pyar ki kahani. (Completed)

Por punam14

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shiva an angry young man and an IPS Officer, Raavi is a college going bubbly girl, two opposite characters m... Más

introduction
first meet
misunderstanding
nok jhok
planning
Birthday
Kidnapping
care
dosti
Jealousy
diya's engagement
shivi meet
Shiva in hospital
shiva's ignorance
shiva's anger
unexpected
broken
Raavi's condition and shiva's worry
camping
shiva in raavi's house
reason
Raavi in danger
realisation
apology
antics
Jealous shiva
happy Birthday
bike ride
shiva reply to varun
proposal
worried
manali
raavi's efforts
party
confession
raavi's idea
haldi
cute moment
mehendi
shiva in trouble
raavi's trust
sangeet
jutaa churai
return home
Gift
drunk raavi
kiss
varun true face
let's get married
family drama
kisse hogi raavi aur shiva ki shadi??
Shivi engagement
shivi moments
raavi in pandya niwas
ruthna manana
date
rain and sharing room
thank you
shopping
shivi's haldi
shiva is hiding something
shivi sangeet
do you trust me
in temple
raaavi trust
truth
shadi
shadi
after marriage rituals
gussa
raavi care for shiva
ready for trip
plan to make raavi jealous
raavi jealousy
pehli rasoi
pehli rasoi ka neg
walk
sach me chot lagi hai kya ???
party in pub
shiva ka gussa
Shiva's angry with all
ye kya ho rha hai
shopping for reception
plss maan ja na shiva
reception
reception continues
romantic moment
shiva wants to return
shivi plans to unite ashqi
ahsqi confession
new drabble

raavi proposed

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Por punam14

So I'm back with new part, I know I made you wait for long and this time update is very late ,..sorry for that bt was stuffed in some important issues and was not able to write,
Bt now I'm back
So enjoy reading
And don't forget to comment how you liked the part or not
Keep loving and voting

Anshu : tu bol raavi

Shiva was just looking at raavi
Raavi was about to say ,akash : ek min ruk...mai av aya

He rushed outside

Shiva : ab ise kya hua
Akash returns with a bouqet of red rose

Akash : ye le raavi, ye de kr bol
Shiva : iski kya jrurt thi aur krna kya chahte ho tum dono
Akash : ap na chup hi raho hme pta hai apne to ye sb kuch kiya nhi hoga,...apko to pta bhi nhi hoga ki propose rose de kr hi krte hai

Shiva was clueless what to say his expression was as : pta nhi kya krwa rhe hai ye log, fas gaya tu shiva,..ab
r

aavi kaise,pr kya sach me wo aisa kregi, Suddenly he looks at raavi and feels excited

Shiva is lost in his own thoughts that he did not noticed raavi sat on her knees

Raavi : shiva
Shiva : ye tu kya kr rhi hai, tu....
Raavi lending the flower to him : shiva ,
Tum Mile to aisa lga rab ki inayat ho gayi,
Bin mange dil ki hr murad puri ho gayi,
dhire dhire haule haule teri aadat si ho gayi,
na jane kb kaise, tujhse mohabbat ho gayi
I LOVE U, I Love you more than anything in the world

Shiva was stunned for a min , he did not ever imagine that raavi will do it in this way
He hold her and made her stand ,took the flowers and hugged her tightly
A current of emotions was running inside him which was visible in his eyes

Shiva : I LOVE U TOO raavi, I....he was not able to speak further as his voice choked due to overflow of emotions
He gently kissed her hair
Raavi felt a strange sensation
Akash and anshu captured all in their phone
They clapped louder and all others present their also clapped
Shivi broke the hug and looked around

Akash : wah, mere love birds ap dono ne to kamaal kr diya, Inna pyaar...hayeee putting his hand on his chest

Anshu: ap dono ki Jodi best Hai,..kisi ki buri nazar na lge, ( taking balaiya)
Shivi smiles
Akash and anshu also hugs them

Day passes

Shiva and raavi used to talk for hours on phone, sent msgs,and meet whenever possible as Shiva was busy in his duty and raavi in her studies

On the other side varun was getting restless thinking what to do next

Varun : mujhe jld se jld kuch krna hoga
Ye dono din  pr din aur paas aate ja rhe
h

ai,  inke bich MU create krna to muskil hai  mujhe kuch aisa krna hoga ki raavi khud ko Shiva se dur kr le,..haa,yhi shi rhega... he thinks of a plan and smile evily

Varun calls raavi
Varun : hllo, raavi , yaar tu to mujhe bhul hi gayi, kitne din ho gaye ,na to milti hai, na hi baat krti hai
Raavi : aisa nhi hai varun, wo mere exams hai to mai bs busy thi
Varun : ok, pr aj to milna hoga tujhe mujhse
Raavi : kyu anything important??
Varun : haa,mujhe USA doctor associations ki taraf se award Mila hai,and I'm going back to USA

Raavi : wow, congratulations
Varun : sirf congratulations se kaam nhi chlega,  jaane se pehle tujhse milna aur celebrate krna hai, plss mna mt krna,
Raavi : ok, bta kb milna hai
Varun : aj shaam ,xyz hotel
Raavi : ok

In the evening raavi gets ready to meet varun, she was about to leave , her phone rang
Raavi : hllo, shiva , mai bs tumhe hi call krne wali thi
Shiva : acha, to phr kiya kyu nhi, mujhe to lga aj meri jangli billi kuch jyada hi busy hai
Raavi : acha ji, roj tum busy rehte ho to
t

hk hai , aj ek din maine call nhi kiya to janab possessive ho rhe hai

Shiva : kya kre , meri jangli billi hai hi aisi
Raavi smiles blushing : ho gaya tumhara to phone rkhu, mujhe late ho rha hai
Shiva : kaha jaa rhi hai,
Raavi : kyu btau
Shiva : arey, mujhse to kehti hai ki exams hai ,mil nhi skte aur ab kisse milne jaa rhi hai
Raavi : ohho to janab ko jalan ho rhi hai,
Shiva : haa, to ,tu mujhe mna krke kisi aur se milne jaegi to jalan to hogi na (fake anger)

Raavi : bharosa nhi hai mujh pr
Shiva : khud se bhi jyada bharosa hai, bs teri fikr hai isliye puch rha hu, agr tujhe nhi btana to its ok , rehne de
Raavi  : wo mai varun se milne jaa rhi thi
Shiva shockingly: varun se, pr kyu
Raavi :varun ko award Mila hai aur wo kl USA return ja rha hai to bs aj mere sath celebrate krna chahta tha isliye
Shiva : thk hai, pr jaa kaha rhi hai
Raavi tells him the name of the hotel
Shiva : thk hai, jaa pr dhyan rkhna apna

Raavi : tu fikr mt kr , varun dost hai Mera
Shiva in mind : is baat ki to fikr hai ki tu
u

se dost smjhti hai aur wo kuch aur hi hai,..jo tujhe dikhai nhi deta

Call ends

In hotel
Raavi congratulates varun and they order  drinks and cake to celebrate

Varun : mai wash room ja kr aata hu
Raavi nods

Varun comes to the waiter and ask him to mix alcohol in raavi's drink
He pays him a good amount
Varun comes back and waiter comes with the order

He keeps the mixed drink in front of raavi
Raavi takes   a sip : hmmmm...ye kitna ajib taste kr rha hai,  bht karwa hai

Varun : kya bol rhi ho tum, acha to hai, piyo na
Raavi  takes another sip : nhi yaar, ye bht hi Ganda hai, mujhe nhi pina

Varun : kya yaar, hm yha celebrate krne aye hai aur tum drink lene se hi mna kr rhi ho, tumhe mujh pr trust nhi hai kya (makes sad face )
Raavi : aisi baat nhi hai,..mai to bs,..chl thk hai tu naraj mt ho , mai piti hu

She drink it all
Raavi feels dizzy : Mera sir gum rha hai,  mujhe bht ajib sa feel ho rha hai
Varun mujhe ghr jana hai

She tries to stand up bt get disbalanced
Varun hold her

Varun in mind : bs ab ye Nasha tujh pr puri tarah se Chad Jae to tujhe hosh nhi rhega ki kya hua , ab Shiva teri life se bahar( smile evily)
Raavi : kya soch rha hai, mujhe ghr le kr chl
Varun holding her : chl

They take two three steps and raavi stopped
Varun : kya hua chl
Raavi : nhi , ruk, mujhe ghr nhi jaana,
Wo ab puri tarh se talli ho gayi thi

Raavi jerked varun and started twirling
Raavi : mujhe sb kuch kitna alag lg rha hai, mn kr rha hai ki ....

Imagine all the dialogs of raavi as drunked

Varun : raavi dekh tu na hosh me nhi hai, mai tujhe room me le kr chlta hu,
raavi : kyu, room me kyu   ,
Varun : tujhe rest krna hai na
Raavi : nhi, mujhe rest nhi krna, mujhe to (thinking),....kya krna hai mujhe

Varun in mind : agr ye room me nhi gayi to Mera plan kaise successful hoga, 
To raavi : raavi dekh tujhe jo krna hai room me chl kr krna
Raavi : kyu pr,  ..yha kyu nhi....
Varun : kyuki yha sb dekh rhe hai
Raavi : achaaa...to ek kaam kr mujhe na Shiva ke pas le chl,

Varun gets angry hearing Shiva name :
k

yu, tujhe Shiva ke pas kyu jana hai

Raavi : kyuki sirf Shiva hi to hai jo mujhe smbhal skta hai,  mujhe smjhta hai, mujhse pyar krta hai
Varun : aur mai??
Raavi : tu...tu to Mera frnd hai,  bht acha wala frnd,   pr Shiva meri life hai,Mera pyar, meri jindagi,...I love him ,I Love him so much (spreading her hand and twirling around)

Varun : tujhe Shiva ke alawa koi nhi dikhta,
Raavi : dikhte hai na, sb dikhte hai, pr Shiva sbse alag dikhta hai,  you know varun , use dekh kr Mera mn kya krta hai....
Varun : kya

Raavi says each lines with action : ki mai use hug kru , aise ki kbhi use dur hou hi nhi, bs Kas kr use pakde rhu, bht, bht ,bht pyar kru,..uske gaalo pe hath rkhu, uske baalo ko sehlau  aur....

Varun was getting more and more angry
Raavi :  aur,.....aur , use kiss kru

Varun gets out of control , he holds her from shoulder tightly : jb dekho Shiva, shiva Shiva , bs, aj ke baad wo Shiva nhi hoga teri zindagi me

He holds her hand and try to drag her to the room
Raavi tries to free herself : mujhe nhi jana, chod mujhe

TBC......
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