So, things I edited: bedroom description (it no longer is pre decorated), A LOT of the first chapter (scenes, dialogue, etc), a little bit of Charlie's background info, character aesthetics, and other miscellaneous things.
i HIGHLY recommend re-reading the whole book before reading the next chapter as it will make a lot of sense for future chapters and scenes to come.
ALSO here is my playlist for my salvation
AND here is my pinterest board for it
https://pin.it/1DV4d6f