SIN OF BETRAYAL

By koos_flower

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"Do you think betrayal never gonna pay back?" Come on let's go and seek it! One line ⬇️ It's a crime thrill... More

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By koos_flower

Kutttaaaaaaahhhhhhh🌚🫂
Njn vannu🥺💙 ningal enne maranno? kurach personal issues um health issues um okke aytt pettu poyi atha updations onnum idan pattanje. I'm the sry aliyah🤭⚡ ellorkkum sugalle? Enna vaayo namakk thodangam💃💙 pazhe sprt tharane🥺 I know it's been months but.... Shooorryyyyyyy🥺🖤

Kuttan: Jangooooooooooo

Jango: Kuttettaaaaaaaah

Kuttan: I loooooveeeee yooou!

Jango: Loooooveeeee Yooooou Toooooo!

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After some days.
Mrng 9:16 am
Sope residence.

Yoongi: ammaaa

Suga: ooh enna da? Nee erangi ille?

Yoongi: aah erangi appan enthiye vegam varan paray time ayi.

Hobi: oh njn vanneda uvvee

Yoongi: exam aa appa kalikkalle vegam vanne ente vandi workshop il ayi poyi illayrunnel.......

Hobi: shey da njn erangi nee vaa

Suga: nee enthina da kidann vepralam pidikkane eh? Nokki ponam kettallo... nannaytt ezhuth....

Yoongi: ha ok ok mathaa ji *he kissed on her cheeks* appappa ammamme Kookie poytt varame....

Kookie: ha tattaaaa....

Hobi: daaa vaada (from the car)

Yoongi: ahhhh

They left.

Suga: Kookie ninakk padikkan onnulle adutha month ninakk um exam aa ath marakkanda...

Kookie: ooh njn povaneee

Suga: ah enna poyi padikk.... Kappi eduth vekkumbo vilikkam...

Kookie: okey mamma!

Kookie left to her room and take her phn.




Meanwhile Namjin residence.

Jinnie: Edi chimmyyyyy

Chimmi: amma varunn!

Jinnie: enthonn orukkam aadi nee exam nn thanne alle pone eh?

Chimmi: exam anelum look nn mosham vararuth allo hehe engane und mm?

Jinnie: njanjaytt und..... Tiffin pidikk angott...

Chimmi: venda innu canteen il ninna...

Jinnie: enna pinne ninakk ath nerithe vaaya thurann paranjudayrunno koppe...

*le phn nokki irikkunna joon

Joonie: enthuva ravile thanne..

Jinnie: oh vaya thuranno sir... Enthe phn nokki theernna..... Alla njn entha ividuthe velkkariyo? kaalathe kashtapett tiffin ready akki kond vannappo canteen il ninn mathi polum...

Chimmi: ente ponnoh ingu thannekk njn kondoykkolam...

Jinnie: vidriiii! Ini nee angane ippo thinnanda venel canteen nil ninn kazhikk.....alla pinne....

Enwo: chimmyyyyyyyy (from out side)

Chimmi: ayyo aval vannu sheri enna njn eranguvane Tae odu paranjekke.... Tattaa

Joonie: nannaytt ezhuthane

Chimmi: haaa okeeeyyyy...... edi vaa povam

Enwo: mm pettann keru already late aa.... Unclee auntyyy poytt varam...

Namjin: ha🥰

Joonie: madam oru coffee kittiyirunnel....

Jinnie: mm mm vaaah

Joonie: alla avan eneettille?

Jinnie: evidannu innale nattapathira vare game um kalich irunitt neram velukkarayappozha kidanne pinne engane eneekkana....

Jonnie: aa best.

Jinnie: eda taee

Joonie: vilikkanda kidakkatte leave alle...

Jinnie: mm ningala valam vech kodukkane enthelum okke cheyy....

Joonie: ayisheri ippo vaathi prethi ayo? Ah nee coffee edukk njn ready aytt varam... Pinne enikkum tiffin venda uchakk oru client ne meet cheyyan ponam......

Jinnie: aah ingane anel nale muthal njn onnum vech vilambhathilla appan um makkalum koodey puratheen ayikko kazhikkal....

Joonie: ente ammoo nee tiffin edukk.....

Jinnie: venda puratheen angott kaycha mathi ellarum hum..... *she left to kitchen*

Joonie: *sighs and left for bath*









Meanwhile Tae;

Tae's POV.

Ooh pull ith aara ee Koch veluppankalath? Pandaram onnu urangan um sammaykillallo kopp....






Tae: hallo?

Kookie: taevichaaa

Tae: ennadi kurutte ninakk ee kochuveluppankalath? Onnu urnganum sammaykillalle?

Kookie: ayisheri samayam 10 avarayi veluppankalam aanu polum..... ippo viliche ano kuttam? Nattapathira vare game um kalich irikkum enitt bakki ulllorkk aa kuttam.... Ini venel ningal ingott vilikk alla pinne.... Podo kaduveee *she cuts the call*

Tae: kookiee angane alla di... Ooh pull vecho? Aah enna podi koppe..... *again kidann urangi*

Kuttan: ha ippo engane irikkanu?

Jango: eh ayinu irikkuvallallo kidakkuvalle?

Kuttan: oh ente ponnu mandiii dialogue adikkathe ingott vaa...

Jango: ooh allelum kurach naal kaanathe irunn appozhekkum ningalkk enne vendallo? Njn poya appozhekkum vere valla English kariyem kitti kaanum alle? Ooh ayikotte...

Kuttan: pinangalle ponneh nee ente mwuth alle?

Jango: ano?

Kuttan: pinnillathe.... Nee vanne....

Avidannu cut cheyyth clg.

Han: eda onnu vegam vaada....

Xiu: ooh allelum avan ippo pennokke set ayel pinne nammale onnum vendallo?

Yoongi: eda thyre verthe chunkil kollunna varthamanam parayalle Haa...

Jack: ooh onnu varunnundo late ayi....

Han: ah athey vaa povam bakki okke uchakk exam kazhinj theerkkam....











Time skips.
11.00 am
Sope residence.

Kookie's POV.

Ohh pull padich padich over load ayi ini ippo enna cheyya.... Appozhek Kookie de phn ring cheyythu.

Kookie: ah amma para

Suga: kookie appapanum ammammayum varumbo late avum nee food eduth kazhikk ketto pine door okke lock anallo?

Kookie: ah amma lock anu... Mm sheri kazhicholam...

Suga: mm irunn phn il kalikkand padikk

Kookie: ah padikkuva... Ammoo

Suga: ah enna ninakk kollam sheri enna. *call ended*

Kookie: *sighs* mm shey daa ah inippo ennayalum pinne padikkam.... Alla aa diary enthiye kore ayallo onnu podi Thatti edukkam... Aah ividey irupp undo....










< PAST >

After one month.
Mrng josbeak residence.

Beak: manushiya aa piller okke enthiye?

Jos: purath indallo hoba um aytt purath irupp und...

Beak: ee pillere innu njn ethra neram ayenno food eduth vechitt.... Daaaa a hobii

Jos: ivalu innu athungale kollum...

Meanwhile them...

Hoba: jestaaa pass akk ingott thaaa

Jesta: mm inna pidichoooo

*jesta ball hoba kk pass akki but she didn't catch it and aa pass opposite team ile Luca kk kitti*

Hoba: ayyooo.

Luca : heyyyyy *and he got a goal*

Jesta: edi kurutte ninne innu njn... Nilledii avidey

Hoba: ayyoooo joonieeee dhe avan enne ippo kollum....

Hobi: nee alland arelum avalkk pass kodukko mandaaa

Hoba: nee poda a Pattiiiiii

Beak: ente karthaaveee njn ith ennatha ee kanunne edii hobeee....

Pettann ellarum stuck ayi aa vili kettitt...

Beak: ninnod araadi kidann oodan paranje eh? Evidelum oridath adangi othungi irunna pore ninakk eh?

Hobi: kurachokke deham anagunne nallatha enna Dr paranje

Joon: ah athey.....

Beak: ah ithra okke mathi bhaa ellarum vann food kazhikk........

Jos: alla jesta ninte appan entho vayya enn paranjille ippo engane und?

Jesta: ah kuzhappam onnulla OK anu

Jos: mm ninte veetukar enna parayunne da cherkka?

Luca: oh entho parayan nannaytt ponu....

Jos: mm enna vaah kazhikk.....











Time skips
Night.

Hobi: eda joone nale alle result?

Joon: mm

Luca: oh kopp ethra supply ano entho

Jesta: ningal enthina tension avunne? Pinne jooninte kaariyathil arkkum tension venda avan enthayalum 1st class edukkum.... Pinne hobi avan suga ne pedich athiyavashiyam nannaytt padichitt und.... But nee ath onnum nokanda 8 nilayil pottum.....

Luca: ah da koodey nee um......

Hobi: *chuckled* mm ennayalum nale avalu maarum land cheyyum.....

Luca: aah shubham....

Jesta: jooneeeee

Joon:..............

Hobi: daaa *he gently slap on his cheek*

Joon: eh? Eh entha?

Jesta: nee eth lokath aada?

Joonie onnum mindathe eneett poyi

Jesta: shey Ivanu ith entha pattiye?

Hobi: daaa.... Shey njn onnu nokitt varam

Joon balcony il poyi nippund....

Hobi: daaa....

Joon: *sighs* njn OK anu leave me alone...

Hobi: nee ennod ano kallam parayane kaariyam para nee verthe kalikkalle...

Joon: onnulla

Hobi: daa thyreee para

Joon: onnulla inippo result vann training nn okke poyi kazhinja avalde vtl poyi chodhikkande? Avalk already proposals okke varunnund...

Hobi: athano nee enthiana tension avunne? Eh njn ille? Namakk sheri akkam da nee pedikkathe....

Joon: nee vicharikkum pwole alla.... Parayan oru address pwolum illatha njn.... Engane poyi choykkana

Hobi: ninakk address ille? Eh? Ille? Sheri... Appo njngal onnum arum alla ennu nee parayathe paranju.... Good! Sheri enna

Joonie: daaa njn.....  *he's trying not to cry*

Hobi: ninakk appan ille amma ille? Koodapirapp ille? Pinne ini aar venam? Namakk ready akkam da

Joonie nodded.







Appo angotte kk jesta vannu.

Jesta: ennatha da? Eh?

Hobi: oh onulla jinnie kk proposals okke nokkunnund so avanu oru tension..

Jesta: da koppe nee pedikkanda aval ninakk ullatha njngal okke ille...

Joon nannaytt karachil adakki pidikkan nokki but pattiyilla so he did otta pottikarachil.

Hobi joon ne hug cheyyan poyathum pettann jesta joon ne cherth pidichu.

Jesta: shey daa pottedaa karayalle

Hobi kk avan karayunne kand vishamam ayenkilum jesta hug chehythathil jealousy ayi mindathe angu poyi....

Luca: enthada avidey?

Hobi: eyy onnulla avan entho...

Luca: njn onnu nokatte

Hobi: venda nee vaa avar samsarikkatte....

Luca: hmm okay!










Time skips.
Next day.

Beak: makkale vaa

Suga: ammeeeeee

Beak: enna di koche angu sksheenich poyallo nee.... Kazhicho enthelum? Aa jinnie mwol undo vaa....

Jinnie: ha😄

Suga: vishanitt um paadilla food thaayooo

Jos: poy kulichitt vaa penneee...

Suga: edi jinnie enna vaa namakk kulichitt veram enitt kazhikkam....

Luca: hallo madams.....ethiyo randum.....

Suga: yes of course.....

Hobi: aha vannallo vanamala

Suga: daaa panniiiii

Joon: jinnieee

Jinnie: ha jooneee

Jesta: aa first poyi fresh avu enitt aa choodede namakk result nokande?

Suga: ormippikkathe koppeee

Jesta sighs.

Moments later.

Hoba: kittiyo?

Hobi: illa nokatte... Aah daaa vann vann

Jos: enthayi....

Hobi: mm joone ninakk 1st class und.... Jesta ninakk umm.. Luca eda panni ninakk um undeda 2nd class....

Luca: sheyy podaaaa... Ninakk thettiye avum....

Hobi: alla da sherikkum....

Hoba: ambada kalla nee kollallo....

Luca: all the dreams like twinkling stars....

Hoba: *chuckled*

Beak: ninakko hobi...

Hobi: njn potti....

Josbeak/ hoba/ jesta/luca/namjin/suga: ehh? Enthonn

Suga: eda naarii ninne njn kollum innu...

Hobi: *chuckled* verthe paranje aa 2nd class und hehehe....

Jesta: alla pinne.... Ah ini thamburatti maarde nokkiye...

Hobi: mm aahhh 2 ennathinum 1st class anallo....

Beak: karthaaveee nee kaathu.....

Jos: appo ente makkal ellarum pass ayii.... Nannayi varum....

Hoba: yeaaahhhhh ammachiii special udakkane innu chilav venam...

Luca: athe athe venam....... Non-veg thane ayikotte....

Beak: mm mm athe athe.... Ellarkkum tharam.... Ee boomiyil ettavum bhagiyam Cheyytha amma njn ayrikkum.... Ithrem nalla makkale alleyo enik deivam thannath.....

Jos: athey athey... Ellaathinem nee thanne sahicho njn pone....

Luca: ath enna parachil aah

Jesta: aaha ath sheri pidikkeda

Jos: eda eda venda venda....

Hoba: pidikk pidikk....

They are enjoying their moments!






Time skips.
Night.

Jinnie's POV.

Ee Joonie ith engott poyi njn vanitt enthoram neram ayi.... Avan enne onnu mind polum akkanillallo....

Jinnie nere Hall il poyappo ellarum irunn snake and ladder kalikkuva expect joon.

Jinnie: hobi joon enthiye?

Jesta: avan purath nippund jinnie...

Jinnie: ano?

Jesta: ningal thammil enthelum preshnam undo?

Jinnie: eyy illa enna ningal kalikk njn onnu nokatte....

Jinnie left.

Jinnie mindathe poyi joon inte aduth chennu.... Then chevi cherth Joonie ye vilichu....

Jinnie: joonieeee

Joon: *joon onnu njetti* mm?

Jinnie: mm aah? Enne kandatt ninakk entha oru santhosham illathe.....

Joon: ippo njn enth venam santhosham kondu thulli chaadano?

Jinnie: entha ninte preshnam?

Joon: eh enik entha onnulla.....

Jinnie: onnulla?

Joon: illa ninakk entha ippo?

Jinnie: nee enthina enne ippo ingane avoid akkane eh?

Joon: njn avoid onnum cheyyth illallo? Leave me alone..... Kurach samadhanam tharo?

Jinnie: oh appo njn ippo ninakk shaliyam analle joone? Nee maari poyi oru paadu.... Ee maattathinte kaaranam okke enik ariyam.....

Joon: nee avashiyam illathe onnum chindhich koottanda.... Just leave me alone OK?

Jinnie: allelum njn anallo ninte preshnam njn anallo kuttakari appantem ammedem vaayil irikkane athum kett avarnem veruppich nikkana njn anallo kuttakari alle para da *while shaking him* parayan..... Para njn alle? Ha njn all~~~~~ TAPPEEE*

Joon: Just GET LOST!

Jinnie: joo- jooneee

Joon: ji-ji-jinnie njn ath pinne ariyathe.... Di njn sr~~~~ its OK ~jinnie cut off

Jinnie: sry njn ariyathe *burst out*

Suga: entha ividey oru shabtham? Jinnie? Enna di eh enna?

Jinnie onnum mindathe akathe kk oodi poyi purake suga um

Jesta: eda malare nee aa kochine thalli yo?

Luca: edaaaaaaa! Nee avale thalli yo eh? Ninne njn innu *holds joons collar*

Hobi: daa venda Luca da venda maaru...

Ithellam kandu thlakk vatt pidich irikunna jesta.

Jesta: maari nilleda pulle.... Eda hobi ivane vilichond pooo

Hobi: da venda vaaa

Hobi and Luca left.

Jesta: daa nee enth pani aada ee kaaniche eh? Enthina nee avale thalli ye?

Joon: daa njn *hugs him and cry*

Jesta: sarayilla potte... Innini ippo onnum parayan nikkanda nee chenn kidakk bakki okke naalee....

Joon: mm

Jesta: ingott nokkiye.... Njn und koodey... Enikk ariyam nee enthina avale ingane avoid cheyyunne ennu.... Namakk ready akkam

Joon nodded..









Meanwhile.

Suga: di entha entha pattiye?

Jinnie: enikk areella avanu ippo enne venda... Avan enne avoid akkunne nee um kandath alle? Enitto ath onnu chodhichathina avan enne....

Suga: shey nee enthoke aa ee chindhich koottunne eh? Nee verthe avashiyam illathe onnum chinthikkalle penne.... Joonie ye enik ariyam avanu nee ennu vecha jeevana.... Pinne avoid akkunne chilappo training okke alle varunne athinte okke tension aavum....

Jinnie: alla enikk ariyam.....

Suga: ente ponneh nee ippo kidann urangu enthayalum njn um hobi um nale avanod onnu samsarikkam OK? Kidann urangikko....

Jinnie: edi njn...

Suga: onnulla kidann urangu....

Hobi: sugeee

Suga: ha

Hobi: onnu vanne

Suga: mm entha

Hobi: entha preshnam avalu vallom paranjo?

Suga: areella joon inu entho oru presha und enthayalum namakk onnu nale samsarikkanam...

Hobi: mm appo ath njn udheshichath thanne mm nee poyi kidanno ath nale set akkam..

Suga: mm

Hobi: mm enna nee chenn kidanno gd nyt. *he kissed on her forehead*

Suga: *smiles* gd nyt.


Time skips.
Next day.

Hobi: da joone...

Joon: mm?

Hobi: entha ninte preshnam? Nee enthokke aa ee kaatti koottunne?

Joon: onnulla

Hobi: eda koppe onnamathe enikk ninnod pwolij irikka.... Nee verthe choriyand kaariyam para.

Joon: ninakk entha eh?

Hobi: nee enthinada eth neravum aa jesta de purake nadakkane eh? Appo njn aarum alle? Nee ellam avanod maathre share cheyyollo?

Joon: oh appo nee aa Luca de koodey nadakkunnathinu preshnam onnum illa alle?

Hobi: da OK fine nammal thammil ulla bond pole vere aardem varilla Luca ayalum jesta ayalum.... Namakk nammal kazhinj mathi bakki aarum kettallo?

Joon suddenly hugs him and starts crying.

Hobi: eda joone ennatha da eh? Ninakk entha pattiye? *he slowly pat on his back*

Joon: enikk entho pedi avunnund enthokkeyo nadakkan povunne pole.... Athinte edayil koodey nee koodey enne ignore akkiya... Enikk pattanilla

Hobi: unda aanu onnu poyeda veruthe.... Nee nalla kutti aytt poyi jinnie odu oru sry paranj compromise cheyyathe poykke...

Joon: eda njn....

Hobi: poda.... Dhee avar diiii

Suga: ha

Jinnie: edi nee pokko njn. Illa

Suga: vaadi ingott....

Hobi: suge nee vaa avar samsarikkatte

*sope left





Jinnie:............

Joon: *ahem*

Jinnie:.........

Joon: jinnieeeee

Jinnie: mm?

Joon: sry

Jinnie: enthinu?

Joon: ath pinne njn *he hugs her* sry di njn.... Enikk entho ee eda aytt wrong adikkunn und......atha njn.....njn aytt ninte life kalayunna pwole oru feel.... Sry njn ariyand ninne

Jinnie: joone nee entha ingane? Ithra okke ayittum ninakk enne manassil ayille mm? Nee pedikkanda ente vtl sheri ayillel njn erangi varam preshnam theernille? Joone nee enne ingane avoid cheyyalle enikk ath thaangaan pattilla ninakk ariyallo....

Joon: illa ini orikkalum cheyy illa I'm... I'm sry!

Jinnie: mm sarayilla....

Suga: *ahem* enthayi set ayo? 2 um

Jinnie: *smile*

Jesta: ayyada avalde ili nokkikke

Hoba: entha ividey charcha....

Jesta: oh onnulla madam

Hoba: enna bhaa amma kazhikkan vilikkunn....

Angane joon intem koottardem training start ayi jinnie um suga um masters num chernnu.....

< End Of PAST >

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Ah appo avidey ee chapter um theernnu 💙

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