OS -
1) A BOND BEYOND WORDS by Mansi_Creations
Title : 5/5
A unique and intriguing title, just one look at it and it compels you to check it immediately.
Cover + Blurb : 9/10
Cover is just perfect for the story and is completely gelling well with it, getting an insight what's it all about. Blurb is intriguing and interesting but I wish it should be a bit more elaborate.
Originality + Creativity : 10/10
The plot is completely original and the way the author has kept her reader's hooked with the twists and turns, by bringing in her own creativity in it is just amazing.
Character Development : 20/20
All the character's are given due importance and their transition is shown perfectly throughout the story.
Grammar : 19.5/20
No grammatical mistakes and spelling errors just a bit here and there.
Interaction with Reader's : 10/10
The author has interacted with all her reader's.
Draw : 5/5
It draws in a reader instantly in it with a very beautiful message conveyed through it.
Overall : 19.9/20
Overall it's just a beautiful book that you crave to read again and again. I loved and enjoyed it a lot.
Total : 98.4/100
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TS -
1) A NIGHT WITH MY KIDNAPPER by Mansi_Creations
Title : 5/5
The title is very impressive.
Cover + blurb : 10/10
Cover is perfect for the story and blurb too. Just reading it, makes the reader curious and intrigued to check it out.
Originality + Creativity : 9/10
The plot is very much original and I just loved it.
Character development : 18/20
While reading it, I just couldn't stop myself from reading till the very end of the story, and still it makes me to read more and more.
Grammar : 20/20
It's just perfect, no improvement needed.
Interaction with Readers : 6/10
Interaction with the reader's is a bit less according to me, though the author has replied to everyone but still can do more.
Draw : 5/5
It makes a reader draw in the world created by the author from the very start till the end it keeps them hooked.
Overall impression : 19/20
Really enjoyed it.
Total : 92/100
2) Magadheera by MalathiKumar6
Title : 5/5
It's a unique title and just one look at it, can understand what the story is all about.
Cover + blurb : 5/10
Cover is a big disappointment, not at all suiting the story, plus author's name is not visible too. Blurb is really interesting and intriguing that one gets carried away to check it out once.
Originality + Creativity : 10/10
Full marks on it. Though it's based on the movie of the same name, the author has incorporated her own dimension here and has shown her creativity in the story as it progresses. I liked it.
Character development : 18/20
It's another impressive aspect from the author and has given importance to each and every character's in her story. Needs to work more on getting them expressive.
Grammar : 14.9/20
Too many grammatical errors and spelling errors which didn't let me enjoy it as much as I wanted it to do.
Interaction with Readers : 10/10
The author has interacted with every reader's of her, so it's a great effort from her side.
Draw : 5/5
It instantly draws reader's in the story no improvement needed in it.
Overall impression : 18.5/20
Overall it's a amazing and a great story, though the writing style needs to be changed as it makes one confused where the story is heading or who is speaking to whom otherwise it's a wonderful read. In later stage it gets changed which is nice!
Total : 86.4/100
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SS -
1) TASHAAN WALA PYAAR by Mansi_Creations
Title : 5/5
It's a unique title and just one look at it, can understand what the story is all about.
Cover + Blurb : 10/10
Cover is too good and impressive. Blurb is very intriguing and interesting that one gets carried away to check it out once.
Originality + Creativity : 10/10
It's completely original and the author has very beautifully brought in her creativity to the fore. Loved it.
Character Development : 19/20
The author has given equal importance to every character's in her story and how the reader's feel for them.
Grammar : 17/20
It needs a bit more improvement, otherwise it's just perfect just some shorts forms are used.
Interaction with Reader's : 8/10
Interaction is a bit less according to me.
Draw : 5/5
It instantly draws reader's in the story, so no improvement needed.
Overall : 19.3/20
Overall it's a lovely story, just the points which I mentioned needs improvement, otherwise it's a great book.
Total : 93.3/100
2) LAAL ISHQ by Jasminearun
Title : 5/5
The Title is perfect and unique for the story.
Cover + blurb : 5.5/10
Cover is nice but not impressive, needs to work on it immediately. Author's name is also not too visible. Needs to improve the description too, can't understand what's the story all about.
Originality + Creativity : 7.4/10
The concept is nice and intriguing with suspense, I liked it. But needs to work up more in the creativity department.
Character development : 15.9/20
It's impressive and it's been shown properly but somewhere down the line, the character's seem confused as the author makes them take back up.
Grammar : 12.5/20
Too many grammatical errors and spelling errors in the story, which didn't let me enjoy it thoroughly.
Interaction with Readers : 5.8/10
Interaction with reader's is very less.
Draw : 3.5/5
Initially it draws in reader's but a few parts in it, you get somewhere confused with what the characters actually want, and it seems the author is a hurry to finish it up.
Overall impression : 17.9/20
Overall it's a nice story, but the writing style needs to be changed immediately.
Total : 73.5/100
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LS (FF) -
1) KUCH KUCH HOTA HAI by Mansi_Creations
Title : 5/5
The title is very impressive.
Cover + blurb : 6.9/10
Cover is really wonderfully made, but the minus point is in the blurb, blurb is there but not elaborated much.
Originality + Creativity : 9.8/10
Though it's inspired from the bollywood movie, but I must admit that only the theme is inspired from it, and rest is all the author's imagination, which is a lovely attention from her.
Character development : 18.5/20
A proper character development is there.
Grammar : 16/20
No grammatical mistakes or spelling mistakes just usage of short forms, otherwise it's just perfect.
Interaction with Readers : 5.5/10
Needs to interact more.
Draw : 5/5
It instantly draws in reader's.
Overall impression : 19.5/20
Overall it's just a beautiful book, really enjoyed this book, and you crave for it to read again and again. Loved it!
Total : 86.2/100
2) OUR INCOMPLETE STORY (1) by Chocolate_ChocoPie
Title : 5/5
The title is very impressive and perfect for the story.
Cover + Blurb : 7.5/10
Cover is really beautiful and gelling well with the story, perfect for it. Blurb is intriguing of a reincarnation dark story but not too elaborate.
Originality + Creativity : 8.7/10
The plot is completely original like it's my very first time in reading a reincarnation story and liked how the author has brought in her own creativity but yes, can work more in that department. Haven't heard or read of the concept before.
Character development : 17/20
I liked how the character's are developed from the start and the changing dynamics between them is perfectly done but yes, it doesn't show up much as you don't get to feel for them.
Grammar : 15/20
There are no grammatical mistakes but spelling errors are there, which didn't let me enjoy it thoroughly.
Interaction with the Reader's : 8/10
The author needs to interact more with her reader's.
Draw : 5/5
One instantly draws in the story from the very start as it's presented in that way.
Overall : 17.8/20
Overall it's a lovely book and the way the author has moved it is nice, just the points I mentioned above needs attention.
Total : 84/100
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Series -
1) TERA MERA RISHTA PURANA (BOOK 1, 2 & 3) by Mansi_Creations
Title : 5/5
The title is very different and unique one which is very much perfect for the story.
Cover + Blurb : 10/10
All of the cover’s in the three books are perfectly gelling well with the story line. A perfect blurb is given for the stories, and how there is a connection between the three books, and how it picks up after the events in the first book, which culminates in the second book, and finally in the third book.
Originality + Creativity : 10/10
It’s very much original plot and has been very creatively presented in a very unique style.
Character development : 20/20
All the character’s in the story are given equal importance, along with their ups and downs, that reader’s are bound to be connected with them throughout.
Grammar : 19.9/20
It’s just perfect just a bit here and there in the first book.
Interaction with Reader's : 9.9/10
The author has interacted with almost all her reader’s.
Draw : 5/5
It makes reader’s intrigued and curious just by having a look at it, and they are instantly pulled in the world created by the author.
Overall : 20/20
Overall I just enjoyed this wonderful story, written and presented amazingly by the author. Totally loved it.
Total : 99.8/100
2) Kuchh Ankahi Batein (Book 1 & 2) by KRV2020
Title : 5/5
The Title is just great giving in what the story is all about, amazing.
Cover + blurb : 6.2/10
Cover is not impressive at all, just made it randomly. Blurb is nice but wish it was elaborated but there is a great connect between the two books.
Originality + Creativity : 9/10
The plot isn't original much, have read many books on it but yes, the author has beautifully woven it with her creativity which is fully seen in the write up.
Character development : 19.1/20
It's nice as all the characters are given equal importance but the drawback is reader's can't connect with them emotionally, you don't feel for them as the author has intended to do. But later on, it has impact, so its nice!
Grammar : 14.1/20
There are many grammatical errors and spelling mistakes in the write up which doesn't hold up a reader's attention for long. Another major problem is the writing style which needs to be changed, as it's very confusing as to whats happening, who is talking to whom and what.
Interaction with Readers : 7/10
The author has interacted with almost all her reader's but needs to work up a bit more on it.
Draw : 2/5
It instantly doesn't draw in the reader's from the very first chapter as it takes it's own sweet time but that again is a point where a reader might feel disinterested because it does'nt arouse their interest in the story itself. Needs to work on it.
Overall impression : 17.8/20
Overall it's a nice story with a good potential as the author has very nicely took hold of the two books connecting it progressively, not letting it go haywire in between.
Total : 80.2/100
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TS -
1) CAN LOVE HAPPEN TWICE? by Mansi_Creations
Title : 5/5
It's a impressive title and unique one.
Cover + Blurb : 10/10
Cover is just perfectly fitting in with the title and story. Blurb is really interesting and intriguing, that one just can't stay from reading it.
Originality + Creativity : 9.8/10
The plot is completely original and the way the author has incorporated the book in between is amazing with lots of twists and turns.
Character development : 20/20
All the character's has been given a progressive approach and outlook, their changing dynamics is being shown perfectly.
Grammar : 19.8/20
No such improvement is needed, just a bit here and there.
Interaction with Reader's : 10/10
The author has interacted with all her reader's.
Draw : 5/5
From the very start, reader's are drawn in the world created by the author that you feel you are a part of it.
Overall : 19.9/20
Overall it's a very wonderful book and written very amazingly by the author. Keep it up!
Total : 99.5/100