The Grand Journey (Rewrite)

By Supernova121

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This is a rewrite of the story The Grand Journey as the character will be someone from a world that is simila... More

Bio
Entering The World of Pokémon Every Child's Dream
The World of Pokémon
Adjusting to The New Life
The New Pokémon and New Assistant
Keenan's First Task Pt.1
Keenan's First Task Pt.2
The Battle in The Volcano
Back at Kanto
Onto The Unova Region
New Captures and Aura User
The New Pokémon Dome
Keenan's Progress
Meeting The Princess of Viridian City
Latios The Eon Dragon
The Hardened Shelgon
Entering The Kalos Region
The Gym Leader Viola and Idol
Keenan's First Gym Battle and New Rivalry
The Secret's Out
Keenan The Prodigy
Galar Expedition Pt.1
Galar Expedition Pt.2
Off To Sinnoh
Gyomei's Power
The Grave In Paradise
Alone Time With Chloe
The Mysterious White Riolu
A Rival's Reunion
The Return of Rizevim Pt.1
Adventure in Kanto and Alpha
Misty's Visit
The Electrifying Gym
An Electrifying Result
Uncle Tobias
Shiny Beast of Wind
Iron Island Adventure
A Gift From Someone and A Third Rival
New Rival Arrvies
Keenan's Mission and A Shocking Revelation
Keenan's Adventure in Kalos Spheal's Development
Keenan's Adventure in Kalos Meeting Korrina
Shalour Gym Showdown
New Captures Here and There...Korrina's New Crush
Chloe's Big Surprise
Alola Here We Come
Family Vacation Pt.1
Family Vacation Pt.2
Family Vacation Final
Small Future Teaser's
Turning Up the Heat
Danger's of The Orbs
Healing and New Evolutions
Battle of Hatred
Keenan's and Chloe's Alola Trip
Keenan's "Grandmother" of The Pokémon World
Snowpoint City Troubles Pt.1
Snowpoint City Trouble's Pt.2
The Colossal Aftermath
The Final Gym Battle Pt.1
The Final Gym Battle Pt.2
Keenan's Birthday Party Pt.1
Keenan's Birthday Party Pt.2
Tobias vs Keenan, Battle of Growth
Hanging With The Hoenn Champion
Welcome To Fatherhood
Tatsumi's Time To Shine
Johto League Conclusion Pt.1
Johto League Conclusion Pt.2
Calm Before The Storm
The Sinnoh League Rumble
Brain's vs Stupidity
Semi Final Opponent Maiden of Fire
Johto's Maiden of Fire vs Mysterious Prodigy Pt.1
Johto's Maiden of Fire vs Mysterious Prodigy Pt.2
Johto's Maiden of Fire vs Mysterious Prodigy Final
Intermission Before The Finals
The Legendary Battle Pt.1
The Legendary Battle Pt.2
The Legendary Battle Finale
Award's Ceremony
After League Clarity
3 Idiots In A House and Battle Start
Backed Into A Corner
The Ever So Obvious Conclusion
Welcome Back To The Beautiful Paradise
Nightmare Tapu Koko
Alolan Beach Relaxation
What Takuto Battle's Goh Who Will Win
3 Way Split
The New Orb Mission
Titan of Iron Metagross
Parenting 101 and Kala's League Battle
Limit Breaking Problems
Kalakaua's Semi Final Battle
Kalakaua's Semi Final Battle Pt.2
Hoenn League Finals Pt.1
Hoenn League Finals Pt.2
Kalakaua's Award's Ceremony and A Warning
Chapter 100 Milestone
The Coordinator's
James True Power
Keenan's Elite Four Challenge...Aaron
Keenan's Elite Four Challenge...Aaron Pt.2
Aaron's Fate and Takuto's Birthday
Revavroom Mayhem and Takuto's Birthday Pt.2
Takuto's Birthday Final
A Taste of Power
Agni The God of Fire Pt.0
Agni The God of Fire Pt.1
Agni The God of Fire Pt.2
Agni The God of Fire Aftermath
The Beast of Volcano's Entei
Been Awhile Kalos
Tatsumaki The Psychic Empress
Battle Assault on Tatsumi
Ryuga The Dragon Emperor
The 4 Horseman
Alain The Mega Evolution Expert
Double Trouble
Psychic Nuisance Pt.1
Psychic Nuisance Final
The 4 Destroyers
Primordial Pokémon
Alola's Secret Pt.1
Alola's Secret Pt.2
Disaster In Alola
Oceanus The Princess of Oceans
Oceanus Aftermath
Make Up
The House of Keenan
Domino and The 3 Stooges
Prelude of The Alola League
Battle Royale Massacre
Define Humiliation
Mallow vs Ohia, The Flower's Power
Semi Final Tension
Kalakaua vs Ohia, Flower vs Beast Pt.1
Kalakaua vs Ohia, Beast vs Flower Pt.2
The Final Countdown
Let The Finals Begin
The Climax
Moments Before Disaster
Prologue to Namakaokahi
Leviathan of The Seas and Possession Namakaokahi
Namakaokahi's Fall
The Aftermath and Moving On
Shiny Beast of Thunder
Keenan vs Amethyst, Battle of Realities
Shiny Ho-oh Battle
Worlds Strongest vs Worlds Mysterious Prologue
Worlds Strongest vs Worlds Mysterious Pt.2
Worlds Strongest vs Worlds Mysterious Final
Preparing for Lance
Champion of Dragon's Pt.1
Champion of Dragon's Pt.2
Haleakala and Espie's Date
Anomaly Mission Pt.1
Anomaly Mission Pt.2
Hoenn's Star Trainer
Steven vs Kalakaua Pt.1
Steven vs Kalakaua Pt.2
Steven vs Kalakaua Final
Primordial Hydreigon
Project Mew and Tatsumi
Arriving in Sinnoh
The Undefeated Champion Pt.1
The Undefeated Champion Pt.2
The Undefeated Champion Final
Adventures with A. Haleakala
Welcome to He-I Mean Youngster's Camp
Generation's of Miracles
The Esper Orb and Lake Guardians
Winter Land of Icirus
A True Dragon
The Primordial Decidueye
James vs Keenan Test Run
'O ka Pō'ino A Puni Ke Kihi
Movie Event Prologue
Movie Event Battle
Movie Event End
Fun Things Are Fun
Filler's Are Nice
Old Faces Makes An Appearance
Bringing Back Memories
Audrey and Amethyst
Haleakala and Lehua's Other Worldly Adventure
A Baby and Mom Related Chapter....FINALLY
Ash vs James Rematch
A. Haleakala and Haleakala
Tatsumi and Kalakaua Chronicles
The Kalos Gathering
Let it Begin Fight for The Title
Tag Team Massacre
Official Round's Start

The Return of Rizevim Pt.2

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By Supernova121

Chapter 30


No One POV

Currently at the battle between Tobias,Riley and Cynthia it's seen that both Riley and Cynthia are struggling up against Rizevim's monstrous Hydreigon while Tobias is the only one that is actually standing up against him and giving it a run for it's money as Tobias Lucario is going head to head against that monster, as Cynthia is checking over her Garchomp.

Cynthia:impossible just how strong is that thing it's man handling our Pokémon like it's nothing but Tobias's Lucario is the only going up against head to head.she said as her Garchomp stood back up 

Riley:believe me when I say this but if Tobias had used his Lucario or his other monstrous Pokémon against you then your Garchomp wouldn't even stand a chance.he told her

Cynthia:what do you mean by that he has another Pokémon like that.she asked him

Riley:*nods*yes he does but I think it'll be wise to leave this to Tobias..but I also hold hatred for that bastard he's the reason why I was an orphan back then, *looks at Lucario*you ready to keep going Lucario.he asked him as he charged up his aura 

Riley:*smirks*right help out Tobias's Lucario now.he said to him

As Riley's Lucario had ran straight forward the incredibly large Hydreigon as they seen Tobias Lucario land a powerful Close Combat on the monstrous being which he growled out in pain while Riley's Lucario had threw an Aura Sphere at it which made an explosion as it's seen that the Hydreigon is getting tired.

Cynthia:it's getting tired keep throwing attacks at it Garchomp use Scale Shot.she commanded her 

Riley:Lucario use Flash Pulse.he commanded 

Tobias:Lucario use that Flash Pulse and combine it with your Steel Cannon.he gave out his command

Tobias's Lucario had seen Riley's Lucario launch the combined attack of Dragon Pulse and Flash Cannon while Tobias's Lucario had gathered the energy and launched his own combined attack of Steel Beam and Dragon Pulse as Cynthia's Garchomp attack had also combined into one as that one large and powerful attack had hit Hydreigon as it launched a Dragon Pulse but once it made contact it made once more another large explosion. 

Cynthia,Tobias and Riley was covering their faces from the winds and shockwaves but while that was happening Rizevim had gritted his teeth in annoyance but smirked as he returned his Hydreigon as he disappeared but before he did.

Rizevim:I'll retreat for now but rest assured the next time we meet it won't be the same result, that means both you and Keenan will live for now.he declared to them as he disappeared from the smoke

Tobias:*angered*get back here you fucking coward.he said angrily 

The dust and smoke had cleared as all that's left is a pretty big crater from that combined attack as it just the 3 trainers that was battling up against him as Tobias had punched the ground in frustration and anger.

Tobias:*yells*DAMMIT THAT PIECE OF SHIT, JUST WHEN I HAD THE RIGHT MOMENT TO KILL HIM FOR WHAT HES DONE TO US.he said angrily as his Lucario just glared at the spot where he was 

Riley:I know how you feel Tobias but we must check on Keenan I have a feeling he won't be happy when he wakes up.he said back to him as he stood back up 

Tobias:yeah your right return Lucario we're leaving.he said as he returned him back into his ball

Cynthia:wait just minute what is going on right now and let me come to I'm also worried about Keenan and his Pokémon.she said to him

Riley:it doesn't involve you Sinnoh Champion don't you have other things to be doing.he said to her

Cynthia:I know it doesn't involve me but I'm still worried about Keenan and his Pokémon after all that guy tried to kill his but just who was he anyways.she said back to him

Tobias stood there debating if he should really tell her that Rizevim was both his and Keenan's dad as he knows that Cynthia and the International Police had stopped looking for him but he still doesn't like being followed and neither does Keenan as Tobias had knew that Cynthia would put both him and his brother aside and find the similarities. But it was when Tobias just sighed to himself softly already coming to terms that Cynthia had managed to see him again as that was what he was trying to avoid in the first place, but he let it slide since their bastard of a father was trying to catch Keenan and there was no way in hell that he'd let him do it.

Tobias:that person earlier was my dad both mines and Keenan's dad that is who he was.he answered her 

Cynthia:*wide eyed*what that person is your guys dad but why was he attacking you and why-.she was cut off when he said

Tobias:enough with the dam questions already if you really want to see Keenan and how his Pokémon are doing then come with us, but let me see him first I have a feeling he's not going to be happy.he said back to her 

Timekskip brought to you by Tatsumi walking on the beach with Iori as Sakura is seen with a camera taking pictures of them.

Still No One POV

Meanwhile at the Pokémon center Tatsumi,Iori add Sakura are seen away from Keenan since he's currently punching a tree in complete anger and rage as he's punching the tree so hard that it's making indents in it as Iori and Sakura are wide eyed to see just how strong he is while Tatsumi on the other hand is also wide eyed but for a different reason, and that reason is to not get onto his bad side.

Keenan:*angrily punching the tree*dammit dammit fucking dammit, after all this time that piece of shit finally came back and fucking Tobias didn't let me fight with him FUCK.he yelled at the end as he punched it once more 

Sakura:*nervously*ugh K-Keenan your hands are bleeding I think you should stop.she said nervously toward him

Keenan:*looks at her with an intense look*shut up you don't understand the crap that I've gone through while living with that piece of shit.he said angrily toward her as she jumped in surprise 

Tatsumi:*sweating a bit*Keenan please stop if you continue punching that tree your going to break your hands.he pleaded to him

Keenan:I don't give a shit just as long as I can let out some steam then I'm fine, I swear I'll kill him for what he planned on doing to Dartrix that scumbag really needs to die.he said as he's gritting his teeth

Once again Keenan started to take his anger out onto the tree that's in front of him as he's punching and kicking it while the others are standing on the sidelines watching him take his anger out onto the tree as it's clear that he's injured but he's still beating the crap out of the tree in front of him. As Tatsumi was about to go in to stop him even if he knew that he'd get punched in process which he will also fight back and get some sense into him but he was stopped when someone had put their hand onto his shoulder as he turned around and seen Riley,Tobias and Cynthia.

Riley:*shakes his head*don't do it let his older brother take care of this.he told him

Tatsumi:*his eyes widens*wait it's you from the place where we battled does this mean that you guys defeated him.he said out in surprise 

Tobias:no we did not but the next time he shows his face he's dead, but for now.he said as he walked up behind Keenan and trapped his shirt and threw him

Tobias:you stop punching that dam tree it can't fight back how about you fight me.he said to him as Keenan was surprised but gotten angered

Keenan:*angered*you asshole why didn't you let me fight with you I could've helped.he said as he started to attack him 

As Tobias had expertly parried and blocked his punches and kicks as he grabbed his arm and put him into an arm bar for he can talk to him properly as Keenan is now immobilized.

Tobias:*holding him*Keenan calm down I know how you feel but you cannot let your anger control you.he said to him as he's holding him down

Keenan:*snarling*don't give me that crap you fucking knocked me out did you think that I wouldn't be able to he-.he was cut off when he said 

Tobias:*yells*BECAUSE I DIDN'T WANTED TO LOSE YOU TOO SO STOP FUCKING ACTING THIS WAY KEENAN.he yelled as he threw him across the grass

Sakura:*wide eyed as she's sweating*i'm not sure if i can see him acting this way just what exactly happened.she said as she's watching the person that saved her act so angry

Iori:*looks at Tatsumi*just what the hell happened anyways you left for a few minutes and sooner or later you texted me that something serious is going on.she asked him

Tatsumi:*scratches the back of his head*well it's complicated to say the least.he said back to her

Cynthia:can he really calm him down he doesn't seem to be stopping.she wondered out loud

Riley:well there is only one way to stop him I wonder if he'll do it.he answered her

As Keenan is still attacking Tobias getting  his anger and what not out which he doesn't mind since If he doesn't get it out now then he'll just take it out on someone else and Keenan doesn't want to act like Rizevim although he knows that both him and Keenan have a Rizevim side and it  triggers rarely but when it does trigger then they can be ruthless.

Tobias:*blocks his punch*cmon Keenan stop it already just calm down.he said to him as he looked at his face

Keenan:*red faced*no I won't stop until you answer me why you didn't let me fight along side with you, me and you made a promise that we'll kill that bastard.he said back to him

Tobias:dammit why can't you just understand that your now match for him right now both your Latios and Heatran got defeated by that monsters Hydreigon and plus he almost killed your precious Dartrix so just snap out it. I know how you feel brother because Lucario was in that same situation before until we worked and trained our asses off until we couldn't walk so please calm down.he said back to him as Keenan went for kick which he barely dodged

Tobias:*sighs*fine then you leave me no choice do it now.he said out loud

Keenan was about to attack Tobias once again until they heard something as it was a beautiful and calming melody which made everyone stop what they were doing as Keenan had stopped mid punch when he heard the song, as his eyes widened in shock at what he's listening to right now.

The Pokémon had started to slowly make its way down toward Tobias as its floating besides him as the Pokémon that's making the beautiful song and melody is Meloetta as this Meloetta was one of their mothers Pokémon as the 2 of them used to always sing with each other.

Keenan:*wide eyed as he has tears in his eyes*no way is that moms Meloetta.he asked in shock 

Tobias:*nods*yes it is she wanted me to catch her as I knew this was the only way to calm you down since you used to always love the melody and songs that Meloetta sang,and it seems it still works thankfully.he said back to him as he slowly makes his way toward Meloetta 

Keenan:*gently pats her head*to think that I'll be seeing you again Meloetta.he said as she smiled at him

Tobias:well now that your better and calm now let me tell you this, the reason why I knocked you out and asked your friend there to get you to safety is not because you were not only going to hold me back but because, your Pokémon needs to be stronger then before so that's why. Just use this as motivation to get stronger alright because the next time we see that asshole I won't be knocking you out because we'll be fighting him together alright.he said as he held out his fist

Keenan:*smiles as he gets tears in his eyes*yeah you got it I'll this as motivation to get stronger and you can bet your ass that I'll be different.he said back to him

As the 2 brothers had fist bumped each other as everyone there had stood there witnessing all of this as both Sakura and Iori are wide eyed with shock to see that there's a super rare Mythical Pokémon in front of them which is Meloetta while Cynthia is even more interested in both Keenan and Tobias as she heard from earlier that Keenan has his own Legendary Pokémon.

Riley:*looks at Cynthia*oh and another thing don't even think about trying to talk to him he doesn't need anymore crap then what he experienced today so just drop it.he said back to her

Cynthia:*crosses her arms*Alright geez you don't have to threaten me about that.she said to him 

Keenan:*nods*yeah you don't have to worry about that I'll get straight to training soon as my Pokémon are feeling better.he said back to him

Tobias:*hands him a poke ball*here Keenan take this with you.he said as he looked toward him

Keenan:*looking at the ball*is this Meloetta's ball.he asked him which he nodded

Tobias:*nods*yes it is you see I've had her ever since mother passed and so I think it's time for you to have her and besides she came in handy whenever I had nightmares of Rizevim.he said 

Keenan didn't said anything as he grabbed ahold of the poke ball and smiled at it as he put it at the crown of his head as he then clipped it onto his belt as Tobias and Keenan looked toward one another and did a brotherly handshake to one another as they know that they'll have each others backs as Tobias then looked toward Tatsumi.

Tobias:*looks toward Tatsumi*and you there Tatsumi you also caught my interest I've never seen a Pokémon like that before and I also looked forward to seeing your progress as a trainer and also both you and my brother in the Unova league.he told him as he was surprised 

Tatsumi:*blinks in surprise*huh wait how do you know my name.he asked in surprise 

Tobias:*chuckles*it's something only I can know and Keenan I'll see you another time.he said back to him

As Tobias had started to walk away leaving Riley,Keenan,Cynthia,Sakura and Iori with everyone else as Cynthia had also gotten one last look at Tobias and Keenan before she left as she definitely found those 2 relationship interesting but also made her even more curious about Rizevim and how he gotten his hands on an Alpha Hydreigon as she was going to chase after Tobias but he was already gone.

Riley:I'll see you again Keenan but for now I should be going and remember what I said about your Riolu.he said to him which he nodded

Keenan:*nods*yes you don't have to worry Riley.he replied to him as he ruffled his hair

Riley:*lightly smiles*good and also *glances toward Cynthia*remember what I said Sinnoh Champion if you try to do anything such as stalking him then I can assure you that you'll regret it.he said back to her as he started to walk away

Cynthia:*looks toward Keenan*you certainly have a very interesting family Keenan but I think I should get going as well, I'll see you later and I also want to know more about you and your brother you 2 are VERY interesting.she said as she started to walk away

Which left just left Keenan alone with his rival and the 2 pop idols as they are still wide eyed with shock at what just happened in front of them as they legit just seen an extremely rare Pokémon like Meloetta in front of their eyes and someone just willingly handed over the said Pokémon without any hesitation, as Keenan sweat dropped already knowing what's coming.

Tatsumi:*chuckles nervously as he scratches the back of his head*well this certainly was an interesting day that's for sure.he said out loud

Sakura:*wide eyed*did my eyes just deceive me or did that person just given him a Mythical Pokémon out like that.she said in surprise 

Iori:*wide eyed*yes he did and did I also hear correctly you have Legendary Pokémon like actual LEGENDARY Pokémon.she asked in shock 

Keenan:*groans as he sweat drops*this is going to be a real pain in the ass to explain that's for sure.he said to himself 

Timeskip brought to you by Tobias,Takuto,Gyomei,Danika,Leaf,Tatsumi,Quillon and Sakura watching the Sinnoh league as Keenan is in the finals battling up against ???

Change POV Keenan 

After I explained pretty much most of the things to Sakura and Iori which of course they were shocked to hear all of that from me and what happened to me as a child while living with that asshole known as Rizevim which of course those were the days that I cursed as I still get nightmares from the abuse and crap that he's put me through. But Iori and Sakura was even more shocked to hear that I even have Legendary Pokémon as the only ones that they know that I have is Latios and Heatran and well Meloetta although she's a Mythical.

Iori:*wide eyes*and here I thought you were a beginning trainer incredible you have Legendary Pokémon.she said back to me

Me:well I'm still a beginning trainer I just have the Legendary plot armor on my side that's all.he responded to her

Iori:but how you have 2 Legendary Pokémon and a Mythical which is Meloetta I don't think I know anyone that's a beginning trainer that has those kind of Pokémon.she said to me wide eyed

Me:well let's just drop it alright and I expect you guys to keep it a secret especially of what I told you who my brother is got it.i said to them sternly 

Sakura:*nods*yes you don't have to worry about that I'm just shocked to hear and see that both you and Tobias are actually related although you guys do sorta look alike.she said to him

Tatsumi:*looks at me*well how's your hand doing after all you was like having a dam boxing match with that tree.he asked me as I looked at my hands

Me:*looking at it*it's fine I should be able to train when I get back after all the Sinnoh league is around the corner and I still need to get more gym badges.i said back to him

Sakura:*blushing a bit*well how long are you planning on staying here Keenan.she asked me with a blush

Me:*thinks to myself*uh oh this can't be good.i thought to myself

Me:well I was planning on challenging another gym before I head back why is that.i said to her

Sakura:well I was wondering if we could go with you to whatever gym you challenge and watch you.she said to me 

Yeah I was expecting that but at the same time I guess she could come along with Iori I've seen the way she looks at Tatsumi as I smirked which made Tatsumi a bit uncomfortable as I'm looking at him but I didn't said anything but the downside is I was actually planning on going back 

Me:sure why not although I'm actually planning on going back to Kanto tomorrow.i said to her

Sakura:oh well how about we head there together I have some time off and I'll be glad to spend it with you.she said to me and I was not expecting that to come out of her

Me:*sweat drops*um is your manager or what not ok with that.i asked her 

Iori:*sighs*yeah she is trust me Sakura had to practically beg to let her come here with you and go wherever you go and the same can be said for me since I have to go with her.she said to me 

Me:*looks at Tatsumi*well how about you Tatsu want to comeback to Kanto with me.i asked him

Tatsumi:*shrugs*sure why not I've never really been to Kanto and I can also take a magnet train to Johto afterwards.he said back to me

Me:well alright then it's settled all of us are heading toward Kanto.i said out loud

But first I need to make sure that all of my Pokémon are ok and also tell the pilots at the airport at Castelia city to just head back to Kanto for me since I'll be traveling in Iori's or Sakura's private jet as I'm now even more motivated to get stronger and kill that asshole for what he's done to us.


A/N:This is it for the small Rizevim arc as I decided to make some suspense with him making an appearance and just a small glimpse of whatever Pokémon he has as some of you may already know that he has a Guzzlord but now you know he has a Hydreigon and a Honchkrow although he mainly uses that Pokémon to bring messages and such.  

Tatsumi,Iori and Sakura have agreed to head back to Kanto with Keenan let's see what sort of adventure they'll get themselves into as will Keenan catch a new Pokémon?

The Meloetta isn't the same Meloetta that Ash knew as it'll be a different one as that Meloetta was his mothers one.

Next chapter is gonna be "Future Previews"

Stay tuned👍

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