Update: I am probably removing this book in the next few weeks. I still would love any final comments!
Thanks for all the comments so far. Please keep them coming. The book likely will be removed from Wattpad in the upcoming weeks as the next draft gets wrapped up. I will start uploading another book from the same Realm.
Thanks for taking the time to read this book. The story is complete, although, not entirely edited. I play on releasing new chapter (or chaptettes really) at least 3 times a week or so until the book is released in its entirely. I would love thoughts, just remember it still needs to go through line editing. Thanks again.
Also, here is the map where the story takes place.
https://inkarnate.com/m/JkA7Jr--realm-of-manetara-elongate/
I am considering showing where each chapter takes place. Let me know if you would enjoy that.
Finally, if you want to stay up to date with the story or find other related stories, check out the website, https://manetera.blogspot.com/