd vaise psnd hai.

Gauri: Ab ye kaise types of pasand hain?

Adarsh: Arre matlb jaise tum sab pasnd ho vaise. Maine usse uss nazar se dekha nhi hai.

Naina: Usme kya hai... Abhi dekh lo.

Gauri: Chup!

Adarsh: Mujhe shadi krne me problem nhi hai... I mean Naina acchi ladki hai.. To agar hamaari shadi ho gayi to pasnd bhi aa jayegi dheere dheere..

Naina: Mujhe bhi... Chalo kar lete hain.

Samaira: Bhag ke karegi kya.. Ghar me baat to kar lo...

Om: Adarsh sach sach batanaa tu bas iska dil rakhne ke liye to nhi keh raha hai?

Adarsh: Nhi yar.... Meri maa log vaise bhi mere liye rishte dhund hi rahi hain.. Aur Naina perfect ladki hai.. Mtlb iska dil bahot saaf hai hamesha sach bolti hai.. Aur iski yahi baat mujhe pasnd hai..

Gauri: Wo sach bolti nhi hai koi baat nhi rehti isliye uske muh se nikal jata hai..

Naina: 😶😒😒Tum to chahti hi nhi meri shadi ho..

Adarsh: Aur tum janti ho Gauri.. Jiske muh se har baat nikal jati hai uska dil khud hi saaf ho jata hai kyunki wo koi baat koi burai apne andar nhi rakhta..

Isha: Wow jijaji.. Hamne kabhi iss nazar se dekha hi nhi.. Sach me aap pehle bande ho jisne iss buddhu ko itne acche se samjha ho.. Naina teri to kismat hi khul gayi.

Naina: Chal chal pata hai.

At night.

Gauri was keeping her dresses in cupboard. Om entered inside the room.

Om: Gauri unn sab ko baad me rakhna raat ho gyi hai tum thak gyi hogi... So jao.

Gauri: Bas ho gya.

She came to bed and lay keeping her head on his chest.

Om kissed on her hairs.

Gauri: Accha ham duty kabse join karen.

Om: Next week se.

Gauri: Accha .

Om: Abhi so jao tired lag rahi ho.

Gauri: Aapko kaise pata ?

Om: Pati hun tumhara... Chehra dekh ke bata sakta hun.

Gauri hugged him and cover her face on his chest: Good night.

Om: Good night.

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Eight years later.

Gauri: Tumhe ek thappad padega..... Next week se exams hain na.

Gauri was teaching her 5 years old son Devansh.

Om came out from bathroom: Kya hua? Meri sher pe kyun chilla rahi ho?

Gauri: Jada sar pe chadhane ki jarurat nhi hai sher ko.

Om: Hua kya?

Gauri: Padhai nhi karta din bhar khelta rehta hai... Shivansh bhaiya ko dekho wo padhai karte hain wo good boy hain aap bad boy ho.

Devansh: Ritika (Ruvya's Daughter) bhi to nhi padhlti.

Gauri: Ritika abhi two years ki hai... Wo school nhi jati abhi.

Devansh: To mai bhi nhi jaunga phil mujhe bhi nhi padhlna palega.

Gauri: Omkara ji kitna dusht hai ye....aap to aise nhi the.

Om: Tum to thi!

Gauri shocked: Kya? Aap mujhe bol rahe hain?

Devansh: Mumma yahan aapke alava koi nhi he.

Om chuckled.

Gauri to devansh: Baby mumma ko duty bhi jana hai na.... Please thoda sa pdhai kar lo kyun pareshan kar rahe ho.

Devansh: Mumma aap jao mai padhl lunga.

Om: Dev bacha mumma ki baat mano.

Devansh: Pleaj Daddy.

Om little angry: Dev.

Devansh get scared: Solly daddy.

Om caressed his cheeks: It's ok bacha.... Aap ache se padhai karo.

Gauri: Thank god aapse darta hai thoda mujhse to bilkul nhi darta.

Om: Dekha sirf sar pe nhi chadha rakha hai apne bache ko.

Anika came to their room.

Om: Kya hua bhabhi?

Anika: Harsh Samaira aaye hain.

Rikara looked at each other happily.

Om: Ham abhi aate hain.

Gauri: Dev aap poora ABCD likh kar aana neeche.

He nodded .

Rikara went downstairs.

Om hugged harsh. Gauri went to Samaira.

Samaira: Gauriiii...

Gauri takes her 3 years old daughter in arms: Mera bachaaaa!! Mera son chiraiya mera ishita babu.

Samaira: Mujhse bhi mil le yaar.

Gauri: Chal hatt!!

Om: Baitho na.

Samaira: Dev kahan hai?

Gauri: Padhai kar raha hai upar room me.

Samaira: Usse bulao to bolo apni behn se mil le..

Gauri: Chupp!! Behn mat bol.

Everyone looked at her confused.

Anika: Arre Samaira ishita ko apni bahu banana chahti hai Gauri.

Samaira chuckled.

Gauri: Has mat mai serious hun... Apne devu ki shadi mai apni gudiya se karvaungi. Shivansh ki shadi Naina ke beti Ashi se aur Ritika ki shadi Aditya isha ke bete Prakhar se.

Rudra: Aur Richa sakshi ?

Gauri: Richa Sakshi ki to beti hain..un dono ki thode karvayenge hahahah. Wo unn dono ki personal problem hai.

Harsh: Yaar tumne to planning bhi kar li.

Gauri: Shivu ke liye Ashi shivaay bhaiya ne dekh rakhi hai... Aur ritika ke liye prakhar ko Bhavya didi ne.

Om: Aur agar un sab ko koi aur pasand aaya to?

Gauri: Haan to unse karva denge...Wo to backup plan hai agar single rahe to karva denge.

Om: Phle bade to ho jayen.

Rudra: Haan to bhabhi konsa abhi shadi karva rahi hain.

Gauri: Wahi na.

Samaira: Yaar kitne time ho gye ham sab ko mile..

Gauri: Last baar ham Sakshi ki beti ke naamkaran ke function me mile the.... 2 saal pehle... Usme bhi Aditya Isha nhi aa paye the Isha ke pregnancy ki wajah se.

Samaira: Chalo reunion plan karte hain.

Gauri: Haan yaar wo bhi hyderabad ke academy me.

Harsh: Permission to le len.

Gauri: Aap dono le lijiyega permission.

Samaira: Next week rakhte hain.... Hamare batch ke sare officers sare commander doctors sab ko invitation karte hain.

Gauri: Haan Yaar..... Next month rakhte hain.... Samaira tum hamare batch ki WhatsApp group pe message kar dena jab sab final hojaye.

Samaira nodded.

One month later.

Everyone was waiting for rikara.

Samaira: Ye Gauri aur Omkara jiju kahan reh gye.

Isha: Wo dekho aa gye.

Om stopped the car. Both came out from the car.
Gauri ran to her freinds everyone share the hug.

Gauri: Yaar kitne time baad mile ham sab.

Richa: Tu itna late ho gyi.

Gauri: Arre yaar Dev ko janti hai na kitna ziddi hai...sath aane ki zidd karne laga. Bahot mushkil se usse Anika bhabhi ke paas sula kar aaye hain.

Naina: Ab baitho sab .

Everyone take their seat.

Aditya: Yaar kitni masti ki hai hamne yahan sab yaad aa raha hai.

Gauri: Haan yaar..... Yad hai ham aur Samaira kitni ladai karte the.

Siya: Gauri to aisa aisa bolti thi ki ham log ka muh band ho jata tha.

Malini: Aur Sam ki to izzat ki khatiya khadi kar deti thi.

Harsh: Haan Mai aur Omkara sar peet lete the apna.

Richa: Vaise Omkara jiju ko kabhi laga nhi hoga ki ye ladki inki patni hogi kabhi.

Om: Ye to hai....ab koi bhi nhi soch saka hoga uss time ki mujhe jaise mature samajhdar insan ko iss jaisi buddhu milegi.

Harsh: Omkara se sab darte Gauri ko chhod ke.... Omkara ka to ekdum muh ban jata.. Mujhse kehta Yaar harsh wo ladki ya to pagal hai ya Batmeez jo mujhse nhi darti.

Gauri: Kyun ye koi gabbar singh the jo hamare hath kaat lete jo ham inse daren?

Isha: Vaise galti Omkara jiju ki thi jo Gauri darti nhi thi.

Om: Kya? Maine kya kiya?

Isha: Aap Gauri ko sabse kam punishment dete the jabki galtiyaan bhi wahi jada karti isliye aapse nhi darti thi.

Om: 😶Ohh.

Harsh: Haan iski niyat shuru se Gauri ko lekar sahi nhi thi.

Om hits on his head: Shut up!
Aisa kuch nhi tha... Wo to ye mujhe apna bhola bhala chehra dikha deti thi... Ab tum sab bholi nhi dikhti to meri kya galti.

Sakshi: Ham kyun bholi dikhenge.... Gauri se nazar hat ti hi nhi hogi.

Om: Aisa nhi tha😶.

Naina: Hame na batao kaisa tha.

Om: Acha ab chup .

Gauri: Naina Samaira ka yaad hai....harsh jiju ki ek nazar ke liye poora din unhi ko dekhti rehti.

Harsh: Aur ab dekhti hi nhi.

Samaira: Haan jaise ki aur koi kam nhi hai mere paas.. Ghar ka kaam sanbhalti hun mummy papa ko mere hath ka khana pasnd hai bas to khana bhi banati hun Riti ko bhi mai hi sambhalti hun bade aaye.

Harsh: 😶.

Om: Ho gya bejati.

Gauri: Vaise hamne bahot help ki thi Samaira ki..

Samaira looked at her: Accha? Zara hame bhi bataiye kya help ki aap sabne meri?

Gauri: Hamne gana nhi sikhaya tha kya?

Samaira: Ek maheena bhi acche se nhi sikhaya tha tumne.. Wo bhi na sikhati wo to mai bejati kar deti thi to sikhana padta tha muh bana ke..

Gauri: Haan to ab aur bhi kaam the hame...

Samaira: Haan pata hai kya kaam the tumhe...

Naina: Usko chhodo.. Par mera ehsaan to man na padega tumhe..

Samaira: Kis khushi me?

Naina: Arre agar maine harsh ko galti se na bataya hota ki tum usse pasand karti ho to wo to tumhe ghas bhi nhi dalta.. Meri wajah se hi usne tumhe notice karna start kiya tha..

Samaira: Haan ye to hai...

Naina: Haan nhi to.

Gauri: Chalo na thoda ghumte hain yahan..

Richa: Chalo sabse pehle apne hostel me chalte hain.

All went to hostel.

Sakshi: Gauri wo dekh ham teeno ka room.

Gauri: Wahan koi aur rehta hoga na.... Pagal.

Om: Arre! Ab room tum teeno ne to khareed nhi rakha na har saal new batch ko milega.

Richa: Yaar ham log ka room alag hi tha.

Harsh: Haan wahi.... Sabse kharab aur behuda room rehta tha tum log ka.

Samaira: Mera to sabse saaf tha.

Gauri: Wahan makeup ke samaan ke alawa kuch hoga tab ganda hota na.

Samaira: 😒To tumko kya jalan ho rhi tum bhi rakh leti.

Om: Achha lado mat.

Isha: Training area me chalte hain.

Everyone went to training area.

Aditya: Wo dekho wahan hamari wo balti wali training hui thi.

Gauri: Haan jisme tumhari Omkara ji ne bejati ki thi.

Isha: Maza aa gya tha.

Om: Bahot asan lag raha tha isse keh raha tha sir ye panghat ki gori wala kaam karvaenge aap.

Aditya: 😶😶Mujhe kya pata tha.

Richa: Hamari aur Sammy ki friendship bhi to ussi din se hui thi..

Malini: Ussi din mujhe siya samaira ko pta chla tha ki Omkara jiju aur Gauri engaged hain .

Naina: Haan maine hi bataya tha

Gauri: Sab ussi din hua tha.

Om: Wapas party me chalte hain.

Harsh: Yeah! Let's go.

Everyone left from there except Rikara.

Gauri: Kya hua chaliye sab chale gye.

Om: Party me kya rakha hai ham kuch der baad chal lenge.... chalo baith

Gauri: Chaliye.

Both sat on a bench.

Om: Tumhe pehla din yaad hai academy vala.

Gauri chuckled: Arre wo....uss din ko kon bhulega aap dar ke chale gye the.

Om: Kya kon dar gya kab?

Gauri: Jab hamari behas hui thi tab.

Om: Oh hello! Mai dara nahi tha mujhe late ho raha tha tum jaisi bewkoof se ladne se acha mai chala hi gya tha.

Gauri: 😒Aap bewkoof.

Om: 😶Arre uss time ki soch bata raha hun.

Gauri: Haan samjh aa raha hai purani baton ka bahana bana kar bewkoof bol rhe😏.

Om: Ab ladai karogi to mai chala jaunga.

Gauri: 😶Arre sorry ham bas mazak kiye..

Om smiled: Janta hun..(Holding her hand). Tumhari inhi sab adaon pe to fida hua hun mai.

Gauri: Haan haan Jada dialogues mat mariye.

Om: Yar tum bahot unromantic ho..Andar chalte hain.

Gauri: Accha sorry sorry..hamko sharam aati hai na..

Om: Sharam aati hai to pyari patniyon ki tarah sharma nhi sakti aise sara mood ki dahi banana jaruri hai kya.

Gauri nodded . He smiled and shook his head.

Gauri:. Omkara ji..Hamare badon ke faisale kitne sahi hote hain na...Jaise hamare case me badon ne hamari shadi fix ki thi..tab hame unka faisla kitna kharab lag raha tha...Hamko to lag raha tha jaise hamko maut ke kuyen me dhakka de diya ho koi..

Om chuckled: Aur mujhe lag raha tha mere sar pe kisi ne mount everest tod diya ho...

Both laughed.

Om: Par kitne sahi the sab....Jo samajh gaye the ki ham ek dusre ke liye bane hain...Aur ham hi samajh nhi paye..

Gauri: Haan.. par hamko to uss time pr yakeen nhi aa raha jab hame aap jaise insaan se pyar hua...huh!!

Om glared at her: Iss "Aap jaise insaan" se kya matlb tha tumhara?

Gauri: Arre vo mtlb nhi...mtlb ham kitne alag personalities the...Kahan aap kitne rude.. strict.. serious type aur kahan ham..

Om: Pagal ..jhalli aur bindaas...

Gauri: Haan ... Hame to aapko dekh ke chidh hoti thi ki aap kitne serious hain pagal jaise..

Om : Itna bhi serious nhi tha....

Gauri: Haan vaise nhi the par hamare samne to the hi...

Om: Gauri.. Partners wo hote hain jo ek dusre ko complete karen...i mean mere andar kuch cheejon ki kami thi jo tumne puri ki aur tum me kuch kamiyan thi jo maine puri ki..Jaise mujhe har pal khul ke jeena....Har baat pe khush rehna nhi aata tha... par tumne meri zindgi me aa ke meri uss kami ko pura kar diya...

He holds her hand: And thank you for this..

Gauri: Aur hame koi bhi situation sincerely handle karna nhi aata tha..par aapne hame har situation ko handle karna aur face karna sikha diya..

She kept her head on his shoulder : And thank you for this....












THE END!!

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So how was the journey of Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya season 2??


This was our fav story🤧🤧 Rona aa raha hai 🤧🤧...But khatam to karna hi hai 🙂warna ekta kapur ka serial lagne lagega..


So thank you everyone for loving this story ❤️❤️🤧...


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