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' just like magic '
order for isla !
pls note - these are just my person opinions ! ur account is as gorgeous and fabulous as u <3
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username ! SwanSong127
i love the ' swan song ' part ! kotlc is amazing <3
the numbers are a little distracting tho , so maybe it would look cute as ' swansong- ' or ' -swansong- ' etc :)
8/10
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title !
i love the font omg ! its super simple and cute, but maybe the ' i ' could be lowercased ? just bc the uppercase ' i ' looks like it's almost in a different font , so lowercased would be cute too <3
9/10
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profile picture !
HELP IM LITERALLY OBSESSED W THIS PFP ?!
it has such a cute / cozy vibe and i love the little bookshelves <3
my only critique is that it blends in a little too much w the banner , so maybe u could add a white border around it :)
9/10
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banner !
so cute and i love how it matches the pfp !
its a little busy tho , especially bc the pfp isnt too simple either. maybe choose a single image for the banner instead of a collage / or do a single color background ?
8/10
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book covers !
individually , i think theyre all gorgeous ! i love how they portray the story and they're each very visually appealing <3
my only critique is that they don't really match each other , which i think could look really good ! that being said, matching covers doesn't need to mean they're all the same image ( which could obviously reduce readers , since your books are very different and one image wouldn't work for all your stories ). maybe u could find different pics with the same sort of color scheme / aesthetic that also fit what the stories are about ! :)
6/10
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reading lists !
i love how organized they are ! i hate it when ppl have rly disorganized / messy reading lists , but yours look gorgeous <3
maybe u could find a way to spice up the titles a little more ? use a cute font ( like the one in your title , so it can match ) or some symbols :)
8/10
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bio !
love love this bio ! i think its so fun to look at and all the different fonts and symbols really make it interesting <3
it's a little chaotic , but i think thats what really makes it unique and i honestly really love it . if u are looking to clean it up a little tho , maybe stick to just 1-3 different fonts and rotate between them . sry for the promotion , but ik -fluffycloudz- has an amazing bio shop if you're ever looking for a new bio !
8/10
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link !
leads to a song on youtube , which i just think gives such amazing vibes . love it <3
5/5
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location !
omg this made me laugh haha. i think its so cute and so true ! personally , im not a huge fan of the font , but thats a very personal opinion <3
4/5
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overall , im a huge fan of ur acc ! i think its so unique and im absolutely in love w ur pfp / banner <3
honestly , a lot of my critiques are just weird personal quirks abt things i like / dont like ): but all in all , its a beautiful acc and u seem like such a sweet person too :)
total !
65/80
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