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Everyone's gaze fell on Ahir who was standing there holding a tray having sandwich and juice .
Proceeding inside he kept the tray on small coffee table placed infront of couch and moved towards anokhi and shagun .
"Ye aaya bhabhi ka chamcha ...", Shagun taunted him .
Tumhe itna bhi khyaal hai ki yaha tumhari beti admit hai ... Woh filhal soo rhi h ...", Ahir fired back .
Nhi...
Lekin tumhe toh bhabhi se jhagda karne ka bas mauka chahiye ...
Unhe taana marne ka...
Right ?
"Tumhe nhi lagta tum kuch jyaada hi bol rahe ho ... ", Shagun replied back .
Ahir : Toh aap hi kam boliye na ...
"Agar tum dono ko jhagda karna hi h toh bahar jaake Karo please ...", Finally Shaurya spoke .
As shaurya said This shagun furiously left the ward while Ahir glared shaurya passing him a angry & disinterested look at the same time .
Ahir : Anokhi bhabhi woh .. mai ... Apke liye sandwich aur ye juice ...
"Par mujhe filhal bhook nhi hai ...", Anokhi rejected politely.
"Shaurya tere liye bhi laaya tha ...", Though Ahir was angry on shaurya but still ... He was his close friend rather ... Brother from another mother... So he was bothered for him too .
"Mai baadme khalunga ..."
Ahir agreed as he knew both won't agree to eat anything until and unless mimi would force them to eat ... So he kept quiet and sat on couch .
( Already it was 7 am around something. )
At 9 o' clock in morning mimi finally woke up who was greeted instantly with forehead kisses by her DEAREST ANUMAA who was sitting beside her from 7 continuing to admire her baby girl .
"Uth gaya mera baccha ...", Anokhi spoke lovingly looking mimi .
While Shaurya took a small nap around 8 & was still asleep on couch .
Ahir was sitting in shaurya's place beside mimi waiting for her to awake from her PEACEFUL SLUMBER .
As mimi opened her eyes ahri left the ward to call the doctor.
"Mumma .. good molning ..", mimi greeted her mumma lovingly.
"Mumma ...papa ...?"
Anokhi shifted a bit from her place letting mimi see that her day was sleeping on couch as he was already tired from yesterday.
"Papa soo Gaye ..."
"Aapke papa kal se jaage the na ... Isliye soye hai ...", Anokhi explained her baby girl why shaurya was asleep .
"Mumma bhook lagi hai ...", Mimi said while holding her tummy with her tiny fingers.
As mimi was saying this Ahir entered and said -
"Mimi beta ... Abhi 5 minutes mai doctor uncle aayenge na .. woh aapko dekhenge... Aur fir hum sab milkar kuch bohot tasty khaayenge ..."
At the same moment Shaurya's slumber broke .
Opening his eyes lazily , his gaze fell towards mimi where she was awake surrounded by anokhi and Ahir giggling and laughing.
He smiled seeing them having fun with His princess and too joined mimi showering forehead kisses on her .
"Papa good molning ", mimi greeted Shaurya as he pecked her forehead.
"Good morning princess... Aapki neend ho gayi ...",shaurya said while cupping her cheeks.
Haa...
At the exact moment doctor came and asked everyone to make space for him .
"Beta abb aapko kesa feel ho rha h ...", Doctor asked lovingly as his kept his palm on her forehead analysing her fever .
"Mai toh thikk hu ...", Mimi replied innocently.
"Apki beti bohot brave hai ...", Doctor said looking towards shakhi .
Shanoor entered holding few Bags of necessities.
Doctor: Accha hume Inka kuch tests aur karna hoga ... Tab tak aap log inhe kuch khila dijiye ...
Anokhi : Khaane mai koi restriction...?
Doctor : Filhal nhi ... Lekin kuch heavy mat khilaiye ...
Anokhi : Jii ...
Doctor left .
Shaurya : Mom dad ... Aapse kaha tha na .thoda aaraam kar lena ...
Shaan : Hum aaraam kar chuke hai shauray ....
"Humari gudiya uth gayi ..", Aastha asked lovingly cupping mimi's cheeks.
Haa...
Aastha : Abb chalo jab tak mai mimi ko kuch nashta khilati hu ... Tum teeno bhi kuch khaalo ..
"Anokhi ye lo ... Tum teeno ki tiffin ", Aastha said passing anokhi lunch box while she further continued -
Aur haa ... Koi mujhe nhi bolega ke bhook nhi lagi hai ... Chup chaap khalo ...
Anokhi silently nodded and sat on couch followed by Ahir .
Ahir : Shaurya tu bhi aa ja ...
Shaurya : Nhi mai mimi ke paas rehkar khalunga ...
Deep inside unknowingly shaurya Wass crushing her heart million times but she didn't let that bother her infront of anybody .
All had their breakfast.
After having breakfast , shaurya said -
Shaurya : Dad woh ... Actually mujhe office jaana hoga ...
Boss se personally baat kr ke work from home ke liye arzi daalni hogi ...
Toh mai...?
Shaan : Shaurya tum be jhijhak jao ... Mai aur noor hai yaha par ...
Anokhi tum bhi shaurya ke saath Ghar jao aur fresh ho jao ...
"Dekho kal se tumne yehi kapde pehne hai ... Mimi ke kh...khoon ke dhappe-", Aastha realised what she just uttered unwantingly hurting anokhi.
A lone or two escaped her eye as again she reminsced yesterday's horrible accident .
Aastha : Anokhi ... I am sorry... Mai tumhe hurt nhi karna chahti thi ...
Anokhi : Nhi maa ... Koi baat nhi ...
Maa ... Mai baad mai chali jaungi ...
"Anokhi tum thak gayi ho ... Chale jao Shaurya ke saath ...", Shaan insisted .
Shaurya tum dono Ghar jaake fresh ho jana ... Aur fir anokhi tum thoda aaraam kar lena ...
Anokhi simply nodded .
Both shakhi left the hospital.
In car -
Anokhi sat on passenger seat beside shaurya who was driving car silently focussing ? .... Trying to focus his mind on road.
Still both were disturbed after their morning encounter.
BOTH HURTED EACH OTHER .
THIS TIME ANOKHI WAS NOT FEELING GUILTY BECAUSE SHE KNEW SHE WAS RIGHT .
EVEN HE WAS RIGHT . BUT WHAT MADE HIM WRONG WAS THAT ...
HE DIDN'T EVEN GAVE HER A CHANCE TO PROVE HERSELF... NEITHER TRUSTED HER ONCE .
THIS WAS WRONG .
INFACT NOT ACCEPTABLE !!!
NEITHER FOR HER NOR FOR ANYBODY .
"Suno ", finally he broke the pregnant silence which was maintained from past ½ n' hour .
She royally ignored his calling & kept her focus lasered outside the window .
"A...anokhi ..."
She shifted her gaze to look at him uninterestingly .
"J..ji...boliye", She replied uninterestingly.
"Subah tumne jo kaha ...", He spoke after having a long battle with his thoughts.
"Maine subah kaha kuch kaha ..."
"Aapse thoda bohot kam hi kaha na ", she glared him passing an attitude wala look .
"R...rishta kha-", his words stammered reminscing how anokhi called an end to their relation.
"Mr.sabherwal ... Mujhe filhal subah ke ... Kal ke ... Shaam ke ... Ya fir raat ke baare mai koi baat nhi karni...", She purposefully replied rudely .
"Na mujhe abb aapse baat karne mai koi interest hai ..."
"So please...", Hearing such harsh words from her , he felt raged .
Stopping the car with a sudden jerk in the middle of an deserted road , he glared her angrily.
Pulling her roughly with her wrist , he spoke enragely looking straight into her eyes - (Both were still sat on the seats ) - "AGR mai tumse pyaar se baat kar rha hu ... Toh iska matlab ye nhi tum mujhe ulte jawaab dogi ... Mrs sabharwal..."
She hissed a bit in pain but then spoke enragely in same tone -
"Kyu bura laga ?"
"I said mere saamne oversmartness nhi chalegi ...",he replied back .
"Aapne ye nhi kaha ... Ki aapko meri tone se nhi ... Mere kahe huye words se bura laga ..."
Gripping his hold on her wrist, he spoke - "Kiss baat ki itni akad hai tumhe ..."
"Jis baat ki aapko hai ...",she replied back looking into his eyes .
As he was about to speak further , came sound of horns from behind as many cars were waiting before them To pass through the route .
Both came out of their hurting trance , while shaurya threw a dangerous glared at her and started driving the car .
A lone tears escaped anokhi's eye while shaurya's eyes turned moist too .
Both reached home and simultaneously went to take shower. Who anokhi went in Mimi's room washroom shaurya used his own washroom.
(BG music : judariyan jeeni re jeeni ...)
Kho gaya, gum ho gaya
Waqt se churaya tha jo,
Apna banaya tha
Both were sitting under shower hugging their knees crying profusely while the water droplets of shower mingled brilliantly along with their tears letting their sorrows flow down .
Ho tera, woh mera
Saath nibhaya tha jo,
Apna banaya tha
(Both the scenes goes on simultaneously -)
"Eye kya hogaya hai Anokhi humare rishte ko ... Kuch samjh nhi aara ... Kya sahi hai kya galat ... Sirf itna samjh rha hai ki dheere dheere tum mujhse bohot Durr jaati Hui nazar aa rhi ho ..."
Chadariya, jeeni re jeeni
Chadariya, jeeni re jeeni
Aankhein, bheeni ye, bheeni ye, bheeni
Yaadein, jheeni re, jheeni re, jheeni
"Durr jaati nazar toh aaungi na shaurya ... After all aapne ek baar bhi mujhpe bharosa nhi kiya ... Kya hua uss trust ka ho aapne mujhse uss kaha tha jiss din mujhe Monty ki asliyat pata chali thi kya hua ... ", She cried more bitterly.
"Kyu mujhe apne gusse pe control nhi hota ... Kyuuuuuu... Gusse mai usse itni badi baat keh di ki woh MIMI KI MAA BANNA - nhi .... "
Chadariya, jeeni re jeeni
Chadariya, jeeni re jeeni
Aankhein, bheeni ye, bheeni ye, bheeni
Yaadein, jheeni re, jheeni re, jheeni
"Aapka sabse bada dushman aapka gussa hai ... Aaj aapke gusse ki wajah se hum ek dusre ke qareeb hote huye bhi Milo Durr hai ... Kyu shauryaaaaa...."
Both after crying for than 10 minutes took shower and come out of room simultaneously.
As anokhi came out of her room proceeded towards kitchen... Shaurya too came out of his room and proceeded towards kitchen.
While anokhi was preparing coffee , shaurya entered dressed in blue formals and directly went towards refrigerator .
Taking out a water bottle and pouring water in glass he drank it and was about to leave when Anokhi called him from behind .
"Shaurya...", he stopped at his place and turned towards anokhi who was pouring coffee in the mug .
"Ye aapki coffee...", She said sternly while handing him a cup of coffee and left with her own in drawing room sitting on couch and sipping coffee in peace .
Shaurya too came and sat on small couch adjacent to hers and silently sipped his coffee too.
Anokhi paid no heed to him while she got a call from babli .
"Babli dii..", anokhi read the caller ID.
(Babli's dialogue in italics .)
Hello ...
Nikki ... Abhi Mimi kesi hai ...
Mimi abhi thikk hai ... Doctor ne kaha woh bohot acche se recover kar rhi hai ...
Usse phone de na ...
Dii ... Mai abhi Ghar par hu ... Shaurya ko bhi office mai 2 ghante ka kaam tha ... Uske baad hum fir se chale jaayenge...
Accha... Toh mai aastha aunty ko call karti hu ...
Hmm...
Nikki ... I am sorry ...
Mai tere itne bure waqt Mai nhi aa paayi ...
Dii... Tu sorry mat bol ... Infact Mai nhi chahti ki tu apna kaam ... Itna important meeting chodd ke aa ...
Fir jab tak tu aaygi tab tujhe Mimi ghar pe milegi ... Fir tu acche se uske saath khelna ... Baatein karna ...
Doctor ne kaha hai ki usse hume sirf khush rakhna hai ...
Hmmm...
Shaurya hai waha pe ?
"Haa... ", She said while turning her gaze towards shaurya who was silently sipping his coffee .
Unko phone de na ...
Anokhi silently switched on the speaker mode causing shaurya to hear their conversations clearly.
Diii ... Phone speaker pe hai ... Tu bol ...
Hello shaurya jii ...
Bolo babli ...
Aap thik h na ...
Haa bilkul ... Meri princess thik hai ... Toh mai bhi thikk hu ...
Babli smiled while again she talked to anokhi -
Accha Nikki ... Sun na ... Tujhe ek aur baat batani thi ...
Bol...
( Phone was still on speaker as she was busy enjoying her coffee .)
Abhi ....
"Abhi ...?", Anokhi was puzzled about whom Babli was talking bout.
Arre...abhi baba...
Abhishek ?
Ha wahi ... Abhii ... Uska phone aaya tha ... Woh abhi Chandigarh mai hai ...
Lekin woh yaha ... I mean woh toh Dubai ...
Ha ha ... Woh kuch dino ke liye aaya hai ... Aur aate hi mujhe phone kiya ... Kyunki uske paas Tera no. Nhi tha ...
( Shaurya was listening to their conversation carefully wondering who the hell abhi is now .)
Aur woh shaam ko shayad hospital aayga ... Maine usse bataya ki Mimi ka accident... Woh bohot pareshan ho gaya ... Mimi ke liye bhi aur tere liye bhi ...
Janti hu dii ... Bachpan ka dost hai ... Humesha sabki fikr rhti hai usko ... Siwaaye khudke ...
Toh woh shaam ko waha pohoch rha hai ...
Mai bhi duphar tak chali jaungi ... Mimi ke paas rehti hu toh accha lagta hai...
Thike ... Mai tujhe uska no. forward karti hu ... Tu dekh le woh kab tak pohochega...
Thike ... Bye ...
Bye ...khyaal rakhna apna aur mimi ka
Call ended.
Shaurya murmured under his breath -
"Ek aur Naya Aashiq..."
Anokhi gazed shaurya as she was unable to decode what he just uttered under his breath.
"Aapko tension lene ki zaroorat nahi...",she spoke sternly directly looking into his eyes .
He looked at her confused about what she's saying .
"Aap yahi sochh rhe h na ki maine abhi babli dii se kaha ki Mai aapke saath fir se hospital jaungi ... "
He scrunched his brows again confused.
"Dekhiye shuarya .... Mai ek baat saaf aur cut to clear kehna chahti hu ..."
"Humare jhagde ke beech mai na Mimi na maa papa aur na koi aur aana chahiye ..."
"Jhagada ... Misunderstanding... Jo bhi h ... Behtar hoga humare bich hi rhe ... "
"Mai nhi chahti humare iss rishte ki wajah se yaa to aapke dusre rishton mai darare aaye na mere baaki ke rishton mai ..."
"Filhal ke liye aapko mujhe jitna bhala bura kehna hai aap keh sakte ... Kyunki mujhe ese bhi abhi farq nhi padta .... "
"Bass itni baat ... Ki humare bich ke tanaav ki publicity sabke saamne ki toh mujhse bura koi nhi hoga ..."
"Shaurya sabharwal ko dhamka rhi ho ....?", He spoke sternly shooting dagger in her eyes .
"Galat ... Bata rhi hu ... "
Throwing him daggers straight into his eyes , she spoke further -
"Isliye kyunki Mai yeh bhi nhi chahti ki Mimi pe kisi bhi kism ka galat asar pade ... "
Before letting her continue further , he said -
"Mujhe late ho rha hai ... "
Saying this he left thudding the door behind .
Here in hospital -
Shanoor conversation -
Shaan : Noor...
Aastha : Bolo shaan ...
Shaan : Tumhe kya lagta hai shaurya aur anokhi ke bich ka tanaav ...
Aastha : Mujhe nhi lagta ... Ki shaurya aur anokhi ke bich ka tanaav badha h ...
Woh toh sirf shuarya ka do pal ka gussa tha ...
Woh Darr gaya tha na ... Mimi ki esi haalat dekh kar woh khud pe kaabu bhul gaya ... Usne nadani mai woh sab keh diya...
Shaan : Bhagwan kare jaisa tum keh rhi ho wesa hi ho ...
Kyunki jaha mai abb dono ko parakh chuka hu ... DONO EK DUSRE KE BAGAIR NHI REH SAKTE ....
All this was been heard by ahir , who was sitting beside mimi hearing them silently.
Ahir's thought -
"K...kaash aapki baatein sachh hoti aunty jii ... Kaash shaurya ne nadani mai anokhi pe gussa Kiya hota ...."
"Kyu ki abb baat bohot aage Tak badh chuki hai ..."
"Sahi kaha shaan sir aapne ... Shaurya aur anokhi dono ek dusre se door nhi reh sakte ... Lekin tab kya hoga ... JAB WOH EK DUSRE KE KAREEB REH KAR BHI EK DUSRE SE MILO DUR HONGE ... "
"DONO USSI TAQLEEF SE GUZAR RAHE HAI..."
"BAS FARQ ITNA HAI ... KI KISI KO YE ANDAAZ NHI KI YE TAQLEEF ... YE DARD DONO KAB TAK SAHENGE ..."
Ahir's chains of thoughts were broken by shaan who was constantly calling him ...
Shaan : Ahir beta ... Ahir Beta ...
Ahir : H...huhh...
Shaan : Mai sahi keh rha hu na ...
Ahir : Jiii...
Woh maine suna nhi aapne kya kaha ...
Shaan : Maine kaha ki shaurya aur anokhi kabhi ek dusre se Durr nhi reh paayenge na ?
Ahir : J..ji...jii... Uncle jii...
Aastha : Ahir beta ... Suno ....
Ahir : Ha aunty jii...
Aastha : Mai keh rhi thi ... Tum bhi kal se yaha par ho ... Tumhe bhi abb ghar jaana chahiye...
Ahir : Nhi aunty jii ... Mai thikk hu ...
Shaan : Sahi keh rhi hai aastha ... Tum bhi thak chuke honge ....
Ek kaam karo tum bhi ghar jaa kar araam kar lo ...
Ahir : Nhi sir ...
Bhale hi Mimi se mera koi official rishta na hoo ... Lekin jab bhi isse milta hu na ... Dil ko bohot accha lagta hai ...
Aastha : Aakhir chacha-bhatiji ka rishta hota hi pyaara hai ...
Aastha : Ese hi thodi na Mimi tumhe chachu bulati hai ...
Shaurya aur anokhi ke baad agar Mimi kisi ke paas jaayegi toh woh sirf tum ho ...
Ahir smiled .
Aastha : Thank-you very much beta...
Ahir : Arrey ... Aunty jii ... Thank-you kiss baat ki ...
Bass ek baar sab normal ho jaaye toh mujhe apne haathon ki besan ke laddoo khila Dena ... Bohot Mann kar rha hai ...
Aastha and shaan laughed hearing his sweet request.
Aastha : Zaroor...
Around 3 pm shaurya returned home and upon ringing the bell when no one was answering he opened the door with spare keys and went inside .
"Ye anokhi kaha gayi ... Ahir ne bola ki woh hospital mai anhi gayi abb Tak ..."
Taking small predatory steps he checked his room but it was empty . No sign of being none's presence .
He then decided to check Mimi's room only to find her sleeping clutching to Mimi's favourite soft toy which shaurya had gifted Mimi on her last year's birthday which was just 2 months before their first anniversary.
As shaurya moved closer to her , .... Upon observing her carefully he saw dried tear stains on her cheeks .
It didn't took him seconds to realise that she was crying before sleeping && lack of proper rest took best on her & finally she felt asleep huggin to Mimi's favourite toy .
He felt bad . A lone tear escaped his eye to for unknown reasons... Maybe the reason was known but he wasn't ready to accept the fact that things weren't going well between them ..
"MAY BE I OVER-REACTED YESTERDAY ", He thought to himself .
Leaving room he changed his clothes into a casual t-shirt and jeans and went in the kitchen to prepare something to eat .
To his surprise already aloo ka Paratha was made by her . A note was kept beside it -
Aloo ke paranthe banaye hai ... Bhook lagi ho toh khaa lena ... Aur haa ... Agar Mann nhi krra ya fir kuch bhi ... Tohhhh ...khud bana lena ... Mur mujhe nhi lagta aap mai filhai maggi banane ki bhi taaqat hogi ...
"Issey kese pata ", Again he thought in his mind .
"Mujhe kya ... Mujhe toh bhukk lagi hai ...", Saying this he finished 4 aloo ka parantha with curd in no time .
Anokhi woke up only to find Shaurya too resting on couch in drawing room.
Getting freshen up , she woke him and both left for hospital.
They reached hospital by 5 and directly went to mimi's ward only to find their DEAREST DAUGHTER having fun with an unknown guys who seems to be playing doll doll with her .
They were observing them from distance i.e., from standing at door . His face was not visible as his back was facing them .
"Aapki gudiya ne mere gudde ko maara ...", Guy whined like a child .
"Hehehe", mimi laughed whole heartedly.
"Aapke gudde ne meli gudiya ko pareshan kiya ... Toh maar toh padegi na ....", Mimi replied innocently.
Both were having great fun .
First anokhi entered followed by Shaurya and as she kept her hand on his shoulder he turned around them .
"T...tum...", Anokhi recognised him in milliseconds.
"Haa ... Mai ... ", Saying this he shared a friendly hug with anokhi which didn't went well for Shaurya .
Anokhi too reciprocated the hug whole heartedly as a friendly gesture .
"Arre aa gaye tum log ...", Shanoor entered from behind .
"Mom ... Ye ... Kon hai ...", Shaurya was CONFUSED as he wasn't able to deduce who is this guy that dared to hug HIS WIFEYYY .
"Ye Abhii hai ...", Aastha replied looking at him lovingly .
Anokhi too came out of hug and asked Aastha - " maa ... Aap jante hai abhi ko ?"
Aastha : Haa... Kyunki ye ...
"Mai batata hu aunty jii...", Abhi interfered.
"Darasal Aastha aunty meri mom ki ... Bachpan ki dost hai ... "
Shaurya was still confused but then reminsced how Babli informed them in afternoon only that abhi was about to come .
But shaurya didn't knew that Abhi's aura would be such magical as he made good friends really quickly. For ex : Mimi & Shaan & Aastha &&&&& anokhi .
All made themselves comfortable in ward while anokhi and Abhii sat beside mimi and shaurya too sat beside mimi but on opposite side and shanoor too made themselves comfortable sitting beside them placing extra chairs .
"Kese ho tum...?", Anokhi asked him .
"Mai toh thik hu .. lekin tune ek baar bhi nhi socha ki apne iss bhole dost se apna dard share Karu ...."
Anokhi : M..mimi ka ..acci-
"Nhi ..."
"Shaurya ka ....", Abhi said looking at anokhi with suspicious eyes .
Shaurya and anokhi were stunned as if how come abhi came to knew about their BIG MISUNDERSTANDING.
TO BE CONTINUED....
(Just to clarify one point : In my ff abhi is neither a bad guy nor a gray character. He's a HAPPY GOING CHARACTER .
He's a pure soul and is worried about everyone . Basically complete opposite of monty .)
Precap :
Now this got into his NERVES. Keeping his palm enragely on her mouth covering it he holded her neck with other hand .
Pinning her to nearby wall & holding her waist passionately with his both hands , he said daggering into her eyes -
Kisne kaha humara rishta tutt chuka hai .... ", He spoke huskily looking straight into her eyes .
S...sorry ... ", She spoke looking Directly into his red enraged eyes .
Tuta nhi ...
K...khatam ho chuka hai ...", She spoke looking back into his eyes passionately.
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"Tune apni life ki sabse badi galti kar chuka hai ..."
"Agar usko sudharna chahta hai na ... Toh advice lele ..."
"AUR BHABHI KO SORRY BOL DE ...."
"W...woh nhi ho paayega ....", Shaurya replied straightforwardly avoiding his gaze to meet with ahir's.
"As u wish .... "
"Ek accha dost hone ke naate tujhe advice de rha tha ... Tu accept kar ... Na kar ... Completely your choice...."
Saying this Ahir left while his words kept ranging in shaurya's ears .
"Whatever... ", murmuring this he too left from the spot .
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