Next day morning 🌅
6a.m
Santosh- Rajbir... Shehbaaz kaha ho sab....Guriyaa..... uthe ki nahi abhi tak sab...
(he is calling everybodys name from lobby)
Are kaha ho sab ke sab so rahe ho kyaa abhi tak..... Shayamu...oye shayamu
Shayamu-(while coming from the kitchen) ji bade Sahar..
Santosh- jaa....jake dek ke aa teeno bacche kaha hai abhi tak niche nahi aaye...
Shayamu- jii bade Sahar...
(Shayamu upar ja hi raha hota hai ki tabhi Rajbir siriyo se niche aa raha hota hai .....)
Shayamu- (He looks at Santosh who is sitting on his couch). Bade Sahar...bade Malik aa gaye
Santosh looks back and see Rajbir is standing.
Santosh- Aa gaye tum....aur wo dono kaha kaha hai....
Rajbir- wo dono bhi aa rhe hai chacha jii
Santosh- hai kaha wo dono.....6:00 baj rhe hai...tum dono ki train hai 8 baje ki aur tum log ho ki abhi tab nasta bhi nahi kiye ho ...
Rajbir- chacha ji....bas aa rhe hai.....
They both come down
Rajbir- lijiye aa gaye ...
Santosh- (fake anger) tumdono ko samey nahi dikhta hai kyaa.....kab nasta karoge....kab nikloge....fir Amritsar pahucke hawaijahaaj(aeroplane ✈️) bhi to pakarna hai...
Shehnaaz- sorry chachu....wo Thora late ho gaye..
Shehbaaz- me late nahi hua chachu.....meri train thori na hai.....me to aj jaldi utha hu
Rajbir- ye khotaya tu chup rahega....aur chalo sab nasta kar lete hai or fir nikalte hai railway station ke liye
Santosh- haa chalo jaldi jaldi se kuch kha lo tumlog....
Shayamu nasta laga jaldi....
Shayamu- bade sahab....nasta laga diya hai...aaiye
Shehnaaz- are wah shayamu bhaiya aj to ap super fast train ki tarah kam kar rhe ho ....
Mujhe bejne ki itni jaldi hai kya...(pulling his legs)
Shayamu- Are ye kya bol rhi hai baby jii.....Mera bas chale to me to apko kahi jane hi na du...ap ghar me hote ho to ghar haraa bhara lagta hai...
Rajbir- ye to sach kaha tune shayamu...
Shehbaaz- Are chalo bhai ab nasta kro warna train pakka miss ho jayegi...
Rajbir- haa chaloo
Everyone has breakfast while sitting at the dinning table and after having breakfast, Shehnaaz and Rajbir start meeting everybodys before leaving.
Both of them are meeting everybody that only then Dhanveshar ji also comes.
Dhanweshar- chalo accha hai tumlog nikle nahi abhi tak ...mujhe to laga ki me mill hi nahi pauga sana se .....
Santosh- (shocked) tu itni subha subha..
Dhanweshar- haa bhai meri beti Mumbai ja rahi hai usse Milne to aana hi thaa......
Santosh- tu itni subha aa gaya wahi bhut badi baat hai wese...
Shehnaaz-.....(with moist eyes) thik hai chachu chalti hu ....apna dhayan rakhiyega.....(she hug him)ap apni dawaiya time par Lena aur faltu upar niche mat karna....aur me jab call kaugi ap mera call uthayege....thik hai naa?
Santosh- are haa meri Maa...tu jo jo bol ke ja rahi hai wo sab karunga....tu bas apna dhyan rakhna...(with heavy heart)
Accha ab niklo tumlog late ho jayega....
(Trying to control his tear)
shehnaaz- jii chachu....
(Then she goes towards Shehbaaz and hug him)
Tu bhi apna dhyan rakhna....aur... chachu....chote chachu.....bhaiya ka bhi....
(Puts her hand on his cheek and says......with love) thik hai na?
Shehbaaz- hmm thik hai (He didn't say much because he was trying to control his tears)
Then she goes to her chote chachu....
Shehnaaz- Chote chachu ap bhi dawa time par leliya karna aur jada der tak mat jaga kariye......(hug eachother)
Dhanweshar- ab meri sana ne kaha hai to karna to padega hi (with sweet little smile 😊)
Rajbir- chale ab ....
Shehnaaz- humm bhaiya.....
Dhanweshar- ha chalo me chor deta hu ...
Rajbir-are chote chachu ap rehne dijiye hum chale jayege.....
dhanweshar- are mujhe bhi kuch kam hai.. me tum dono ko chor kar apne dukan nikal lunga.....ab chalo jaldi
Rajbir- thik h chote chachu...
Shehnaaz-( with sweet smile) bye.....apna dhyan rakhna sab ....
Rajbir- thik hai chacha ji aate h....(while touching the feet of his chacha ji's for blessings)
Santosh-....khush reh .....aur jaldi aana...(put his hand on rajbir head)
Uth ab.....aur sun Guriyaa ka college...kamra(room)....aass pass ke log sabkuch ek baar acche se dek lenaa ...
Rajbir- Ji.....chacha ji.....thik hai chacha ji chalte hai ab
Santosh- thik h beta ..... dhyan rakhna..
Guriyaa dhyan rakhna apna .
Shehnaaz- abhi chachu...aur tu bhi Shehbaaz apna aur sabka dhyan rakhna.....byeeee
All three sit in the car and reach the railway station.
Dhanweshar- Lo tumhari manjil aa gayi ...ab me nikalta hu
Shehnaaz- chote chachu....ap andar tak chorne nahi aayege...
Dhanweshar- Nahi beta...man to bhut hai par Thora kam hai humme yahi se nikalna hoga....
Shehnaaz- thik hai chote chachu....par ap apna dhyan rakhiyega
Dhanweshar- haa beta wo to rakhuga hi ( smile)
Rajbir- thik h chacha ji chalte hai.....(touch his feet)
Dhanweshar- khush reh...chalo me chalta hu..
After that he leaves and Shehnaaz and Rajbir go inside the Railway station and sit in the train.
Both sit in their respective seats... Shehnaaz sits on the seat next to the window and Rajbir sits in the middle one next to Shehnaaz.
Rajbir- Me Chacha ji ko call kar ke bata deta hu....ki hum train me beth gaye hai..
Shehnaaz- (nobbed her head)....thik hai
Rajbir calls Santosh ji
*On other side*
Santosh ji is reading his newspaper 📰
And the phone rings...
Santosh- Shayamu....dek kiska phone baj raha h..
Shayamu- ji bade sahab dekta hu..
Shayamu pichup the phone...
Rajbir- hello
Shayamu- Ha bade Malik.....
Rajbir- Chacha ji...kaha hai
Shayamu- Sahab yahi bethe hai....dete hai malik....ek min
Takes the phone, goes to Santosh ji and says
Shayamu- bade sahab....bade Malik ka phone hai
Santosh ji take the phone from his hand
Santosh- haa beta.... train me beth gaya
Rajbir- Ji....chacha ji...beth gaye hai aur bas train bhi chalne wali hi hai ..wahi socha ki aap ko bata du ek baar warna pata hai baad me network aaye ya nahi...
Santosh- accha kiya ki bata diya...warna me pareshan rehta...aur guriyaa kaha hai
Rajbir- yahi hai chacha ji....lijiye
Gives phone to Shehnaaz
Shehnaaz- ji chachu....
Santosh- ha beta beth gayi Aram se...
Shehnaaz- ji chachu.....Aram se beth gaye hai......aur ap kya kar rhe hai
Santosh- me... newspaper padh raha tha..
Shehnaaz- accha
Santosh- accha suno....bag me khane ka saman rakha hua hai bhuk lage to kha lenaa....
Shehnaaz- thik hai chachu...
Santosh- thik hai...rakhta hu
Shehnaaz-thik hai chachu..byee
She cut the call..
Shehnaaz- ye lijiye bhaiya...(give his phone to him)
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The train starts running....and after traveling for 3 hours they both reach Amritsar...In Amritsar, Rajbir have some business work, so first he complete that work and then went to the airport,. ..from where they have to take an aeroplane for Mumbai
It is 12:00p.m now.. and the plan timming is at 12:30p.m
Both reach the airport and sit in the waiting area.
After sometime both get their boarding done and go and sit in the plan.
Rajbir- Baccha tu comfortable hai na...
Shehnaaz- (in a frightened voice) ha bhaiya me thik hu....
(But she is not ok because she have fear of high)
Rajbir-(hold her hand)....baccha me hu yahi par....bas 2 gante ki to baat hai... turant hi hum Mumbai pahuch jayenge....hmm?
Sana hold his hand very tightly......
fight starts flying
Shehnaaz was holding Rajbir's hand with her eyes closed throughout the flight.
Rajbir- Baccha apni aankhe khol....dek land ho chuke hai hum.....
Shehnaaz- (cutely) Sacchiiiii...
(open one side of eye)
Rajbir- ha baccha mucchiiii...chal ab uth hum Mumbai pahuc chuke hai...
Because of her fear, Shehnaaz had forgotten that she reached Mumbai. When Rajbir reminds her that we have reached Mumbai.....she immediately leave his hand and stands up on her place and starts munching.
But suddenly she realizes that there are other people are also present nearby who are laughing at her while seeing her jumping like kid
Rajbir is also enjoying her childish nature....
She sit on her respective sit...
Shehnaaz- (cutely)bhaiya sorry...jaloos nikalwa diya mene sabke samne...
Rajbir- (emotionally) sorry kyu bol rahi hai tu...tera yahi bachpana to yaad karege wapas jake....
She give a side hug to him....
Rajbir- accha ab yahi basna hai kya tujhe....chal nikalte bahar.....
Shehnaaz- (smile)hmm thik hai
They both come out of the airport
Rajbir-...me ghar phone kar ke bata deta hu ki hum pahuc gaye ....
Shehnaaz- thik h bhaiya
Rajbir calls at home but no one answered the call after that he calls on Shehbaaz's mobile.
But he also don't pich up the call...
Rajbir get worried about what is happening why nobody is answering the call
Shehnaaz- kya hua bhaiya...
Rajbir-(fake smile) are wo busy ja raha hai phone...
Thore der baad kar lege......
Accha chalo taxi 🚖 lete hai aur Nancy ke flat bhi to dhundna parega na abhi.....
Shehnaaz- are nahi bhaiyaa kuch dhundna nahi parega...mere pass address hai na aur taxi Wale ko bataye wo turant hi pahucha dega....
Rajbir- hmm chale..
They take a taxi
*In taxi*
Rajbir- Nancy ghar par hi hai na?...
Shehnaaz- ha bhaiyaa....aj wo college hi nahi gayi thi humare aane ki khusi me.
Rajbir- accha...
In mind- koi call kyu nahi utha Raha hai.....aur na hi abhi tak call hi Kiya hai koi ...sab thik to hoga waha par......pata nahi itna ajib kyu laga tha hai mujhe.....baccha ko bhi kuch nahi bata sakta....wo tension me aa jayegi..........rajbir kyu soch raha ye tu ye sab .....sab thik hoga ghar par.....tu faltu ka hi tension le raha hai..ha.....ha sab thik hoga.....(he is continuously talking to hisself)
Shehnaaz- bhaiya...kya soch rahe hai... chahiye ghar aa gaya.....
he comes to his senses immediately
Rajbir- aa gaya?.......
Shehnaaz- haa bhaiya..aa gaya....kyaa kyu bhaiya sab thik hai na?
Rajbir- haa wo bas Thora thak gaya hu ..aur kuch nahi hai...
Accha chalo me saaman nikal leta hu......
Shehnaaz and Rajbir takes the lift and reach the 5th floor where Nancy's flat is located. Shehnaaz rings the doorbell when then only the voice come from inside
(Ofcourse it's Nancy voice)
Nancy- aagai bas ek min
Shehnaaz- are khol bhi darwaja ab jaldi se
Nancy- ha ha bas aa gai...(and she open the door)
And give a tight hug to Shehnaaz
Shehnaaz- Andar to aane de....
Nancy-(leave her) thik hai andar aaja pehle....
(Turn towards rajbir) kese hai bhaiya ap......
Rajbir-(smile) thik hu....mere gale lag sakti hai tu....me iske tarah natak nahi karunga....
(She hug him)
Ha bilkul....ap iske tarah thori na ho....notankibaaz..(both are trying to tease Shehnaaz)
Shehnaaz-(dramatically) ha ha mere se to koi pyar hi nahi karta hai....
Rajbir and Nancy comes to Shehnaaz and both of them hug her...
Nancy- tujhe bhi pata hai....sab tujhse kitna pyar karte hai.....
(After some time they break the group hug and come inside the flat....)
After seeing the flat
Shehnaaz- yaar ye to bhut hi Sundar hai... video call itna acccha nahi lagata hai....
Rajbir- haa Nancy bhut hi pyara ghar hai..
Nancy- thankyou... thankyou 😊
Ap baat baad pehle kahana khaiye...mene banaya apne haatho se ..
Shehnaaz- kahane layak to hai na...
Nancy- tujhe nahi khana hai to mat kha...mere bhaiya to khayege....hai na bhaiya?
Rajbir- ha ha bilkul....me bhi khauga aur baccha bhi khayegi....
Shehnaaz- wo to me khaugi hi bhaiya....wo to bas me iski thori thang khich rahi thi....
After that everyone ate lunch and then all three sat together and started talking.But yes Rajbir was thinking again and again that why no one is picking up the call at home....he didn't know how many more times he called but no one answered the his call...
Finally Shehbaaz did call to rajbir....After reading Shahbaz's name on the phone, Rajbir makes an excuse from both of them and immediately comes to the balcony with the phone.
Rajbir- Baccha tumlog baat karo....kuch kam se related call me baat kar ke aata hu..
Rajbir goes to the balcony and pichup the call ..
Rajbir-(in anger) phone kaha rehta hai tumhara kabse call kiye ja rahe hai....ye nahi ki ek baar call uth to le....bata de sab thik hai ki nahi waha par.....wese chacha ji kaha hai....aur ghar par bhi koi phone nahi utha raha h....hai kaha sablog...
Shehbaaz- Bhaiya ab me bolu.....
Rajbir- mene tujhe roka hai kyaa .....bolna kaha hai sab
Shehbaaz- bhaiya pehle humlog hospital me the aur sb police station me hai...
Rajbir- (shocked and worried)kya hua hai waha....chacha ji thik hai na....bolega kuch tu...
Shehbaaz- bolne to do bhaiya.......
Rajbir- ha to bolnaaa...
Shehbaaz- chachu bilkul thik hai....chachu ko kuch nahi hua hai...
(After listening this rajbir feels relaxed)
Wo chote chachu jab ghar aa rahe the tab unpar kisi ne hamla kar diya thaa....
Rajbir- kyaa Chote chacha ji par...haamla
Shehbaaz- haa Bhaiya......wo chote chachu ko kisi se 5 lakh rupees lene the to wo wahi payment leke ghar aa rahe the ki...kuch gundo ne unpar haamla kar diya aur unke sare paise bhi le liye ....
Rajbir- (shocked) chote chachu kese hai unhe chot to nahi lagi hai na....
Shehbaaz-lagi hai bhaiya....sar par 4 taake lage hai aur haat par bhi chot aayi hai....hum police station aaye hai complaint likhwane...
Rajbir- ye bhagwan....chote chachu kaha hai...baat Kara meri..
Shehbaaz-ji... bhaiya
Shehbaaz give the mobile to dhanweshar ji who is sitting on the table.....
Shehbaaz- chote chachu....bhaiya hai baat karne ko bol rahe hai
(He take the mobile from Shehbaaz)
Dhanweshar- ha beta bol.....
Rajbir- chote chacha ji..kese hai aap
Dhanweshar- thik hu beta bas thori se chote aayi hai sar aur haat me.....
Beta bas ek baat ka dhyan rakhna Nancy ko na pata chale is sab baat ka warna wo faltu ka tension legi...
Rajbir-thik hai chote chacha ji...me nahi batauga..par chote chachu me next flight leke Chandigarh aa raha hu....ap chacha ji ko bata dijiyega....
He disconnects the call and starts searching on his mobile for the next flight to Chandigarh.And the next flight meets at 6 o'clock Rajbir immediately books his return ticket...and then goes to the room....where Sana and Nancy were talking
Rajbir comes to the room
Rajbir-....baccha...wo mujhe nikalna hoga Chandigarh ke liye...
Sana and Nancy both get shocked hearing this.
Sana- (worried)Nikalna hoga matlab...sab thik hai na bhaiya.....
Nancy- ha bhaiyaa...apto parso Jane waale the na...
Rajbir- ha sab thik hai par...kuch business se related issues hai beta jana parega..
6 baje ki flight hai...raat tak pahuch jaunga....
Nancy- par bhaiya 4 to baj chuke hai....tab to apko turant hi nikalna parega
Rajbir- ha...abhi hi nikal raha hu ...
Shehnaaz was standing on the side listening everything. Rajbir noticed this....that shehnaaz is not saying a word to him
Nancy- bhaiya me kuch khane ke liye pack kar deti hu...
(She goes to the kitchen)
Rajbir- Baccha kya hua ....gussa hai kya.....
Shehnaaz- (serious)kya hua hai bhaiya...
( Ye sun ke kuch second ke liye rajbir bhi soch me par jata hai)
Rajbir-(lieing) bataya to... business se related kam hai...
Shehnaaz- (very serious tone) juth....sach bataiye bhaiya...
Rajbir- wo chote chacha ji par kisi ki haamla kar diya tha kyuki unke pass 5 lakh rupees the...
Shehnaaz-(worried) Chote chachu thik hai....unhe chot to nahi aayi hai na...
Rajbir- nahi jada chot nahi aaye hai.... baccha sun..ye baat Nancy ko nahi pata lagni hai.... chote chachu ne mana kiya hai....me ja ke dekta hu waha....aur tu tension mat le me call karunga tujhe pahuc ke ...(he hug her)
Shehnaaz- thik hai bhaiya....apna dhyan rakhiyega ap....
Nancy come in the room with a box inthe hand....
Nancy- bhaiya ye lijiye.....Thora nasta hai isme rak lijiye...
Rajbir-....(.hug Nancy) hmm apna khayal rakhna dono....
After meeting both of them, he leaves for the airport.
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Sana side me beth kar chote chachu ke bare me soch rahi hoti hai....
Nancy- sana....
A
She didn't answer
Nancy- sanaaaa.....
She didn't answer
After that Nancy goes to Sana and puts her hand on Sana's shoulder.
Nancy- Sana....
Shehnaaz-(back to her senses)...haa kya huaa
Nancy- sab thik hai na.....kaha khoi hui thi tu..
Shehnaaz- me....?....kahi nahi.....wo bas Thora thak gayi hu....
Nancy- Accha to tu thori der so Jaa....wese bhi kal college Jana hai
Shehnaaz- hmm....
after that sana goes to sleep......
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It's 10 p.m
Nancy- Sana uthja yaar...khana kha ke fir so Jana.....wese bhi tu 5 gante se so rahi hai uth na yaar....
(Par sana itni gehri nind me hoti hai ki uthti hi nahi hai.....to Nancy....sana ko pani fek ke uthane ka sochti hai ......
Nancy Pani ka glass leti hai aur sana ke upar Pani ke kuch drops dalti hai....)
Nancy- ab to uth..
Shehnaaz- ha bas 2 min....
Nancy- tu uth rahi hai ki pura glass pani daldu..bol
Shehnaaz-(wake up and sit on the bed) le uth gayi....kya hai ab
Nancy- ab kuch nahi bas chal ke khana kha ke ..
Shehnaaz- thik hai tu chal me mhu haat dhul ke aati hu ...
Nancy- thik h...jaldi aa
After that both of them have dinner together and after completing the dinner they come in the room and then sit on the bed in their room and talk for some time and both fall asleep while talking....
They are sleeping like a cute little Baby...
~~: Dhaanishri
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