Devir FF-Saanson Ko

By srushtiloveskv18

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Karanvir Sharma a strict IAS officer crosses path with Debattama Saha a budding singer and a student,The stor... More

Character Sketch
Chapter-1
Chapter-2
chapter-3
chapter-4
chapter-5
chapter-6
chapter-7
chapter-8
chapter-9
chapter-10
chapter-12
chapter-13
chapter-14
chapter-15
chapter-16
chapter-17
chapter-18
A good bye note
chapter-19
chapter-20
Chapter-21
chapter-22
chapter-23
chapter-24
chapter-25
chapter-26
chapter-27
chapter-28
chapter-29
chapter-30
chapter-31
chapter-32
chapter-33
chapter-34
chapter-35
chapter-36
chapter-37
chapter-38
chapter-39
chapter-40
chapter-41
chapter-42
chapter-43
chapter-44
chapter-45
chapter-46
chapter-47
chapter-48
chapter-49
chapter-50
chapter-51
chapter-52
chapter-53
chapter-54
chapter-55
chapter-56
chapter-57
chapter-58
chapter-59
chapter-60
chapter-61
chapter-62
chapter-63
chapter-64
chapter-65
Chapter-66
chapter-67
chapter-68
chapter-69
chapter-70
chapter-71
chapter-72
chapter-73

chapter-11

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By srushtiloveskv18

SameDay
Night
Karanvir's House

Debattama walks downstairs and she was about to walk towards kitchen just when she sees Karanvir

Karanvir enters inside the house with bipin,ujjwal and makhan behind him

Karanvir sees debattama and smiles at her

But debattama don't reacts anything back

Karanvir ignores her and looks at bipin
and says aaj ke liye tum teeno bhi ghar jao,kal milenge

Bipin,ujjwal and makhan nods their head in yes and they leaves

Karanvir looks at debattama and goes upstairs

Debattama makes a face and says ajeeb hai,thik se ignore karena bhi nahi aate mujhe

And she makes a face and goes in kitchen

Gym Room

Karanvir enters inside the gym room and removes his blazer and unbuttons his shirt and throws it away and he goes in changing room

After few seconds he comes out by just wearing his track pants and he was shirtless

Kv walks towards dumbells and picks them and he starts his gyming session


Dinning Area

Deba was about to enter in kitchen just when,a maid comes towards her

Maid-mam aap ek chota sa kaam kare dengi,aap kya sir ko yeh juice de dengi

Debattama don't says anything and picks the juice glass from tray and thinks that it is okay she can give this juice glass to Kv and can come back down

Debattama smiles and says sure main de dungi,waise dinner mein kya banega

Maid-mam aaj toh sirf Khichdi bane hai aur sir ke liye salad kyun ki sir raat ko sirf salads khaate hai no oily food

Deba smiles and says okay

And she turns and starts walking towards stairs

Deba-oh my god yeh kya insaan hai pura din Ghas phus khate rehte hai yeh,matlba ab kya hi bolo

And she walks upstairs and was about to go in room but finds a room light open and door closed so she walks towards that room and opens the door
And next moment what she sees,makes her to lose her breath

She sees Karanvir doing his workout without his shirt,deba looks at kv and finds that he was shirtless,he was just wearing his track pants and yes his silver chain was making him look more hot
Karanvir's shirtless look


His gym session
(Without band,mask and specs)

Debattama feels shy after seeing him shirtless and she turns her face

Karanvir feels someone's presence in room and he turns and finds debattama standing by turning her face and she was holding juice in her soft hands and she was still in saree and she was looking extremely hot,especially her milky waist which was clearly visible due to her net saree

Kv smiles and says Mrs Debattama Karanvir Sharma tum yahan

Deba hears this and quickly looks at him and says aap phirse shuru hogaye maine kaha na aapko ki main yeh shaadi nahi maanti

Kv starts taking steps towards her deba starts taking the steps backwards and she was about to hit her back to door's latch but Karanvir keeps his hand on her waist very lightly,his hands barely touching her waist and debattama looks at him innocently

Kv-lage jaiyegi tumhe Debattama,dhyaan se

And deba turns her face a little and finds that door's latch was just behind her and she moves a little away from Karanvir

Deba-yeh aapka juice

And she forwards juice glass infront of him and karanvir smiles and takes it from her hand and debattama stares at him as she was feeling so shy and lost infront of him,obviously she was feeling so shy after seeing him shirtless and always he looks so hot And without shirt he was looking smoking hot

Debattama ignores her thoughts And kv takes the juice glass from her hand and says thank you Mrs Karanvir Sharma

And he keeps the glass on a table which was just beside him

Debattama hears this and gets angry and says aap phir shuru hogaye,mujhe na aapse baat kareni hi nahi hai

And she hurriedly starts leaving just when her saree gets stuck in one of the dumbells which was kept down and she losses her balance and debattama closes her eyes in fear of falling down and before she can fall down,Karanvir quickly holds her in his arms by her waist


Kv looks at debattama and he was all lost in her,she was looking just like a beautiful angel in white and red color saree with her one mehndi filled hand was down and other was on his arms which she was holding for support and her face was glowing,her lips were so beautiful just like a pink rose and her eyes and nose were so beautiful,karanvir was now having a urge to grab her tight in his arms and kiss her face,eyes,cheeks,nose,chin and her soft milky neck and shoulder and finally her lips

She was looking hot with sleeveless white blouse

But Karanvir controls his feelings as he don't want to force himself on her,he will not touch her until she accepts him as his husband and this marriage

Karanvir puts a quick brake on his thoughts and softly says debattama open your eyes

Debattama hears his soft voice and looks at him and yes even she can't denie that karanvir was looking so handsome,his beautiful eyes,nose and chin,he has got the most handsome face and she will not denie that and yes his perfume was giving such a beautiful colonge that she was just lost in that fragrance and she was feeling shy in his arms as she usually feels but now she was feeling so shy as he was shirtless

Deba looks away and Kv understands that she was feeling shy or he can say uncomfortable in his arms and he quickly helps her to stand straight

Kv looks at her and says softly are you okay

Debattama nods her head in yes and she looks down and puts her hair strands behind her ears and shyly leaves

Karanvir looks at her and says she is so beautiful

And he smiles and drinks his juice

Corridor

Deba comes out from room and she was still lost in the moment and she was feeling so shy and she was getting the flashes of shirtless karanvir

Deba-god he is so hot,well built body bhi hai,asie toh hot lageta hi hai par shirtless toh smoking hot lageta hai aur perfume my god,itna sweat karena ke baad bhi perfume ki smell aaye rahi thi unke pass se,he is so posh and damn hot gosh

And just when she realizes that what she was saying and she holds her ears by her soft hands and says Mata rani maaf karena main bhi kya ulta seedha bole jaa rahi hoon tabse,ho kya rahe hai mujhe

Deba-waise bhi yeh karanvir ke wajah se hi aaj mera saare career khatam hogaye hai aur l hate him,mujhe sochane hi nahi hai inke baar mein because l hate him

And she makes a face and goes downstairs

AfterSometime
Night
Karanvir's Room

Debattama enters inside the room and closes the door,just when she hears the door click open and she turns and finds karanvir who just came out from washroom after getting freshen up

This was karanvir's Outfit


He was looking handsome in black color t-shirt and black color track pants

Deba sees him and losses her breath for a second,she thinks that he was looking so handsome in black t-shirt,with his hairs wet and his silver chain Shinning in his milky neck and his face was glowing,gosh he is so handsome and extremely hot

Deba ignores her thoughts And makes a face

Kv sees her and walks towards her with a smile

Kv-So Mrs Karanvir Sharma,done with dinner?

Deba hears this and glares at him and says aap phir shuru hogaye,maine aapse kaha na ki mujhe iss naam se mat bulo aur mera dinner huaein ki nahi its none of your business

Kv-well l am not a business men,main DM hoon,waise mera profession acche se dhyaan hai na tumhe

Deba-kyun? Aapka... profession main kyun dhyaan mein rakho

Kv-aree kal ko jab tum Bahar jaogi toh lok tumhe puchenge(will ask) ki tumhare husband kya karte hai tab tum kya bologi

Deba makes a cute angry face and says main unko bologi ki mera husband exists hi nahi karte

Kv-oh my god am l a Invisible Men,waah iss naam par toh movie ya webseries bane sakti hai

Deba hears this and says ohhh toh bane lijiye na mujhe kya aur ek production house hi open kare lijiye,mujhe kya

And she walks towards cupboard

Kv too walks behind her and says haan good idea aur usse production house ka naam hoga Mrs Debattama Karanvir Sharma aur mera saare movie,serial or webseries mein main hero aur tum heroein

Deba hears this and looks at him and makes a face and says nahi aap toh villain hi bane na,jaise mera life mein bane ho

Kv hears this and he gets hurt by her words,as he is not a villain,not in her life nor in anyone's life,he is a good guy and surely time will tell her

Kv-aane wale time mein tum khud hi accept karogi ki main tumhare life ka hero hoon

Deba hears this and makes a face

Deba*in mind*-bolne se kya hote hai,karan mera life ke villain hai aur villain hi rehange

And she opens the cupboard and the next thing which she sees is that right side of cupboard was filled with sarees,salwar suit,western dresses,tops and jeans,night gowns and night dresses with pajamas

Deba looks at kv who was smiling at her and she says yeh sab kiseka hai,l mean aapki koi girlfriend thi kya jo aapke saath hi rehti thi,l mean live in relationship asie kuch

Kv sarcastically smiles and says you mean bine phere hum tere,nahi yaar meri asie kismat kahan,yahan toh jiska saath phere liye woh hi meri hone ke liye ready nahi hai toh kahan koi ladki bine phere meri hogi

Deba hears and she feels a satisfaction after hearing this that he didn't had any girlfriend in his life till now,she also don't know why she was feeling a relief in her heart after knowing that he was single till now,she ignores her thoughts And even controls her laughter yes she was feeling like she will burst in fits of laughter anytime as he was sounding so funny

Deba-aap bolenge ki yeh kiseka clothes hai

Kv- obviously tumhare hai,main todhi pehna kare dance karoge raat ko yeh sab

Deba controls her laughter and says par yeh sab

Kv-woh chachi ne yeh sab kiye,tumhare liye

Deba smiles after hearing this and touches the clothes by her hands and says thats so sweet of her,main yeh sab zarror pehnogi

And she smiles and takes out a night dress for herself and walks towards washroom

Kv walks towards the cupboard and touches the clothes which deba touched by her hands and says with a smile yeh sab chachi ne nahi maine kiye hai tumhare liye debattama,main yeh saare dresses lekar aaye hoon tumhare liye,l want you to look like a princess,obviously main tumhe princess bane kare rakhane wale hoon,ek ek dress maine select kiye hai tumhare liye And l am sorry maine tumhe jhoot kaha par agar main tumse kehta ki yeh sab main lekar aaye hoon toh tum yeh clothes use hi nahi karti,but l am so happy ki daily ab tum mera pasand ke clothes mein rahogi,surely you will look like a beautiful princess in all this clothes

And he smiles

After few minutes Debattama comes out from washroom and Karanvir looks at her

This was debattama's Outfit

She was looking beautiful in dark blue colour night dress,with her hairs open,Karanvir losses his breath as she was looking so beautiful in the night dress

Kv smiles at her and deba don't reacts anything and walks towards bed

Kv-you are looking beautiful

Deba looks at him after hearing this and don't says anything

Deba then walks near cupboard and takes out her blanket from it and keeps it on bed and then she walks towards her bag and kv too walks towards bed and sits on his side of bed

Deba comes to her side and places a doremon near her pillow

Kv sees the doremon and smiles and says doremon,yeh kyun lekar aayi ho tum

Deba-aapse matlba

Kv-ab yeh doremon mera pass beitha hai toh introduction toh lena padega na isska

Deba-yeh mera favourite soft toy hai,jab main 8 saal ki thi toh mumma ne mujhe gift diye tha yeh mera birthday par,tabse issko main aapne pass hi rakhati hoon aur raat ko bhi mera saath rehta hai yeh,issliye aaj se yeh mera saath rehage

Kv smiles at her innocence and cuteness and says that's cute

Deba ignores his compliment and sits on bed

Kv holds the doremon in his hand and says hello doremon,tumhare pass toh bohat saare gadgets honge na,toh ek gadget mujhe bhi de do,so that main tumhari best friend ka gussa Shant kare payo

Deba hears this and says mera doremon mujhe dijiye aapne kyun touch kiye issko,dijiye

And she tries to take the doremon from his hand,but kv thinks to tease her and flirt with her as from yesterday his favourite hobby is to tease her and flirt with her

Kv holds the doremon up and deba too puts her hand up to take the doremon from his hand,but kv stands up from bed with doremon and says yeh main tumhe nahi dunga,kyun ki jo tumhare hai woh mera bhi toh hai Mrs Karanvir Sharma

Deba gets offended after hearing this and she stands up and runs towards him to take doremon from his hand but kv runs with doremon in his hand and deba was running behind him,but kv was so smart that he holded the doremon up in his hand and now deba gets irritated and frustrated
And tears forms in her eyes and she starts crying

Kv hears her crying and looks at her who was crying just like a cute kid and he melts as he can't see her in tears,a one single drop in her eyes makes his heart on fire

Kv holds her by one hand and pulls her a little closer by maintaining a distance between them

Kv puts her both palms infront of him and he keeps her doremon in her hand and deba looks at him innocently

Kv-ssshhhh don't cry,l am sorry

Deba gets quite after hearing this and hugs her doremon and walks towards bed and lays down on bed with her doremon and she covers herself and her doremon with blanket And hugs her doremon and closes her eyes and yes she falls asleep

Kv sees her and walks towards her and bends himself a little on her and wipes her tears and pats her head lovingly and says ssshhhh main sab kuch sehna kare sakte hoon,bas tumhare anokhein mein aaso(tears) yeh nahi dekh sakte hoon

And he covers her properly with blanket

And leaves the room and debattama was sleeping peacefully

Balcony

Kv sits on a chair which was in balcony and looks at moon and smiles and thinks about debattama

Kv-woh dil ki bikul bhi bura(bad) nahi hai,bas todhi gussa hai,chalo may be bohat gussa aur nafrat hai usske dil mein mera liye par phir bhi she is very innocent,emotional and soft from heart,jo bhi hai jaise bhi hai l like her,mujhe nahi lageta ki usski jaise ladki milne possible hai,woh bohat acchi hai

And he smiles and looks at debattama who was sleeping peacefully with her doremon and she was looking beautiful

And he smiles

Next Day
Chandigarh
Morning
Karanvir's House

Debattama comes downstairs

This was debattama's Outfit


She was looking beautiful in blue colour salwar suit with her dupatta pinned on her right side and her forehead filled with a pinch of vermilion and pink lipgloss was applied on her lips and her hands filled with few blue color bangles and even till now her mehndi Color was dark and she was looking like a newly married bride

Tanu sees debattama and smiles and says mam good morning

Debattama smiles after hearing this and says good morning

Tanu-mam breakfast ready hai,lage doon aapke liye

Debattama gets shocked after hearing this and says kya aapne kyun baneiye main aayi hi rahi thi na bane na ke liye

Tanu-mam yeh toh meri duty hai,mujhe isski hi salary milti hai

Deba-woh l know but haan aaj se main banogi khana,aap meri help karenge sirf okay

Tanu-but mam sir,woh agree nahi karenge

Deba-that you don't worry,main unse baat kare loongi

Tanu smiles and says okay mam

And she goes away

And just when debattama's phone starts ringing and she looks at her phone and finds a unknown number and she gets scared

Deba-unknown number kahi munna toh nahi,karan ko toh pata bhi nahi hai munna ke baare mein,jab unko pata chalega tab pata nahi woh kya sochange mera baare mein aur kya react karenge

And she checks whether is someone around her and she quickly answers the call with a fear

Deba-hel..hello

Voice-hello am l speaking to Mrs Debattama Karanvir Sharma

Deba makes a face after hearing this name and says who is this

Voice-mam main pankaj baat kare rahe hoon Mumbai se

Deba-ji boliye

Pankaj-mam woh day after tomorrow Mumbai mein ek mega concert cum competition hone jaa rahe hai singing ka,so iss mein aapka name registered hai

Deba hears this and thinks that how did her name got registered in her and then remembers that yes her teacher registered her name in this

Deba-oh yes but registration toh Miss Debattama Saha ke name se huaein hoga toh phir...

Pankaj-mam woh maine news dekh thi,aapki shaadi hogayi na Mr Karanvir Sharma se l know

Deba gets offended after hearing this and says aap kaam ki baat karenge please

Pankaj-sorry mam so aapko event ke liye Mumbai aane hoga,saare rules and regulations aapko Mumbai aane par pata chale jaiyenge,aap kal tak Mumbai aaye jaane mam so that aap pharso time pe report kare sake

Debattama hears this and says yeah sure,thank you

Pankaj-main aapko saare details message aur mail kare rahe hoon abhi

Deba smiles after hearing this and says yeah sure And thank you

And she cuts the call and twirls in happiness and says pehle kapurthala mein competition attend kiye,trophies mile wahan phir l came to chandigarh wahah sab thik huaein phir patiala mein inter college fest mein award mile aur ab Mumbai jaogi,oh my god l am so excited And happy

And just when a realization hits her that she is married now and what if karanvir will not allow her to go in concert

Deba-agar karan ne mujhe allow nahi kiye toh...

And she says mujhe kiseka permission ki zarrot nahi hai,main jaogi Mumbai concert mein,but...

And she makes a worried face and says agar karan ne jaane hi nahi diye toh,nahi nahi main toh bhi jaakar rahogi,abhi baat karti hoon usse,inform karti hoon ki main kal subha Mumbai jaa rahi hoon

And she turns and was about to go upstairs

Just when karanvir walks downstairs with tushar and bipin,ujjwal were behind him

This was karanvir's Outfit

(Without specs)

And he was looking very handsome in light blue shirt,dark blue blazer and white color pant

Karanvir-yeh kya hai tushar phirse tumne mistake ki hai,tumhe smajhe nahi aati kya koi baat thik se,what nonsense is this

And in anger he throws the file and file falls on floor with its paper flying in air here and there

Debattama gets scared after seeing his anger and holds her dupatta in her fist

Kv walks downstairs(imagine him walking downstairs like Shaurya Sabherwal)

And tushar,bipin and ujjwal too walks downstairs behind him

Kv stands down and deba was feeling so scared after seeing him in anger as always she has seen her father and brother in anger and hitting their wives as if they are a animal and they are their masters

Deba sees file and paper down on floor And she was about to bend down and pick them Just when

Tushar comes and bends down and says mam aap rehna dijiye main kare loonga

And deba looks at him and nods her head in yes

And she stands straight and her gaze meets with kv for a second but she quickly looks down and kv ignores her

Kv looks at tushar and says ab main tumhare kya karo Tushar,should l fire you

Tushar stands up and says no sir,last chance main yeh file aaj aapke saath hi beitha kare banoge

Kv-okay,par this is the last chance

Tushar nods his head in yes

And kv looks bipin and ujjwal and says tum donno kya dekh rahe ho,Koi daily soap nahi chale rahe yahan,jao jaakar car nikalo,already l am late

Bipin and ujjwal nods his head in yes and tushar too leaves

Karanvir was too about to leave just when

Deba says softly karan

Karanvir stops in his tracks after hearing this and looks at her and nods his head in yes coldly

Deba gets scared and says woh mujhe aapse kuch important baat kareni thi,issliye aapko roka maine warna nahi...

Kv cuts her off and says debattama jaldi bolo kya bolne hai tumhe

Deba gets scared after hearing this as he was sounding very cold

Deba-ji...woh...woh...

Kv looks at her and says muh mein dahi hai kya tumhare

Deba nods her head in no

Kv-then,please speak up,l don't have more time to waste

Deba-woh day after tomorrow Mumbai mein ek concert cum competition hai aur issliye main kal Mumbai jaogi aur main aapki permission nahi le rahi,l am informing you

And she looks at him,kv looks at her and deba thinks that he will shout on her or may be hit her like her father use to hit her whenever she use to take concert or competition name

Karanvir smiles and says oh wow that's great,tum Mumbai zarror jaogi aur tumhe mera permission ki zarrot nahi hai,but ek condition hai meri

Deba gets shocked after hearing this and says kya...kya condition hai?

Kv looks at her and says ki tum Mumbai akeli nahi jaogi l will come with you,kyunki ab tum ek DM ki wife ho aur mera na jaane kitna dushman hai jo bas mujhe harm karena ka chance search kare rahe hai aur secondly main tumhe Mumbai akela toh nahi jaane dunga kyun ki tum meri biwi ho aur meri responsibility ho

Deba hears this and says nahi aap mera saath nahi aaoge kyun ki aap mera koi nahi lageta

Kv gets angry after hearing this and he holds her hand and pulls her closer and eyes her lips and says main aaoge tumhare saath Mumbai smajhi tum aur agar mujhe aapne husband consider nahi karena toh mat karo,mujhe sirf aapna bodyguard ya coolie smajhe kare aapne saath Mumbai lekar chalo aur jaakar packing karo,tumhari bhi aur mera bhi,hum kal subha ki pehle flight se hi Mumbai jaa rahe hai,issliye packing start kare do

Debattama gets sacred as he was sounding cold and very serious

And he leaves her and debattama looks innocently at him and he leaves for office

Deba makes a face and says yaar yeh kya ab inka saath Mumbai jaane padega,par inse kaun argue kare,inka gussa toh oh my god

And she quickly goes upstairs

Night
Karanvir's Room

Debattama was packing her bags and was talking to herself

Deba-yeh kya jabardasti hai ki main bhi saath chaloga,par thank God mera concert jaane wali baat pe he agreeded aur argue nahi kiye warna kapurthala mein concert ke naam se hi papaji kitna maarte tha mujhe

And tears forms in her eyes but she controls herself

Just when karanvir enters inside the room and debattama looks at him

Kv comes to her and says hogayi packing Mrs Karanvir Sharma

Debattama hears this and makes a face

Deba-aap phir shuru hogaye aapse maine kaha tha na ki aap...

Kv-tum mujhse kuch bhi kyun na kaho par main karoge woh hi jo mera dil karega kyun ki main hoon Karanvir,Mr Karanvir Sharma

Deba makes a face after hearing this and says aapko kyun aane hai Mumbai mera saath

Kv takes a step towards her and deba was about to step back but kv holds her hand by which she was holding her dupatta in her fist

Deba looks at him innocently

Kv-kyun ki mujhe aapne biwi ko company dena hai aur iss baat pe argue mat karo,aur kal subha ke outfits nikale liye tumne

Deba puts her earrings box in her bag and says nahi abhi nikalne wali hoon

Kv smiles and says wow that's great,kal subha ke liye outfits main nikal rahe hoon

Deba-great waise bhi aapko aapne packing aur kal subha ka outfit khud hi ready karena hai

And she makes a face

Kv makes a face and says Mrs Karanvir Sharma outfits main hum donno ke ready kare rahe hoon

Deba hears this and was about to denie,but before she can argue

Kv-no arguments,agar tumne kal mera pasand wale Outfit nahi pehna toh main tumhare doremon tumhe nahi dunga kabhi bhi

And he quickly runs towards bed and picks her doremon and debattama gets scared

Deba-okay okay main doremon ke liye yeh bhi kare loongi

Kv smiles and says thats like my wife Mrs Karanvir Sharma

Deba makes a cute face after hearing this and Kv smiles

Next Update-Karanvir and Debattama in Mumbai...

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