Devir FF-Saanson Ko

By srushtiloveskv18

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Karanvir Sharma a strict IAS officer crosses path with Debattama Saha a budding singer and a student,The stor... More

Character Sketch
Chapter-1
Chapter-2
chapter-3
chapter-4
chapter-5
chapter-6
chapter-7
chapter-8
chapter-9
chapter-10
chapter-11
chapter-12
chapter-13
chapter-14
chapter-15
chapter-16
chapter-17
chapter-18
A good bye note
chapter-20
Chapter-21
chapter-22
chapter-23
chapter-24
chapter-25
chapter-26
chapter-27
chapter-28
chapter-29
chapter-30
chapter-31
chapter-32
chapter-33
chapter-34
chapter-35
chapter-36
chapter-37
chapter-38
chapter-39
chapter-40
chapter-41
chapter-42
chapter-43
chapter-44
chapter-45
chapter-46
chapter-47
chapter-48
chapter-49
chapter-50
chapter-51
chapter-52
chapter-53
chapter-54
chapter-55
chapter-56
chapter-57
chapter-58
chapter-59
chapter-60
chapter-61
chapter-62
chapter-63
chapter-64
chapter-65
Chapter-66
chapter-67
chapter-68
chapter-69
chapter-70
chapter-71
chapter-72
chapter-73
chapter-74

chapter-19

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By srushtiloveskv18

SameDay
Karanvir's House
Karanvir's Room

Debattama enters inside the room with a sad face,whatever happened today in college was coming infront of her eyes and she was feeling a fear and scaredness in her heart

Deba keeps her hand bag on bed And she sits on bed and bursts in tears by covering her mouth by her soft hands

Deba-aaj jo bhi college mein huaein usske baad mujhe bohat darr lage rahe hai,woh malini aaj meri raging kare deti agar director sir nahi aate toh,mera kapurthala mein toh koi asie nahi tha par yahan chandigarh mein sab kitna bura hai

And she cries more and she falls on bed and hides her face in pillow and cries more and she closes her eyes and Karanvir's face comes infront of her eyes

and she feels like to hug him as she feels safe in his arms,but he is not here,he didn't came to pick her up and at home too she was alone she wants Karanvir beside her now,because she is feeling scared,she don't know why but whenever she is in problem or pain her heart calls his name and her eyes asks for his one glimpse

Debattama cries and she falls asleep

Evening
Karanvir's Room

Tanu comes upstairs as it was 8 o'clock and still there was no sign of debattama in kitchen till now

Tanu knocks the door and debattama who was half asleep lazily opens her eyes and there was tear stains on her face and her eyes were red

Deba hears the knock on door and she sits on bed

Deba-kaun hoga,kahi karan toh nahi aaye gaye office se

And she feels a little happiness in her heart with the thought that he is back from office and finally she will get his glimpse and she will feel safe and she will be no more alone in house

Deba stands up and goes towards the door and opens it and finds tanu and her little happiness balloon burst away

Deba-tanu

Tanu smiles and says mam aaj dinner mein kya bane na hai,aap aayie nahi aaj kitchen mein issliye main aayegi upar aapse poochane

Deba-haan woh aaj mera kuch karena ka Mann nahi hai,tum ek kaam karo kuch bhi bane lo jo karan ko pasand ho

Tanu smiles after hearing this and says sir ko Maggie bohat pasand hai,Maggie bane doon

Debattama hears this and gets surprised and she says kya karan ko Maggie pasand hai

Tanu-haan mam sir ko Maggie bohat pasand hai,toh main Maggie bane deti hoon,par sir abhi tak aaye nahi hai Maggie thandi hojaiyegi sir ke aane tak

Deba hears this and says main oven mein garam kare loongi don't worry

Tanu-okay mam

And anu goes away

Deba closes the door and her gaze falls on karanvir's photo which was hanging on wall

And a smile forms on her lips

Deba-ek DM hoke bhi aapko Maggie pasand hai,karan bhi na kabhi kabhi mujhe choti se bacche lageta hai

And she smiles and for few minutes she forgets that what all happened with her today

Just when she realizes something

Deba-main karan ke saath aaj jo kuch bhi college mein huaein share nahi kare sakti,what if woh mera college hi jaane band kare de ya phir mera saath bodyguards bhej kal se,nahi nahi main asie kuch nahi hone de sakti,main karan ko nahi baatogi ki aaj mera saath kya hua college mein

But just when a thought comes in her mind and she gets scared

Deba-but what if malini ne mera saath kuch bura kare diye toh tab main kya karogi

But again she thinks something and she makes a strong face

Deba-jo hoga woh main khud handle karogi,main karan ko iss sab mein involve nahi karogi kyun ki mujhe karan pe dependent nahi hone hai,kapurthala mein bhi college aur ghar ke saare problems mein akeli handle karti thi na toh abhi bhi karogi,main ek strong girl hoon jo aaj tak hamesh akeli fight karti aayi hai saare Olds se toh abhi bhi main hi sab handle karogi

And she feels courage and strength in her heart and she decides that she will handle malini by herself and will give back to her very nicely

And her gaze falls on dressing mirror and she looks at herself and realizes that she was looking so tired and there was tear stains on her face and her eyes were looking red

Deba-mera face dekhare karan pakka peechan lenga ki mera saath kuch huaein tha aur main bohat royi(cry) hoon,main fresh hojaati hoon

And she walks towards cupboard and takes out her night clothes and she goes in washroom to get fresh

Night
Karanvir's Room

Debattama comes out from washroom

This was debattama's Outfit

She was looking beautiful in grey lose long  t-shirt with black pant and her hairs were open and pink lipgloss was applied on her lips and a pinch of vermilion was on her forehead but the bubbly smile was missing from her face and she was still feeling very sad and low because of what all malini did with her

Deba walks towards bed and sits on it by hugging her doremon with a sad face
Just when door clicks open and deba was lost in her thoughts so she don't hears the sound of door click open
And finally our hero Karanvir is here

Karanvir enters in room with a smile and he closes the door and his gaze falls on debattama and he sees her sad face and his smiling face turns into a worried face and he quickly walks towards her

And kv softly says mishti

Deba hears his voice and she comes out from her thoughts and she looks up and very next moment she feels a relief in her heart and her little happiness balloon blows up again as finally karanvir was here

Deba stands up after seeing him and keeps her doremon aside

Deba-karan aap kab aaye

Kv-jab tum aapne doremon ke saath nobita bane kare beitha thi

Deba hears this and feels like to laugh but today she was so sad that she didn't wanted to smile or laugh,she was today in no mood of doing anything

Kv-tumhe kya huaein hai tum sad kyun lage rahi ho

Deba hears this and looks at him and thinks that how come he can sense her sadness when she already wiped her tears and washed her face so that he don't comes to know about her pain

Deba nods her head in no and she looks down and says nahi main thik hoon mujhe kuch nahi huaein

Kv-are you sure kyun ki mujhe lage rahe hai ki tumhare mood thik nahi hai,college mein toh kuch nahi huaein na

Deba quickly replies after hearing this and says nahi kuch nahi huaein karan main thik hoon

And she smiles a little to cover up

But Karanvir was not satisfied by her answer,he was feeling that something is fishy and debattama is trying to hide something from him as her body language was narrating a different tale than her words and just when his gaze falls on her milky hand on which there was a bruise and Karanvir gets worried
And Kv quickly holds debattama's hand on which there was a bruise and Debattama gets worried as she knows that now he will ask her question and for sure in his question answer process she will tell something and he being the DM will catch her lie within seconds

Kv looks at her and says yeh kaise huaein

Deba-woh...

Kv gets angry as she was not answering him and he was getting worried for her and Kv in anger raises his pitch and says kuch bolo mishti,l am asking you something

And debattama gets scared after hearing his high pitch and she senses that he is angry and she gets scared and she looks down innocently and she was about to free her hand from Karanvir's hold
But before that Kv makes her to sit on bed and he goes towards cupboard and opens it and takes out first aid box from it

And he quickly goes towards debattama and he sits beside her on bed and holds her hand in his hand softly and he opens the first aid box and takes out oniment from it and he first blews some air on her bruise and applies the oniment on her bruise

And Debattama looks at him and thinks that he cares so much about her and how softly he is applying oniment on her bruise without causing any pain to her

Kv notices that debattama is looking at him and he smiles

Kv-wifey asie mat dekho mera taraf,agar aise hi mujhe dekhti rahogi toh pyar ho jayega mujhse

Deba hears this and blushes and her cheeks turns into cherry color and she looks away shyly

Kv sees her shyness and decides to tease her more

Kv-waise tumhare doremon se toh better main hoon,kyun ki jab bhi tumhe hurt hote hai oniment mein lageta hoon,mujhe lageta hai ki tumhe officially mujhe aapne doremon bane lena chahiye

Deba hears this and looks at him shyly and says par aap toh Karanvir ho, doremon todhi jo aapko main aapne doremon declare kare doon,aur waise bhi aap mein kya special hai jo aap mera doremon ko replace kare sakte ho

Kv hears this and looks at her with a smile and says dekho waise toh main ek DM hoon but tumhare liye driver bane gaye hoon aur kabhi kabhi tumhare doctor bhi bane jaate hoon,tumhare bruise pe oniment lage deta hoon issliye doctor bhi bane jaate hoon tumhare liye ab itna toh special hoon main aur...

And he shifts towards her and deba shifts back on bed and kv shifts more closer to her and deba moves back and Kv quickly keeps his hand on her waist and deba innocently looks at him


Kv looks at her beautiful face and eyes her rosy lips and says aur main bohat kuch kare sakte hoon Mrs Debattama Karanvir Sharma jiska baare mein aapko koi knowledge nahi hai

And debattama feels butterflies in her stomach and Kv leaves her and stands up and he goes in washroom

And debattama shyly smiles and looks away

AfterSometime

Karanvir comes out from washroom

This was karanvir's Outfit


Debattama looks at him and she feels butterflies in her stomach as he was looking so hot in green colour t-shirt with track pants and his silver chain was shinning on his milky neck and the pendant of chain was falling out on his shirt and he was looking very hot

Debattama was all lost in him

Kv walks towards dressing mirror and deba's gaze follows him and she looks at him

Kv applies perfume and deba closes her eyes and she smells through her nose the strong scent of his perfume And she feels all lost

Kv turns back and he walks towards bed and his gaze falls on debattama whose eyes were closed and he taps her shoulder softly and leans on her ears and whispers mishti

And debattama feels his strong scent more as he was near her and his touch and voice made her shy and she feels butterflies in her stomach and she opens her eyes and turns her face and her eyes meet with his brown orbs and she looks at him innocently

Kv-are you sleepy

Deba*in mind*-sleepy nahi feel kare rahi hoon main,main toh drool kare rahi thi aap par,pata nahi mujhe ho kya rahe hai

Deba-Haan woh aaj ka din hetic tha,waise dinner nahi karena kya aapko

Kv-nahi main kareke aaye hoon

Deba-but tanu ne toh aapke liye Maggie baneiye thi

Kv hears the word Maggie and he gets excited like a kid

Kv-wow Maggie,Maggie ke liye toh l am always hungry

Deba smiles after hearing this and says okay main abhi Maggie lekar aati hoon

And she was about to go,just when kv holds her hand and deba looks at him

Deba-kya hua

Kv softly says main lekar aati hoon,tum ruko yahan

Deba-par garam bhi karena hoga Maggie ko

Kv smiles and says main kare loonga

And he stands up and leaves

After few minutes kv enters with two bowl of Maggie and gives one to deba
And he sits beside her and Kv deba starts eating the Maggie together and while eating debattama's gaze falls on kv who was eating Maggie just like a small kid and she smiles at his cuteness
And after finishing the Maggie
They both lays on bed

Kv looks at deba before closing the lamp and says with a smile good night mishti

Deba covers herself with her blanket And looks at kv and says good night

And Kv smiles at her and closes his eyes and falls asleep

Deba hugs her doremon and she turns her face and now her back was facing Kv

Deba closes her eyes and tries to sleep,but she was not feeling sleepy due to constant thinking of today's college incident and in frustration she changes her side and now she was facing kv

Debattama's gaze falls on karanvir who was sleeping peacefully by his one hand on his chest and his other hand on bed and his face was glowing under moonlight and his silver chain was shinning on his milky neck and his chain pendant was falling out on his shirt and his strong scent was making him a magnet which can attract anyone

Debattama was lost in his innocent face and she looks at him with a smile and she thinks that while sleeping he looks so cute and innocent and the way he takes care of her when he is awake melts her heart

Deba was all lost in his magnetic aura and she lifts her one soft hand and her hand touches his handsome face and her fingers runs through his hairs and she softly smiles and looks at his sleeping figure and she forgets everything and she was lost in him

But just when a realization hits her and she takes back her hand from his hairs and moves a little away and cutely hugs her doremon

Deba*in mind*-mujhe ho kya rahe hai,main itna kyun attract ho rahi hoon Karan se,asie lageta hai jaise ki karan koi magnet hai aur main koi metal jo unse attract hoti jaa rahi hoon,mujhe karan se dura rehna hai,deba tu aapne studies pe focus kare,na ki karan pe

And she glances at karanvir and makes a cute face

Deba*in mind*-phirse meri nazar chali gayi karan pe,uff kya karo main

And she closes her eyes and hugs her doremon and falls asleep

NextDay
Morning
Karanvir's House
Karanvir's Room

Debattama comes out from washroom by drying her hairs by towel

This was debattama's Outfit


Debattama walks towards dressing table and dries her hairs by hair dryer and then does a side partition and applies a pinch of vermilion on her forehead and wears earrings and bangles in her hand and she applies pink lipgloss on her lips and she then turns and picks her dupatta from bed and puts it on her right shoulder and she was looking beautiful in orange salwar suit with open hairs and she was glowing

Debattama walks towards the door and opens it and quickly walks downstairs

Kitchen

Deba enters in kitchen and sees tanu who was packing lunch box

Deba smiles and says tanu hogaye tiffin aur breakfast ready

Tanu smiles at her and says ji mam

Deba then starts looking for karanvir's tiffin but she finds only one tiffin and she looks at tanu

Deba-yeh kya tanu ek hi tiffin hai,karan ka tiffin pack nahi kiye kya

Tanu-mam sir tiffin lekar nahi jaate,unko tiffin lekar jaane pasand nahi hai

Deba gets shocked after hearing this and says kya matlba woh pura din bine kuch khaye rehta hai

Tanu-haan aur yeh aaj ka nahi hai,unki habit hi yeh hogayi hai mam

Deba makes a face after hearing this and says main dekhati hoon kaise tiffin lekar nahi jaate woh office mein yeh toh school going baby se bhi zyadya tantrums karte hai

And she walks towards a shelf and takes out a tiffin and comes back on slab and fills the tiffin and packs it

Deba-tanu tum breakfast lago main unki tiffin de kare aati hoon

And deba walks out from kitchen and she finds Karanvir who was talking on phone

This was karanvir's Outfit


He was looking so hot and handsome in black color formal blazer and pant and white shirt and his shirt first two buttons were open

Debattama sees him and losses her breath and again she was lost in his aura

Deba*in mind*-jaise hi subha hoti hai sun aapne hotness se sab jhaag dhup kare deta hai thik waise hi subha ho ya raat yeh Karanvir Sharma bhi aapne hotness se aas pass ke lok ko pagal kare deta hai,koi itna hot aur handsome kaise lage sakte hai

And she controls her thoughts and says debattama tu usse baat pe concerate kare jo tujhe kareni hai,karan ko drool karena band kare warna sab bhul jaiyegi

And she walks towards him and Kv too sees her and he looks at her from head to toe and he losses his breath and thinks that today she is looking so beautiful in orange color salwar suit with open hairs and pinch of vermilion on her forehead and her pink lipgloss was inviting him to taste some strawberry in morning

Deba walks towards him and Kv cuts the call

Deba glares at him and says main kya jaane sakti hoon ki aap tiffin kyun nahi lekar jaate office

Kv hears this and says yaar yeh tiffin kaun lekar jaate hai mujhe toh bore hote hai lekar jaane ko issliye nahi lekar jaate hoon

Deba hears this and says aap kya koi school going baby ho jo asie ta...

Kv pulls her in his arms and holds her by waist and eyes her rosy lips and deba feels butterflies in her stomach after his this action and she looks at him innocently

Kv-school going baby toh nahi hoon main but haan tumhare baby toh hoon

Deba hears this and blushes and her cheeks turns into cherry color and she looks at him and Kv smiles at her

Kv takes the tiffin from her hands and while taking it from her hand,Kv's fingers brushes on her soft hands and deba feels a shiver down her spine

Kv-main tiffin kal se le jaoga after all tumhare good baby jo hoon

And he naughtily smiles at her and deba feels shy and she tucks her hair strands behind her ears

Deba-woh college ke liye late ho rahe hai

Kv-oh haan,chalo

And he holds her hand and both leaves

Chitkara University
Car

Karanvir stops the car infront of college and looks at debattama with a smile

Kv-college is here

Deba smiles at him and says yes

And she tries to open her seat belt but fails to do so and she looks at kv
Who was looking out from window

Deba-karan seatbelt open nahi ho rahe hai

Kv hears this and looks at her and says shayad kuch problem hogi,ruko main open kare deta hoon

And Kv tries to open the seat belt but he too fails to do so and he moves closer to deba and leans on her

Deba sees him very close to her

This was Devir's position

And deba feels shy due to their proximity

Kv starts removing the seatbelt and in this process,his nose touches with debattama's nose and debattama feels butterflies in her stomach after karanvir's nose touches with her nose and shivers rans down her spine and she softly clutches her dupatta end as,Kv being so close to her was making her heart bounce and she was feeling very different and debattama closes her eyes in shyness

Kv notices his affect on her and how his nose was touching to her nose and they were so close and he even sees that she was clutching her dupatta end and Kv tilted his face and he looks at her soft faces and eyes her beautiful face and thinks that her features are so beautiful,her beautiful almond shape eyes which were closed in shyness and he was having a desire to plant soft kisses on them and then he looks at her forehead on which there was a pinch of vermilion which was shouting and saying that she belongs to him and then Kv's gaze falls on her pink lips which was beautiful colored by her pink lipgloss which were capable of giving him a strawberry treat and Kv eyes her rosy lips and he moves near to her lips and he leans on her lips and his left hand was about to go on her petite waist and his lips were about to rest on her rosy lips

Just when Karanvir's phone rings and he comes back to his sense and he sits back on his seat and looks out from window and caresses his head

Deba too opens her eyes and she too comes back to her senses and she shyly looks at Kv and clutches her dupatta end more and she looks down

Kv looks at her and sees her shyness and understands that his proximity affects her a lot and he was very happy at this fact

Kv-seatbelt open hogaye hai

Deba looks down and realizes that her seatbelt is opened and she keeps her hand on door latch and says haan,thank you main chalti hoon,bye

Kv smiles and says bye

And deba opens the door and shyly leaves

And Kv starts the car and deba stops in her track and she turns and quickly comes back to him

Deba-karan

Kv was about to leave but after hearing deba's voice he stops and he looks at her

Kv-haan deba bolo

Deba smiles and says main aapka wait karogi

And Kv smiles after hearing this and says sure,main hi aaoga tumhe pick karena aaj

And deba gets happy after hearing this and smiles more

Kv-waise aaj chalogi mera saath lunch karena mera favourite restaurant mein

Deba hears this and gets very happy and she shyly says haan chalogi

Kv gets happy after hearing a yes from him

Kv-thik hai phir hum afternoon mein college se seedha restaurant jaiyenge aur phir after lunch main tumhe ghar drop kare dunga

Deba smiles and says thik hai

Kv-okay then milte hai,bye

And he smiles at her

And he starts the car and leaves for office

And deba with a smile runs inside college

Chitkara University
Canteen

Debattama enters in canteen and sits on a chair and reema too enters and she sees deba and walks towards her and sits beside her

Reema-deba

Deba hears her and looks at her and smiles

Deba-hello reema

And reema side hugs her and says how are you?

Deba-thik hoon

And reema looks at her and realizes that today she was looking very beautiful and she smiles

Reema-bohat beautiful lage rahi hai tu

Deba hears this and softly smiles

Deba-thank you

Reema-kya baat hai jiju ne shayad kal raat bhar romance kiye tera saath aur shayad aaj subha bhi kiye hai kyun

Deba blushes after hearing this and says
Kuch bhi bolti hai tu,tera assignment hogaye

Reema-nahi yaar

And just when malini and her gang sees debattama and makes a face

Malini-issko dekho aaj toh pura behanji bane kare aayi hai,chale issko pareshaan karte hai

And they walks towards deba and purposely malini slips near debattama and few drops of hot tea falls on debattama's soft milky hand and debattama winces in pain and looks up and finds malini who was faking a smile at her and was holding a tea glass in her hand

Malini-sorry debattama tumhare upar Chai gir gayi,woh mera leg slip hogaye tha,tum jaldi se jaakar aapne haath pe ice lage lo,warna kahi marks reha gaye toh koi handsome ladka tumhare saath romance nahi karega,pehle hi behanji ho tum aur aaj toh pura behanji lage rahi ho,bloody pindu

And she makes a face and goes away And her gang follows her

Debattama winces in pain and tears forms in her eyes and she whispers karannn...

And she stands up and runs away,reema sees this and she goes behind her

Debattama sits on bench and sobs

Deba-malini kitne bura hai,mujhe bloody pindu bola,jo Mann mein aate hai mujhe kehti rehti hai,ek number ki mannerless hai

And debattama cries a little,reema comes towards her and sits beside her on bench and takes her hand in her hand and rubs ice on it and deba looks at her with teary eyes

Reema-yeh malini aur usski gang asie hi hai Deba,tu inki muh mat lagena

Deba-kal malini ne meri raging kareni ki koshish ki thi

Reema gets shocked after hearing this and says kya tune jiju ko baatiye yeh baat

Deba nods her head in no

Reema-tu pagal hai kya,kal ko agar malini ne kuch kiye toh tera saath

Deba-main khud handle kare loongi,karan bohat busy rehta hai main unko koi tension de kare,pareshaan nahi kareni chahti

Reema hears this and cups her face and says par agar kuch huaein toh tab kya karegi tu

Deba-main handle kare loongi you don't worry

And just when they hear a voice reema
And reema deba looks at the direction from where voice was coming

And they find a guy standing there
And that guy comes towards deba and reema

Reema smiles at him and says vastal kab aaya tu Delhi se

Vastal smiles and says bas aaj hi

And he looks at deba and says yeh kaun hai reema

Reema keeps her hand on debattama's shoulder and says meri best friend hai Debattama

Deba looks at vastal and smiles and says hello

Vastal smiles at her and says hello,tumhari awaaz pyaari hai aur tum beautiful bhi ho,waise kahan rehti ho tum debattama

Deba-chandigarh mein hi

Reema-vastal debattama chandigarh ke DM ki wife hai

Vastal hears this and smiles and says aree waah,toh kab mile rahi ho debattama tum mujhe jijaji se

Deba hears this and says jijaji?

Vastal-haan tum meri friend cum behan ho aaj se toh,tumhare husband huaein na mera jijaji

And deba smiles after hearing this and says yes

And vastal forwards his hand infront of deba and says friends

Deba smiles and gives her hand to him and shakes and says yes friends

And reema back hugs deba and says aur main deba ki bestie kyun

Deba looks at her and says haan

And they all smiles

Next Update-Shubham clicks debattama's photo...

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