Dharmyudh : The Rewritten Des...

By MrKiller03

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Dharmyudh, which means 'Battle for Justice' What happens when fate decides to take a steep turn ? Could it ch... More

Prologue
Covers
Origin Part 1 : Bharat - Rahoo
Origin Part 2 : Devvrath Bhism
Origin Part 3 : Dronacharya
1. Karn's Birth
2. Princess Kunti's Marriage
3. Maharaj Pandu's Curse
4. Birth of Pandavs and Kauravs
5. Lord Parsuram
6. Amrit meets Shukracharya
7. Banasur Vadh
8. Kaurav - Pandav
9. Weird Dreams
10. Dwarika
11. The Unfortunate Day
12. Back to Hastinapur
13. Back To Hastinapur 2
14. Strange pair of eyes
15. Kala Pradarshan
16. Night Stroll
17. Market Visit
18. Panchal war
19. Memories
20. Yuvraj Karn
21. Marriage Proposal
22. Bhanumati
23. Swayamvar
24. Abducted
25. Fire Borns
26. Krishna Karn Milap
27. It's just the start
*Trailer*
28. Awantika
29. Lakshagriha
30. Pandavs dead ?
31. Kamakhya
32. Bheem Hidimba
33. New Generation Begins
34. Kampilya
35. Strange Brahmin
36. Draupadi Swayamvar
37. Karn Draupadi's Marriage
38. Hastinapur Division
39. Khandavprasth
40. Nakul Awantika
41. Complications
42. The Sunset
43. Conflicts
44. Koshal
45. First Official War
46. Mayalok
47. Dantvatra Vadh
48. Koshal - 2
49. Marriage Again ?
50. Karn & Pallavi's Marriage
51. Bhanumati's Decision
52. Was It A Sin ?
53. Surprise Attack
54. Vasudev Pondrak
56. Misunderstanding
57. Curse ?
58. Help or Favour
59. Evil Never Prevails
60. Unwanted Encounter
61. Seeking Answers
62.1 The Confrontation
62.2 Powerful Weapons
62.3 Past Still Haunts
63.1 Promise
63.2 The Midnight Talk
64.1 Way Foreward
64.2 Hidden Secret - 1

55. Trouble Everywhere

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'Didn't we had a deal with Maharaj Chitrangad, has he completely forgotten the discussed points. I tried to put up with his earlier indiscretions but this is now high time'

Bheem, Sahdev, Karn, Draupadi and Pristi sat around a circular table, debating on immediate measures required to resolve the conflict between Anga and Manipur.

Bheem :- Saw him for the first time I already guessed he ain't the one keeping up with his promises.

Pristi :- Every now and then, his border post guards enter our territory to take a note of our security measures, but when confronted, they act like lost villagers who lost their trail back home.

Karn :- Did you send a complaint letter to Maharaj Chitrangad ?

Pristi :- I did but apparently he doesn't care or is himself involved because reply never came and we really can't afford a war right now.

Karn sighed deeply, nodding in acceptance.

Draupadi :- He really has some big nerves breaching all the negotiation points so balantly. As it was decided he won't disturb neighbouring territories.

Sahdev :- Except in circumstances of an approaching threat. Does any similar situation exists between two kingdoms.

Pristi :- No, moreover we don't want any conflict or tension, just want to be left alone to recover the losses.

Draupadi :- Then what's his problem ?

Karn :- His daughter.

All eyes turned up at him.

Karn :- I think he has some issues with his daughter, I don't remember her name but the one who acted like a maniac...

Bheem :- Yeah, who walked around in war armour, whose voice had turned horase due to trying to talk like a man.

He chuckled along with Sahdev.

Sahdev :- I think she fancied being a man, probably got the wrong genes.

Draupadi shook her head at them.

Karn :- Yeah whatever, she is the one to instigate him all the time, and I won't be suprised at all if she is behind this too.

Draupadi :- What should we do arya ?

Pristi :- Maharaj, Indraprasth is probably our last hope, please consider this request.

Closing his eyes to think for a moment, Karn then looked at his younger brothers, who sat expecting a command.

Karn :- Bheem, can you give a visit to Maharaj Chitrangad and try talking to him.

Bheem :- I doubt if it'll make any difference but, there's no harm trying either, so I will.

Karn :- Good, take Arjun along with you, and make him understand, peacefully if you can and forcefully if you have to.

Bheem gave him a delighted smile.

Bheem :- Sounds fun to me bhrata, I think I'm gonna love it.

Draupadi :- Just try not to initiate it though.

Karn :- Sahdev, you and Nakul will leave for Anga along with princess here, and make a report for borderline activities. Also if you can, try looking through the amount of damages that occured due to flood. Lets see what we can do to help.

Pristi :- I can never thank you enough Maharaj for all this help, I certainly didn't expect this all.

Draupadi :- We just want to maintain friendly with as many kingdoms possible. Very soon we will be holding Rajsuya Yagya and more support we can get, the better.

Pristi :- I assure you Maharani, you will have full support from Anga Pradesh.

Draupadi :- Maharani again ? I told you to call me jiji, you are like my sister okay ?

Pristi :- Sure.

Karn :- Decided then, lets dissolve this meeting here and take some rest, we do have to inform others about this discussion.

Exiting the conference room, all left for their respective chambers.

'997'

'I mean... I saw him standing near his balcony, reading a letter while smiling'

'998'

'It certainly isn't enough to prove anything but don't you think it's highly unlikely about bhrata Yudhisthir'

'999'

'Don't you think where this all is pointing'

'1000'

'Are you even listening ?'

Completing his pushups, Arjun wiped his sweat with a towel and looked at his younger brother.

Arjun :- I am listening Nakul, but your words sound more of a nonsense. He might be viewing some reports and their results would've gone as expected, why shall I think about something not being right here ?

Nakul slapped his forehead as he fake glared at him.

Nakul :- And he will ask for those reports to be delivered via a messenger eagle ?

Arjun :- Hmmmmm... It makes some sense though.

Nakul :- What if, he's seeing someone, I mean not exactly seeing but... there might be another person, a lady, and something's going on.

Arjun :- How will I know and moreover, he's our elder brother, he deserves some privacy, we should just leave it upto him.

Saying this, he got up to leave and Nakul followed him behind.

Nakul :- Yeah, I know this bhrata but think about this also, he is our elder brother, wouldn't it be better if he gets married first.

He stopped to observe his brother's expression, Arjun sighed and kept his hand on Nakul's shoulder.

Arjun :- You don't need to worry about that, Jeysth is here to take care of all this.

Nakul :- Then why don't we tell this to Jeysth, he won't have any problem asking bhrata Yudhisthir.

Arjun chuckled shaking his head.

Arjun :- Not everything you say turns out to be nonsense bro, lets go then.

Laughing, they both proceeded towards their elder brother's chamber.

Humming a song, Draupadi walked through hallways, observing the surroundings.
A few maids bowed to her as they passed by, to which she smiled.
Dust flying through lazy sunlight falling on floor warmed the cold stones.

Suddenly, she stopped, feeling as if someone might be following her.
She turned to scan around, but nothing seemed out of order.

Shrugging her shoulders, she began to walk away, but a few steps ahead and she could again feel another pair of feet approaching close.

This time she stopped to look back, glaring with her fiery eyes.

Draupadi :- Who's there ? Simply come out or it won't be good, GUARDS!!

Just then a flower vase fell down, crippling to peices as it hit the floor and Angraj Vikram stepped out from behind the curtains

She eyed him suspiciously as he flashed his toothy grin, rubbing his palms as he walked towards her.

Vikram :- A very good morning Maharani, please accept my greetings.

Draupadi :- Don't you think it's a little too late for good 'Morning', Maharaj.

Before he could reply, a few soldiers came running and bowed before her.

Guard :- You called for us Maharani.

Draupadi :- It's okay, everything's fine, you can go.

Nodding their heads, they left and she turned back to face Vikram.

Vikram stood surprised at her regal queen attitude, he remembered the meek but arrogant princess at Kampilya swayamvar but the woman who now stood in front of him was completely different.

'It'd be fun to see her begging on my bed'

His eyes drank every inch of her form, trying to penetrate through the red yellow saree covering her figure.

She cleared her throat to snap him out of his thoughts.

Vikram :- Where were we... Oh... late for morning, you see, Maharani, I don't have a habit of waking up so early.

Draupadi :- It's just an hour before noon.

Vikram :- Seems like I drank a little too much yesternight... But I'm all fine today. I was just taking a walk around, observing the beauty of Indraprasth.

He said looking her from head to toe.

Vikram :- But it's so grand, I might need some guidance...

Just the next moment, Pristi rushed towards them, interrupting his talk as she stood next to him.

Pristi :- I can help you bhrata, I too was taking a walk around, no need to disturb the queen.

Draupadi smiled at her.

Draupadi :- It's nothing, and if you want I can assign someone to give you a tour around, you will love it for sure.

Vikram :- There's no doubt...

Pristi :- We'll be okay, you can relax.

Vikram gritted his teeth as she dragged him away, Draupadi sighed and left, not before giving him a one last look.

Vikram :- What do you think you're doing ?

He jerked his hand away from her grip, Pristi glared at him angrily.

Pristi :- I can ask the same for you. Don't you forget we are here to ask for help and if you start you nuisance here too, we won't have anyone to look back for support. I know damn too well why you're here, but you dare not do that, I warn you bhrata, they are very respected people, and you won't be wanting the wrath of Pandavs' on yourself.

Vikram :- That beauty is even worth dying for, it's sad to see that only he gets to enjoy her. Is she a fool ? If she wanted, she could've put the apsharas of heaven to shame, how could she live with him.

Pristi :- It's not our matter what she does or what not, but you don't do anything stupid that we loose this help too. You've already offended many kingdoms, trying to molest their princesses, I'm only putting up with all your nonsense because of my promise given to Pitashree.

Vikram :- Did I tell you to give some damn promise to him or anyone else ?

Pristi :- No, but you just come with me, I'll not allow you to get away from my sight now.

He tried to resist but she insisted him to go with her.

Karn closed the door behind him as he entered his room to see his pretty wife standing in front of dressing mirror, removing excess jewelry.

Reaching up from behind, he wrapped his arms around her waist, pressing her against him. She just smiled at him through the mirror as he rested his chin on her right shoulder.
Inhaling the faint aroma of rose mixed with her fragrance, he kissed the back of her neck, making her shudder.
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Outside Karn's chamber, near the hidden window,
(Every room in Indraprasth royal palace has a hidden window or a emergency exit, designed for safety)

Nakul slowly retreated back from near the hidden window and shook his head.

Arjun :- What ?

Nakul :- I... think it's not the right time to interfere.

Seeing his blushing face, Arjun understood the situation and both started walking back.

Nakul :- But wait, there's one more person who can help us.

Arjun :- Seriously Nakul! You know what, I'm done now, I don't see anything coming out of it so just go on with your 'plan'. I am going to see bhrata Bheem.

Saying so, he went away to the other side, Nakul sighed at his brother's retreating figure.

Nakul :- Yeah whatever. I should go and ask bhabhi Pallavi...
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Back in Karn's chamber,

Draupadi noticed a scroll in his hand and pulled it out.

Draupadi :- What's this arya ?

Karn :- This letter is for you from Sivi.

'For me ?'

She thought and opened the seal for another scroll to slip from within.

Karn :- So it's actually two, seems like you might be forgetting something very important. But who is this person knowing you from Sivi ?

Draupadi :- Don't you remember, my friend at the swayamvar, the princess who was there beside me, she is Devika, princess of Sivi.

Karn :- Hmm.. I never gave it a second thought after guessing that she might be some relative. But why this wake up call ?

He picked up the second scroll lying down.
Draupadi's face lit up as she read the letter from her friend, and read it again to make sure she didn't miss anything, meanwhile Karn checked the other letter which had the royal stamp.

Draupadi :- I'm so happy arya, Devika's swayamvar is fast approaching, and she wants me to be there to help her with rituals and preparations.

Karn :- Wow! Now that's called a real surprise.

Draupadi :- What do you think ? Should I go ?

Karn :- I certainly hope not, but, she's the friend who was there for you when it was your time so you should also be there for her at this special time of her life.

Draupadi :- And what's that letter for ?

Karn :- I think this one is from Maharaj Chandrasen, a letter of invitation for swayamvar of his only daughter Devika. I am requested to either come there and participate or send a representative.

Draupadi tilted her head, gazing at him as he went through the details, a smirk appeared on her face.

Draupadi :- So are you intrested ?

Karn :- Why will I b...

He noticed her smirk and gave her a cocky smile.

Karn :- It's not really a bad idea... I should give it try.

She slapped his arm, chuckling.

Draupadi :- You dare not do that!

Karn :- But seriously, you think I'd want that ? Moreover it's time for Yudhisthir to get married too. I know he is happy that Nakul is getting married but he is elder, Bheem is also married and things seem pretty clear for Arjun, that leaves him and Sahdev. Though Sahdev is still young and we have some time but I think Yudhisthir should go and participate in your friend's swayamvar.

Draupadi :- Mmm... I'll be happy to have her as sister in law, as she's also my friend but will bhrata Yudhisthir agree to go there ? He dosen't even seem interested in getting married, set this all aside.

Karn :- I will talk to him, and make sure he agrees to go and take you there, but you will also have a task to convince your friend that Yudi is good choice for her. Well, I don't know much about her but... if she's your friend then I think she will be good for him too.

Draupadi :- You want me to play as their 'matchmaker' ?

Karn :- something like that. Whatever... I'll go inform him about it, you should take some rest.

He kissed her forehead and went out, not before closing the door behind.

Outside Yudhisthir's chamber,

Nakul and Pallavi peeked in through the gap between curtains, trying to listen to the conversation going on.

Pallavi :- You sure bhrata Yudhisthir is hiding something, I haven't seen him lying before.

Nakul :- I'm pretty sure and there's a difference between hiding and lying. Nobody asked him so he didn't need to lie.

Pallavi :- Okay...
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Karn handed the scroll to Yudhisthir.

Karn :- And here is that invitation letter from Maharaj Chandrasen. I want you to go there and participate in the swayamvar. Okay ?

Yudhisthir noded with a smile at his elder brother.

Yudhisthir :- Ok Jeysth, I will go there and participate as a representative from Indraprasth.

Karn felt a little perplexed.

Karn :- You don't have any problem ?

Yudhisthir :- I... No.

Karn :- Well then, I didn't expect it to be this easy, all the best then. May you 'not' return single.

He laughed at his brother's reddned face and patted his back before walking away.
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Yudhisthir sighed in relief as he heard the door close shut.
Getting up, he read the letter and put it aside, moving towards his bed. Tilting the mattres, he pulled out another scroll and opened it to admire the sketch of beautiful Sivi princess.

'What the hell!!'

Alarmed, Yudhisthir turned to see two more people in his room.
Pallavi had a surprised look on her face whereas Nakul stood snickering.

Nakul :- So this is going on behind everyone's back bhrata Yudhisthir! Wow... that was truly unexpected, atleast for others.

Yudhisthir :- N... Nakul... bhabhi...

He stammered trying to hide the sketch but Nakul grabbed it from him and showed it to Pallavi.

Nakul :- She is really beautiful, isn't she ? Well, I am certainly jealous that she is going to be my sister in law...

Pallavi raised her palm at him, gesturing him to keep patience.

Pallavi :- Who is she bhrata ? I don't think anyone heard you mention her before.

Yudhisthir :- Uh... well... she... she is...

Nakul :- Tell tell... who is this 'to be sister in law'.

Pallavi :- Now you stay quiet.

She warned Nakul with a strict face.

Pallavi :- He's your elder brother, atleast let him speak.

Nakul noded making a hand gesture of zipping his mouth shut. Now they turned to Yuvraj of Indraprasth for answers, who took a slow breath and sat down.

Yudhisthir :- She is Devika, princess of Sivi.

Nakul :- Devika... is she the same princess whose swayamvar Jeysth wanted you to go and participate ?

Pallavi again looked at him sharply, making him quiet, Yudhisthir gave a slow nod.

Yudhisthir :- Yeah she is.

Nakul :- Uh huh, you know that made me wonder what's wrong with bhrata Yudhisthir, he simply agreed to go and participate in her swayamvar without any objection or questioning.

Pallavi :- It's enough now Nakul, you either stop teasing your brother or you are welcome to leave.

Nakul :- I apologise bhabhi, but I can't hold myself, I want to know how it all started and what happened

Pallavi :- And for that, you first need to let him speak freely.

Yudhisthir gestured to the chairs around the table on the other side where he previously sat with his elder brother discussing his will to adhere to invitation.

When seated, he poured himself a glass of water and began to narrate his tale,

Yudhisthir :- It all started back when we were staying in Kampilya as Brahmans. We lived close to outskirts, so everytime we needed to come to village, we had to cross a forest path, that went parallel with a highway. I worked in a nearby temple of Lord Shiva so I had to walk down the road everyday and I grew quiet familiar with it. Then one day...
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Flashback =>

'Om Namah Shivay, Om Namah Shivay...'

Yudhisthir murmured walking along a side of road as he counted the beads of rudraksh in his right hand.

Partly overcast weather, on a cool morning. It rained heavily last night to the air war humid and ground below feet still wet.

He noticed a chariot at some distance ahead, seemingly stuck in mud, as soldiers guarding it were trying to push it out.

A lady stood few feet behind, supervising them, her back facing him so he couldn't see her face.

Yudhisthir :- Do you need any help here, Devi ?

He said as he approached them, confirming his doubts about the stuck wheel. Mud around it had turned soft, so it wasen't easy to push it out.

She turned abruptly, startled by his voice, looking him in the eye as he now stood in front of her.
He smiled at her politely to which she joined her hands and greeted him.

Lady :- We will be grateful Brahman Dev, please help us take this chariot wheel out.

Yudhisthir :- You can see that mud is soft here, try making the horses pull it out.

One of soldiers wiped his forehead and turned to him.

Soldier :- We tried that already, they are tired after the long journey.

Yudhisthir :- Hmmm...

He moved to the front and caught the steeds, swiftly releasing the horses, then wrapped the ropes around his arms.

Yudhisthir :- When I count to three, jerk the chariot upwards together, lets see if I can pull it out.

Soldiers chuckled but agreed to it, while the lady watched him with amaze.

Yudhisthir :- One... Two... THREE!!!

Saying so, he pulled on the ropes with all his power and as the soldiers jerked up from back, stuck wheel popped out of mud and began rolling, surprising others as they stood with mouths wide open.

Having reattached the steeds to horses, he turned to them and they thanked him.
The lady produced a pouch filled with gold coins, she introduced herself as Devika, princess of Sivi.

Devika :- Please accept this small reward, I know we can't repay you for this help but atleast this is what we can do.

Yudi simply shook his head, smiling at her.

Yudhisthir :- I am sorry Devi, but all I did was help, and I don't charge alms for helping people. You should continue on your journey, wherever you were headed.

She noticed reddned marks on his arms where ropes were held. It was then that she observed his warrior build physique, he didn't look like some ordinary Brahman. Long beard grown purposefully to hide the facial features and we'll combed hair tied up behind the head.

He cleared his throat to break her chain of thoughts, she didn't realise she had been staring at him all this time.

Devika :- At least we can drop you to where you were going.

Yudhisthir :- That is no problem either, I work at the nearby temple of Lord Shiva. You don't need to worry about me, I cross this path everyday, I am familiar with the way.

He turned and quietly walked away and she too climbed her chariot and proceeded for towards the Kampilya royal palace.
Still, she couldn't shake the thought of the strange man she met on the way...
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Present =>

Nakul :- So this is how you met her for the first time.

Yudhisthir :- I didn't intend to bump into her, it was just accidental.

Pallavi :- I assume you saw her next at the temple where she happened to be for her prayer.

Nakul :- How do you know that ?

Pallavi :- I guess it's pretty obvious now. She might be in constant thoughts about 'the strange man' and curiosity killed the cat and she reached the Mahadev temple.

Yudhisthir :- Yes, I saw her when...

In Vikram's chamber,

Pristi made him sit back on his couch and requested the servants for some wine.
They looked at her with surprise but bowed before her and complied.

Pouring a glass for her brother, Pristi cautiously slipped a sleeping pill in his drink and handed it to him.

Pristi :- Here, Drink all you want and pass out, but please don't do anything that might create troubles.

Vikram :- It's... It's a surprise my dear sister, untill yesterday the person who hated my drinking the most is telling me to drink and be out.

Pristi :- As much as I hate it, I can't risk the future of Anga in a battle we would most likely loose. Since you are not bothered at all there must be someone to take up the responsibility.

Vikram :- You know me very well dear sister, I'm... I'm desperate... I've wanted her for so long... since the first time I saw her playing with some Village girls... you know how happy I was to go and participate in her swayamvar, but all my hopes were dashed to ground by the man whom you are asking for help. What do you know how that makes me feel ? All I want is a chance... a... a night to spend in her arms, conveying my love... can't you see that.

Pristi :- Just drink and enjoy in your land of dreams, this is not the time for arguments.

He smelled the intoxicating grape wine and took it all in one go, showing her a toss. But that's when he realised the familiar taste and glanced back at her.

Vikram :- You... you did it did it again... you...

He tried his best but his eyes slowly gave up, replacing his vision with darkness.

Vikram :- You don't want me...

She shook her head, trying not to show her displeasure and left.

Yudhisthir's flashback =>

Devika took blessings from the priest and headed back with her friend.
Coming down the stairs of temple, they were greeted by other people who waited in queue.

She spotted a man drawing water from a distant well, away from crowd, he looked familiar.
Draupadi patted her arm, turning her attention.

Draupadi :- What happened ? Lets go.

Devika :- You go, I'll join you shortly.

Draupadi shrugged and left her behind. Devika walked up towards the well and smiled seeing him filling the buckets.

Devika :- Pranam.

Startled, Yudhisthir turned to notice the Sivi princess standing in front of him joining her hands.

Yudhisthir :- Pranam, how can I help you today princess.

Devika :- By telling me your name.

Yudhisthir :- Huh ?

He gulped feeling something not right in the situation, a drop of sweat trailed down his forehead.

She wanted to laugh seeing his befuddled face.

Devika :- You were in such a hurry that day, that you left without telling me your name. I couldn't shake the fact that you look more like a warrior than a saint. Who are you ? If you don't mind me asking.

Yudhisthir closed his eyes, sighing.

Yudhisthir :- I will tell you, but you need to promise to not tell anyone.

Devika :- Okay...

Yudhisthir :- I am Pandu putr Yudhisthir, second Pandav.

For a moment, she couldn't believe her ears, eyeing him from head to toe as she contemplated his answer.

Devika :- When... how...

Yudhisthir :- It's a long story, we've been like this for months.

Devika :- We... you're not alone ? Where are your brothers ?

Yudhisthir :- They must be around the town somewhere, working to earn some.

Devika :- What really is going on ?....
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Present =>

Nakul :- Wait, what all is happening ? She asked and you simply told her. You were lucky that she kept her promise, what if it was someone else, you could've got us in trouble bhrata.

Yudhisthir :- You don't expect me to lie, do you.

Nakul :- Then why didn't you tell us about her ?

Yudhisthir :- No one asked me, moreover I don't think it had anything to do with you.

Nakul :- That's not fair bhrata, how can you say it has nothing to do with me...

Pallavi :- Okay now let it go, whatever's happened is gone... so how did it go next bhrata.

Yudhisthir :- We parted, she used to come and visit the temple regularly, we used to talk, and from then on, it turned to letters, I haven't met her since.

Pallavi :- But I am happy everything went pretty smooth. And now you both can get married, it doesn't happen to everyone, you are very lucky.

Nakul :- Not just lucky bhrata but hell lot lucky. Have you thought of telling this to Jeysth.

Pallavi :- Not now, surprise him, let him know after they get married, it will turn out to be an even bigger surprise for others.

Nakul :- Yeah, I can't wait to see everyone's reaction at revelation.

Pallavi :- We should leave now, give brother some time to rest.

Nakul :- Okay, but remember, I'm not letting you go that easily bhrata.

As they left, Yudhisthir leaned back in his chair feeling relieved.

'Gurubrahma Guruvishnu Gurudevo Maheswarah, Guru Saakshaat Param Bramha Tasmai Shri Guravey Namaha'

A demon chanted again and again, standing on foot with hands joined above his head.

Narkasur had been on the same spot for years reciting various mantras to impress Lord Bramha, the creator of universe.

Sky above his head was overcast with dark clouds and lightening screeched through the air, sending fear in all directions.
Strong winds uprooted trees, displaced large boulders, swept houses of people, heavy rain caused severe floods.
But none of it were sufficient enough to make Narkasur even twitch in fear, and he relentlessly continued his penance to please his lord.

There was a sudden change in atmosphere around him as everything was restored back to normal. His devotion for his lord passed all tests and Param Pita Bramha appeared in front of him.

Lord Bramha :- Vatsya, I'm impressed by your unwavering devotion for me. Open your eyes Vatsya, and ask for the boon you desire.

Narkasur opened his eyes and smiled contently as he found his lord pleased.

Narkasur :- Prabhu, if you really are impressed with my devotion, please grant me the boon to become immortal and invincible.

Bramha :- Vatsya, that is not how it works, everyone who has taken birth will have to die one day or the other, it is a basic law of universe and the ultimate truth. Even I am not immortal, I may have created this universe but I am too created by God of Gods, Maha Vishnu. I can grant you invincibility but I can't make you immortal. Instead, I can grant you that you can only be killed your mother.

Narkasur was overcome with joy hearing this and bowed before the lord.

Narkasur :- I am grateful Prabhu, by granting me this boon, you have made me immortal, afterall, which mother would kill her own son.

Lord Bramha chuckled and shook his head.

Lord Bramha :- You have no idea what all is possible in this world. But I remind you, power comes with responsibility. It is duty of strong people to protect the weaker ones and safeguard their rights. If you misuse your powers, arrogantly cross your limits to disrupt the peace, you will be put down by him.

Narkasur :- Thank you, O Lord, I will make sure to use my strength and powers upto the best.

Lord Bramha dissapeared and Narkasur looked up at the sky, sound of this frightening laughter echoed everywhere as he rejoiced completion of his penance.

Narkasur :- I am coming... Beware Indra!!!!

Future Glimpse =>

Suchitra tried her best to wriggle loose but the restraints around her wrists and waist were painfully tight.

Narkasur gave her an evil smirk and shook his head.

Narkasur :- Mura!!

Mura :- Yes Prabhu.

Narkasur :- Stand here and guard this place. I want this woman to be tied up in my garden untill she understands that she is mine from now. Don't let her die, I want her to live and see that there is no other option available, she will have to accept me as her Lord and serve me. I shouldn't see as much as a single scratch on her body, I don't want to break her bones, I want to shatter her belief in Gods

Suchitra :- In... in your dreams.

She hissed angrily, to which he just laughed.

Narkasur :- If you go with that, you were mine the second I laid my eyes on you. Don't worry, I have 16000 other maidens to satisfy me untill you make up your mind. I like this attitude of yours, and it'd be fun to see it breaking bit by bit.

He laughed once again and left.

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What the hell is happening ? Suchitra... tied up.... In Narkasur's palace.... how... when.... where.... who will save her ?
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And the big twist everyone was waiting for, will be there in the next chapter.

Tighten your seatbelts, storyline is going to take a steep turn.

Things are going pretty smooth for now, what will happen when a sudden unexpected situation turns it all upside down.

What do you think about Manipur Princess.... Chitrangada ?
How will be her first meet with Arjun ?

Do you want any Karn - Pallavi moments before the upcoming twist or I should move directly to it ?

Word count :- 5087 words.

Target :- 71 votes.

Do comment if you have any suggestions.

Will see you in the next chapter, untill then, take care and bye.

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