no proof reading
...... Will edit sometime later whenever I will get time and also the font...
And also I found many plot holes so i am correcting them. You may encounter something written twice. Bear it.
* under editing *
Note 3 : If you don't understand any word you can ask me.amd the me.aning of lament is given in last .
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I know ye bahut hi bakwaas story hai
So read on your own risk and as we know disha di and kriti di left the platform you can partially take it as a contribution for them but it is not worth that much... I hope you got what I meant if not then read the story then you will understand why I am talking contrastingly . I will dedicate one more story to both of them.
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dedicated to _kritz [the master of sad stories]
inspired by W_Arushi 's
Waada raha and one more story that i don't remember the name of
some things are copied or inspired by
_aesthetical_writer_ -1st line kind of in holding her close
delicate_gurl -name of Dr sharma
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Bold and italic left aligned - gist
Bold italic and underlined left aligned- information in between
Italic Left aligned - I am talking to you like authors note
Bold right aligned - shaayari Or song
.Center aligned- time information
.Bold and center aligned - talks
Bold and italic right aligned - description or what is happening around
.....................................................................................................................................moran is married and walnut died . no koezi and sanju scenes *SANJU IS MAYBE MENTIONED ALTHOUGH* Monami hasdisease but for it she need strength and support and love because her lifespan is depends on h her will power ....
* as u know if you don't want to life your body will give up but if you have the will you may stay here for few more days *
I hope you got what I meant
The characters are Dr Sharma jr [ those who know him, yes he is the same ] , our very own moran, sid, batra sir
And
Param and his family died
Param - encountered by karan
Baby - asthama attack
Barkha - heart attack [ when she got to know that Param is really negative)]
Girte in aansaun mein
Kuch toh tujhsa lage
In ashkon mein na khota
Agar Tu hota toh na rote hum .
Agar Tu hota toh na rote hum
* present*
As sid left unwillingly The house ,
" Monamiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii"
His shrill grief stricken voice echoed in the whole house . As the letter dropped from Karan 's hands and he dropped on his knees and started crying his eyes out as he has no reason to live now. He LOST HER .He cursed himself for it and just went to his diary to vent his emotions out. After reading he realized that he had written a lament which came to him naturally. Then went to flashback of what had happened.
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FLASHBACK
Karan had just came from the mission and came inside the house and towards their room and saw monami sleeping with dried tear marks . he quickly went her and hugged her and slept . but what he saw and was beyond shocked he saw monami having apanick attack and hugged monami calmed her down but she woke up and saw him and hugged him tight as if not wanting wanting him to let him go and so thight which she does when she has any problem . but soon slept PEACEFULLY .Karan decided something and planned a date . monami woke up and first confirmed if he wasreally here . and she got to know he was really here she was exicted
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* will write during editing *
next day
batra sir called . She was in kitchen preparing his breakfast and her herself to tell him the truth .
on call
batra :...........................[in bteween] i can undersatnd if you cannot come
karan : no sir . I will come
Batra sir : ok so you have to report after 3 days .its a dangerous mission . Jai hind
Karan: Jai hind sir .
Call ended .
Karan was sad that he will have to go . Thinking this he went into the kitchen . And back hugged her . She was cloud nine and he said
"Sorry"
"But tum kyu sorry bol rahe ho ?"
" Becayse main parso ke agle din ja raha hoo doosre mission p"
Pal bhar thara jao
Dil ye sabhal jaye
Kaise tyme roka karo
" agar tum gaye toh main chalii jaungi , so it's your choice "
" Aisa mat bolo monuu"
" I am sorry , karan but agar tum gye toh main tumhe kabhi nhi milugii. Mai ye d ( she was to say something but stopped herself and said) mai yaha se chaliii jaungi hamesha ke liye and ek baat yaad rakhna i will always love you"
"ye kside baat hui .ye toh contrasting hui matlab tum keh rahe ho ....( he stops and think something and cups her face and asks ,) kuch hua haiiiiii kyaaaa because it is very congusing ?????? "
" nahi karan ,* stops and gulps the saliva and continues * kuch nhi hua . Tumhsre pehle desh aats phir baaki sab so abhi desh tumahari jarurat haii "
" you are right .Agar tum nhi hoti toh abhi wohi khadoos hota .
Seriously agar tum nhi hoti toh .... * monami cuts him says *
"abhi toh hu na toh aisi baate mat karo " * said a little emotionaly as if the last time
" thik hai "
Then she takes his hand and keep it on her hand and keeps it on her heart and calms herself down
"Kya hua monu"
" kuch bhi nahii
aacha mai kya soch rahi thi ki hum.2 days kahi i want to spend my *pauses *
time with you .since you will be gone in 2 days and you came after a long time "
" as you wish my lady my ranishabia "
Then he did butterfly kiss and sealed with eskimo kiss
Tehy spent their well and good.
2 days later
When he was about to go, she wanted to stop him but couldn't do that and he went away
Because when he looked back she was waving at him to bid him bye according to him ..
She went to call sid and asked to come and he came dirctly because first he knew about her illness second he had bid sanjana bye but he didn't wanna go cause he knew that his jeeju had come but since she called him he had to go.
She told him everything.
Andbsaid " When the time is right. Please give this to your jeeju and this one is for you"
" Aisi baatein na kar"
" I am sorry but it is the truth "
" * makes a face *"
" Thank youuuuuu * and gave him a long big hug *
" Maine isi ke liye bulaya tha par thodi der mere saath rukh ja "
" Ok "
Few days later
She died
Sid came to her house to check up on her
Sid was crying and quickly called the police and ambulance..
Some months later..
Karan came with a spare keys he had kept under the mat . He wa soooooo excited to meet his raniiii shaibha that he had bought flowers for her but was shocked to see it licked
On the dining table he saw divorce paper and was shocked like hell . He quickly called Sid and asked him to come over as soon as he can.
In the evening
When Sid came he gave him the letter it read
" Hiii karan * aaj khados nhi bolegi *
Main tumhe divorce de rahi hu and tum sign kar dena and please mujhe contact karne ki koshish mat karna . And fir bolegi ki i still love you "
And he was shocked.
Back to the present
Sid just hug him tight and siad " Sorry "
" But why are you sorry "
" Cause I couldn't svar her "
* looks at him instantly*
* realizes something and takes the letter and reads ans was shocked af *
Karan asks " Kya hua "
" Ye jhoot haiii "
" Asks him to explain "
" He does that "
" Mujhe akela chod de Sid"
" Nhiii"
"Mujhe thodi der akela chod de "
And he sits on his knees and starts crying
Dard dilo ke kam ho jaate yadi main aur tum hum ho jatte
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2.agar tum saath ho
* full song *
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Ps .* i had to reasearch from google and it took efforts *
Sources :
https://www.google.com/amp/s/m.femina.in/relationships/love-sex/types-of-kisses-and-their-meaning-199254.amp
Note : i would like to give the source and it would me also in the future ......
Author note2 : ik kriti di and disha di left the platform so you count as a contribute for them.....
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Note 4
Lament : a song Or poem written on one's death