Galwakdi -- The Hug Of Love.

By MKS512

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Dev, a librarian, is super strict and ruled person and has Obsessive compulsive personality disorder (OCPD)... More

Ek Nayi Kahaani.
Characters.
Meet Dev And Sonakshi.
Asha Meets Sonakshi.
Dev Lashes Out At Sonakshi.
Growing Friendship.
A Date With......
His Fear.
Dev Misses Sonakshi.
Epilogue.

Dev To Confess His Feelings.

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By MKS512

At night, when Baldev was passing from Sonakshi's room, he saw her reading a book. Seeing this, he went inside. Sonakshi looks towards Baldev. Baldev sits in front of her.

Baldev- waah!! Uss family ne kya khila diya?? 14 din mein itna badal gayi!!

Sonakshi- dad, aapne mujhme aisa kaunsa fark dekh liya??

Baldev- fark hi fark hai. Kamra itna saaf. Har cheez tarteeb se rakhi huyi hai. Yeh kitaab padhna. Sonakshi mai soch raha tha ke tere dimaag mein pehle fark tha ke ab??

Sonakshi (chuckles)- you should be happy dad ke aapki beti samajhdar ho gayi hai. Theek hai.

Baldev- achha yeh bata ke iss duniya mein aisa kaunsa aadmi paida ho gaya jis ne meri beti ko itna sikha diya??

Sonakshi (thinking about SOMEONE)- dad, duniya mein aisa koi na koi toh zaroor hota hai jiska asar aapka dil aapko bina bataaye qabool leta hai.

Baldev- hmm.

Sonakshi- ab samajh aayi ke zindagi itni bhi be-asooli nahi honi chahiye. So overall, yeh seekha hai ke khoobsurat zindagi ka pehla aur aakhri asool hai "Balance".

Baldev- hmmm. Sahi ja rahe ho beta. Ab teri shadi kar sakte hain. At least tere sasural wale tujhse dukhi nahi honge.

Sonakshi- woh toh bahut achhe hain.

Baldev- kaun??

Sonakshi- sasural wale.

Baldev- matlab tuney shadi kar li!!??

Sonakshi- tch!! Nahi dad. Abhi toh maine sasural wale pasand kiye hain. (Gritting her teeth) Ladke ki confusion hai.

Baldev- chal. Uss ladke se baat karte hain.

Sonakshi- oh ho ho!! Nahi nahi nahi. Hello, abhi nahi ok. Abhi thoda sa ussey meri yaad mein tang ho lene do. Khud hi aayega.

Baldev- kab??

Sonakshi- jab bhi aayega, tab lights jag-mag jag-mag kareingi.

On other hand, dev was switching on the light, switching off the light, switching on the light, switching off the light and so on.......
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Here in the garden, Bejoy and Vikky were again drinking.

Bejoy- o vikky!! Aaj nahi bulaani koi bakri vakri??

Vikky- Tchh.

Bejoy- tu dara na kar mere hote huye. Tujhe kya lagta hai ke mai apne bete se darta hoon??

Vikky- hmm.

Bejoy- mai darta varta kissi se nahi.

Just then, Dev came there, but Bejoy didn't come to know that.

Bejoy (cont.)- jis din khaayi peeyi mein mere saamne aa gaya na, (vikky saw dev. Dev was heading towards them crossing his arms to his chest.) aisa danda maarunga beta, saara, saara zamaana dekhega.

Vikky- taya ji, aapki ichchha poori ho gayi. Bhai pichhe hai. Maar do danda.

Dev drags a chair near Bejoy and Vikky. Bejoy was shocked seeing dev.

Bejoy (putting blame on vikky)- kya maar do maar do lagaai hai?? Han?? (Vikky was confused) Kabhi kehta hai danda maarna hai, kabhi kehta hai ghutne ke neeche dena hai, kabhi kehta hai mera aise hi chalunga tv, jis se jo hota hai kar le.

Vikky- yaar taya ji, maine aise kab kaha??

Bejoy (cont.)- roz mujhe peene bitha leta hai.

Dev looks towards Vikky. Vikky didn't know what to speak.

Dev- daalo (alcohol).

Bejoy and Vikky (surprised)- Han!!!!

Dev- daalo daalo.

Bejoy (to vikky, in low voice)- yeh bhi peeta hai??

Vikky- pata ni.

Bejoy- hum iss se chori peete rahe aur yeh humse.

Vikky chuckles. He fills a glass and gave it to dev.

Vikky- lo bhai.

Dev (denying)- aap log carry on karo.

Bejoy hides his face with his palm and drinks speedily. Vikky also did the same.

Dev- aur daal lo.

Both Bejoy and Vikky were shocked cum scared.

Vikky (to Bejoy, in low voice)- taya ji, yeh humein set kar ke mujhe lagta hai humein danda maareinge.

Bejoy (to dev)- mai aapka baba hoon. Agar aapke dil mein koi baat hai toh woh saaf saaf bata do mujhe.

Dev (with a straight face)- mujhe Sonakshi se pyar ho gaya.

Both Bejoy and Vikky were shocked. They looked towards dev with their mouth open. For some time, both were not able to speak anything.

Bejoy- Vikky beta.

Vikky- ji.

Bejoy- mere liye aur matt daalna. Mujhe lagta hai mujhe chadh gayi hai.

Dev- mujhe sachchi pyar ho gaya, aur woh bhi bahut maatra mein.

Vikky- taaya ji, meri utar gayi yaar. Mai tayi ji ko bulata hoon. (Calls out) Tayi ji!!!!

Bejoy- oye!!! Shor kyun macha raha hai?? Fatafat taiyari kar ke, shagun de ke ladki le aao. Isska kya pata, subah tak mukar hi jaaye.

Vikky- hmm.

Dev- mukarne wali stage se mai kaafi aage ja chuka hoon. Ab toh bas Sonakshi se ek baar puchhna hai ke woh pyar karti hai ya nahi.

Bejoy- woh toh poore parivaar ko pyar karti hai beta. Tu ek baar haan kar toh sahi, woh toh bhaagi aayegi bechari kachhuye (tortoise) ki tarha.

Vikky- taaya ji, kachhuya dheere chalta hota hai yaar.

Bejoy- oh pata hai mujhe. Woh dheere dheere sochti aayegi bechari. (Pointing towards dev) Itna bada fainsla jo lena hai ussne.

Dev- mai kal uss se ja ke baat karta hoon. Agar woh maanti hai toh theek hai.

Bejoy- agar woh na maani phir??

Dev looked everywhere, but them. He silently got up and left.
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Next Morning, Sonakshi enters her house.

Sonakshi (folding arms of her jacket)- hello, maate........

Sonakshi saw dev sitting there. Dev stood up seeing her.

Sonakshi (with a glint of happiness in her voice)- Dev tum!!

Dev- tumhe milne aaya tha.

Sonakshi became happy. A big grin was not leaving her face.

Dev- tumse koi keemti baat karni thi.

Sonakshi (laughs)- keemti ya zaruri??

Everyone laughs.

Dev- hum akele mein baat kar sakte hain?? (To Baldev and Radha Rani) if you don't mind.

Radha Rani- haan.

Sonakshi (to dev)- chalo hum bahar chalein.

Dev (to baldev and Radha Rani)- excuse me.

Radha Rani- ok bete ok.

Both dev and sonakshi leave.

Radha Rani- mujhe toh ladka pasand hai.

Baldev- humein toh pichhle 15 rishte bhi pasand the. Baat toh sonakshi ki hai ke ussey ladka pasand aana chahiye.
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Dev and sonakshi came out. Dev was stealing her glances and smiling. Just then, his eyes widened. He saw two dustbins kept at some distance. [And then, what happened, you know.] He started becoming conscious.

Sonakshi (seeing dev not speaking)- Karo ji, jo KEEMTI baat karni hai.

Dev- nahi mujhe lagta hai ke yeh mahaul suit nahi karta uss baat ko. Ya baat mahaul ko suit nahi karti.

Sonakshi- mujhe pata hai tumhari perfect management ka. Dev, tumhe baat karni bhi hai ya bas aise hi.

Dev looks everywhere but her.

Sonakshi- chalo. Tum bhi kya yaad rakhoge. Bataao kahaan jana hai.

Dev smiles.

Dev- par mujhe yeh lagta hai ke uss baat ke liye na time aur mahaul, dono hi iss se khoobsurat ho sakte hain.

Both smile looking at each other.

Dev- shaam ko milein hum??

Sonakshi nods her head in ok.

Dev- mai address msg. kar doonga.

Saying this, dev leaves.

Sonakshi (to herself)- Janab mujhe pata hai tumhara, tumhe kya baat karni hai. Par sun-ni tumhare muh se hi hai.

Saying this, she happily ran inside.
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Evening.

Dev was waiting for sonakshi at the same place where she asked him about the girl in his life. He was super happy. But...........










It's said that when you are more than happy, something bad happens.

Sonakshi came there, holding flowers in her hand. Seeing her, dev stood up. Seeing dev, sonakshi waved her hand to him. Dev smiles.

Sonakshi ran towards him. In the hurry to reach dev, she started crossing the road and failed to notice a car fast approaching her.

Till the time she noticed, it was too late.

Sonakshi- Aaaaaaahhhh!!!!!!!!!!




















The car hits her and leaves, even without stopping. Her flowers were crushed under the car's tyres. Dev's smile changed into shock. Utter shock.

Till the time dev's mind registered the happenings in front of his eyes, Sonakshi was lying on the road covered with blood.

Dev- Sonakshi!!!!!!!!

He immediately ran towards her and held her in his arms.


Sonakshi was losing her consciousness. Dev was shocked to see sonakshi covered with blood would be an understatement.

People crowded over the place.

Dev- Sonakshi!!! Sonakshi aankhein kholo!!! Sona!!!!

Listening to dev, sonakshi lightly opens her eyes.

Sonakshi (in her super weak voice)- Devvv.........

The sound was so weak that dev was not able to hear it.

Dev- Sonakshi kuch nahi hoga. Mai hoon na. Kuch nahi hone doonga. (Shouts) Somebody please call the ambulance!!!!!! Please!!!!

Dev was all in tears.

Dev- sonakshi, aankhein khuli rakho yaar. Kuch nahi hoga. Sonakshi........

Soon, her breaths started getting uneven. She was struggling to breathe and dev's heart was sinking every second.

Dev- Sonakshi!!!! (Shouts) Please call the ambulance!!!!!!

Sonakshi was not able to breathe and hence, her hand which was in dev's hold and her neck, fell down freely making dev's eyes widened. There was no movement from her side. She was just lying like a dead body.

Dev- sonakshi. Sonakshi aankhein kholo. (All in tears) Sonakshi!!!!!!!

He tightly hugs her to his chest. He was not ready to leave her. The people around were feeling sad and pity for dev.
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Sonakshi was being treated inside the operation theatre. Dev was seeing her from outside, all heart broken.

It have been 3 hours since they had taken her inside, but still no news came. Radha Rani, Baldev, Bejoy and Vikky came there. Even Radha Rani was broken seeing her daughter like that. Baldev was trying to console her and Bejoy was trying to console Baldev. Vikky were consoling dev, but his tears were not ready to stop.

All his clothes were covered with blood. Sonakshi's blood. After some time, Bejoy and Vikky leave.

Dev, Radha Rani and Baldev were sitting outside the OT, praying for sonakshi's well being.













Precap:- Doctor:- Mr. Dev, we did our best, but...............
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Dev breaks a Rule.

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