Naruro could tolerate many things , he can tolerate intence pain , hunger , thirst but he cannot tolerate being treated like a kid , right now when naruto told obito his cool MS abillity he didn't even praised him instead he started scolding him how he should not hide things from him , naruto was outright furious he know that he should have told obito but he just didn't got the time to how could you blame him ? He found out he had unlocked the legendary Mangekyo Sharingan in the middle of the night and then he forgot about it the next mourning then he remebered it .
'Naruto don't ever hide anything from me ever again , okay ' naruto's frown deepend , ' And if you do i am grounding you for a whole month that means no training , no hanging out with minako-chan and suki-chan ' that was it , naruto's face flushed red from anger 'How come you get to go on cool missions and get to be all lovey~dovey with rin-san and i can't even keep a secret from you ' Obito's blushed at the last part but replied
' BECAUSE I AM 23 YOU IDIOT ' Obito practically roared
'AND GUESS WHAT I DON'T GIVE A DAMNNN!!!' Naruto roared back
'Languege Naruto ' naruto realizing what he said appologized , obito also appologized for being so bossy
' You have a very Good abillity naruto ' naruto's face lit up at that
'YOU THINK SO ?' obito nodded and naruto hugged him
'THANKS NEE-SAN YOU ARE THE BEST ' Naruto said like they didn't even had a argument and obito just chukled at his little brother's antics before saying
'Naruto do you know about the consequences of using The Mangekyo Sharingan ' Naruto had a puzzled face which indicated that he did not
'What do you mean Nee-san?' Obito sighed
'Naruto why do you think i got mad mad at you earlier ' Naruto looked at him as he was stupid
'Because i didn't told ya that i also had one ' Obito sighed again
'Naruto do you feel any diffrent ? ' obito asked hoping that the answer would be a no
'No' he answered plainly
' Naruto The Mangekyo Sharingan is like a double edge sword ' naruto was growing more and more confused by the minute
' How so?' he asked
'Whenever you will use it you will lose sight andyou wil eventually go blind 'Naruto had a expresion like someone told him that he was gonna die tommorow .
'Then how come you are not blind , i have seen you use your kamui alot and there are even stories in which you spam kamui to slaughter platoons upon platoons of enemy anbu's during the war ' "smart" Obito thought before answering the confuesed boy .
'However there is a way to not go blind ' naruto leted out a sigh of relief at hearing that
'Don't keep me hanging like the stupid author does to readers and tell me already '
A/N : OI DON'T CALL ME STUPID YOU KNOW , I AM THE ONE WHO CREATED YOU
'will you both shut up i am getting to that ' obito snapped
'Yeah you tell him Nee-san , that lazy ass author don't know his place ' Naruto said smugly
'You too shut up ' auther laughed as naruto was left insulted
ENOUGH JOKES LETS GET BACK TO THE STORY
'You need to transplant your sibblings or parents eye's' Naruto's previous confused face turned into a disgusted one
' Do you mean you transplanted our parents eyes ' naruto asked not beliving it one bit
'Unfortunatly yes , but only our father had the Ms '
' So what about me , what am i gonna do ?'Naruto demanded
' Well i have mine original eyes so when the time comes you can also obtain EMS ' Obito answered , naruto felt relieved
'EMS?'
'Oh you also get stronger when you replace eyes with someone bloodrelated , stronger the eyes more stronger you become ' Naruto was shocked in a good way
' You are saying that there is even greater power then the Mangekyo Sharingan ' obito noded and checked the time
'Well naruto i gotta go i have a date ' he then shunshined not wanting to hear naruto's teasing . Naruto pouted cutely cuz he didn't got the chance to tease his big brother then aslo shunshined away to suki's house to see how she is doing without her parent's .
TIME SKIP (4 YEARS )
We see a figure standing on top of the hokage monument , his height was about 5'2 , he was glaring at the village with his sharingan .
Naruto(13)
(Credit to the creater)
"Today is the day when i will becone a full-ledge shinobi "naruto then smiles and shunshines to the academy appearing on top of his seat without anyone noticed beside minako and suki
'I need to get him to teach me that ' both think at the same time as greeted naruto with a smile , naruto reterned the smile with a
'Good mourning you two , are you ready for the exam ' Naruto smiled as both of them nooded and minako raised a fist in the air with a foxy grin
'You bet , after crushing the exam and becoming a real ninja ai am gonna be one step closer to becoming the hokage , believe it ' suki just rolled her eyes and pointed a finger at minako
' You have told us that like a million times already , if you become hokage i will be their to personally give you the hat ' suki then flashed a challenging smirk that didn't go unnoticed by minako , knowing it was a challenge minako accepted it , naruto couldn't help but smile at their friendship and rivalry
'oky class shut up' iruka shouted while coming in with a large stack of paper and all the students stopped talking , some had confident faces some were scared some had mixed emotions . Iruka after explaining that there are going to be two portions of exam , written and practical quickly started giving the written exam after everyone got it iruka told them they had 1 and half hour to do it , all the students started reading their the paper in front of them , naruto finished it in 17 minutes being only second to shikamaru who did it in 12 mins and was now sleeping like a log . After the time was up iruka collected all the papers back and told the kids to come to the room in front of them when their name is announced . Kids begain to go and come back , some had smiles who passed some were crying because they failed then naruto's name was called and he got up
'The next time you see me i will be a ninja of konoha ' the girls gave him a thumbs up and he started walking toward the exit , entering the room in which iruka was him he saw iruka with mizuki standing there with a pen and paper in his hans as he told naruto to pass you need to do a substitution jutsu , clone jutsu and transformation jutsu .
Naruto replaced him self with a chair and made 10 shadow clones shocking the hell out of the two sensei's and tranformed into madara , iruka got slightly scared seeing madara but choose not to say anything
'Excelent job naruto , now chose a konoha forehead protector of your choice ' he praised the uchiha as he gestured to the box filled with headbands of diffrent color
"Blue nah i don't like color blue , pink definitely no , red nah , Black yeah balck will look nice " naruto smiled picking up a black one and rapped it around his forehead proudly . Naruto then walked out ignoring the praise iruka was giving him and went back into the classroom , seeing naruto was back all the fangirl started squealing and walked up to him telling him how he is so cool and they want to be his girlfriend , naruto just choose to ignore all of them and walked up to the only two person he needed recognition of and they gave him a knowing smirk before telling him that don't get cocky they aren't far behind . Naruto chuckled and told them that he know they are with a big smile making both them blush but at that exact moment iruka called minako and and she stood up naruto and suki said goodluck but dismissed it by saying
' A future hokage don't need luck ' cooly , then walked off leaving a scowling suki and a surpriesed naruto behind .
'she usally don't say stuff like that , its kinda weired hearing that from her 'naruto commented
Suki knew the reason she said it all to well and it didn't pleased her.
After some time minako walked in with a headband rapped around her forehead just like naruto , then suki's name was called and she just used her speed to vanish from the room , coming in with a headband also rapped around her forehead and then the rest of the day was uneventfull .
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Naruto and the rest of the team 7 which consisted of minako , suki and him was waiting for their jonin sensei with frowns on their faces
'If he isn't strong i'm killin him' naruto spat out and the girls noded and gave him thumbs up telling him that he have their full support , Then they all hared footsteps coming from the hallway the steps got louder and louder and then the door slid open and a man with silver gravity-defying hair walked in
'Meet me at the roof in 2 minutes 'he said then poofing away , naruto just shunshined on the roof while the girls groaned , kakashi was impressed but he didn't show it this kid appeared just did a shunshin and it was almost as fast as his .
" So he is obito's brother " kakshi thought his eyes not moving from his book a bit
I WAS READING A NARUTO FIC AND I REALIZED SOME MlSTAKES I MAKE , SO I CHANGED MY WRITING PATTERN PLEASE TELL ME HOW IS IT