Fallen Fire

By Doctor_Dispatch

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ahhh Kuttetta Inge vanne... Eanode oru sneham indone nokkike.. Inge vaaa.... athe indaloo nammadee kadhayile... More

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Njn oru story start cheythu .. athe complete cheyende eantte responsibility aane...
Ningake Istapetta Comment cheye vote cheye illengil
Vote cheye comment cheye...
Alla pinneyy

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Eza cool aave.... At the end of the day oru kumarano kuttano kannilla... You should fight..
Ufffff.. uffffffff.... Be yourself
So You Unknown stranger readers...
Thudangam?

Kookie drag Tae to Some where...
Tae : Daa videda eantte kaiyine..
Kookie : Tae njn parayune kekke ..
Tae release Her hand...And pushed him away
Tae : Nee Eandhada vijariche?? Ehhh nee switch ittal kaththune bulb aane njn enno?? Ninake thonniya time ile vanne mindam Ninake thonniya time ile vanne pidikkam athum ninnake eanne avishamundengil... Eanike eanne oru vila ningale thanitte indo??
Kookie : Tae njn parayune onne kekke...
Tae : Eandhada ningake parayende..
Kookie : I Love you .
Tae was shocked...
Kookie : I love you Tae , Eanike pattilledi ninne pirinje irikkan.. Vatte pidikkune polleya... Eanike ariyilla Nee eandhe thyre aane. Angelo devilo Eandhe malaranelum I Don't fucking care about anything... Pakshe nee illathe eanike pattilledi... Nammake pazhathe polle aavam...
Tae : Eathra kalam?? Ehhh
Kookie : Povune aathrayum...
Tae : Pattilla... Kandavantte vaakke kette nee eanne upekshiche... If you really loves me... Show your love.. Prove it... Anne njn eallam upekshiche varam...
Kookie : Tae njn--she already left the chat...

Meanwhile libraryile
Nikhil : Nee ippo eandha viliche?
Chimmy : Appaaa
Nikhil : Njn nintte appa alla...
Chimmy : Appa Ningake ariyam
Nikhil : Taesa anne eantte magal..
Chimmy : *wanna cry* ahh... Ayikotte.. pakshe the truth is... Njnum Taeyum Twins anne..
Nikhil : Illa Illa... Nee kallam parayalle..
Chimmy : Balrionsile onne njana...
Nikhil rushed to Chimmy and hold her hand so rough...
Chanyeol : Ninne aara ingotte paranje Vittathe??? Nee eandhina ingotte vanne??
Chimmy : *with red tearful eyes* Chachan... Appa njn parayune onne viswasikke... Njn Appantte mola... Baekammede kunja...
Taede chechi... Appantte Right Wing..
Chanyeol : Nee sherikkum Baekintte molano??
Chimmy bend her head down and nodded...
Chanyeol Hugged Chimmy to him ..
Chimmy starts to cry in
The Embrace of Her dad..

Angane Tae was waiting For Jiminia...
Appozhane Chimmy Nikhilintte koode varune kannune...
Tae : Inggere eandhina ivalde koode??
Nikhil : Ahh Ithe aare Angelo??
Tae : *fake smile*
Chimmy : Tae nee pokko..
Nikhil : Tae oo??
Chimmy : Aishh avale veetile vilikkune angana...
Nikhil : sheri nadakette .. and he left the chat...
Tae : Nee evide pova??
Chimmy : Edi eanike oru duty inde..
Tae : Nee ottake evideyum povenda
Chimmy : edi eanike duty time aa.. nee pokko Chachan inde avide..
Tae : Edi njnum varam
Chimmy : nee safe alla..
Tae : Nee ottake povenda njnum varum...
Chimmy : Achachan dheshyapedum .. nee angotte chelle...
Tae : Njn varune paranjille...
Chimmy : Time illa Tae nee ippo Chelle achachan purathe inde...
Tae : Njn paranja paranjatha
Chimmy : ohh you're so sweet sissy... How carring you are ... I am so blessed to have a sweet Sister like who loves me the most
Tae : Nee evide eangillum poyi chavedi... And Tae iranggi poyi..
Chimmy chuckled at her sister's cute anger..

Tae nere chenne vandiyile keri irunnu...
Cheol : Chimmy eandheye?
Tae : eanike ariyilla duty indane
Cheol : Ohhh... And he took Tae to home...
Povune vazhike Kookieyum felixum IN um nadane povane...
Tae kookine onne nokki...
Felix : Ivale okke bhayangara kombathe teams alle?
IN : pakshe Anna kollam alle??
Felix : Eda cheraka...nee vannapo thotte Parayune annalo? Eandhane?
IN : Alleda just chumma..
Felix : Venda vendaa .. Penn anno?? Avale nammake idayile vendaa..
IN : Athoke athre ollu...
Meanwhile avarke ariyilalo? Koode nadakkune Kookie enna kanichene...

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Oru 8 :30 pm
Namjin's house

Jin : Oru vaa koodi ollu... Aaaa vekke
Luhan : Aaaaa
Jin : Nee poda... Ichayantte ponne kazhicheda
Joonie : Onne po jineatta.. nattukare kannum...
Jin : poyi Chavan para.. nee ithe kazhiche...
Joonie : Shoo.. she ate that chore with curry..
Joonie : Ammade ponne aaa veche ..
Luhan : pointed to somewhere...
Joonie : Ahhh athoke Pinne nokkam ammade koche alle aa veche... And she feed him kurukke...
Ithe eallam kandonde Kookie ingane irikkuva...

Anne aadhyamayitte Avane angane thonniye...
Wanna Have Tae as his whole life...
He moved To his room...
Spotifyile "Nee kavithaigala" song

He opened the window and looks at the sky

He remember the days with his Tae..
Koode indayirunapo Nammake avarude vila manasilavilla...
Avare Poyi kazhinjale Nammake aa vila ariyu... (Eza de suvishesham - 6 : 3-4)
Kookie Muparude Phone ile Ingane images um nokki kidannu

Kookie just chuckled ...
Kookie : Nee eandhinadi eantte jeevithathileke vanne?
Meanwhile Tae who was super mad at Kookie...
Kookie kissed on that photo and lay on his bed ...
Ahh pinne duet anne

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Eallam potte...
At Yoonji's Room

Yoonji : Eannalum inne eandhekeya sambaviche? Karthave njn chathe povuvo?
Chimmy : Pinneyy.. *While sitting on the window and reading book..*

Appozhane Felix angotte varune..
Felix : Edi
Yoonji : Eandhada?
Felix : Nintte powerbank njn edukkuva...
Yoonji : Ohh ingane oru shudhra jeevi..
Felix : Dhheeeee Eantte aliyane eandhengillum paranjal indalo...
Yoonji : Daaaaaa
Felix already left the chat ...
Yoonji : Aishh paranjapole aa jendhune eanne vende??
Chimmy : Ehhh?? Aarke?
Yoonji Took the phone and Whatsappile video calling ..

With in 13 second Hobi took the call..
Hobi : Ahadi ippo eangane inde??
Yoonji : Ithe eanna vilikkathe??
Chimmy : Aare??
Hobi : Edi oru minute--Reconnecting
Yoonji : Aishhh ee Range ..
Hobi : i- -- --- kavo??
Yoonji : Hobi... Halloo
Hobi : Ippo kannavo??


Yoonji : Mmm...
Hobi : Nee bang adicho??
Yoonji : Cheruthayitte
Hobi : Sugane polle inde ippo...
Yoonji : poda ..
Hobi : Kidakkuvano?
Yoonji : mmm
Hobi : Nalla flow anno?
Yoonji : Hobi angane onnum chodhikkale... Eanike eandho polle
Hobi : Edi njn oru future doctoraadi..
Yoonji : Ayine?
Hobi : Ohh nee parayenda...
Yoonji : mm kurache..
Hobi : Saramilla... Tensiontteya.. nee mensural cup use cheye...
Yoonji : Pinne eanitte vennam..
Hobi : Shedaa nee ingane aavale Yoonji.. nintte health nokke aadhyam..
Yoonji : Athoke velya riskaa ..vellathum patti poya..
Hobi : Pinne
Yoonji : ee awareness class onne nirthavo... Eanitte eanode vellathum samsarikke...
Hobi : Ohhhh.... Para..
Yoonji : mmm eanike miss cheyuva
Hobi : Eanikkum...
Yoonji : Eanna varunne?
Hobi : Naale kazhinje.. mmm..
Yoonji : Hobicha
Hobi : Eandhooo
Yoonji : oru patte paadi tharavo??
Hobi : Ippozho?
Yoonji : Eanna Venda ..
Hobi : Nikke ivide full aalkaraa njn Terracile poyitte paadam.. wait . He got up.. and moved to terrace...
Yoonji : Mmm kazhicho!?
Hobi : Ahada kazhichu...
[Nick : Da nee evide pova??
Hobi : Terraceile pova chettayi ..
Nick : ahada.. avide aa roshan indengil onne paranje vitteke..]
Yoonji : Hallooo
Hobi : Ahh chettayi ... Ahh edi poyoo?
Yoonji : Illa ivide inde
Hobi : Athe ividathe eantte senior aa ..
Yoonji : Mmm..
Hobi : Roshanchetta Nick eattan vilichu--(ahada). edi oru minute ... And he moved to the corner ...
Yoonji : Paade..
Hobi : Wait... Mmmm~~ Malayalam anno??
Yoonji : Eathengillum onne paade...
Hobi : waitttt... Mm ippo eaatha paadune??? Ahh ammade favourite paadi tharam... Appane konde paadikkune aane amma..
Yoonji : Mmm ... Nee eanike paadi thanitte indo??
Hobi : Indane thonnune...
Yoonji : Mm paade...
Hobi : mmmmm~~
Yoonji : mmm ..
Hobi : mm അറിയാതെ ഞാനെന്റെ പ്രണയത്തെ വീണ്ടും
നെഞ്ചോടൊതുക്കി കിടന്നിരുന്നു..
കാലൊച്ചയില്ലാതെ വന്നു നീ മെല്ലെയെൻ
കവിളോടുരുമ്മി കിതച്ചിരുന്നു..
പാതിയും ചിമ്മാത്ത മിഴികളിൽ നനവാർന്ന (2)
ചുണ്ടിനാൽ ചുംബിച്ചിരുന്നിരുന്നു.
(Yoonji hugged her Teddy)
അറിയാതെ നീയെന്റെ മനസ്സിലെ കാണാത്ത
കവിതകൾ മൂളി പഠിച്ചിരുന്നൂ..
മുറുകാൻ തുടങ്ങുമെൻ വിറയാർന്ന വീണയിൽ
മാറോടമർത്തി കൊതിച്ചിരുന്നു..
എന്തിനെന്നറിയില്ല ഞാനെന്റെ മുത്തിനെ
എത്രയോ സ്നേഹിച്ചിരുന്നിരുന്നു(2)..
"മറന്നിട്ടുമെന്തിനോ മനസ്സിൽ തുളുമ്പുന്നു
മൗനാനുരാഗത്തിൻ ലോലഭാവം..
കൊഴിഞ്ഞിട്ടുമെന്തിനോ പൂക്കാൻ തുടങ്ങുന്നു
പുലർമഞ്ഞുകാലത്തെ സ്നേഹതീരം..
പുലർമഞ്ഞുകാലത്തെ സ്നേഹതീരം..." Mmm Mathiyooo??
Yoonji : ..........
Hobi : ehhh? edi , Yoonji, aishhh Ingge nokkike... Ayyeee edi karayuvano?
Yoonji : onnulla *wiped her tears*
Hobi : Eandhada karyam para...
Yoonji : eanike ippo kannanam
Hobi : Sheeee njn vaaralo..
Yoonji : *Sniffsss*
Hobi : Eantte mole Yoonji , njn vaaralo eantte rajakumariye konde povan
Yoonji : uvvaa... *Sniffs*
Hobi : Ohh...
Yoonji : Ninake ippozhum eanne Istam aano?? (In adanja sound)
Hobi : Aishhhhh... Edi
Yoonji : ........
Hobi : Yoonji..
Yoonji : ......
Hobi : Ingge nokkeda...
Yoonji : mmhmm.. *wiped her tears*
Hobi : Eantte ponne alle??
Yoonji : Njn pinne vilikkam..
Hobi : Eyyy vekkale vekkale vekkale...
Yoonji : *sniffss*
Hobi : Sheee karayalleda... Njn varathilley... Njn promise cheythathe orkkunundo??
Yoonji : Mmm...
Hobi : Nee allathe vere oruthiye njn nokkillane...
Yoonji : *sniffs* varumbo eanne kannan varanam ketto..
Hobi : Ohh kettu... Alla kittiyilla..
Yoonji : ummaa..
Hobi : *Kissed on his phone*
Yoonji : I love you
Hobi : *chuckled* love you too da...
Yoonji : vekkatte?
Hobi : mmmm....
And she cut the call..
Chimmy was like : aiwwwwww...

Appozhane Yoonjide roomilekum nokki oru black hoddie itta orale chimmye thanne nokki nikkune...
Chimmy saw him and closed the window glass...
And Raised her middle finger just like her dad in IB...

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Next Day
Classile ..
2: 30 pm

Win : Edi Angele...
Tae : Mmm..
Win : Eanike BTS ine bhayangara istava ..
Tae : Eanikkum...
Win ; Eantte Taehyung oppa ippo eandhedukkuva...
Tae : Puttum kadalayum kettikonde irikkune...
Win : Ohhhh...
Tae : Edi ninake vattano chumma y/n.. eantte koche RM paranjittille?? Avare nammale swandham Friendsine polle kannane...
Win : Ingotte nokke mole... Karthave thamburane 10 kalpana thanitte inde ... Athe pollum anusarikkillatha nammalane Inni ippo RM parayune kekkune...
Tae : Ithe eandho koodiya innam anne..
Joel : Semiclassicalinullavare 4th floorile auditoriumileke chellan paranju
Win : Ahhh vaayo..
Tae : Edi nee avale kando?
Win : Aare?
Tae : Aaa.. mette... Chimmye
Win : athe aara?
Tae : ivide irikkune
Win : Ahh Anna... Alla nintte cousin alle avale??
Tae : Nee vaa nammake povam...
Win : Ehhh ivake eandha pattiye??

Meanwhile At auditorium
Felix : Da Ninake ariyuvo being single is So Rich ..
IN : Eangane?
Felix : Avale kooti karangan povenda , Chaya vangikenda... Gift vaangenda...
Angane nokkiya Being single is always better...
IN : Ahh
Felix : So nammake vaayi nokkam...
IN : athine kozhapamille??
Felix : paisa mudakillalo...
IN : Avarum nammale vaayi nokkiya?
Felix : Athine munbe nammale scootavanam.. eanganum kuzhiyile veena mone Jeevitham Damar padar...
IN : Sathyaa....
Felix : Da da dhee y/n ...
IN : Ohh very goodddd
Felix : athey athey *goods* thanne

Neena : Eda semi fusion aane.. Win frontileke vaa... Angele sideile nikke
Tae : ivideyo?
Neena : Eda V pole nikke..
Win : Illa avale Jimin biased aa... Njn nikkam
Tae : Eanike angane onnumilla Njn OT7 aa
Win : Uvvaa
Neena : Eantte ponno onne nere nikkavo??
Tae : Ohh...
Neena : Ahh Junia nee ivide Angelintte opposite nee ketto ..
Steffy winitte backile.. Sivaniyum Fathimayum Angelintte frontileke vanne...
Win : Appo chechi evide nikkum..
Neena : Njn dhee aa attathe...
Ahh eallarum ninnalo??
Students : mm...
Nammade patte ithane...

Win : Eantte karthave 9 minute oo??
Neena : athra onnum Venda just 5 minutes ..
Ahh apoo eallarum position cheythe...

Angane eallarum First step okke practice cheythe nikkuva...
Win : uffff... eanne konde pattilla
Tae : Mmm
Win : Eantte dheyvame Eandhe nottam aadi??
Tae ; Njno?
Win : Mmchh nee kandille??
Tae : Eandhe??
Win : Dhoo .... Mmch ippo nokkale..
Tae : Eandhadi??
Win moved to Tae and thatti kalayal imaginary dust on Tae's shoulder..
Win : balconyile Felixintte sideile aayitte ..
Tae : avide eandhe??


















Tae : Hmmm... Looks away
Kookie : *I won't let you go mole*..
Tae : *vrithikettavan*...
Neena : Onnude eallarum keri ninne...
And everyone keri ninnu...
Neena : play cheyuvane...
Students : Ahh...
Tae looks at Kookie's direction...
Kookie : *Oru mattavumilla angane thanne Taeyineyum nokki irikkuva*
Uffff eanne angotte kutteatta... Nan varune...

Taeke eandho polle...
Ee cherakane nottam maattunilla...
Taeke concentration povune...
Neena : Angele iyale ithe eandha ee kanikkune?
Tae : sorry
Neena : onnude cheyye... Iyale maathram onne kaliche ..
Tae : Njn ottako??
Neena : ahhh...
Tae : Njn Kalikkum eanike aarayum pedi illa...
Neena : Kanda mathi...
But Ithavana Tae sheriyayi kalichu...
And at last A clap sound ..
Mattarumalla Kookie...
*Whistle* and the other two joined with him .
Tae mind cheyan ninnilla...

Meanwhile
Nikhil : ithum avake kodukkane.. ningale share cheytho ketto..
Chimmy : Appa ithe onnum avale kazhikkilla..
Nikhil : Mole kazhicho..
Chimmy felt happy.. so happy..
Chimmy : Appa eandha Taeyode parayathe?
Nikhil : *sighs* athe avalayitte kande pidikkende utharam aane muthe . Nee avalode parayaruthe ketto..
Chimmy : Athe eandha??
Nikhil : athokke inde ..
Eannalum ninake eangane??
Chimmy : They way you interact with Tae.. I know..
Nikhil : Mmm... Baekine sughalle?
Chimmy : 18 kollamayi... Ningake miss cheyunille?
Nikhil : Mmm... Orupaade... Ororo dhivasavum njn kaathirikkune avale onnude kannan vendi maathramane..
Chimmy hugged her dad's hand...
Nikhil : It's okay da... eantte rande makkalum eantte koode ille ippo?
Chimmy : smiles
Nikhil : Oiii...
Chimmy : mmm?? Moved away...
Nikhil : Vella angelineyum kande pidicho??
Chimmy : appaaaa~~ I am just a baby
Nikhil : Uvvaa...

__________&&&&&&&&&__________

Angane 3:30 pm
School vittu..

Tae took her bag and Irangal From the class...
Appozhane Kookie purathe wait cheyuva Taeyike vendi ..
Kookiye kandathum kannathe polle Tae angotte nadane poyi...
Kookie onnum mindathe avale follow cheythu...
Oru 90 cm away aayitte
Kannullil nee kanmani
Kaathinnulil nee theenmozhi
OR
Idazhin oru Oram siridhal anbe...

Athe pole.... Eanike indalo... Eanike angotte angotte angotte keri varununde...
Malare single aayitte ee kadha okke eazhuthunathilum bhedham Vella kinattilum poyi chavunatha...
Njn athe chayathe ingane eangillum njn eantte Aagrahangale ivide Ange theerkette...alla pinne. Shooo oridathe Hobiyum Yoonjiyum vere oridathe namjin... Athum kazhinje dhee ivide...
Njn savan povane... Maduthe ee single life ....
Eannoke njn parayum eanike single aayitte irunna mathi...

Ahh eanitte Tae Kookiye mind cheyathe vaandiyile keri Kutteattane oru Tata pollum kodukkathe avale poyi...
Kookie ingane nokki nikkunidathe..
Avide ee chapter theernu...

__________&&&&&&&&__________

So Eangane inde Story ...
Ahh pettane Onne S'-10 aakanam...

Ahh eanna sheri byee.... Ayyoo villantte karyam paranjillalo?ahh innipo adutha chapterile... Eanike maduthe...
Alla ningake onne comment cheythatha eandha... Eannode samsarikkende ningake??

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