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Book: Nodus Tollens
By: namjesusmylove
Judge: Dragon_Kitara
Title: 5/5
Unique and different. Really wanted to know what it meant.
Cover: 9/10
Beautifully done. Your subtitle is getting cut off
Description: 5/10
Needs to be intriguing and give us an idea of what the book is about. Its repeated on the cover and in the chapter. Maybe also add what the title means
First Impression: 5/10
Wasn’t very interesting and I could already predict what will happen in the story
Writing style: 5/10
Your writing style is a very common one. It needs to be a bit more creative.
Characters actions and Decisions: 6/10
Characters were rushed and predictable. Your female lead gave into Jimin way to easily
Plot: 16/20
You got a good idea but it’s too predictable. This is a common plot, be a bit more creative and add more twists to it. As I said before your characters are rushed and the female lead gave in to easy. Its not a good impression on her. Your plot and characters need a bit more developing.
Explanation: 4/5
Can be a bit more descriptive.
Sense: 8/10
Come parts were confusing as its rushed
Grammar, Spelling and Vocabulary: 5/10
You need to work on your writing. There are grammar errors. No capital letters at the start of the sentence or when a name is said. You need to add more to your vocabulary as well. Don’t write in short form always write the whole words out as this is a novel and not a text.
Total: 68/100
Judge: kyrjnie
Title: 4/5
I don't know how your Title is related to your story. But I have to say it is really creative and unique!!
Cover: 6/10
The cover is good but half of the subtitle isn't visible, try taking some latest picture of him and make it dark so that it suits your concept.
Description: 7/10
This is not a description. You have just described what the word means, try adding a dialogue or two to make it intriguing.
First Impression: 8/10
My first impression was pretty good. I really liked the name and it was just so intriguing to read. But just make sure your description is nice and leave it hanging so that the readers are left curious. If you need any help with it you can contact me.
Writing style: 7/10
Your writing style is really good! With all those words and descriptions I can totally imagine what is happening. But there's one thing, each and every starting letter is not in caps. This is totally wrong. Even after a full stop there is no caps. Kindly edit that.
Character's actions and decisions: 8/10
I really liked the character of Jimin, mysterious and short-tempered.
Plot: 20/20
I really loved your plot so much! It was creative, unique, mysterious and a total roller coaster of emotions.
Explaination: 3/5
But I didn't understand if Jimin is a psychopath or not? His character was portrayed like it. Y/n's character was a bit confusing at times. Like if looked as if she was about to break up and suddenly they are making out?
Sense: 9/10
Most things made sense to me except for what I pointed out in explanation. Those things need to be clear and the ending was really abrupt. You should've added one last ending scene or a heartfelt confession.
Spelling: 9/10
No Spelling errors found! Just make sure that while writing you use Caps for the first word, it disrupts the flow or a good writing style and plot. Great job!
Total: 81/100
Total: 68+81=149
Average: 74.5
Bonus: No bonus because you are not following the judges.
Grand Total: 74.5
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Book: Prom Night
By: kkoojtae
Judge: Dragon_Kitara
Title: 5/5
Fits the plot well and is not an overused name
Cover: 8.5/10
Well done. Make your fonts stand out more
Description: 5/10
Needs to be more creative.
First Impression: 5/10
Wasn’t very intriguing. Felt too rushed.
Writing style: 7/10
Need to be more descriptive and creative.
Characters actions and Decisions: 6/10
You need to add more background to them. They need a better build up as its too rushed.
Plot: 15/20
You got a good idea but it needs a bit more developing. Your story is too rushed even for a oneshot. Give your characters a bit more build up and add a few twists, your story is too predictable
Explanation: 3/5
Needs to be more descriptive.
Sense: 7/10
Needs a little more background.
Grammar, Spelling and Vocabulary: 6/10
You have a few grammar errors that need fixing. Add more to your vocabulary which adds on to your story making it more intriguing.
Total: 67.5/100
Judge: kyrjnie
Title: PROM NIGHT
4/5
It's good but it gives an entirely main idea of the plot.
Cover: 6/10
The cover is really plain the author could've added Taehyung too so it would look complete and the font for the text is really unattractive.
Description: 10/10
I really loved the description! Short and sweet but you can always add a dialogue to make it more intriguing.
First impression: 7/10
You have written it wonderfully. Just improve your grammar a bit and also add some plot twists into it.
Writing style: 6/10
Your writing style is absolutely great! I found some wrong sentence structures so do correct it and also try describing the things in a more detail manner like how Jungkook felt when he was betrayed by his own friends and all that angst building up in him seeing Taehyung, his enemy neighbor.
Character actions and decision: 7/10
Everything was portrayed well in the story but there was no answer why Taehyung and Jungkook even hate each other. Things happened a bit fast at the end.
Plot: 17/20
The plot is really unique and was carried off really well by the author with tits and bits of drama.
Explanation: 4/5
The emotions were hidden. Was what I thought while reading and try describing the person's feeling like I mentioned above, how he felt and everything include even in minor thing if it feels important to the author.
Sense: 5/10
The story just revolved around Jungkook and Taehyung so I really don't know what was their deal or how did they end up hating each other but they actually liked each other. Lack of explaining.
Spelling and grammar: 8/10
I really liked the author's vocabulary and the different words they used it made me think that this story has a really good writing style.
Total:74/100
Total: 74+67.5=141.5
Average: 71
Bonus: +3.5 (You are only following one judge)
Grand Total: 74.5
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Book: Under the Rain
By: Dasher_0813
Judge: StarV07
Title : Good 2/5
Cover: Decent but attracted. 8/10
Description: Not describe well but still it can go. 6/10
First impression: Normal, not much impressive. 4/10
Writing style: No highlighting or focusing points. 5/10
Characters actions and Decisions : It's a kind of thriller story. 6/10
Plot: repetition of same points have accured a lot. 12/20
Explanation: Not explain the much detail good going. 5/5
Sense: Well.., cool 8/10
Grammer, Spelling & Vocabs: Nicely worked over it. 8/10
Total: 60/100
Judge: DarkEmissary
Title: 5/5
Cover: 9/10
Description: 8/10
First Impression: 8/10
Writing style: 8.5/10
Characters actions and decisions: 8/10 Plot: 17/20
Explanation: 4.5/5
Sense: 8/10
Grammar, spelling and vocabs: 8/10 Total: 84/100
Review:
The cover and title gave me a sad and monotonous feeling. This is a short story but i still feel that it's a bit long. Your grammar and presentations are good and I liked your writing style. I like when writers describe situations in their story but it can get really boring with too much of these. That's why you should try to use more unique or beautiful words when you write. Short stories should give a feeling of being incomplete and make readers more attracted to know what happened next. Overall, I liked your story. It's a nice read keep it up!
Total: 60+84=144
Average: 72
Bonus: +7
Grand Total: 79
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Book: Unexpected Confession
By: Nefelibatas_world
Judge: kyrjnie
Title: 4/5
The title is really good, matches well with your story too but I just found it a bit too long and plain.
Cover: 8/10
The cover is really beautiful! Although the book Title is half visible and half fading, the subtitle is not at all visible
Try using a bright color for the text.
Description: 4/10
You added dialogues that's really good, but don't mention who says the dialogues it will create suspense. And also add some Description about Y/n and Yoongi's life.
First Impression: 6/10
The book was really great for first impression!! But just change the things I mentioned above.
Writing style: 7/10
The author's Writing style is pretty smooth. Just use bit more of description of the surroundings.
Character's actions and decisions: 5/10
I understand Y/n left her house but you should've added one more chapter where the entire story resolves. Her stepmother may have caught Y/n and then show how Yoongi protects her.
Plot: 16/20
The plot was well written and portrayed!
Explanation: 3/5
The author can also take things a bit slow and add a chapter or two, because Yoongi and Y/n, the entire confession happened too fast. And I was really confused by that.
Sense: 7/10
It made pretty good sense to me although the confession was part was really confusing, I understood it few minutes later.
Spelling: 8/10
The grammar was really good. No mistakes, but just make sure what you write is clear to the audience as well.
Total: 68/100
Judge: StarV07
Title: Suits the narration. 5/5
Cover: Can be more better. 8/10
Description: The description is in the proper way, conveys the proper amount of idea that is necessary. 10/10
First impression: It force the reader to read further and to know about the characters and that's the main chapter of every writer. 9/10
Writing style: Okay, it has been showcased and highlighted at the necessary spots but can be more impressive. 7/10
Characters actions and Decisions : Smooth moving of all the characters, well appropriate decisions that proper movements. 8/10
Plot: The plot of the story is impressive and different. 17/20
Explanation: Well explained moments and characters. 4/5
Sense: Wonderful narration with proper abstract ideas. 6/10
Grammer, Spelling & Vocabs: Proper vocabulary and grammar just a minor spelling mistake. 8/10
Total: 82/100
Total: 82+68=150
Average: 75
Bonus: +7
Grand Total: 82
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Book: Our Made-up Encounter
By: ALAND777
Judge: StarV07
Title : The title is not going with the narration. 2.5/5
Cover: The cover is quite impressive. 9/10
Description: The description is not giving much idea about the story, it can be elaborated by sharing some for the father daughter conversation. 4/10
First impression: It was just like every other story, simple & easy going. 5/10
Writing style: Simple narration. 7/10
Characters actions and Decisions It was a little realistic, that were the exact actions that can happen in that spot. 8/10
Plot: It can be executed in a more realistic and funny manner. 11.5/20
Explanation: Well done. 5/5
Sense: It didn't droll my attention much. 7/10
Grammer, Spelling & Vocabs: Spellings are correct, the way of narration is perfectly fine, it was hardly able to find any grammatical mistakes. 9/10
Total: 68/100
Judge: DarkEmissary
Title: 5/5
Cover: 8/10
Description: 8/10
First Impression: 8/10
Writing style: 7/10
Characters actions and decisions: 9/10 Plot: 17/20
Explanation: 4/5
Sense: 9/10
Grammar, spelling, and Vocabs: 8/10 Total: 83/100
Review: The title is nice and matched the story. There is a lack of details on the cover so I deducted 2 points. The description is nice but there should be more charm to draw attention. Every author should have their unique writing style and you are a bit behind on creating your own. But I am optimistic about you. The characters are cute and lively but I still feel something is lacking. The plot is nice and it feels good to read. There were hardly any mistakes but the vocabulary is not that rich. Overall a good book to read.
Total: 83+68=151
Average: 75.5
Bonus: +7
Grand Total: 82.5
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