FANFICTION When it just happe...

By Zuzoe80

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Max and Nat have been series partners for three years. Although they haven't had any leading roles in their s... More

Part I Chapter 1 Just fanservice?
Chapter 2 Finding the own place
Chapter 3 Rival
Chapter 4 Burning
Chapter 5 Color change
Chapter 6 I will fight for him!
Chapter 7 This Nong!
Chapter 8 Pi Nat
Chapter 9 I love you so!
Chapter 10 Episode 10 (18+)
Chapter 11 Research (18+)
Chapter 12 What's happening to me? (18+)
Chapter 13 We are both so whipped!
Chapter 14 Admission
Part II Chapter 1 For everything a little longer
Chapter 2 Intimacy (18+)
Chapter 3 Ko Samui
Chapter 4 Cocktail in the morning
Chapter 5 Breathless
Chapter 6 Role Reversal
Chapter 7 Origin (18+)
Chapter 8 The First Night
Chapter 9 Love
Chapter 10 Back to the White Villa
Chapter 11 Double standards
Chapter 12 Reconciliation
Chapter 13 Symbiosis (18+)
Chapter 14 Adorable Lovers
Chapter 15 Plump vegetables (18+)
Chapter 17 The Only One (18+)
Chapter 18 I love you! (18+)
Chapter 19 Pi Max and Nong Nat (18+)
Part III Chapter 1 Surprise
Chapter 2 Substitute stimulation
Chapter 3 Topless
Chapter 4 Wishes
Chapter 5 Fear
Chapter 6 Free Love
Chapter 7 Protection (18+)
Chapter 8 Defenseless
Chapter 9 View, opinion, caution
Chapter 10 The first time
Chapter 11 Steep Stairs
Chapter 12 The first time with you! (18+)
Chapter 13 Happiness
Chapter 14 Being a child
Chapter 15 Wet Dream (18+)
Chapter 16 Hibiscus (18+)
Chapter 17 Two Princes (18+)
Chapter 18 Reality
Chapter 19 The Way

Chapter 16 The Final Challenge

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"The final challenge wants to test your team skills. We asked the fans to think of interesting team games.

Here is the result :
1.You are to crack a coconut wordlessly as a pair and share the nutritious water. You will not be given any tools. The fastest pair wins.
2. You will be tied together as a pair and have to free yourselves. The first freed pair wins.

The crew is on the beach.
Go there!", P'Aof explains via stream and the gorgeous Thais head for the beach.

The turquoise sea glistens in the dusk. The tall coconut palms sway in the salty ocean air.

Smiling faces welcome the three coveted Ships.

Familiar faces that always accompany them faithfully hug them tightly in greeting and show them their positions.

Zee, Max and Tutor are to play for order. Three sticks, covered to the tip, are held out to them.

Max draws the longest stick, Zee the shortest. And so it is determined which dream couple will begin.

The cameras zoom in on Max and Nat, who face each other on the beach and are handed a coconut.

"Action!" a crew member shouts.

And Nat snatches the coconut out of Max's hand and looks at it closely.

Wordlessly, he mimics how Max should now hold it.

Max obeys obediently and is curious to know what Nat is up to.

And when he sees him gathering himself inside with his eyes closed, taking a deep breath and wanting to perform a karate chop, he has a fit of laughter.

His nong is too cute.

He can't really believe he can bust open the coconut with one hand, can he?

And Max's loud laughter resounds on Ko Samui's dream beach.

He doubles over with laughter and can hardly hold the coconut in his hand.

Nat's inner focus breaks abruptly and he opens his eyes.

Eyes that now become dangerous slits.

Maybe he should use his karate chop more against Max.

And so he lunges and lunges at Max with a judo grip.

Yes, he shouldn't think he's defenseless.

Judo, karate and if he wants also Kung Fu.

He can prove everything to his Max.

And so he knocks Max down and sits on top of him.

Still wordless.

At least they manage to keep that in this game.

Max is first amazed by Nat's throwing technique.

Then he is overwhelmed by this cute Nong.

Who sits on him and looks dangerous.

Max grins.

He has certainly cracked his coconut.

With those cute little hands.

Nat is now grinning too and starts tickling Max.

And so everyone starts laughing as the two silly lovers, laughing out loud, start rolling around in the sand.

Sometimes Max lies on top of Nat, presses his hands into the sand and approaches with his chin, tickling him with it under his armpits.

Sometimes Nat overpowers his large, muscular body and rides him with delight as he digs his dainty fingers into his body and tickles him.

They lose each other once again, while the coconut meanwhile lies lonely in the sand.

And as beautiful as the sight of both of them is, however much the fans enjoy their tussle, they've probably clearly lost the game.

"Okay!" exclaims Tutor, "I guess it's our turn now!"

And Max and Nat smile lovingly at each other.

Nat bends over again and kisses Max on the cheek.

A gesture that actually makes Max blush.

To the outcry of fans worldwide.

Max grabs Nat's body and stands up with him, kissing him on the forehead and placing him next to him.

And their hands seek each other as a matter of course.

Their exchange of glances is full of love and the way Nat now nestles against Max's arm doesn't just make their hearts beat faster.

Max kisses Nat's head and now tries to concentrate on Tutor and Yim.

They receive the coconut and wait for their start signal.

And when it sounds, Tutor tries to give Yim a hint, gesticulating wildly.

Again and again he imitates a blow with his right hand.

Points to his eyes.

Directs his gaze to the right and left.

Yim faces him with widened eyes, his lips trying to form what Tutor might be trying to say.

Tutor smirks at the sight.

Yim's pouty lips are scrumptious.

He's going to have to focus again if they're going to win.

So he runs off to look for a stone.

And Yim trots faithfully after him.

He doesn't know exactly what he's looking for, but he wants to be there when he finds the treasure.

But Tutor can't find a stone on this fine sandy dream beach.

And so he runs into the ocean and dives under.

Yim jumps in after him.

How sexy Tutor glides under water.

How attractive this body floating under water is.

And Yim now knows what he has always been looking for.

His treasure is in front of him and he just has to grab it.

And so he snatches at the precious fundus in front of him and encloses Tutor's back tightly with his arms.

And they both emerge again.

Without a stone.

Without the outside world.

Yim rests his face on Tutor's neck from behind as he carries him piggyback out of the sea.

And Tutor's eyes bear witness to his supreme happiness.

They proudly show who he has finally won over.

Even though they have now lost this game, they are living the greatest prize of their hearts at this moment.

"I guess it's our turn now!" whispers NuNew in Zee's ear, setting off an avalanche of tingles.

He nods at the enchantingly smiling face and takes him by the hand.

Tutor sits down on the sand and lets Yim still embrace him from behind.

Max and Nat sit down, too. With Nat on Max's lap, of course.

Two losing couples with butterflies in their stomachs watch their leader and his love.

"Action!" chimes loudly and Zee grabs NuNews with both hands.

He looks deep into his eyes and nods, smiling delicately.

And that seems to do the trick.

NuNew picks up a second coconut from the previous pair and points his head to the four flat marble steps of the white villa.

Zee nods and they both walk to the sturdy foundation with a coconut in each hand.
Sturdy.

Like their deep affection for each other.

Like their finally expressed true love.

They glide.

In complete harmony and mutual surrender.

Zee leans over, kisses NuNew on the top of his head, and looks into his eyes.

Silently.

Does this one understand.

Will he always understand.

What this promised man wants from him.

What he needs.

What they will create together.

And so NuNew sits down on the top stair, holding the coconut on the stair below with both hands.

With his hands.

He can trust Zee.

Always.

He knows that.

So does Zee.

He takes the second coconut and with all his might, he hammers the ones held by his love.

With all their might, they will break every barrier.

Every wall.

Every obstacle.

And pass the fertile water to each other.

NuNew chortles with joy as he sees the coconut open.

"You did it!" cheers Nat, being squeezed tighter by Max.

And everyone can see Zee guide the coconut to NuNew's mouth and douse him with the fragrant water.

As everyone applauds loudly, NuNew reaches for the tropical fruit and douses Zee's open mouth as well.

And it flows.

The milky scented water flows down over his chin to his chest.

Cheers also from the fans as they watch the two beautiful men douse each other.

Seeing each other bear the fruit of their love.

And when Zee realizes that the delicious drops on NuNews' skin are taking him to other spheres, he grabs his hips, lifts him up and runs with him into the sea.

"Yeahhhh!" the others scream and run after him.

And to the delight of all the fans, the wild water drops of the heavenly sea sparkle on the splashing bodies of the six beautiful men.

"The winners of the first game are Zee and NuNew. Come back out of the water now! The second round is about to begin!", the six intoxicated men hear and slowly float out of the ocean again.

And this time they will play simultaneously.

To their amazement, large rolls of cling film are brought out.

They are to embrace each other as they are wrapped tightly.

Tightly and with many layers, they are tied together.

Tighter still.

Without a margin.

Wet bodies that become one.

Max feels his body reacting to Nat's closeness.

And he knows exactly that every movement is about to trigger much more.

Such a nasty game.

Nat giggles as he presses his face against Max's chest.

He can feel exactly how Max's body is reacting to him with each layer connecting them even tighter.

He hears his heart beating faster and faster and closes his eyes.

Max's body is a dream and he is pressed tighter and tighter against it.

Why should they break free from it?

And when all three couples are prepared, the fans can look forward to the color change in their faces.

Color changes that become more and more intense due to friction.

Squirming bodies try to widen the solid film.

Rubbing skin triggers sensational sensory stimulation.

"Nat," Max murmurs carefully, "Please stop squirming like that!" he pleads softly, "I can't hold myself together otherwise."

Nat balks briefly and kisses his pi's racing chest.

"Please forgive me! But what else are we going to do?" he asks.

Max looks to the others and sees Zee bracing his arms against the solid sheeting with all his might.

Good idea.

"Don't move! I'll loosen the foil first!" declares Max and starts flexing his muscles.

"Mhmmmmm!" he hears Nat growl softly, "Max!" murmurs Nat carefully, " Please stop tensing your biceps like that!" he pleads softly, "I can't get myself together otherwise."

Max bites his lower lip, daring to take a look into Nat's eyes.

And together with the firm fact that Nat is now pressing against him with lightly rubbing thrusts, he can no longer suppress his deep desire.

He's going to kiss him now.

There is nothing else left.

And he's already on his way to reach those lips that entice him.

"Max!", Nat almost moans, "We can't!" he licks his lips.

And closes his eyes as he feels Max now writhing ever more wildly, rubbing his gorgeousness against his belly.

Six facets of red shimmer in the faces.

Breathless fans can see the magnificent variety of arousal tones wetting the beautiful skin of their beloved.

And it's NuNew who can finally free his arms, groaning loudly as he does so.

Finally he can tear at this foil.

This dangerously tempting foil that puts them all in an impossible situation.

Everyone is relieved.

Let them win quietly.

If they keep rubbing and squirming like this, the world will witness the moment of shameless loss of control.

Racing hearts.

Quivering bodies.

And a cry of release as Zee and NuNew finally tear the foil from their aroused bodies.

And linger in their intimate embrace.

All of them.

Even if the liberating scissors relieve TutorYim and Maxnat.

Relieved they are now really not.

Three couples embracing each other with excited veils on their faces.

And a grinning crew.

Which buys them some time.

And suddenly the fans can only see the sunset on the horizon and hear P'Aof making an interim statement:

"ZeeNuNew won both games.

A ship that wordlessly understands each other.

A Ship that overcomes the most solid barriers.

Zee and NuNew have won today's challenge.

So we have a tie.

Tutor and Yim won on Friday.

Max and Nat won on Saturday.

And on the last day at the white villa on Ko Samui, Zee and NuNew win.

Now it's up to the fans!

You can vote for who is this weekend's dream couple!", P'Aof's voice chimes in and the camera takes you across the ocean, past the tall coconut trees, to the illuminated white villa.

"We give the fans this night to voiten. Tomorrow morning, the winning couple will be told a surprise.

Guys, good job!

I am proud of you guys!

You now have a night without publicity.

All cameras will now be turned off.

Tomorrow morning is the award ceremony.

And the camera goes higher and higher, showing the six reddened, amazed and waving lovers smaller and smaller.



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