Tied With Threads Of Luck {UN...

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"Two bestfriends, always present for each other... The bond which everyone used to adore has now changed to b... Περισσότερα

Some intro before starting...
•Character Sketch And Note•
Ch1 ~Everything Changed~
Ch2 ~Rain of Anger~
Ch3 ~Loving the food~
Ch4 ~A song for dare~
Ch5 ~A glimpse of the bffs~
Ch6 ~He felt her love?~
Ch7 ~Rulake gaya ishq tera~
Ch7.2 ~Paining hearts~
Ch8 ~Truth of Past & His Guilt~
~CHARACTER SKETCH 2.0~
Ch9 ~The awaited guests~
Ch10 ~Ulti Khopdi V/S Tsunami~
Ch10.2 ~Ulti khopdi VS Tsunami~
Ch11 ~a slip of tongue😝~
Ch12 ~Wake up Monami😢~
Ch13 ~His Care for Her~
Ch14 ~Breakdown & Confession~
Ch15 ~Fake missions ka confusion~
Ch16 ~Karan meets KD~
Ch17 ~Shivam and Saksham~
Ch18 ~Shivam knows the truth~
Ch19 ~DO THEY KNOW?~
Ch20 ~Flashbacks~
Ch21~ You can never fail!
Ch22 ~ Fishes in the trap?
Ch23 ~Monami hui kidnap!
Ch24 ~SHE IS ALIVE!!
Ch25 ~Monami or Kavya?
Ch26 ~ KD's plan backfires
Ch27 ~ One Pillar Down
Ch28 ~ And the game is over!
Ch29 ~ A new beginning?
Ch 29.2 ~A new beginning
Ch 30 ~ Tom and Jerry
Ch31 ~ Prank wars!
Ch 32.1 ~Drunk Monami!
Ch32.2 ~Drunk Monami!
Ch 33 ~ Karan ko ho kya gaya?
Ch34~Karan shares his insecurities
Ch35 ~Glimpse from past
Ch36 ~ Karan's flashback
Ch37 ~ Marriage hui fix??
Ch39~Karan realises his feelings
Ch40 ~Karan declares his love
Ch41 ~That's how much I love her!
Ch42~ Wedding bells won't ring!
Ch43~ A mini date !
Ch43.2 ~ A mini date!
Ch 44 ~ Monami's nightmare?
Ch 45 ~ Jealous Shergil
Ch 46~ Nazdeekiyaan
Ch 47~ Can i call you mine?
Ch 48~ Tere Hawale Kar Diya !
Ch 49 ~ Tu hi saza hai.. Tu hi Rihai
Ch 50 ~ Mr and Mrs. Shergil !
For You All❤️💫
~EPILOGUE~
AUTHOR'S NOTE

Ch38~ Karan convinces Monami?

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Mo: Me shivam se shaadi karne ke liye taiyaar hoon

K: WHAT!

As soon as Monami declared her decision, Karan shouted being shocked. Rest others looked at him. Param and Shivam were giving victory smiles internally as their plans were being successful. Monu was internally cursing herself for this.

P: Chikh kyun raha hai karan?
K: Wo.. wo... kuchh nahi bhaiya..

P: Monu... I am really happy for you! Bas teri shaadi hojaaye to mujhe kabhi aisa nahi lagega ki mene uncle aunty se jo zimmedari li thi wo puri nahi ki..

Mo: Bhaiya.. aap agar aisa kahoge to me sahi me aapse baat nhi karungi..

P: Achha baba sorry.. aage se nahi kahunga aisa kuchh... okay?
MO: Hmm better.

B: arre bas karo ab.. abhi to khushi ka mauka hai.. ghar me shaadi ka mahaul hone wala hai.. naach gaana sangeet.. me to bohut excited hoon..

She congratulated Monami and Shivam.. All were deliberately ignoring Karan. Barkha asked monami to stand near Shivam. She did so. Both showed happiness on their face. specially for Karan to see.

Karan fisted his hand seeing them together. He felt something breaking in him. He felt restlessness. He didn't know why he felt his world crushing down. As if he is losing a part of himself.. As if he is letting go of something which is his.. Seeing them together, he never realised when his eyes started shed tears. Without speaking anything, he just went to his room silently.

Here, everyone else saw his reaction. Monami's eyes too became moist. She didn't like Karan being hurt due to her. Barkha hugged her tightly and whispered sweet words to her. She calmed down a bit. Param and shivam signed her not to cry and assured that everything would be alright!

********

Here Karan barged into his room and shut the door loudly. He was breathing heavily. He was disturbed.

Shayad kabhi na keh sakoon me tumko
Kahe bina samajhlo tum shayad

K: yeh kya horaha hai mujhe.. mo..monu to khush hai..phir..mujhe Khushi kyun nahi horahi.. aaj pehli baar uski hasi dekhke.. mera man kyun bechain horaha hai..

Shayad mere khyaal me tum ekdin
Milo mujhe kahin pe gum shayad

Subconsciously, all the moments He had spent with monami came to his mind. Them spending their childhood together, being each other's  strength, the comfort person. Each other's secret diary. All the moments he spent with her, the peace he feels when he is with her.. every moment was flashing in front of him..

jo tum na ho rahenge hum nahi
jo tum na ho rahenge hum nahi
na chahiye kuchh tumse zyaada
tumse kam nahi.

K: kya horaha tujhe Karan..  kyunki monami ko dur haata nahi dekhpaaraha.. wo meri best friend hai.. mujhe Khush hona chahiye.. uski shaadi horahi.. mujhe restlessness kyun horaha..

He thought for sometime and called someone..

K: urgently mere Ghar aa.. problem hogayi hai..

jo tum na ho to hum bhi hum nahi
jo tum na ho to hum bhi hum nahi
na chahiye kuchh tumse zyaada
tumse kam nahi

******
Sidzi : KYAAAA.. MONU/MONAMI SHIVAM SE SHAADI KE LIYE MAAN GAYI??

Karan had called faizi and Sid to discuss about the matter.. Little did he know they both too are a part of Param's plan! Param knew that his brother would share his problem with faizi.. Monu had too informed the plan to Sid.. So now, Sidzi were just acting in front of Karan..

K: Haan yaar.. Pata nahi Rani sahiba ko uss shivam me kya interest hai.. aise kaise Maan gayi shaadi ke liye..

Sidzi blinked at each other..

Sid: waise Karan bro.. problem kya hai? Mtlb.. monu and shivam dono ekdusre ko jaante hain.. bohut achhi tarah se.. so their alliance is okay?

Karan glared at him. Sid gulped in fear..

F: waise Sid ki baat me dum to hai..

K: Faizi tu bhi? Yaar.. tumlog na samjh nhi rahe.. Shivam and Monu.. nahi yaar.. aren't made for each other.. Pata hai monu Kitna complain karti rehti hai.. Shivam aisa hai shivam waisa hai.. wo log compatible nahi hai yaar..

Sid: (whispering to faizi) pure duniya bhar ke reasons boldega.. par dil ki baat nahi bolega..

F: (in the same tone) inked haal e dil jaan ne ke liye humsabk9 intezaar karna padega..

K: Tum log Sun bhi rahe ho main kya bol raha hun

Sidzi: han han hum sun rahe hain

F: Janab ji aap Humse bus itna kahiye ki aapko is Rishte se akhir problem kya hai?

K: mu..mujhe..mujhe kya problem hoga.. wo..wo me to.. me to yeh kehna chahta hoon ki..monu deserves better than shivam.. wo aur shivam ki jodi.. nahi...

Sid: Aur wo kyun?

And as if Karan was waiting for this statement.. he immediately started pointing out all negative points of shivam. Why monu and shivam weren't a great couple.. Why shivam won't be a responsible husband.. and etc etc..

It was when sidzi felt they had heard enough bak bak of Karan.. they decided to stop hum..

S: Bro bro bro..bro.. monu aapki best friend hai.. to ekbaar us ko manane ka try karlo.. kya pata monu maan jaaye??

F: Idea achha hai.. Karan..  monu tumhari baat to samjhegi hi na.. to ek kaam karo.. hamare saamne jitna bura bura (Karan glared) aaa .. I mean.. bhala bura shivam ke baare me kaha.. wo monami ko samjhao.. wo shaadi se mana kardegi..to kaam.. hojaayega..

S: exactly.. aur phir koi achhha ladka dhundke uski shaadi karwadenge..

Karzi: Naa/Haan

Sidzi stared at Karan..

K: Ah..wo..me..me monu ko samjhake aata..

Saying so, he ran out of his room...

********

Monami was folding clothes when someone barged into her room...

Mo: (without looking at the door) Room knock karna kab sikhoge Karan?

K: Hmm.. to rani sahiba ko pata chalgaya ki me hoon

Mo: Wo kya hai na khadoos shergil, mere room me bina knock kiye, darwaza tod ke entry lene ki audacity sirf tumhare paas hai..

K: Sirf mera? (excitedly)

Aankhon ko khaab dena
Khud hi sawaal karke
Khud hi jawaab dena teri taraf se

Monami got his excitement. She quickly changed her sentence.

Mo: Haan i mean.. ab tak sirf tumhara tha.. Par ab.

K: Ab??

Mo: Tch kya karan..  tumhein commando kisne banaya yaar? Abtak tumhara haq tha.. par ab to Shivam ka bhi hai na.. i mean.. hamari shaadi ke baad kya mera kya tera?

Karan fisted his hand. But he didn't notice that the last line she told was by looking at the mirror where Karan's reflection was visible. As if conveying to him that she and karan are one!

K: Monami mujhe tumse baat karni hai!
Mo: haan to karo!

K: Monami.. Tum Shivam se shaadi karne ke liye kaise maan sakti ho?

Monami looked at him with suspicious eyes.

Mo: Kaise mtlb? Waise jaise sab mante hain

K: I mean... itni jaldi shaadi ke liye kaise maan sakti.. wo bhi uss Shivam se?

Mo: Karan.. jaldi kahan? I am already 28.. kabhi na kabhi to shaadi karni hi hai na

K: haan to karo.. shauk se karo shaadi.. par Shivam se kyun?

Mo: tumhein shivam se koi special dushmani hai kya?

K: Aisa nhi hai Rani Sahiba .. you know,... as a bestfriend i would say.. tum aur shivam arent made for each other. tum dono me compatibility hi nahi hai

Bin kaam kaam karna
Jaana kahin ho chaahe
Har baar hi guzarna teri taraf se

Mo: Aur may i know Major Karan Shergil.. Ki aisa kyun hai?

yahan shuru hui inki assertion reasoning wale statements.. ek taraf karan shivam ki burai karraha tha.. aur dusri taraf monu karan ke har point ko counter karrahi thi

K: Monami... yaar dekho.. tum dono ka yeh alliance itna stable nahi dikhraha.. thoda dur tak dekho.. and u would know.. 

Mo: Aur aisa kyun karan?

K: Yaar.. dekho.. tum doctor ho.. wo bhi doctor hai.. dono apne apne life me busy rahoge.. ekdusre ko time nahi depaaoge.. misunderstandings hogayi to? 

Mo: Possible hi nahi hai Karan.. Tumne hi kaha na.. hum dono doctors hai.. So hum ekdusre ki priorities.. ek dusre ka schedule samjhenge.. ab socho koi major operation ke wajah se mujhe late hojaaye.. to me us se kehdungi ki patient ki haalat aisi hai.. and usse pata lagjaayega ki mujhe kitna time lag sakta!

K: Tum dono dining table pe bhi professional baatein karoge.. personal life ki baatein to ho hi nahi paayengi..

Mo: Par hamara kaam hi same hai karan.. hum bore nahi hinge medical ki baatein kar kar ke..

K: Monami studies have proven ki do doctors ki aapas me taal mel nahi hoti..

mo: Kitni jhooti kitabein padhte ho karan.. do doctors me sabse zyaada taal mel hota hai.. tabhi patient ki jaan bachti hai.. 

K: Monami.. tum.. meri yaadash aane se pehle shaadi karlogi? (with puppy eyes)

Mo: Bas inti si baat?? Dont worry.. me bhaiya se kehdungi ki tumhari yaadash wapas aane ke baad hi shaadi hogi.. khush??

K: (murmuring) Ab to bhagwaan se yahi maangunga.. ki yaadash kabhi naa laute..

Mo: Kuchh kaha tumne?
k: Nahi.. nahi to

K: Monami tum bore hojaaogi Shivam ke saath.. kuchh naya explore karne jaisa hi nahi hoga.. same profession, same schedules, almost same problems, similar life.. kya maza aisi zindagi ka?

Mo: waise to kisi aur ke saath bhi bore hone ke chances hai na karan.. 

K: Itne saalon me mere saath bore hui kya aajtak??

Ye koshishein toh hongi kam nahin
Ye koshishein toh hongi kam nahin
Na chahiye kuch tum se zyada tum se kam nahin

Monami went speechless after hearing this.. Karan realised what he said and he immediately changed his sentence..

K: Umm.. wo.. i mean.. next point dekhte hain..  zara socho.. Monami Shivam Ray.. Achha lagraha sun ne me?? chhe! bilkul nahi. (karan's alter mind: Waise monami karan shergil kaisa lagega) (in mind: nahi nahi.. yeh kya sochraha hai karan.. focus)

Mo: Haan. wo.. umm.. itni si baat hai.. to me.. shaadi ke baad surname change nahi karungi.. simple

K: Rani Sahiba.. kya jaldi hai aapko uss shivam se shaadi karne ki.. aisa kya hai uss bandar me?

Mo: (in mind: Arree mera khadoos shergil.. itna jealous horaha.. par ek baar apne dil ka haal nahi bata sakta.. hey bhagwaan.. is ulti khopdi ko 2 ruppay ka romance sikha do) 

Mo: (to karan) Ok karan.. let me get this straight.. karan shaadi shivam se karna isnt the point.. it doesnt matter.. Karan mummy papa ke jaane ke baad, uncle aunty ne mujhe kabhi aisa mehsoos hi nahi hone diya ki me anath hoon.. hamesha apni sagi beti jaisa hi pyaar diya mujhe.. uncle aunty ke hote hue mujhe kabhi aisa mehsoos hi nahi hua ki mere sar pe maa baap ka aashirvaad nahi hai.. uncle aunty ke jaane ke baad, meri saari zimedaari Param bhaiya pe aagayi.. meri khushiyan, mere sapne, sabka khyaal rakha unhone.. aur pehli baar unhone mujhse kuchh maanga hai.. yeh to me de hi sakti hoon na...

Karan was listeninh to her keenly.

Mo: Karan shaadi shivam se ho ya kisi aur se.. shaadi to honi hi hai.. bhaiya ne shivam ke saath rishta fix kiya.. taaki aage chalke mujhe adjust na karna pade.. taaki me comfortable rahun. kisi aise ke saath jisko me pehle se jaanti hoon..

K: (who was not in his senses) HAN TO MUJHSE KARLO NA SHAADI

Mo: KYAAA?

Jo tum na ho... rahenge hum nahin
Jo tum na ho... toh hum bhi hum nahin

Karan himself was shocked with what he said. He had decided to convince monami to backout of this marriage.. but he never thought of asking her to marry him.. He couldnt understand how to fix this slip of tongue of his. Before monami could say anythimg, he quickly said a "sorry" to her and left the room.

Monami smiled with tears in her eyes..

Mo: Galti se hi sahi. tumne apne dil ki baat to keh di karan.. Ab to mujhe bhi yakeen hogaya.. ki mere Khadoos Shergil ko uski Rani Sahiba se pyaar hogaya..  Ab bas jald se jald tum confess kardo karan.. i am waiting for you.. 

"I LOVE U KHADOOS SHERGIL"

Na chahiye kuch tum se zyada tum se kam nahin...
Jo tum naa hoo.....

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SO, Karan ne to bohut koshish ki monami ko manane ki... aur beech beech me apna haal e dil bhi bayaan kardiya.. are you excited for the next chapter.. umm.. precap hi padhlo!!

Precap: Karan realises his feelings❤️

*****
Also guys.. mene ek short college love story shuru ki hai.. JAB WE MET!

To please usko bhi padhlo🤗🤗 I hope aap sabko achha lagega❤️ To profile pe jaao..and read the story❤️❤️

Buh bye
~☕️☕️

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