The Shy Ghoul (carlos oliveir...

By demonfox77

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Renee valentine is the adopted sister of Jill Renee is shy and scared of almost anything but her sister is t... More

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Renee pov
We made to a warehouse , Alex and Jess kicked the door down so we can go in and they run inside to see if there any of those things out there

" all clear, Jill and Renee " they both yelled at us

We ran inside the warehouse ,there were no zombie in sight , I sigh in relief and I felt something coming I activated my Bikaku

"Is everything okay Renee " Alex said to me

I shake my head no

"Something feels not right " I said nervously

I hear something coming from my left side to hear a voice that I haven't heard in a while and I recognize it and I slightly swing my Bikaku at the unknown creature and he come into view

"Your senses are sharp Renee " unknown creature said


I smiled at him

"Elvis, what happened, I miss you so much " I said as I put Bikaku away

" I'm doing well Renee, can you introduce me to your friends Renee " said Elvis

You nodded and introduce them to him and after a while Jill spoke to you

"Renee we need to move forward " said Jill

You nodded and spoke to Elvis

''Ready Elvis " I spoke to him with my mind

Elvis bark at me, let me know he was ready to go and we all ran out of the warehouse and onto the street again and there was nemesis standing there like it was waiting for us, more like waiting for my sister

Nemesis begin walking towards us,I turned my head towards Elvis

"Elvis go for it"I said to him and he bark in reply


( This is one of Elvis forms)

Elvis ran at nemesis to push him back and nemesis punch him in the face

" Elvis are you okay " I said to him with my mind

" I'm fine Renee ,I have a plan " he said to me

I nodded and he told me what his plan was and I activated my Ukaku

We both attack nemesis and he grabbed both of us with his tentacles and threw us back

"RENEE " Jill yelled

I turned to see her in a car that means she started it while, me and Elvis were attacking nemesis and Jesse and Alex were dealing with the undead ,I ran to her and Elvis on my tail, Jesse and Alex made there way to us and we all got in and she drove into nemesis and we all fell a street highway , we tumble over and we all groan from the crash and we climb out of the car and nemesis was on fire and he is coming towards Jill

Then the four of us heard a man voice yelling at nemesis

" HEY FUCKFACE " yelled the guy

He shot a rocket at nemesis, but he grabbed it with one of his tentacle and threw it away from him

I activated my Bikaku and I swing my Bikaku needles at nemesis and he stumbled back a bit and the guy shot another rocket at him and nemesis went down into a kneeling position and the guy helped Jill up

" hey are u guys okay " he said as we sped walked away from nemesis

We nodded

"I'm carlos oliveira " the guy said

We keep walking until we enter a subway station and I felt something odd about

" Renee is everything okay " Jill whisper to me so the other won't hear us

I shake my head no

"I'm getting a odd feeling that something will happen " I whisper back to her

She smiled a bit, the other's were waiting for me and Jill and Elvis to caught up with them and we caught up to them

" what were you and Jill talking
about "Alex said to me

I blushed a bit and I told them both that Jill asked me if I was doing okay and that I was fine, they both didn't ask me any more questions

We all keep walking until we came across a subway car that was unused and it was not moving

Carlos told us to go on ahead and said he was not leaving us in a cruel Carlos-less world and Jill said OK and I giggle at the sentence Carlos made to us and Carlos blushed a little bit

I was a little confused on why Carlos is blushing but I find it cute, we walked into a subway car and I saw another one but with people in it and there was a man there sitting down in the subway car that we walked into

"Carlos you didn't introduce these 4 fine young women " the man said to Carlos

He looked at Jill ,then at me and Elvis ,he stared at me his eyes scanned me from top to bottom, then he looked at Jesse and Alex and he finally spoke to you guys

" this women here is an ex stars soldier and her name is something Valentine and the girl is a former experiment along with the dog" he said to Jill

I shudder when he looked at me

"It's Jill and this one is Renee my younger sister and her two friends Jesse Smith and Alex Valdez " Jill said

The man introduce himself as mikhail Viktor

"We were sent here to rescue civilian"
Mikhail couldn't finish his because of his injuring

"Yea how that going for you " Jill said to mikhail

I walked away from the conversation and I heard a meow from out of the subway car and it was my messager cat Charlie


"Hello Charlie how are you " I said to him

He rub his head against my hand, I opened up the bag on his back and saw a message and it was from Alice who had saved me, Elvis and Charlie

" hey Renee how are you doing well and I know you miss me, don't worry I'm doing fine, during your last letter I saw you had control over your kagune,I sent Charlie to you because I heard there is a outbreak there and I was hoping you were okay, please write me back so I know you are okay Renee "

I finished reading the letter and I wrote a letter about how I was doing and what happened here

"Hey what are you up to kiddo "

I heard a voice behind me and I turned to see who it was

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