AVNEIL SS- WAQT

By zeee003

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An avneil story I wrote a few years back.. posting it finally. Hoping for positive response. The story start... More

You're always on my mind
Unexpected
1st Teaser
Note
Hate?
Decisions
Thank you
Feelings and cupids
Finally
Next?

Revelation

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By zeee003

Part 3,

Avni wears the scrubs and hurries to Mowgli.

Mowgli is seen breathing heavily through the oxygen mask.

Avni- mowgli, bacha.. mumma hai apke paas.. shaant ho jao.. Ssh.. relax.

Avni tries to calm him down, while Neil is seeing everything from the glass door.

As if Mowgli knew his mom is there, his breathing starts to slow down and then it becomes normal.

Doctor checks him, and asks Avni to wait outside.

He comes out.

Doctor- amazing, ek bacche ke apni maa ke aas paas hone ka ehsaas kitna strong hota hai ydh aj apne prove kar diya.

Neil looks at Avni.

Doctor- Mowgli is out of danger now. Kuch ghamte mein hum usse ward mein shift kar denge.

Avneil get relieved at this.

Doctor leaves.

Neil- sahi kaha Doctor ne waise.. bilkul ek maa ki tarah shaant kar diya.

Avni looks other side.

Neil holds her shoulders and brings her close to him.

Neil- kaise Avni? Mere sawaal ka jawab do. Kaise tumne yeh sab kiya? Uski maa ki tarah ho.. par aaj jiss tarah tum panic kar rahi thi.. behosh tak ho gayi thi.. aisa reaction kyun Avni? Kyun?

Neil raises his voice at the last part.

Avni- kyunki main Mowgli ki maa hun!

Avni blurts out, not realising, but then widens her eyes.

Neil gets shocked.

Neil- what? Uski maa ho?

Avni knew there's no going back now, and it's God's way of letting Neil know the truth.

Avni- haan Neil.. Mowgli mera bacha hai.. hum.. humara beta hai woh!

She says taking his hand in hers.

Neil leaves her hand and walks out in a daze, Avni follows him.

In the room where Avni was admitted.

Avni- Neil.. tum chup kyun ho? Kuch toh bolo.

Neil sits down on a chair.

Neil- Mowgli.. m.. mera beta hai. Isiliye mujhe usse ek connection sa feel hota tha.. isiliye hum donon mein itni similarities hai.. yeh koi coincidence nahin hai.. woh mera apna bacha hai...

Avni nods.

Suddenly he turns to Avni.

Neil- aur tumne mujhse yeh sach.. itni badi baat chupayi? Kisne haq diya tumhe itni badi baat chupane ka? Kyun chupaya tumne?

Neil shouts the last part.

Avni- Kyunki Vidyut.. ahh!

Avni cries in pain holding her stomach.

Neil- Avni.. kya hua? Avni?

Avni- Aah Neil!

Neil- Avni tum theek toh ho?

Neil gets worried.

Avni- Sunheri ko bulao.. usse sab pata hai.. Aah.

Neil calls Sunheri.

Sunheri comes to the room.

Sunheri- Avni kya hua? Oh.. fir wahi dard.. Neil tum thodi der ke liye bahar jao.. main dekhti hun.

Neil- par..

Sunheri convinces him to go out.

After some time, Sunherj comes out. Neil is sitting on a chair.

Neil- kya hua tha Avni ko? Ab thik hai woh?

Sunheri- Avni ko kabhi kabhi aise dard hote rehte hain. Maine usse sleeping pills de diye hain abhi ke liye. Darasal pregnancy.. mera matlab hai ki..

Neil- mowgli hi woh sach hai na jo Avni chupa rahi thi.

Neil says making sunheri shocked.

Neil- Avni ne sab bata diya hai mujhe.. par yeh dard.. yeh kyun hua usse?

Sunheri- han Neil.. main jaanti hun usse aisa nahin karna chahiye tha par..

Neil- main dard ki wajah pooch raha hun.

Sunheri- Avni jab pregnant thi.. tab usse last 3 months mein bohot complications thi.. aur doctors ne usse baby abort karne ko kaha tha..

(This is just a fictional story)

Neil gets shocked.

Sunheri- par Avni ne mana kar diya.

Flashback

Avni- Nahin Sunheri.. main aisa soch bhi nahin sakti.. yeh baccha toh anjaane mein mere jeene ki wajah ban gaya hai.. mere aur Neil ki pyaar ki nishaani hai yeh.

Sunheri- Avni tu hi practical hoke sochne ko bolti hai na..

Avni- tum promise karo.. ki agar mujhe kuch ho gaya.. toh mere baby ka khayal rakhogi.. isse Neil ke paas le jaogi na tum?

Sunheri nods looking at the hope in Avni's eyes.

Flashback ends

Tears are falling from Neil's eyes, which he wipes.

Sunheri- Avni aur Mowgli donon safely bach toh gaye.. par complications ki wajah se Avni ko yeh pains hote rehte hain.

Neil looks on crying.

Sunheri- jitna bata sakti thi maine bata diya.. kyunki main jaanti hun Avni ne khud jo dard saha hai woh kabhi nahin bataengi. Baaki saara sach woh khud tumhe bata degi.

Saying this Sunheri leaves from there.

Neil- Ab kya baaki hai? Kyun itni badi baat chupayi tumne Avni kyun? Kya mera janne ka koi haq hi nahin hai?

Next day.. morning

Avni wakes up and realises all that happened yesterday. She gets up and moves out of the room.

She sees Neil sleeping cutely on a chair. Smiling, she carresses his hairs and turns to go, when Neil holds her wrist, stopping her.

She looks back surprised, and Neil opens his eyes and takes her back to the room she was in and closes the door.

Avni- Neil yeh kya kar rahe ho tum?

Neil- Sach jaanne ki koshish.. sach batao Avni mujhe poora sach janna hai.

Avni- konsa sach? Koi sach nahin hai.. main nahin chahti thi ki tum kabhi bhi Mowgli ke baare mein jaanon bas!

Avni says the last part not meeting his eyes.

Neil lifts her face with his finger, and looks in her eyes.

Neil- yahi baat meri ankhon mein dekhkar kaho.

Both look in each other's eyes. Avneil bg plays.

Avni's eyes well up.

Avni- mat karo mujhe majboor Neil.. main nahin bata sakti.

She turns away from him.

Neil- kyun nahin bata sakti? Kya mera sach janne ka koi haq nahin hai?

Avni- sach tum jaante ho Neil.

Neil- mujhe poori baat janni hai.

Avni- kyun gade murde ukhaar rahe ho Neil? Main nahin bata sakti.

Neil- kyun?

Avni- kyunki tum toot jaoge.. aur main tumhe aise nahin dekh sakti.

Neil- sach chupana sirf tumhe andar se khaega.

Avni- bacha hi kya hai mere andar.. poori khaali ho chuki hoon main.. aur ab toh iss khaalipan ki bhi aadat pad gayi hai. Par tumhe toot-te hue nahin dekh sakti.

Neil- aisi bhi kya baat hai jo mujhe tod degi?

Both of them are in tears at this.

Neil takes her hand and keeps it on his head.

Neil- agar kabhi bhi mujhse saccha pyaar kiya hai toh tumhe meri kasam.

(Dramatic na?)

Avni shockingly removes her hand.

Avni- Neil!

Neil- main bhi aisa nahin karna chahta tha.. par tum ready hi nahin ho..

Avni interrupts him.

Avni- jab mujhe complications ka pata chala tha toh main khud ko rok nahin paayi aur tumhare paas ghar aa rahi thi.

Neil- kya?

Avni- Vidyut shayad ussi time bail pe nikla tha.. usne mujhe dekh liya aur mujhe jaane ko kaha.. warna woh baby ko hurt karega.

Neil gets shocked once again.

(Flashback)

Vidyut shows Avni a video of Neil at secret gunpoint.

(Flashback ends)

Avni- aur tumhari jaan bhi khatre mein thi.

She sighs after telling the whole truth.

On the other hand, Neil sits on bed and cries.

Avni goes and kneels in front of him.

Neil- Vidyut ne ek baar phir sab kuch cheen liya mujhse.. tumhe.. humara pyaar.. humara beta.. humari khushiyan.. humari happy family ka sapna.. sab kuch.

Both of them share a teary eyelock.

Neil- tum isiliye mujhse door jaa rahi thi na?

Avni looks away.

Neil- toh phir ab jab Vidyut mar gaya.. toh tumne mujhe kyun nahin bataya?

Avni- kyunki tum mujhse nafrat karte ho Neil. Main darr gayi thi ki tum gusse mein mowgli ko mujhsw door kar doge. I'm sorry!

They cry holding hands.

Suddenly, Sunheri knocks the door.

Sunheri- Avni? Tu andar hai? Darwaza kyun band hai?

Avni leave each other's hands and Avni sits on bed while Neil unlocks the door.

Sunheri- Avni, tu ab thik hai na?

Avni nods.

Sunheri understands something has happened looking at both Avneil's eyes.

Sunheri- Mowgli ko room mein shift kar rahe hain.. those der mein hum usse mil sakte hain.

Avni and Neil happily look at each other.

Sunheri smiles.

Sunheri- bass yahi batane ayi thi.

Neil- Sunheri, tum kal se yahin par ho.. go and freshen up atleast.

Sunheri- han thik hai.. par main waapas aungi.

Saying this she leaves Avneil in the room.

Neil- main jaake payments settle karke aata hun.

Avni nods.

Neil goes out and smiles and so does Avni in the room at the subtle development in their equation.

After sometime,

Avni is sitting outside the ward.

Doctor- Miss Neilanjana, humne patient to room 4 mein shift kar diya hai. Ap jaake mil sakti hain.

Neil comes there and listens to this.

Neil- Doctor, kitne log jaa sakte hain?

Doctor- Maximum do log abhi ke liye.

He leaves.

Avneil look at each other and both together go to the room. They smile looking at Mowgli safe.

They both sit on either side of the bed.

Avni kisses his forehead and Neil kisses his hands.

Mowgli opens his eyes.. they get happy.

Nurse notices this and calls the doctor who does the check up and goes.

Avni- ab dard toh nahin ho raha?

Mowgli- superhero sons ko pain nahin hota.

Neil gets confused at this.

Avni- maine apko kitni baar haath chudake jaane ko mana kiya hai. Promise karo.. yeh repeat nahin hoga.

Mowgli- promise mumma.

Neil gets shocked.

Mowgli- oops! Mumma nahin bolna tha na.

Avni- yahan par bacche nahin hai na.. toh ap mujhe mumma bula sakte ho.

She looks at the longing in Neil's eyes.

Avni- apne poocha tha na ki apke papa kon hai.. yeh..

She points at a surprised Neil.

Avni- yeh hain apke papa.

Neil's eyes are teary.

Mowgli- sachi? Superman mere papa hai? Phir apne kyun kaha tha ki hum papa se nahin mil sakte? Aur Superman ne bhi kabhi kuch nahin kaha.

Avneil hold their ears and say sorry to mowgli.

Mowgli- it's OK.. Mowgli ka dil bohot bada hai.

They smile at his cuteness.

Mowgli- par papa..

Neil looks at him shocked.

Neil- kya kaha? Papa?

Mowgli- mumma main inko papa bula sakta hun na?

Avni nods at him.

Neil- phirse papa bolna.

Mowgli- Papa.. papa.

Neil gets emotional and kisses his forehead.

Nurse comes and says,

Nurse- patient ke injection ka time ho gaya hai.. aplog please..

Mowgli suddenly holds Avni's hand.

Mowgli- Mumma injection.

Neil- han beta usmein medicine hai.. apko jaldi se strong banna hai na?

Avni is also scared.

Avni- iska koi alternative nahin hai kya sister?

Neil looks at her and goes into flashback

Avni is standing on the bed. Neil is trying to get hold of her.

Neil- Avni! Kaise bacchon jaisi harkatein kar rahi ho.. neeche utro.

Avni- sochna bhi mat Neil! Pehle uss injection ko phenko.

Neil- Avni.. yeh sirf check up ke liye samples lene aye hain yaar.

Avni- nahin matlab nahin.. aur waise bhi mujhe koi check up ki zarurat nahin hai. Main bilkul fit woo..

Avni is about to fall from bed.. Neil catches her.

Avni- Neil chodo mujhe woh injection laga denge.

Neil- bass mera haath pakdo aur unhe apna kaam karne do.

(Flashback ends)

He smiles remembering that moment.

Neil- bilkul tumhari tarah darpok hai yeh.

Avni- main koi darpok varpok nahin hun Neil.

Neil- toh phir Mowgli ko injection lagwane do.

Avni- mowgli ghabarata hai isse.

Neil- Mowgli toh fighter hai.. kyun?

Mowgli nods.

Neil- toh phir chalo.. eyes close karo aur superhero ke baare mein socho.

Nurse smiles at gives the injection.

He holds Avni's hands assuring her.

After that, they make Mowgli sleep and go out.

Neil- jab tak Mowgli thik nahin ho jaata tab tak tum aur Mowgli ghar pe aake raho.

Avni- par Neil.. gharwale?

Neil- unhe hum samjha denge.. aur phir mujhe Mowgli ke saath time spend karne ka bhi chance mil jaega.

Avni- ok.

Avni- Neil.. papaji ko Mowgli ke baare mein pata hai.

Neil- toh phir unhone mujhe kyun nahin bataya.

Avni- meri wajah se.. unhone mujhe samjhaya tha.. par main hi darr gayi thi..

Neil- it's ok.. main samajh sakta hun.

Avni- tum gussa nahin ho?

Avni asks him, surprised.

Neil- filhal toh nahin hun.. actually abhi kaise react karun samajh nahin aa raha.

After sometime, Neil is on call with Shweta.

Shweta- Thank God! Idhar Mowgli ki tension mein Prakash ji bhi poori raat so nahin paaye.

Neil- Mom, mujhe apse kuch baat karni thi.

Here, Avni us talking with Doctor.

Doctor-so, kal discharge kar denge.

Avni nods and Neil comes there.

Avni- Neil, tum jaake fresh ho jao.. kal se yahin par ho.

Neil- kal se toh tum bhi yahin ho.

It's night,

Avni is trying to make Mowgli sleep.

Avni- beta.. raat ho gayi hai.. mumma chocolate kahan se laegi?

Mowgli- mujhe chocolate chahiye.. chahiye.. chahiye!!.

Neil- yeh rahi chocolate!
Aur ab mumma ko pareshaan mat karo.

Avni- tum aj bhi apne paas chocolate leke ghumte ho?

Neil- tumhe yaad hai?


Another update here people. Thank you for all the love!!

Regards,
Zeee003













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