BAALVEER RETURNS AGAIN

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"Iss duniya ke rakshak aa rahe hai ek baar phir saath mein aapko hasane aur acchai ko jeet dilane to padhna m... Plus

Introduction
Starting Promo
Episode 1 ~A sad start🥺
Episode 2 ~He is back 🤠
Episode 3
Episode 4~He is back 🌝
Episode 5 -Pariyon ka jhooth 🥺
Episode 6 - shaurya's decision
Episode 8 ~ Devaan Reunite?
Episode 9 ~Shocks and shocks 😵
Episode 10
Episode 11 - Baalveer's mastermind plan +new entry
Episode 12 ~ Devaan Reunited !?
Episode 13
Episode 14 -🤨
Episode 15 ~New secret revealed!
Episode 16 - Is Ananya-Aradhya Siblings for real?
Episode 17 - A new danger !
Episode 18- The truth unfolded ?
Episode 19 - Sach kya hai ?
Epi 20 part 1- a small update
Ep 20 part 2
Episode 21- The truth revealed!
Episode 22 ~ Another twist 🌪️
Episode 23
Episode 24
Episode 25 - No more Baalveer ?!
Episode 26
Episode 27- Devaan reunited ?!
Episode 28 - Dev ka welcome
Episode 29
Episode 30
Episode 31- DEVAAN'S sad baatein 🥺
Episode 31 ~Party ki tayari

Episode 7 ~ comeback of Purane dushman 😈

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𝘿𝙝𝙖𝙧𝙩𝙞 𝙇𝙤𝙠

ᴠɪᴠᴀᴀɴ ᴡᴀs ʀᴏᴀᴍɪɴɢ ɪɴ ᴀɴɢᴇʀ & sᴀᴅɴᴇss

𝙎𝙪𝙙𝙙𝙚𝙣𝙡𝙮 𝙖 𝙫𝙤𝙞𝙘𝙚 𝙘𝙖𝙢𝙚 -

    "Hello Mr., remember me? "

𝙑𝙞𝙫𝙖𝙖𝙣 𝙪𝙣𝙙𝙚𝙧𝙨𝙩𝙤𝙤𝙙 𝙬𝙝𝙤 𝙝𝙚 𝙞𝙨

Vivaan (wiping his tears ) -"Tumhe kaise bhulunga? Main puri duniya bhul jao par tumhe Never ever "

Voice (Face not revealed) -"Mai itna special hun? "

Vivaan -" Special!! Umm.. Agar Bure log special hote hai to haa "

Voice (Face ❌) -"Mai timnasa se bhi bura hun? "

Vivaan -" Timmi aunty was actually good than you, tabhi to chali gyi iss duniya se "

Voice -"Main shaurya se bhi bura hun? "

Vivaan (irritated) -"Jab timnasa se bure ho to phir shaurya kahan se aa gaye "

The boy whose voice was coming comes and keeps his hand on vivaan's shoulders-"Okay be relaxed "

Vivaan -"Waise mai bhul gya tha aaj bol deta hun, Tumne mujhe Ram banne ka mauka bhi diya aur Laxman banne ka bhi so thanks Mr. Raavan, ah! I mean Mr. Ray!

[𝙧𝙖𝙮'𝙨 𝙗𝙜𝙢 𝙥𝙡𝙖𝙮𝙨]

Ray -"Leave this all , mai yaha ek deal krne aaya hun "

[𝙫𝙞𝙫𝙖𝙖𝙣'𝙨 𝙖𝙩𝙩𝙞𝙩𝙪𝙙𝙚 𝘽𝙜𝙢 𝙥𝙡𝙖𝙮𝙨]

Vivaan -"Deal wo bhi tumhare saath!! accha waise dealer kab se ban gye tum? Acchai se dar gye kya? "

𝙑𝙞𝙫𝙖𝙖𝙣 𝙧𝙚𝙢𝙤𝙫𝙚𝙨 𝙧𝙖𝙮'𝙨 𝙝𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙛𝙧𝙤𝙢 𝙝𝙞𝙨 𝙨𝙝𝙤𝙪𝙡𝙙𝙚𝙧 𝙞𝙣 𝙖𝙩𝙩𝙞𝙩𝙪𝙙𝙚 (𝙬𝙞𝙩𝙝 𝙖𝙩𝙩𝙞𝙩𝙪𝙙𝙚 𝙗𝙜𝙢) 𝘼𝙣𝙙 𝙨𝙩𝙖𝙧𝙩 𝙬𝙖𝙡𝙠𝙞𝙣𝙜

𝙍𝙖𝙮 𝙞𝙣 𝙖𝙣𝙜𝙚𝙧 -"Huhh.. Okh deal nahi to sach accept kr lo "

𝘾𝙤𝙣𝙛𝙪𝙨𝙚𝙙 𝙑𝙞𝙫𝙖𝙖𝙣 𝙨𝙩𝙤𝙥𝙨 𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙘𝙤𝙢𝙚𝙨 𝙣𝙚𝙖𝙧 𝙧𝙖𝙮 -"Kaisa sach? "

Ray -"You know what Timnasa ka sirf 50% tha bade baalveer ko maarne mein baaki 50% kisi aur ne maara tha , usne jiske baare mei tum soch bhi nahi skte "

Vivaan (shocked & confused) -"Kisne mara?? "

Ray-"𝙨𝙝𝙖𝙪𝙧𝙮𝙖 𝙣𝙚 !!! "

𝕍𝕚𝕧𝕒𝕒𝕟 𝕤𝕙𝕠𝕔𝕜𝕖𝕕 😱

Ray -"Tum believe kro ya naa kro sach to yhi hai ki uss buddhe sher i mean shaurya ne hi mara tha dev ko, usi ne baalveer ko wha jaane ke liye force kiya aur usey zinda nhi kiya kyuki wo chahta nhi tha, btw Mai chalta hun Byee "𝙃𝙚 𝙡𝙚𝙛𝙩

𝙑𝙞𝙫𝙖𝙖𝙣 𝙬𝙖𝙨 𝙨𝙩𝙞𝙡𝙡 𝙞𝙣 𝙨𝙝𝙤𝙘𝙠 𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙘𝙤𝙣𝙛𝙪𝙨𝙞𝙤𝙣 𝙩𝙝𝙖𝙩 𝙬𝙝𝙖𝙩 𝙬𝙖𝙨 𝙝𝙖𝙥𝙥𝙚𝙣𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙞𝙣 𝙝𝙞𝙨 𝙡𝙞𝙛𝙚 𝙄𝙩 𝙬𝙖𝙨 𝙩𝙤𝙤 𝙢𝙪𝙘𝙝 𝙘𝙤𝙣𝙛𝙪𝙨𝙞𝙣𝙜. 𝙃𝙚 𝙬𝙤𝙪𝙡𝙙 𝙣𝙚𝙫𝙚𝙧 𝙗𝙚𝙡𝙞𝙚𝙫𝙚 𝙍𝙖𝙮 𝙗𝙪𝙩 𝙬𝙝𝙖𝙩 𝙨𝙝𝙖𝙪𝙧𝙮𝙖 𝙖𝙣𝙣𝙤𝙪𝙣𝙘𝐞𝐝 𝙩𝙤𝙙𝙖𝙮 𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙝𝙞𝙨 𝙗𝙚𝙝𝙖𝙫𝙞𝙤𝙧 𝙖𝙛𝙩𝙚𝙧 𝙙𝙚𝙖𝙩𝙝 𝙤𝙛 𝙗𝙞𝙜 𝙗𝙖𝙖𝙡𝙫𝙚𝙚𝙧 𝙬𝙖𝙨 𝙢𝙖𝙠𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙑𝙞𝙫𝙖𝙖𝙣 𝙩𝙤 𝙩𝙧𝙪𝙨𝙩 𝙍𝙖𝙮, 𝙃𝙚 𝙬𝙖𝙨 𝙢𝙪𝙘𝙝 𝙘𝙤𝙣𝙛𝙪𝙨𝙚𝙙

𝕊𝕙𝕚𝕟𝕜𝕒𝕚

(His bgm plays ) Bhaymar -"Kaho ray kya hua wahan? "

(His Bgm plays)Ray -"Bhaymar teer bilkul nishane pe lga hai "

Bhaymar -"Tumhe pura vishwas hai? "

Ray -"Yaa I am sure kyuki vivaan ka face dekhke yhi lg rha tha aur phir 𝙘𝙧𝙮 𝙤𝙧 𝙥𝙧𝙖𝙮 𝙣𝙖𝙝𝙞 𝙘𝙝𝙤𝙙𝙚𝙜𝙖 𝙧𝙖𝙮😏"

𝘼 𝙫𝙤𝙞𝙘𝙚 𝙘𝙖𝙢𝙚 -"𝘼𝙖 𝙝𝙖𝙖... 𝘽𝙖𝙝𝙪𝙩 𝙠𝙝𝙪𝙗 𝙧𝙖𝙮 "

Ray -"uff ye shuru ho gya "

𝙒𝙝𝙖𝙩 𝙙𝙤 𝙪 𝙩𝙝𝙞𝙣𝙠? 𝙃𝙚 𝙞𝙨 𝙗𝙖𝙢𝙗𝙝𝙖𝙖𝙡 𝙨𝙝𝙧𝙚𝙚? 𝙉𝙤𝙥𝙚 🙅𝙝𝙚 𝙞𝙨 𝕋𝕒𝕦𝕓𝕒 𝕥𝕒𝕦𝕓𝕒 😂

Tauba tauba (trying to act like ray's Mr. B) -"Mujhe tum par garv hai ray"

𝙍𝙖𝙮 𝙨𝙡𝙖𝙥𝙨 𝙏𝙖𝙪𝙗𝙖 𝙩𝙖𝙪𝙗𝙖

Ray -"Ab ek baar bhi Mr. B ki acting ki to... "

Tauba tauba (again trying to act) -"Sabr Ray sabr "

𝙍𝙖𝙮 𝙖𝙜𝙖𝙞𝙣 𝙨𝙡𝙖𝙥𝙨 𝙝𝙞𝙢

Ray -"agar ek word aur bola to mai sabr nhi krunga sidhe kabr me daal dunga got it? "

Tauba tauba -"aisa main nhi bambaal shree bolte the... "

𝕂𝕒𝕒𝕝𝕝𝕠𝕜

Vinashika In serious mode -"Aur kitna waqt loge tum? "

ʙᴀᴀʟᴠᴇᴇʀ's ᴍɪᴄʜɪᴇᴠᴏᴜs ʙɢᴍ sᴛᴀʀᴛs

Baalveer-"Jitna tum dogi "

Vinashika -"Kya tum kisi baat ko acchi tarah nhi bol skte ho? "

Baalveer -"oh to ab tum chahti ho mai uske saath acche se baat krun jo acchai ki dushman hai? "

Vinashika -"Huh.. Tum sidhe sidhe batao kya tum kaalveer banne ko tayaar ho? "

Baalveer -"Thik hai itni vinti kr rhi ho to Mai tayaar hun "

Vinashika -"Ye hui naa samajhdaaro waali baat, Pari lok me naya baalveer banega aur yaha Kaalveer [Evil laugh ]Kuch der me kaal snan ke liye tayaar rehna " 𝐒𝐡𝐞 leaves

Baalveer  [𝐀𝐭𝐭𝐢𝐭𝐮𝐝𝐞 𝐁𝐆𝐌 ]-"Naa naya baalveer banega Naa hi Kaalveer sirf shaktiheen baalveer banega shaktishali baalveer "

𝐕𝐢𝐯𝐚𝐚𝐧 𝐑𝐨𝐨𝐦

Vivaan -"Ye sab kya ho raha hai inn sab ke wajah se mai kisi chiz pe dhyaan nhi de paa raha hun. Debu bhaiya hai yaa nahi kuch samajh nhi aa raha, ek taraf jahan wo hmari aankho ke saamne qurbaan huye the whi dusri taraf sab ki baatein, veersthal me unki murthi ka naa hona, aur Gopu ne jo logic btaya waise to hmne bhaiya ki body dekhi thi pr wo ray jo keh rha tha. 😩Oh godd please kuch aisa kariye jisse sab clear ho jaaye aur sab khush hokar rahe "

Karuna ji & khushi enters

Karuna ji-"Science ke test ke liye ready hai vivaan? Aur khushi tera Model paint hua Light wala? "

Both nodded in No

Karuna ji-"Work complete nahi rahega par ye faltu chije krenge. Mere aane se phle sab complete rhna chahiye "

ViShi -"Thik hai mummy "

She leaves and they start working

𝐊𝐚𝐚𝐥 𝐥𝐨𝐤

Vinashika -"Ab samay aa gya hai kaalsnan shuru krne ka lekin tum jante ho Maine tabahi shuru kar di hai "

Baalveer [𝐬𝐡𝐨𝐜𝐤𝐞𝐝]-"Kya!! mere matlab kaisi tabahi? "

Vinashika -"Wo btane ki jarurat nahi khair ab tum bhi karz chukao maine tumhari jaan bachayi tum bhi kaalveer bano "

Baalveer -"Haa avasya "

Vinashika -"Mai kaal devta ka dwaar kholne ke liye jaa rahi hun tab tak tum ye kaal vastra aur Ye Buri shakti ka taaj grahan karo waise iss taaj me abhi koi shakti nhi hai par jab Kaal devta Ka dwaar khulega to wo isme burai ki shakti daal denge "

ᴇᴘɪsᴏᴅᴇ ᴇɴᴅᴇᴅ

Precap - kya Baalveer banega kaalveer + Devaan Milan (🤧) +koi apna in danger

After a long,well I hope you liked the chapter tell me how's it should I bring some change?

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