Ahkmenrah: The Fourth King of...

By HackedByAWriter

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He was prepared to say his last prayer. But the blow never came. Instead his saw the Nubian fall to the groun... More

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Prologue
Chapter 1: Race
Chapter 3: Banquet
Chapter 4: The Tablet
Chapter 5: Fair "Maiden"
Chapter 6: The Heirs
Chapter 7: Three Ways To Kill A King
Chapter 8: Cobra
Chapter 9: The Knife
Chapter 10: Poison
Chapter 11: Sea Storm
Chapter 12: Big Brother
Chapter 13: Self Defense
Chapter 14: Crocodile Tears
Chapter 15: Resurrection
Chapter 16: Long Live the King
Chapter 17: Dreams of Serpents and Victory
Chapter 18: The Storm Has come
Chapter 19: Being Reckless
Chapter 20: Fear Silence and Secrecy
Chapter 21: The Crown of the Nile
Chapter 22: The First Flash of Lightning
Chapter 23: Dark Horse
Chapter 24: Ramses the Great
Chapter 25: Wild
Chapter 26: Learning of Sargon
Chapter 27: Keeping the Peace
Chapter 28: The Messenger
Chapter 29: The First Blow
Chapter 30: Man, Woman and Child
Chapter 31: Remembering
Chapter 32: Nightmares
Chapter 33: Threads of Mortals
Chapter 34: This War
Chapter 35: Martyrs
Chapter 36: Have Faith
Chapter 37: The Most Spectacular Fashion
Chapter 38: Fight Song
Chapter 39: Blood Gold and Lions
Chapter 40: Conquered
Chapter 41: Defiance
Chapter 42: New Hope
Chapter 43: Phase One
Chapter 44: Vengeance
Chapter 45: Most Dangerous Job
Chapter 46: Thirst and Hunger
Chapter 47: A Promise
Chapter 48: Return of the White Lioness
Chapter 49: Thirteen
Chapter 50: Hathor and Sekhmet
Chapter 51: Fame and Glory
Chapter 52: Pain
Chapter 53: Life and Death
Chapter 54: The In Between
Chapter 55: Death March
Chapter 56: Lies
Chapter 57: Tears
Chapter 58: Rogues of the Nile
CHapter 59: Embody
Chapter 60: Heated Moments
Chapter 61: Food is Power
Chapter 62: Love and Hurt
Chapter 63: Raging Hearts, Nervous Smiles and Sentimental Slop
Chapter 64: Shattered Rain
Chapter 65: Strangeness and Honor
Chapter 66: Old is Gold
Chapter 67: Flesh and Bone
Chapter 68: Heartless
Chapter 69: Scars to her Beauty
Chapter 70: Love's Labours
Chapter 71: And This
Chapter 72: A Race
Chapter 73: Guardian
Chapter 74: Knives in Hearts
Chapter 75: The Plummet
Chapter 76: Method and Madness
Chapter 77: War Against Love
Chapter 78: Monster
Chapter 79: Blind Fools and Thieves
Chapter 80: To Kill A King
Chapter 81: A Clash of Swords
Chapter 82: The Truth of Kings
Chapter 83: The Plunge
Chapter 84: Of Whores and Mothers
Chapter 85: Fire and Water
Chapter 86: The Winged Soul
Chapter 87: The Smile
Chapter 88: The Throne
Chapter 89: Threads of Silence
Chapter 90: Racing the Sun
Chapter 91: Queen
Chapter 92: Exile
Chapter 93: Gifts
Chapter 94:
Chapter 95: Just Like Old Times
Chapter 96: Queen Slayer
Chapter 97: An Ambrosia of Ashes
Epilogue 1/3 - The Stories of Our Lives
Epilogue 2/3 - Who Would Want to Live Forever?
Epilogue 3/3 - King of Kings

Chapter 2: Wrath of the Pharaoh

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A/N Special thanks to all those awesome people who voted, commented and added this story to their reading list. You guys make my day. BTW I need an actor for Kahmunrah and please don't tell me to use the actor from NATM because I'm doing something different with this story.
Thx😊

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Merenkahre's jewelled fist struck the arm of the golden throne.

"Have I taught you nothing?!" He thundered furiously.

"We really are sorry father" repeated Ahkmenrah for what must have been the twentieth time in the last minute.

The Pharaoh was the grandson of Pharaoh Sneferu. Merenkahre was strong robust man. Like his son he was very pale compared to most Egyptians. He wore a lavish cloak woven from red and gold. Upon his shaved head he wore the golden crown of the united upper and lower Egypt. His brown eyes filled with anger and dissapointment, an expression the brother unfortunately could say they knew too well. Shepseheret came from behind the throne her beautiful angular face masked with anxiety.

"They've made a mistake Merenkahre. They won't do it again." She said soothingly.

"They promised last time as well Shepseheret and look at what they have done. They almost destroyed a pyramid we are so lucky that no one got in harm's way" then he looked at his sons disapprovingly.

"They should be punished," said the high priest, royal advisor and uncle of the king, Khufu "Especially the young one, no doubt it was his-"

"Get out!" snapped the Pharaoh gesturing to his wife and uncle.

At the order of the Pharaoh Shepseheret and Khufu left the room. Ahkmenrah bowed his head ready for the wrath of his father. Before Merenkahre could speak Kahmunrah stepped forward, his head bowed. 

Not now, you self-sacrificing bastard. Willed Ahkmenrah. Though Kahmunrah often took the blame for Ahkmenrah, it was never in front of their father. 

"But father it was my fault" said Kahmunrah. Merenkahre regarded him, startled. 

"I goaded him on." continued the Prince. "I teased him about his horsemanship and I proposed a race."

Merenkahre closed his eyes as if wanting to shut out the world. He opened them and focused his eyes directly on Kahmunrah.

"Kahmunrah you are the eldest. You... I am very disappointed."

Kahmunrah's heart fell at these words. Tears stung his eyes.

The Pharaoh closed his eyes once again relieving the room of their presence. His eyes opened once more. Addressing nobody in particular he muttered. "One weak link can bring down the chain of a mighty dynasty."

Tears now were starting to flow freely down Kahmunrah's cheeks as he heard those words. But before his brother and father could see them he stormed out of the room.

"He was lying father!" Burst out Ahkmenrah.

"I know," said Meenkahre in a monotone voice.

"It wasn't his fault he..." Ahkmenrah paused with the realisation of his father's words. "...You knew?"

"I know a great many things that you will not believe." announced Merenkahre rising from the throne and walking towards his youngest and grasped his shoulders firmly. "This is not punishment. I am training him to take my place once the sun sets on my time."

"Father I think we both know what you said to him is worse than any punishment."

"I know that is why I am rewarding him tonight at the banquet. He took responsibility for both of your actions. A Pharaoh must take the responsibility for the actions of his people. What I said to him will only make him more determined to be better." Merenkahre then smiled. "He would make a wonderful Pharaoh. Now about that Pyramid you practically ruined. What do you think of naming it the Bent Pyramid?"

Ahkmenrah's well known easy grin splayed across face and he said in a teasing tone.

"You know father for a Pharaoh your wrath is almost non-existent"

Merenkahre chuckled and said:

"Shut your mouth before the whole of Egypt finds out"

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