Fractured | Tobias Eaton ✓

By MURSWRITES

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𝐅𝐑𝐀𝐂𝐓𝐔𝐑𝐄𝐃 | ❝ I'm not Divergent, I'm Fractured. ❞ ━ IN WHICH Rita Rose, a young Factionless girl i... More

Fractured
Extended Cast & Playlist
Graphic Gallery
Epigraph
Act One; Changing Tides
Prologue; An Offer You Can't Refuse
01 | We'll Be Okay
02 | Charity Cases
03 | Do You Proud
04 | I'll Live Just For You
05 | Choose Wisely
06 | Rita Rose
07 | No Reason For It
08 | Don't Like Him
09 | What Do You Know
حبيبي | 10
11 | Broke My Nose
12 | The Chasm
13 | He's An Asshole
14 | Call Me Rita
16 | Keep Us In
17 | The Fractured One
18 | Don't Do That Ever Again
19 | Afraid of Heights
20 | Worth The Risk
21 | Sadistic is The Word
22 | Thanks so Much, Sir
23 | They Have Cake
24 | Good Job Guys
Act Two; The Inbetween
25 | Recoil Is A Bitch
26 | Kind of Freaking Out
27 | Ordinary Acts of Bravery
28 | Please
29 | Giving Me Whiplash
30 | Flirting With Death
31 | I'm Fractured
32 | No More Peter Hayes
33 | You Can't Be Fine
34 | Punching People Is Painful
35 | Million Years Old
36 | You're Sick, Al
37 | Please Breathe
38 | Come From Abnegation
39 | I Miss You
40 | Anything Is Game
41 | You Saved Me
42 | Okay, Tobias
43 | I Threw Up
44 | Falling For You
45 | Good Job, Tris
Act Three; The Finale
46 | My Darling
47 | Like Being Dauntless
48 | Rather Be My Partner
49 | Some Kind Of Stiff
50 | You're The Hot One
Act Four; AU One-Shots
51 | What Was He Like
52 | Tapping Out?
01 | Fourita First Kiss
02 | Tobias Plans A Date
03 | Girl Talk W/Chris & Rita
04 | Dauntless Leader Meeting
05 | Rita Forgets Their Anniversary
06 | Fourita Discuss Fear Landscapes
07 | Original Epilogue

15 | Hell On Earth

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By MURSWRITES

Eric says that we're going on a field trip. The way he said it set my nerves on edge but training ends right after that and while the others go to visit Tris, I set myself up on a recon mission. I'm going to find my things or repay the favor to those Candors. Either way, they won't be happy.

There's a little pep in my step despite the aching in my joints as I stalk back to the dorms. I check my belongings and see they've been left unchanged since this morning. Nothing has been returned so I turn toward Peter, Drew, and Mollys' beds. I rifle through their things for a bit before finding something that might be of significance under Peter's bed.

My red scarf was shoved amongst the cobwebs and it made that anger I had this morning skyrocket. I carry it with me as I practically run back toward the cafeteria. I was going to strangle him with it. My mother wouldn't be very proud of my new violent tendencies but I ignored all thoughts of reason.

All I really wanted was to eat dinner and shower but I had nothing else to change into. If I was lucky I'd be wearing all black at Peter's funeral. That thought almost makes me run into someone. Am I really willing to kill him over fabric? I ask myself and decide–probably.

When I make it into the cafeteria, it's packed to the brim, but I find Peter quickly thanks to Molly's big head. I stomp over to their table and stand behind Peter with my scarf, contemplating if I should go through with it. I was already on thin ice with Eric.

As much as I wanted to pull the fabric taut over Peter's smug face, I instead threw it down in front of him, covering his food in the blood-red fabric. When he tries to stand, I push him back down and glare at Molly. She and Drew sit back down, not out of fear, I know that, but because of how public this is.

"Recognize this, Peter?" I'm talking into his ear, so he can't pretend to not have heard me. "I do. In fact, I remember buying it in the boutique in the Pit just a few days ago. I wonder where you got it, hm?"

I squeeze his shoulders tightly when he opens his mouth, "If my things aren't back in their rightful places by tomorrow morning I will make your life hell on Earth and you'll be known as the boy who lost to a factionless girl."

I purposely dig my fingers into the flesh at the top of his biceps when I walk away to get some food. He won't be the reason I'm hungry.

"What was that in the cafeteria?" Four. I turn around short, nearly dropping the apple in my hand.

My face blanches, of course, he saw you, idiot. "Just saying hi to a friend," I lie through my teeth, forcing a smile as I tried to chew the bite I took before I noticed him.

Four's expression tells me enough–he's not convinced. "Nobody likes that kid except those two, what was that, initiate? I won't ask again."

His tone makes me angry, "He and his buddies stole from me. Everything–I'm talking every scarf, every sweater, pair of paints. Gone. Just because I'm doing well. And they painted Stiff all over Tris' bed and bedding. It took hours to get that damned paint out!" I admit, finally tired of these stupid games.

"Thank you for telling me, I'll take care of it."

"Wait, what?" I say and he turns back toward me, "Don't do anything obvious, because then Peter will know I told you. He'll give me hell for being a snitch."

Four almost chuckles, "Don't worry about it, Rita. I'll make sure he learns his lesson." There's something about the way he says that that makes me believe him. There's a promise within those words so I just nod and return to the dorms, ready to sleep in my gross clothes.

AUTHOR'S NOTE.

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