Unakaga Thane Naan Uyir Vaazh...

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An AshAangi fan fiction 💜 Rom-Com genre ☃️ "U-T-N-U-V" A feel good Love story with lots and lots of mixed em... Mehr

INTRODUCTION
Chapter 1 - First Meet
Chapter 2 - Bromance
Chapter 3 - Love you
Chapter 4 - Friendship
Chapter 5 - Age is just a number
Chapter 6 - Her Change
Chapter 7 - Outing plan
Chapter 8 - Trust
Chapter 9 - Sagiyae
Chapter 10 - Promise
Chapter 11 - Short Trip
Chapter 12 - Usuraiya Tholaichaen
Chapter 13 - Kannamma
NOT AN UPDATE
Chapter 14 - Truth
Chapter 15 - Neethanadi
Chapter 16 - RJ's memories
Chapter 17 - Took care of
Chapter 18 - She realized
Chapter 19 - Kay & Jan's convo
Chapter 20 - Dhruv's strategy
Chapter 21 - Vishal's entry
Chapter 22 - First Hug
Chapter 23 - Vishal's confession
Chapter 24 - Am in Love with You
Chapter 25 - Ulaviravu
Chapter 26 - Arrangements for
Chapter 27 - New Home
Chapter 28 - Day before Wedding
Chapter 29 - Wedding Day
Chapter 30 - Bleeding
Chapter 31 - Decision
Chapter 32 - Private Party
Chapter 34 - Baby Came Home
Chapter 35 - Vaseegara
Chapter 36 - Pregnancy
Chapter 37 - Emergency
• Must Read •
Chapter 38 - Aadvik (His Life)
Chapter 39 - His struggle with pain
Chapter 40 - Ray of Light
Chapter 41 - Kadavul Setting
Chapter 42 - Last Hope
Chapter 43 - His Devil Side
Chapter 44 - Punishment
Chapter 45 - Bodhai Kaname
Chapter 46 - Her new job
Chapter 47 - First Meet II
Chapter 48 - Arm wrestling
Chapter 49 - First Day
Chapter 50 - The Mastermind
Chapter 51 - War with himself
Chapter 52 - Presentation
Chapter 53 - An accidental kiss
Chapter 54 - Is it his fault?
Chapter 55 - His denial
Chapter 56 - Ring Exchanged
Chapter 57 - Dream of Memory
Chapter 58 - His Care for her
Chapter 59 - (filler)
Chapter 60 - Her little posa posa
Chapter - 61
Chapter - 62
Chapter - 63

Chapter 33 - Aasai

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RECAP: They announced their wedding to office mates who attended the party.

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Krish, who had prepared dinner for her, finished and came out of the kitchen.

Krish: sapduriya jannu ma ??

Janvi: ila enaku ipo Venda pasikala da..

Krish: but tablet podanumae ma time ku.. na vennum uh otti vidava okay va

She nodded slightly after a minute, but actually was not in the mood to eat.

She felt something was bothering her.

Krish: are you okay baby ??

He asked her as he felt she was not well.

Janvi: yeah yeah am fine da..

She lied to him as she didn't want him to worry about her unnecessarily.

Janvi: aama ipo enna solli kupta ??

Krish: dha bha dha.. adhu vandhu dho (touched her bump) en baby uh than..

Krish: (gulped) are you okay va nu keta

Janvi: ooohoo apdi.. sari sari okay.. aama enna solichu un baby okay vam uh ??

Krish: baby ku sekiram uh appa kita varanum nu aasai ya irukunu solichu

Janvi: apdiya !! nejama apdi solicha ??

Krish: apdi than dii.. ila baby aama thana

He asked before kissing her baby bump.

She started to scream in labour pain.

Janvi: aaaaahhhhhh.. aaahh aaaaaahh

Krish: hey jannu ma enachu dii ??

His eyes began to shed tears without his permission after seeing her screaming.

Janvi: valikuthu da romba aaaahhhhhh..

Krish: sari onumila onumila dho ipo hospital poidalam dii jannu poruthuko

He didn't want to show her his tears and fear. He summoned a little courage.

He lifted her in bridal style and went downstairs to the parking slot.

While he struggling to open the car door, someone came near 'em and helped him.

Thanks to God for sending Shiva at the right time. Actually he came here to get a sign from Krish in office related papers.

Shiva: thaggachi kuda neyum ulla eru da machan na drive pandra Key uh kudu..

Krish placed her inside the back passenger seat and closed her side door.

He moved to the other side of the car and opened the door, got into the car and gently put her head on his lap.

While Shiva started the car, and drove the car fast and smoothly to the nearest hospital.

All the time, she screaming her heart out in delivery pain.

Janvi: romba valikuthu da enala thaga mudila.. amma aaahhhhh valikuthu da

Krish: konjam ma konjam poruthuko please papa kaga dii please jannu ma..

Janvi: ena..la mu..di..la daaa aaaahhhh

Krish mv: enalaiyum mudila dii ne ipdi aluratha pakka.. ayo kadavulae kapathu

He wordlessly hugged her neck tightly.

He gulped his tears and parted away.

Krish: onumila ma dho ipo poidalam hospital ku.. pakathula vandhuom.. Deii Machan konjam sekiram po da machan..

Shiva: nee first.. pathata padama iru da

Janvi: aaaaaahh (screaming in low voice)

Her eyelids slowly close due to weakness.

Krish: hey jannu ma mayangatha enna paaru dii bayampuduthatha.. paaru ma

He kept tapping both of her cheeks on the way, to regain her consciousness.

Soon they reached the hospital, Shiva first got down from the car and opened the door, Krish carried her in bridal style.

They rushed to the emergency ward.

The staffs in the hospital gave him stretcher and he made her lay on that.

Charge nurses took her inside the ward.

Krish and Shiva waited outside the room.

Shiva: Bayapadatha thaggachi ku onum agathu.. kulandha nalla padiya porakum

Suddenly Krish hugged him and cried, the tears he had suppressed so far, now flowing uncontrollably.

Shiva patting his back to comfort him.

Krish: onum agathula.. avala apdi pathutu enala mudila da Machan.. avana enaku osuru ava ilaina apo nanum ilada..

Shiva: Deii.. konjam neram summa iruda

Shiva broke the hug and made him to sat on the waiting chairs, outside the ward.

Shiva: nee igayae ukkanthu iru da.. na dho poi oru call panitu vara.. rendu perkum onum agathu da machan ok va..

He just simply nodded back at him.

Shiva went outside to inform someone.

He dialled the person's phone number.

Shiva: hello mapla..

Dhruv: sollu da machan..

Shiva: adhu mapla... (He informed everything) sekiram rendu perum vanga

Dhruv: sari da nanga odanae varom..

Both hung up the phone call.

Jan: ennachu face la sudden change??

Dhruv: Janvi delivery pain vandhutam.. ***** hospital la admit Panni irukagalam

Jan: ayayo Namma kuda ilama poitomae

Dhruv: sari vidu.. nalla nerathuku Shiva andha pakkam poirukan time ku hospital reach panitagalam.. doctors Ula poirukaga inum enna edhunu solalayam

Jan: sari va namalum hospital pogalam..

Dhruv: hmm.. na poi Raj te solitu vara

Jan: nanum Kayal ye inform panitu vara

The two informed to them that they are leaving earlier because of emergency.

On the way to the hospital the two reported this to both the families.

The two reached the hospital and within the next few minutes both family members arrived at the place.

All faces show concern, while Krish face shows tons of aniexty.

Dhruv: Machan onum agutha da..

Krish shooked his head in disbelief.

He cracking his fingers knuckles and neverously marching here and there.

Janani's parents witnessing all this.

The nurse came outside the ward and asked them "who's patient's husband?"

Without any delay Krish came front.

Krish: nan than nurse Is she okay now ??

Nurse: neega konjam Ula varegala Sir

Seetha: yean ma ?? Enachu en ponnuku

Nurse: onumila maa bayapadathega.. rendu perum safe than kandipa normal delivery than agum but unconscious uh irukaga avagala conscious uh vachukanum.. adhan ivagala kupdura

Krish: sari vanga nurse Ula polam..

Nurse: kaiya nalla sanitise panitu.. surgical apron and mask potu sekiram Ula vanga.. time kamiya iruku sir..

He went inside the ward and was shocked to find her unconscious.

He patted her on the cheeks.

Krish: jannu ma edhiri dii mulichu paaru

Doctor: avagal te pechu kuduthuta erunga.. avaga mulikanum sekiram avagalum push panna than mudiyum..

Krish: adiyae Inga parudi.. papa sekiram veliya varanum nu Adam pudikutham..

She slowly opened her eyes.

Krish: paaru paaru.. mulichuko dii

He continuously tapped her both cheeks.

Krish: push panuviyan dii.. edhiri dii..

She got irritated to his continuous talk.

Krish: konjam try panni paru dii baby uh push Pannu ma you can do it jannu ma..

She gathered all her strength and slapped him.

Janvi: eruma madu.. yean da ipdi kathura

He gasped while others chuckled.

Doctor: (controlling his smile) adika ivlo energy irukuna.. apo uga baby uh sekiram pathudalam push panegana..

She nodded slightly due to lack of energy.

She pushed her baby bump as hard as she could. She could not bear the pain.

Janvi: aaaaahhhhhh aahhhh aaahhh

Within minutes, she gave birth to a baby girl. The new arrival is screaming at high pitch. The doctor showed the little soul to Krish. He kissed her bloody forehead.

Krish received the newborn baby from the doctor with a little fear.

His eyes glistening as he looks at her unopened tiny eyes, tiny fingers and toes.

Krish: my world's little princess.. She is

A smile crept across her face.

Krish: see sirikura.. ava ava appa va recognise panita pathiya jannu ma..

A lone tear escaped from Janvi's eyes.

Soon she wiped it before anyone notice.

She plastered a smile looking at him.

Even before the baby was born he began to love that baby so much.

He gave his little princess to her mother to get her mother's warmth.

After giving the baby to her, he hugged her shoulder and kissed Janvi on the forehead. She closed her eyes in reflect.

She saw her baby with blurry eyes.

Her pains flew away when she saw the baby she was carrying in her womb for 10 months. Her eyes shedding happy tears. She kissed the baby's forehead.

After a while, the nurse took the baby away from them to clean and vaccinate.

Janvi also dozed off due to tiredness.

Everyone outside here hugs each other in joy. Shiva distributed sweets to all.

The nurse came back with the baby after clearing and all. She gave the baby to Janani and left the place. Janani's eyes brimming after seeing the tiny thing.

Everybody rasichufying the new member of their families and forget to feed her.

She again started to scream at high pitch due to hungry. Janani handed the baby over to Janvi and Revathy (Dhruv's mom) advised her how to feed the baby.

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Jan: en papa ku papa va.. enala innum idha nambavae mudila Ammey..

Seetha: hmm (blank face)

Jan: Ammey acchaa na uga rendu perteyum Kenji ketukura en papa kaga.. please avala edhukoga.. Ugaloda kovam varutham lam niyayam than aana mathavaga pesugalukaga uga Ponnoda nimmathi ya parikathega.. enaku theriyum ava ugalukum chellam nu aprm yean ivlo nadanthum ugalala avala edhuka mudila than Enaku inum purila..

Devaraj: pasamu akkarai um ilaina iga ipo ipdi ava room ku veliya ninnutu Iruka matom Janani ma.. we love her..

Seetha: aama da.. (cupped her cheek) avala edhuka mudiyama lam ila.. egalukum konjam time theva patuchu ellam accept panika avlo tha mooley..

Jan: purithu Ammey acchaa irundhalum

Seetha: adha vidu.. un mugam yean ipdi dull uh iruku Saptegala neega first tu ??

Jan: inum ila Ammey.. party le irundhu cab la nanga direct uh iga vandhutom..

Shiva: na venuma sapda edhavathu vangitu varatuma uga rendu perkum..

Dhruv: ilada Machan.. paravaila vidu

Devaraj: enna mappillai idhu.. already party arrangements la tired aagi irupega

Seetha: aama mudhala rendu perum saptu veetuku poi konjam rest eduga

Jan: ila Ammey (but seetha cut off her)

Seetha: mooley paranjathu pola keku..

Janani raised her eyebrows questioningly towards Dhruv and he just shrugged his shoulders in return.

Jan: apol Cheri Ammey.. pinney nanga kelamburom poitu morning varaam..

Shiva: Mapla vanga Krish car key enta than iruku na ugala drop panitu varen..

Dhruv: sari okay.. va polam Kannamma

Jan: hmm da dho varen.. Ammey acchaa jannu papa vae nalla nokkiko cheriya..

Seetha & Devaraj: nanhgal nookikolam jan mooley.. nee bharthavodo sellu (husband) nalla thugitu naalae kalathae vandha madhi keto.. (said in unison)

The two nodded and left the place.

After the two ate outside, Shiva dropped them off at home.

Shiva: sari da mapla nalla rest eduga poi

Dhruv: okay da Machan.. edhum thevaina just call me da I will come..

Shiva: adhula nanga pathukurom da.. aga evlo per irukom.. neega party tired la irupega poi rendu perum nalla thuguga da tomorrow Sunday tha so no problem..

Dhruv: apo sari da pathu po.. safe drive

Shiva: okay da mapla.. varen sister bye

Saying he started the car and left the place.

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The two came into the house and locked the door.

He grabbed her wrist and pulled her.

Dhruv: enakum Penn kulandha vennum

Jan: adhu enna boomaiya kadaila irundhu vangitu vara.. Namma tha konjam extra effect potu ready pananum

Dhruv: extra effect potu ready panna adhu enna continental dish uh dii..

Jan: shup.. eppa pathalum pesu mattum than seyal la onumila.. ne adhukulam sari pattu vara mata da manga madaya..

Dhruv: edheyyy enna dii Kannamma posukunu purushana ipdi solita ??

Jan: hehe summa bujuku bujuku bujuku

He shooked his head in disbelief.

Dhruv: theriya vendiya nerathula therijupa dii.. indha manga yaru epdinu

She pinched his both cheeks playfully.

Dhruv: aama unaku edhum aasai ilaiya ?

Jan: enaka.. (thinking)

Dhruv: hmm aama ugaluku than madam

She leaned towards his ear and whispered something in her husky voice.

Jan: Ondra renda aasaigal
Ellaam sollavae orr naal podhumaa ??

Dhruv: yean.. pothatha ?? (base voice)

She smiled and nodded her head negatively.

Dhruv: inaiku indha iravu evlo solla mudiyumo.. avlo sollu Kannamma..

Jan: sollatuma ?? (Husky voice)

Dhruv: hmm.. sollu (base voice)

She left herself from his hold.

She took her scarf and blindfolded him.

Dhruv: hey enadi pandra.. hey ??

Jan: shhh.. en aasai ellam solla poren

Dhruv: adhuku edhuku kanna kattiruka

Jan: nee en aasaiya ellam feel pananumla.. adhuku than da purusha..

Dhruv: purila Kannamma.. Ena feel ??

She silently left the place without replying.

Dhruv: hey ega Iruka.. badhila kannum

He streched his arms and searching her.

Dhruv: ipo ne variya.. ila na open panava

He inhaled the fragrance of the scented candle.

Dhruv: iga tha irukanu theriyuthu but enna pandranu tha therila.. kanna thorakava pondatti.. purusha Pavamla..

(Song name: ondra renda aasaigal)

Ondra renda aasaigal
Ellaam sollavae orr naal podhumaa
Anbae...iravai ketkalaam...
Vidiyal thaandiyum...
Iravae neelumaa

She came out of their room singing.

En kanavil...aaa..haaa
Naan kanda...aahaaa..
Naalidhudhaan...
Kalaaba kaadhalaa
Paarvaigalaal...aa..haaa..
Palakadhaigal ...aaa...haaa..
Pesidalaam...
Kalaaba kaadhalaa

She went near him and kissed his both eyes.

Ondra renda aasaigal
Ellaam sollavae orr naal podhumaa
Anbae...iravai ketkalaam...
Vidiyal thaandiyum...
Iravae neelumaa

She circled him and teased him with her fingers.

Pengalai nimirndhu paarthida
Un iniya ganniyam pidikudhae
Kangalai nera paathudhaan
Nee pesum thoranai pidikudhae

She cupped his cheeks and planted a forehead kiss.

Dhooraththil nee vandhaalae
En manasil...mazhaiyadikkum
Migapidiththa...paadal ondrai
Udhadugalum...munumunukkum...

She darted towards his lips and brushing her lips with his and singing the line.

Mandhagaasam sindhum
Undhan mugham
Maranam varaiyil en nenjil thangum
Unadhu kangalil yenadhu kanavinai
Kaanapogiren...

She slowly peppering wet kisses all over his face expect his lips.

Ondra renda aasaigal
Ellaam sollavae orr naal podhumaa
Anbae...iravai ketkalaam...ketkalaam...
Vidiyal thaandiyum...
Iravae neelumaa

She removed her earrings and bracelet then give them to him. He frowned.

He rubbed blindly and found a table next to him, then placed it on top of it.

Sandhiyaa kaala megangal
Un vaanil oorvalam pogudhae
Paarkaiyil yeno nenjilae
Un nadayin sayalae thonudhae

He stretched out his arms and began to search around her as she made no noise.

Nadhigalilae...neeraadum...
Sooriyanai... naan kanden
Vervaigalin thulivazhiya
Nee varuvaai...yena nindren

She took off her red net embroidery saree and threw it in his face. He grabbed it and felt it was her saree.

Nadhigalilae...neeraadum...
Sooriyanai... naan kanden
Vervaigalin thulivazhiya
Nee varuvaai...yena nindren

He tried to open his eyes, but she stopped him from doing so.
She clasped her fingers with his and dragged him to their bedroom.

Unnaal en nenjil aanin manam
Naanum sondham endra ennam tharum
Maghizhchchi meerudhae...
Vaanai thaandudhae saaga thondrudhae
Thondrudhae

She let go of his hand as the two entered the room. He again stretched out his arms and searched her around.

Anbae...iravai ketkalaam...
Iravai ketkalaam...
Vidiyal thaandiyum...
Iravae neelumaa
Iravae neelumaa

He gasped as his hand touched the soft one while looking for her. Realizing what it would be, he quickly took his hand.

En kanavil...aaa..haaa
Naan kanda...aahaaa..
Naalidhudhaan...
Kalaaba kaadhalaa
Paarvaigalaal...aa..haaa..
Palakadhaigal ...aaa...haaa..
Pesidalaam...
Kalaaba kaadhalaa

She took off his T-shirt and threw it away in air. She took his hands and placed them on her body and he could see her curves and slopes with his fingers.

After touching her bare waist and her asset. He could not resist himself from unleashing the blindfold.

(Imagine Idha Vida dim aana night light)

He amazed at the simple and elegant beautiful decor in their bedroom.

(DISCLAIMER: 'A' censor scene 🙈 sixteen oo eighteen oo padikuravaga padikalam 🥶 it's ur choice)

She blushed and pushed him into the cot.

She hovered over him balancing her arms. She smashed her lips with his.

He taken aback by her sudden action.

She smooched his upper lip while he slowly sucked her lower lip. After sometime, he sucked her upper lip harshly then she sucked his lower lip.

Without breaking the kiss, She inserted her right hand into his pants. He gasped.

Using this, she entered inside his mouth.

Their tongues fight for dominance.
Both tasted every corner of their mouths.

After satisfying with the passionate kiss, she left him. She moved down to his crook of the neck and left hickeys there.

Dhruv: hey Kannamma you are torturing me

Jan: first night aanaiku nee enna venumae tempt panni torcher panela..

Dhruv: adhuku revenge uh dii idhu ??

He moaning her name at the pleasure her soft lips gave him.

She closed the bed net completely.

When she about to remove his pants.

He sat jerked on the bed. She frowned at him. He himself took off all his clothes. She quickly covered her face with her hands. He took her hand from her face.

She gulped hard and averted her gaze.

Dhruv: en kanna parudi Kannamma..

She looking everywhere but not him.

Dhruv: nanum sari pondatti pandrathu panitu potum nu patha.. en patience check pandriya ?? Edhula venna porumaiya irupa but idhula mudiyathu..

She widening her eyes to his statement.

Dhruv: idhu vara ne panna na patha.. ipo idhu en turn.. and don't underestimate the power of Mr. Dhruv Vishwanathan

She blinked her eyes like a lost kid.

Now it's his turn and he blindfolded her eyes. He hurriedly removed all her clothes including inners. Both became naked.

He bit her bossoms. She winced in pain. Then he licked there to ease the pain.

He kissed her collarbone, shoulder blade, jaw. He moved down to her belly button and did something to make her moan louder. He kissed her thighs, knees, anklet and toe fingers. Then he moved upwards and kissed her nose tip.

He untie the scraf and kissed her eyes.

After giving many wet kisses all over her body. He finally entered inside her body.

At first she closed her eyes in pain. While a few tears escaped from her eyes. He sucked her tears and nodded his head negatively. Soon her pain turned into pleasure. Both moaning and groaning.

After a while, the two reached their end at the same time. Both panting heavily.

Their two bodies are connected to each other, not only the body, but also their soul and sweat are mixed together.

He kissed her forehead and said.

Dhruv: I love you Kannamma..

Jan: Love you too da purusha..

She pushed him down and started kissing him. And it triggered him again.

As they suffocated for air, she broke the kiss and both chuckled. He rolled her down and looked into her eyes. Again he began the duty of making her moan loud.

They proceeded for further more rounds. That night passed by lust in Love.

.........................................To be continued :-)

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