Gems that kept me up all-nigh...

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This was one of the projects that I had been wanting to start a while back, but life was banging on my door... More

My Notes
A and D
A Thousand Words
At your service
Back to Hazel [Series]
Sex Formula (Formely Breakup Formula)
Bulletproof (formerly The boy at the back of the class/ B@BOC)
Pop my Cherry (Formely: Cherry Knots)
Despicable Arogance
Dumped!
Enduring the Fire
Engaged to the Heartless Heartbreaker
Enjoying the Chase
Escorting the Brute
Finding Cinderella
For Hating me You Sure are Possessive
Forever and Always, Olive
Her List of Kisses
His Bride
I'm the Bruise
I was Never Yours
Jealous Husbands Club Series
Kissing Booth
Living with a Police Officer
Mailboy
Managiing EXO
Nothing Left to Lose
Notorious
Once Upon a Push
Paladin
Promises to Cain
Puck You
Recreating Kasey Taylor
Stolen Hearts [Series]
Stolen Jerseys
Suit and Tie [Harry Styles AU]
Swap
The Bachelor [Series]
The Bad Boy's Dancer
The Bad Boy's Girl (Book 1)
The Boy who Sneaks in my Bedroom
The Everard Family [Series]
The Guy Next Door
The Haverston Family [Series]
The Last Dance
The Possessive Mr. Hyland
The Quirky Tales of April Hale
The Replacement Girlfriend
The Teddy Bear Agreement/ Sleep Deprived
The Trainer's Girl
The Unwanted Proposal
The Wilde Women of Ascot Series
Thousand-Year Cat
War Prize (A Roman Britain story)
Wolf in The Night
The one that got away

Trying Again ~nanowrimo

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By the_bestest_101

Blurb:

Meeting in high school, you'd think Gabriella and Tommy would be happily married. Blissfully happy with their two children Ben and Kate. Everyone on the outside thought they were perfect, but if only they knew..

What happens behind closed doors?

They fight. They yell and scream. There's insults, and accusations of cheating thrown around. Separate rooms and ignoring each other. It's constant bickering. They've grown apart and realized that true love doesn't always keep people together.

He's cold and arrogant, and she's a hot blooded Italian.

Fed up with it all, divorce is mentioned and someone moves out.. Or that was the plan until a surprise holiday is sprung on them and they have to keep their act up for a little while longer.. Until they realize that they're not faking it at all.

That they've started to fall in love all over again.

My two-cent:

I had honestly no idea what to expect when I started this book. The story line was pretty interesting. And it does seem like a common household problems between a husband and a wife. The struggles between them because of lack of communication, trust, respect and good sex?! (<-- I feel like I had to add that since their relationship did improve with that). Well they basically turned into some horny teenagers always sneaking. It does contain mature scenes so please take this upon your own risk. I liked that whole concept of struggles and maintaining your life after marriage. Will you face the struggles together head on or break apart? However, there are numerous errors, spellings and details, that really sways the story line. The names and POVs kept changing in the middle of the stories that confused me. I also didn't quite get the motives of some characters as they were introduced. I would suggest revising and trying to stay consistent with the overall plot to maintain that flow. Other than that awesome work bringing out the part of marriage that people hide behind the curtains of windows.

Status: Completed

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