Pyaar Toh Hona Hi Tha

By Cute_Devil_05

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The is based on Kanchanjunga Military Academy where soldiers are trained to serve the nation.The story narrat... More

Introduction
New Cadets of KMA
Rajveer re entry KMA
Rajveer named as Shahrukh
Suggestion request
Major Nair drill
Cadets Party 🥳
Rajveer rescue the Cadets
S6 Support System
Confidential Meeting
Secret Revealed
The Club Party 🥳
Introduction 2
Emotional Outbreak
Naveen learns the truth
Rajveer came back KMA
A love letter
New entry
Entry of Major Mohan Bhargav
Planning against Ritu
Prank on Mogambo
Prank on Mogambo continues
Nandani entry
The Fresher's Ball
Naina accepted her love ❤
Planning of a Surprise
Gunny Birthday
First day of Mentorship program
Brigadier and Rajveer conversation
Rajveer Ki Lagi Class
The Obstacle Race
Past came back
The Mentorship Camp
Illegal Movement in Forest
The Attack
Captain's are save
Mogambo Allegations
Prank on Nandani
Confession
The Kidnapping
Disappearance of Rajveer
The run away
The come back
The Punishments
The Date
Engagement Finalized
Holidays
Shopping

Attack on KMA

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Rajveer and Un1 got into an intense fight and at last Rajveer make him unconscious by beating on him head.

Rajveer call Choubay

Rajveer: aur koye moment dekhi tujhe KMA main.

Choubay: Sir abhi tak toh kuch naya nhi dekha hai.

Rajveer: Navu se contact kar aur yaha aane ko bol.

Choubay: Sir mujhe nhi lagta hai ki wo abhi aapayege aapke paas.

Rajveer: aur tujhe aisa kyu lag raha hai.

Choubay: kyuki wo busy dekh rahe hai Ritu ke saath abhi dance kar rahe hai.

Rajveer: iska kuch nhi ho sakta jaha larki mili nhi iska chalu ho jata hai. Aur kal iske liye kitni nautanki kar raha tha(in mind).
Choubay wo jo bhi kar raha hai mujhe usse lena dena nhi hai bas Navu ko call kar samjha.

Choubay calls Naveen

Naveen's phone rings

Naveen: aab ye mujhe call kyu kar raha hai(in mind).
Ritu ek important call hai main abhi aaya.

Naveen leave from their.

Naveen: bol Choubay kya huaa.

Raj: abe tere ko maine Ritu ko busy rakhne ko bola tha aur tu uske saath couple dance kar raha hai.

Naveen: main wahi kaam kar rahi hu jo tune kaha hai karne ko mujhe.

Raj: abe maine tujhe Ritu ke saath dance karne ko kab bola.

Choubay: Sir aap log apni behas baad main kar lena kyuki us corridor main koye aur aa raha hai.

Naveen: tu toh parking lot gya tha na toh corridor main kya kar raha hai.

Raj: abe dakan mujhe pata hai tere paas dimag nhi hai chup chap apne room wale corridor main aaja.

Naveen: main nhi aapuga Ritu mere saath fevicol ki tarah chipak gye hai main jaha ja raha hu mere pechhe pechhe aa jarahi hai.

Raj: Choubay Huda ko call kar.

Choubay call Huda

Huda: koun bol raha hai.

Raj: Huda tum Dr Ritu Mishra ke paas jao aur dance karo.

Huda: Sirji Ritu ma'am toh Naveen Sir ke saath dance lar rahi hai.

Raj: Huda jitna bola hai utna karo aur Naveen ko waha se nikalo mujhe usse kaam hai.

Huda: ok Sirji ye kaam ho jayega.

Huda cuts the call and moved towards Ritu.

Huda goes and forwarded his hand towards Ritu in a way to invite her for a dance with him.

Ritu accepted Huda's offer because she thought that he is Rajveer.

Ritu: mujhe nhi laga tha Caption aap mujhe dance ke liye puchege.

Huda doesn't say anything he just nod his head in yes.

Huda: ye Sirji ne kaha fhasa diya mujhe. Ye toh mujhe Sirji samajh ke dance kar rahi hai. Agar galti se bhi isse pata chala ki main Sirji nhi hu toh kya hoga ye toh koye nhi jaanta(in mind).

They both got engaged in dance.

Raj: abe aab kya kar raha hai jaldi corridor aa ja. Jaake pehle Aalekh se blazer aur mask exchange kar.

Naveen: waise tune aisa kya bola Huda ko jo is chipkali ke saath dance karne laga.

Raj: tu aaraha hai ki main kisi ko bheju tujhe shoot karne ke liye.

Naveen cuts the call.

Naveen goes towards Aalekh and swap the things. He moved towards his room corridor and saw Rajveer hiding behind the pillar while he holding someone.

Naveen: Veeru tu ye kya kar raha hai aur ye koun hai.

Raj: main yaha hide & seek nhi khel raha hu jaake room khol isse room main hi bandh ke rakh sakte hai abhi.

Raj and Naveen drag the orderly to their room and tied him with rope on a chair. The orderly phone beeped with a message Naveen take his phone 📱  out.

Naveen: ye kya terrorists baanege jab phone ko bhi lock nhi kar sakta.

Raj: abhi iska phone vibrate 📳 kar raha tha shayad message aaya hai.

Naveen: haa message hi hai "file leke KMA ke northwest gate pe mil"

Raj: chal dekte hai ye namuna koun hai aur isse kounsi file chahiye.

Naveen took some random useless files. They locked the room and moved towards northwest gate of KMA.

They reached at northwest gate of KMA and saw a man standing there. Naveen was about to leave but he stops and removed his blazer and went went towards the man.

Raj: Navu be careful.

Naveen: Veeru tension mat le sab sahi hoga.

Un2: itna late kyu aaya hai tu kuch file hi laane ko bola tha.

Naveen: wo room main file khojne main time lag gya.

Rajveer went towards Un2 and attacked him. Un2 fell on ground.

Naveen: Mar toh nhi diya na Veeru tune isse jo ye ek shot 😄 main hi gir gya.

Raj: kuch jaada fikar nhi ho rahi hai tujhe iski if u don't mind main ye haal tera bhi kar sakta hu agar tu apni bakwas band nhi karega toh.

Naveen: Veeru toh aisa kuch nhi karne wala hai.

Raj: chal help kar isse bhi room tak le jana hai.

They both took him to their room and tied him with rope on chair.

Rajveer calls Gunny

Raj: boom difuse huaa ki nhi.

Gunny: task completed.

Raj: do bakro ko pakra hai aage ki information yahi dege hamhe.  Room main hu aaja bas.

Shalini: sirf bhai se mtlb hai tumhe Raj best friend ki toh tumhe koye chinta hi nhi hai.

Raj: Doc tum toh naraz ho gyi maine tumhe laane ko isliye nhi bola kyuki tum kuch der party toh enjoy karlo kyuki mujhe nhi lagta ye party ham enjoy kar payege. Jab mujhe tumari help chahiye hogi tumhe bula luga main.

Shalini: party baad main gyi main aarahi hu.

Gunny: waise bhai main soch raha tha ki main party enjoy kar leta hu waise bhi introgation specialist toh aap ho na toh mera kya kaam waha.

Raj: tujhe bhi Navu ki tarah kisi ke saath couple dance karna hai kya 😄 chup chap room main aa.

Shalini: kya kaha Raj tumne Naveen ne couple dance kiya hai.

Naveen: girlfriend se baad main baat karna Veeru pehle inki kabar le lete hai.

Raj: main girlfriend se toh baat jarur kar raha par meri nhi teri wali se.

Now Rajveer realized what he said.

Raj: Doc mere kehne ka ye mtlb nhi tha.

Shalini: toh kya kenha chahte ho tum Raj.

Gunny: Shalini hamhe pehle room main chalna chahiye tumhe waha jiski band bajani hai uski baja lena.

Gunny cuts the call.

Naveen throw icey water on Un1 and Un2 face and it was enough for them to come in conscious.

Naveen: tum dono ke paas do option hai seedhe seedhe muh khol do ya maar kha ke muh kholo. Main point ye hai ki muh toh khologe hi tum dono bas jaldi option choose karo.

Un2: tujhe kya lagta hai main itni aasani se muh khol duga.

Un1: main kuch nhi batane wala.

Raj: torcher bag kaha raha hai Gunny ne.

Naveen: Veeru second cabinet khol mil jayegi.

Till than Gunny and Shalini also came their.
Rajveer was taking out torcher materials for the introgation.

Shalini: Raj itni meant karne ki jarurat nhi hai truth serum ka ek injection 💉 hi khafi hai 10 min main sach ugal dege.

Gunny: waise idea bura nhi hai Bhai. Waise truth serum hai mere paas rukho main lata hu.

Gunny goes to bedroom and bring the injections.

Naveen: ye jaldi kaam toh karegi na kyuki mujhe puri party miss nhi karni waise hi KMA aur party ka dur dur tak koye wasta nhi hai. Aur aaj jab party ho rahi hai toh main in dono ki wajah enjoy nhi kar pa rahe hai.

Raj: Seriously tujhe party ki pari hai.

Shalini: tum nhi na samjhoge Raj party kyu pasand hai Naveen ko.

Shalini gives them the injections 💉.

Choubay calls Rajveer.

Choubay: Sir mujhe ek unidentified chehra Brigadier ke paas jaate dekh raha hai.

Raj: toh ye Chauhan ko kyu nhi bol raha hai tu.

Choubay: maine unhe ye bola par unhone aapko baatne ko bola.

Raj: thik hai.

Calls end

Raj: Navu tu aur Shalini yaha rukh ke inse sach pata karo. Main aur Gunny party main jaake dekhte hai.

Gunny messaged Yudi to come at corner.

Gunny: Bhai aapko blazer nhi change karna kya.

Raj: Gunny tu bhul raha hai abhi bhi do boom 💥 ka kuch pata nhi hai aur mujhe jitna andaja hai ek boom Fresher's ball main jarur hoga.

Gunny: Bhai baat main point hai but koye itna kuch kaise jaan sakta hai KMA ke baare main.

Raj: ye baad main sochna warna pata chala boom blast ho gya aur ham sab tapak gye.

They both leaves for the hall.

At hall

Aalekh was dancing with Nandani and was cursing Naveen.

Aalekh in mind: Bhai apne pata nhi kya kar rahe hai aur mujhe is chipkali ke saath fhasa diya hai.

Huda was dancing with Ritu and was scared because she was coming closer to him.

Huda in mind: yrr ye aurat toh dhere dhere karke itna kareeb aagyi. Kahi Sirji samajh ke meri izzat na loot le ye waise ye Sirji se itna chipakti kyu hai. Mummy ji bas 🙏 izzat bachha lena apne puttar ki.

Naina was continuesly staring Rajveer(Huda) and was getting jealous while seeing him with Ritu.

Naina in mind: Sir ko koye aur nhi mila hai kya dance karne ke liye Dr Ritu bhi Sir ke saath hi chipakti ja rahi. Par mujhe itna bura kyu lag raha hai jab Rajveer Sir kisi aur ke kareeb ja rahe hai.

Yudi was at bar counter and staring his drink.

Ali and Pooja were dancing together and enjoying the party.

Aalekh was fully  irritated with Nandani he moved towards Rajveer(Huda).

Aalekh to Rajveer(Huda): can I a talk with you.

No one noticed his voice because of the loud music.

Seeing Naveen(Aalekh) their Ritu leaves Huda's hand and Aalekh drag him towards the corner.

Aalekh: Sir Naveen Sir party main nhi hai aur mujhe apna blazer pehna ke pata nhi kaha ghum rahe hai.

Huda; abe main Rajveer Sir nhi hu Huda hu galat aadmi se help magne aaya hai tu. Main toh khud yaha fhasa huaa hu yaha.

Aalekh: agar tu Huda hai toh Rajveer Sir kaha hai.

Huda: mujhe nhi pata. Aur tu Naveen Sir ka blazer pehan ke kyu ghum raha hai.

Aalekh: jaise tu Rajveer Sir ka blazer pehan ke ghum raha hai waise hi main Naveen Sir ka pehan ke ghum raha hu. Par dono Captions hai kaha.

Huda: do nhi Aalekh tino (while pointing towards Yudi) wo Caption Randhawa nhi Yudi hai.

Aalekh: mtlb tino Captions party se gayab hai aur party main bas Caption Abhimanyu hai.

Huda: haa, ek kaam karte hai ham apni partners ko exchange kar lete hai tu ritu ji ke saath dance kar aur main Nandani jo ke saath karta hu.

Aalekh: apun aisa kuch nhi kar raha.

Huda: dekh bhai sab yahi lag raha hai ki ham Rajveer aur Naveen hai kisi ko koye shak nhi hoga. Plz bhai meri itni si baat maan ja.

Aalekh: girgirana band kar maan gya apun teri baat. Kya aafat hai.

They exchanged their partners and continued dancing.

Naina's angry got increased as he saw Rajveer is now dancing with Nandani and her brother had replaced himself with Ritu.

Till now Rajveer  and Gunny reached at the hall.

Raj: hamhe pure hall ko scan karna hoga toh main scan karta hu tu Chauhan ke paas ja.

Gunny: Bhai we can exchange our work.

Raj: jo bola hai wo kar raha hai ki nhi ki main ye baat Chachu ko bolu jaake.

Gunny: ye galat hai Bhai dad ke naam ki damki dena band karo aap main ja raha hu.

Gunny moved towards Yudi to exchange his blazer.

Meanwhile Naina hold his wrist.

Naina: Yudi(Gunny) chal na dance karte hai pata nhi Aalekh kaha gayab hai.

Gunny: Nainu main Yudi nhi Gunny hu.

Naina: ye blazer toh Yudi ne pehni thi toh tum Gunny kaise ho sakte ho.

Gunny: meri Maa abhi mujhe chor main thore der main aaya.

Naina leaves his wrist.

Naina removed her mask and made a rotlu face.

Naina: katti main tumse baat nhi karti tum gande ho Bunny 🐰.

Gunny: main Bunny nhi Gunny hu.

Naina: pata hai mujhe Bunny. Mere saath koyi dance 💃 hi nhi karta. Main kisi se bhi baat nhi karugi special bhai aur Rajveer se.

Gunny: tumne pe rakhi hai kya Nainu.

Naina: nhi.....gandi baat tum bhi mat pina. Drink karna achhi baat nhi hoti.

Gunny murmured: achhi baat nhi hoti Drink karna ye tumne ek bottle chadane se pehle samaj nhi aaya. Aakir kaar behan tum Navu ki hi ho na.

Naina: kuch kaha kya Bunny tumne.

Gunny: nhi toh.

Naina: toh tumare hoth kyu hil rahe hai.

Gunny murmured: jisne bhi isse pilayi hai main usse toh nhi main.

Flashback

Naina was continuesly staring Rajveer(Huda) who was dancing with Ritu and continuesly she was being jealous with Ritu.

A waiter was passing from their with a hard drink 🍸 tray. She stops him and drank both the drinks of the tray. She didn't realized that she was drinking hard drink instead of soft drink.

Fail gya raita

Flashback ends

Precap: The drunk Naina.





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