SIN OF BETRAYAL

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"Do you think betrayal never gonna pay back?" Come on let's go and seek it! One line ⬇️ It's a crime thrill... More

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By koos_flower

<Past>

Luca: hobee nee ingane poyya ente kayinn medikkum kalla kali kalikkathe nine ippo aa paambu vizhungi 24 il alle povendey enitt nee evideya nikkane 36 il ooh?

Hoba: eda podaa enne dhee aa paambu aanu vizhungiyath..... *pout*

Luca: mm mm njn onnum kaanunilla enna avalde vichaaaram........

Hobi: njn um kaanunnundeee

Hoba: nee poda....

Suga: kittiyallo enna dice idu....

Jinnie: *sighs*


Moments later.

A/u POV.

Jinnie Appurathekk maari irunn entho alojichond irikkunnu..... And joonie noticed that. Joonie melle eneett Jinnie de aduthekk poyi.

Joonie: jinnieee njn kore neram aytt sredhikkuva entha preshnam?

Jinnie: onnulla joonichaa nj~~~~ eh? *joon cut off*

Joon: n-nee ippo entha viliche?

Jinnie: joonichaa enn... Enthe?

Joon: eyy onnulla *he just smiles* mm nee kariyum para.

Jinnie: onnulla ente kayyi nalla pain und....

Joon: mm

Jinnie: hobi oodu mindiyille?

Joon: ooh avanu ippo enne onnum venam enn illa....  Vere aalkkkar undallo.....

Jinnie: *sighs* angane onnulla avane joonichanu ariyavunne alle? Poyi mindikke chummathe ingane.... Njn alle parayane po.....

Joon: mm nokkam...

Jinnie: nokkiya pora angott poykko....po...

Joon eneett hobi de aduthekk poyappo avidey hobi um illa Luca um illa.

Beak: eh nee poyille?

Joon: engott?

Hoba: eh ningalu arinjille joonicha?

Joon: enthuvaadi thelich para...

Hoba: jestichan varuvaa.... Avar pick cheyyan poyekkuva.....

Joon: eh seriously? Ente karthave nee ente vili kettu..... Eda hobi ninakk ullath njn tharam.

Hoba: eh?

Joon: onnulla....

Beak: hobee aa Curry kk ullath vannu ready akkikke piller ippo varum.

Hoba: aah~~~~ dha varuva *she left*

Jinnie: Jestin? Ath ara?

Joon: oh nee kandittilla alle avane? Ah hobi kazhinja pinne ente a to z kariyungalum ariyavunna ore oral..... Ente Jesta..... Nee varunnathinu one month munne avan avante appante aduth poyi US il. Pullikkranu entho health issue..... Now he is back.

Jinnie: ohoo.... Appo angane oral und alle? Mm inippo soul mate ne kittumbo nammale marakko?

Joon: ninne avanu ariyam njn ellam appol appol avanod parayum...

Jinnie: ayisheri.








Moments later.

Joon: aliyaaaaaa

.......?: aliyan aa aardey aliyan? Nee entha varaanje?

Ah apo ith aanu nammade swantham jestichan. He is so smart kind and lovely one.

Name: Jestin Sebastian.
Age: as your wish
Side business aytt magician anu. (not professional)



Joon: ayyo da nee varumbo ividem arelum okke venaloo..... *he jumped to him*

Jesta: da da ente naduvu odikko nee? Enth mudinja wait aa da panni ninakk?

Joon: nee ente mwuth alle mwutheeee.... Angotte sahikk😌😝

*Le hobi : *nee pakapokkuvanallee thendiiii*


Beak: ah nee vanno? Yaathra okke engane undaayrunnu. Appanu kuzhaopam onnum illallo alle?

Jesta: ah aunty OK aa....

Hoba: halo halo..... Excuse me...

Jesta: ooh itharu ente chundhari kutti alleyo?

Hoba: ooh enitt ippo anu onnu sredhikkunnath polum.... Hm... Kollam Kollam.... Enikk onnum kondu vannille?

Jesta: ee penu....  Mm inna pidicho.... Abraca dabra🪄 * he give a white rose to hoba*

Hoba: ooh ee magic karane kondu njn thottu..... Thank you thank you....

Jestin: *chuckled at her cuteness*

Joon: eda meet my fri~~~~ mm jinnie right? *Jesta cut off*

Jesta: uff ivan vallipulli thettand ellam enne areekkunnundaayrunnu.... Anyway Hy I'm Jesta mm sry jestin

Jinnie: ah Hy. Nice to meet you.

Beak: mathi mathi bakki okke food kazhichitt mathi vanne va......

Jos: ah ath and thanne ellarum vaa vann kazhikk....

Angane avar food kazhikkan poyi.....







Time skips.
Night 10: 37 pm.

Joon and jesta was sitting on veedinte varaantha.

Jesta: ah enthayalum nannayi ninakk um venallo oru koott okke aval perfect match aa ninakk.... Nee paranj appo njn ithrem presheekshichilla aliyaa *teasing mode on* really smart and gorgeous..

Joon: poda poda... Hm... Alla ennalum nee pettannu surprise aytt varum enn njn vicharichilla enthayalum nee vannath nannayi illel njn....

Jesta: mm nee um hobi um vazhakk analle?

Joon: eyy vazhakk onnulla... Ninakk ariyallo avan avoid cheyytha entho enikk areella..... Pinne aa Luca you know avante chilanerathe swabhavam enikk angotte pidikkanilla..... Avan aanu aa hobi ne illathe akkane..... Pinnee avanu Luca ye paranja pidikkillallo.

Jesta: *chuckled* enikk vayya ivane kond..... Eda avanu pennum kallum oru weakness aanu ennath ozhicha vere kuzhappam onnulla....

Joon: oh ath thanne dharalam anallo? Mm ath potte.... Eda sambhavam nee ente mwuth aa.... Ennalum enikk ninte oru help venam.....

Jesta: mm mm hobi de munne adayaum chakkaryum avanam enn aayrikkum.... Athokke OK but avasanam avan eduthitt chavittumbo enne vilichekkalle...

Joon: thendiiiii mm OK deal.

<End of Past>





~~~~~~~kookiee ee nee avidey enth edukkuvaa...?

Kookie: oh mood poyi pull...... Shey appan jealous adikkane kaanan nalla reaamayrikkum.... Ennalum ente joon uncleeee.... Ningale njn namichu....

Suga: edii kookieeee

Kookie: oh varunn varunn....

Suga: nee avidey enna esukkuvadi njn kure naalaytt sredhikkuva aah...... Phn um pidich irunitt Mark illenki anu ah njn paranjilla enn venda.

Kookie: ooh amma njn padicholam.... Mm pinn~*her phn starts to ring*

Suga: ara?

Kookie: eh h-hyunji

Suga: ah avalod ingottoke onn erangan para.....

Kookie: ah *athum paranj aval nice aytt mungi*

Tae (OTP) : kookiee enthayi nee eranguvallo alle?

Kookie: taeicha Inn nadakkum enn thonnunilla amma und..... Mm namakk adutha week ayalo?

Tae: ooh mathi.... Nee veruthe tension onnum avanda ninte safety kazhije enikk enthum ullu..... Alland njn ninte kalippanum avanilla nee ente kaanthariyum avanda...

Kookie: mm mm..... Ennale ente mwon poyi enthelum kazhikk njn onnu adukkalayil poyi ammene sahayikkatte..... Alla chimmi chechy povunnundo tour nn?

Tae: povunnundo enno? Ividey athinte prehasanam ippozhe thudangi.... Aah njn um senior avum appo noikko...... Ninte ichan povunille? Alla ente Koch enn thotta nannaye? Adukkalayil povunne okke kollam aarum chaakathe sookshichonam...

Kookie: ah ichanum povunnund...... Eh poda..... Thirich space ship il po alieneee...... Njne ippo nalla Koch aanu.

Tae: ah ee alien povumbo bhoomil ninn oru muyalum kunjinem kettikondey povu....

Kookie: ayyada sugich ketto..... ~~~~kookieee *Beak cut off*

Tae: ah chell chell vilikunnu.....

Kookie: tattaaa......

*call ended*





Beak: ninne tha avalu vilikunnu....

Kookie: ah varuva.

Suga: ah avalu vecho?

Kookie: a-ah vechu...

Suga: mm enna ente Koch poyi aa paathrangal okke kazhuki veykk.....

Kookie: oohhhhhh *pout* alla ichan enthiye?

Suga: ah avan tour nn enthokkeyo medikkan und ennum paranj aa Jackson nte okke koodey poyittund....

Kookie: ayisheri....



Meanwhile yoonjahaxiu

Yoongi: uff enth traffic aada....

Jack: ah ath thanne.... Eda avanmar angu ethittundavum......

Yoongi: ah nill kathich vidam.....

Avar traffic mariyathum vandi parappichu vittu..... With no helmet and book um paper um.

Jango: nice

Kuttan: oru petti case nn ulla vakupp nom kaanunnu.....

Jango: oh avidunninu maathram alla ath vaayikkunna ellarkkum manassilavum ooh ingane oru manushiyan.....


Jack: eda thendi pathukke poda onnamathe book um paper um illa........

Yoongi: eh boo-book um paper um onnullatha eth ooleda vandi aada.....

Jack: hehe ente thanna...

Yoongi: ah best.... Valla pela~~~~~~ooh nakkeduth valach nokk pela *Jack cut off*

Jack: ente ponne ath ara enn nokk.... Matte SI aa Kai...... Ingerde idikk kayyum kanakkum illente aliyaa....

Yoongi: ah nee medicho....

Police man: ah nirth nirth.... Mm engotta 2 um koodey rocket pole eh? Evdraa ninte helmet?

Yoongi: ah ath pinne sire njngal oru hsptl case....

Kai: mm enthado?

Police man: sir over speed with no helmet.

Kai: aha ponn makkal ingott erangikke.... Mm entha ithra athiyavashiyum mm? Ninte helmet evidey?

Jack: sir njngal oru hsptl case aytt povunnatha....

Kai: ayisheri.... Mm book um paper um edu.....

Jack: ath pinne....

Yoongi: book um paper um illa sir....

Kai: ath sheri appo kayyil ee vaka saadhanagal onnum illathe aanu ente makkal ravile thanne kutti yum parich ingott ponnath alle..... Eduth idedo jeep il..... Ninte okke thanthamar vanitt nee okke poya mathi..... Avar um ariyanallo makkaldey leela vilasangal.....

Jack: sir please sir... Nj~~~~~kerada vandil *kai cut off*

Kai: pidich kettedo thaan enth nokk~~~~unclee *someone cut off*

.....?: vandi enthiye?

Kai: ah makkale chimmi....

Jack: eh jimini.... Uncle aa? Rekshapett mwone
Yoongiiiiii......

Yoongi:..........

Kai: dhe kidakkunnu car.... Edutho..... Pinne samayathinu vannekkane......

Chimmi: ah OK set.... ~~~~~jiminiii *Jack cut off*

Jack: diiiii

Chimmi: eh nee... Eh Yoongii *she rushed to them* ningal enth ividey?

Jack: edi njngal Pett nikka vandil book um paper um illathond Station il ponam enna paranje... Edi ninakk parijayam ulla aalu anel onn samsarikk.... Hsptl case anenna njngal paranje.....

Chimmi: ah nikke njn paranj nokkam *she lookes at yoongi. But he looks away*

Kai: eh entha mwole ninakk ariyo avare?

Chimmi: ah uncle ente frndz aa clg ile.... Oru accident case aa unclee athanu avar kittiya vandi eduthond vannath..... Ennod paranjirunnu.... Onn vittekk unclee.....

Kai: mm ano.... Enna va.... *ahem* ingu va 2 um.

Jack: eda va.... Entha sir...

Kai: mm avalu paranjath kondu pokko.... Vandi vayikitt book um paper um aytt Station il vann edutho.... Pinne ith oru sheelam akkanda

Jack: mm sheri sir.... Thanks jimini....

Chimmi: eyy poda its ok...... Mm ningal engotta?

Jack: tour alleyo? Kurach shopping avanmar avidey nippund mall il.....

Chimmi: ah njanum angotta enwo avidey nippund..... Mmm oru kariyum cheyy vaa keru.... Njn drop cheyyam....

Yoongi: oh venda nee vadaa....

Jack: eda poda.... Ingott va aval illayrunnel ippo kaanam aayirunn.....

Yoongi: *sighs*



While drive.

Chimmi: mm ennayalum tour 5 days und so namakk maximum polikanam..... Pinne mam nod paranj bangalore last akkanam ketto......

Jack: ah ath njn um vicharichatha set cheyyam.....

Yoongi still onnum mindathe irippanu.

Chimmi: mm jacksa nee ividey erangikko njngal car Park cheyyth itt varam.

Jack: ah sheri poytt va.

Yoongi: nikkeda njn um varunnu.

Chimmi: evidey ponu? Avidey iri manushiya.....

Jackson erangiyathum chimmi vandi eduthu.

Yoongi: edii nirth njn erangatte.....

Chimmi: onnu adangi irikk pooche njn ningale kollan kodupova onnum alla.

Yoongi: *sighs in frustration*

Chimmi nere vandi parking area ilekk ketti....

Yoongi: *sighs and about to leave the car*

Chimmi: yoongichaaa

Yoongi just shocked a little. Because pettannulla vili moopparu predheekshichilla.

Chimmi: edo thaan enthina enne ingane avoid cheyyane? Njn enth cheyyth itt aa?

Yoongi: because I hate you.... *it was a sudden reply*

Chimmi: *it's hurts her but she didn't express it* oho enna I love you. *athum paranj she kissed on his cheeks*

Yoongi: malar😠

Yoongi get out from the car. Enitt onnum mindathe Jackson inte aduthekk poyi.

Jack: ah nokk varunnu.....

Han: ah da va

Enwo: chimmi...

Chimmi: ah di va namakk pani thudangam thooth vaari edutho ellam....

Xiu: ah ivalu innu mudippikkum.....







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Evng 4: 27 pm

Jack: ente ponno ethra roopaya pottiyath enn nokk.....

Yoongi: ah inn appan enne vtl kettunna kariyum doubt aa...

Xiu: ente Patti enthayalum  Innu purath ayrikkum....

Han: eh?

Xiu: ah enne purath akkiyal swabhavikam aytt njn Patti koottinakath ayirikkum.....

Jack: ah nee ath sthiram akkikko nallatha....

Xiu: thyreee

Han: jiminiii kazhinjo shopping?

Chimmi: ah oru vithathil theerthu..... Alla enthanu kanditt nalla amount pottittund enn thonnunnallo?

Han: oh ningal dey athra onnulle.... Nammal pavangal....

Enwo: eda eda nee parayunne kettal thonnum allo njngal entho Ambani de makkal anenn....

Jack: ooh pinne ath ullath alle?

Chimmi: eda venda venda.....

Angane avar avidey samsarichond ninn appo avarde aduth ninna oru lady de Koch ball road ilekk poyappo ath edukkan vendi Road ilekk odi.

Xiu: eda nokk aa Koch.....

Jack: eda vandi varunneda.....

Lady: ayyooo mwoleee ente Koch....

Yoongi oodi chennu kochine eduthathum opposite varunna car yoongine idikkan enna kanakkinu varunund.....

Chimmi: yoongichaa vandi....... *she rushed to him and push him to the other side*

Yoongi kochinem kond appurathekk therichu veenu..... Appozhekkum car aduth ethi but car karan sudden break ittath kodu chimmine idichilla...... Pakshe aa car varunna force kanda chimmi pettanu back ilekk veenu.....

Yoongii: chimmiiiiii~~~~~~~ *he screamed while stood up*

Appozhek aa lady vann kochine medichu.... And baby was still crying.

Yoongi rushed to her he thought car hits her.

Yoongi: do thanikk kannilledo thanikk break idan padillayrunno? *he shouted* ch-chimmi are you OK? Kuzhappam onnullalo? Evidelum idicho? Eh? *he placed her head on his lap*

Jack: sry sir avan pettanu.....

Man: its OK.

Jack: eda avale idich onnum illa angeru break ittatha.... Avalu pettannulla force il veenu poyatha.

Yoongi:........... *his eyes were locked with her*

Chimmi: *she was still looking into his eyes*

Yoongi: mm eneekk pathiye.... Hsptl il pono? *he grab her*

Chimmi: enne entha viliche? *her eyes was tearing up* entha viliche enn?

Yoongi: a-ah ath pinne..... *yoongi petttan eneettu... Chimmi um*

Enwo: edi nee OK alle?

Chimmi: ah di njn- njn ok aa....

Lady: othiri nanni und mwone..... Allel ente kunj....

Yoongi: eyy ath kuzhappayilla chechy pokko....

Lady left.

Yoongi: mm povam?

Han: ah...

Chimmi: njn drop cheyyam.

Xiu: venda Di entel car und....

Chimmi: mm..... *aval yoongi ye onnu nokki but yoongi mindathe thirinju nadannu*

Enwo: edi avan sheri kum pedichu.... Mm enikk thonnunnu.... Avanu chilappo..... I'm not sure but...

Chimmi: *she just smiles at her*




Meanwhile.

Han: eda nee enthinada angerodu choodaye? Anger break itt illayrunnel ippo avalu pettiyil ayene...

Yoongi: daaaaaa

Han: eh? Enthada? Njn angane paranje alla.... Mm..... Mm...... Enikk manassil avunnund.......

Yoongi: enikk avalod onnum illa..... Pettanu veezhunnath kandappo....

Han; ayinu njn ninnod paranjo ninakk avalod enthelum und enn..... Nee va mwone yoongi kutta....

Xiu: *chuckled*

Ah angane chimmi oru vazhikkum yoongi vere oru vazhikkum poyi....



Avidannu cut cheyyth
night at sope residence.

Kookie: ichaa ningal ith kore neram ayallo ee iripp irikkunne? Entha ithrakk chinthich koottanum maathram?

Hobi: ooh avan nalathe tour um plan cheyyth irippavum.....

Suga: povunne okke kollam edakk edakk vilichekkanam.... Ho inippo poytt varunne vare oru samadhanavum kanillallo ente eeshoyee.....

Jos: oh nee kidann tension adikkathe ente koche avan Koch kunjonnum allallo?

Suga: ah atha ente pedi.........

Yoongi onnum mindathe eneettu poyi.....







Meanwhile at namjin residence.

Jinnie: Ella dress um onnum kuthi nirach kondu ponda pinne eppo kulichalum ee enna thech venam kulikkan..... Vellam maari kulich mudi thozhiyanda.... Pinne njngal illa ennum paranja valich vaari kazhichech vayaru vedhana ennum paranj kidann karayaruth..... Nthelum undel appo enneyo appaneyo vilichekkanam......

Chimmi: ente ponnooo ith ethramathe vattama ente amma ee parayane......onnu mindathe irikk.....

Jinnie: ooh allel um ath angane anallo? *she left to kitchen*

Joonie: avalkk nee povunnathinte sangadama nee jenichel pinne oru day polum ninne maari avalu ninnittillallo athinte aa.....

Chimmi: mm ath ariyam appa......

Tae: edi povune okke kollam adangi othungi irunnonam....

Chimmi: ooh sireee.... Mm njne ippo varam *athum paranj chimmi eneettu adukkalayilott chennappo*

Chimmi: aha ayisheri dialogue um adich terror aytt vanitt ividey ninn karayuvano? *she hugs jinnie*

Jinnie: k-karayano njno? Onnu poyedi *while wipe her tears*

Chimmi: amma ingott noikke.... Mm enthe..... Enthina karayane?

Jinnie: nokki pone makkale edakk edakk amme vilikkanam.... Ellardem koodey thanne nikkanam ketto?

Chimmi: njn entha kunj kuttiyo?

Jinnie: ah nee enikk ippozhum kunj thanna *sobbing*

Chimmi: mm enna njn ponilla..... Ente jinnie kochine njn engana vishamippikka? *her eyes starts to teary too*

Jinnie: eyy makalu poytt vaa..... Amma tension kond paranjath alle? Karayanda *she hugs her lil one*

Chimmi: urapp ane? *tearing up*

Jinnie: ahnne

Chimmi: mm enna..... Enna enikk gulab jam undakki thero?

Jinnie: pine entha ippo tharam....

Tae: enikkum * from behind the door*

Jinnie: eda kalla nee olinju kelkkkuvanalle?

Tae: njn maathram alla.... Appanum...

Joonie: ooh ath pinne njngal chumma.... *weird smile*

Jinnie: mm mm keri va randum. avidey ninn kooduthal viyarkkanda......





After a while.

Chimmi: ah ee pic frame cheyyth kittiyo? Mm kollm alle?


Kuttan: oh ente thala

Jango: potta ningal thala thirikkunnathinu pakaram phn thirich pidich nokk manushiya...

Kuttan: hehehe

Tae: ah njn pwoliya alle amma.....

Jinnie: pinnille....

Chimmi: appaa njn alle pwoli?

Joonie: alla pinne.......

Jinnie: mm mm mathi chimmi nee poyi kidakkan nokk velupinu eneekkande?

Chimmi: ah sheriya.... Enna sheri good night.....

Jango: Ah angane avar ellarum poyi kidann urangi.....

Kuttah: ah enna nee va namakk pack cheyyam tour pondey? Inippo nale ninte birthday akoshichilla enna parathi vendallo?

Jango: ooh kettiyolde birthday polum osinu akoshikkan nadakkunna oru manushiyan.... Ah at least ningal kk orma enkilum undallo santhosham.....

Kuttan: sho I W U..... 😌

Jango: po avidunna ee manushiyan...... 😝

Ah avidey ee chapter theernnu...... 💜

_______________________________________________

OK bye bye😘💜

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