LS (FF) -
1) MAI TERA by AniditaBarristerBabu
TITLE:- 3/5
reason:- No creativity as such, too simple and common.
COVER/ BLURB:- 4/10
reason:- No specific blurb to arouse the interest within the readers.
ORIGINALITY:- 4.5/10
reason:- While going through the fiction, for a second I felt like as if I am watching the same story as of the show.
CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT:- 7/20
reason:- found no such Character Development which can grab readers attention.
GRAMMAR:- 5.5/20
reason:- Sometimes the descriptions of the general author's pov were in english or sometimes in hindi, No punctuations, No expressions to convey the emotions of a particular character. Last but not the least, Wrong spellings.
INTERACTION WITH READERS:- 2.5/10
reason:- Less Interaction, not at all reply on comments or any such actions were taken by the author.
DRAWN:- 1/5
reason:- Felt less interested.
OVERALL IMPRESSION :- 5/20
reason:- for the author's hardwork.
TOTAL- 32/100
2) SANAM TERI KASAM by AniditaBarristerBabu
TITLE:- 2.5/5
reason: Pretty Common.
COVER/ BLURB: 5/10
reason: No specific blurb. However the sentence, " Journey from Hatred to Love" ignited my excitement.
ORIGINALITY: 4/10
reason: Concept is common.
CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT:- 12/20
reason:- Nice Character Development but somewhere Aniruddh's or the male protagonist's character is too blur to be understand.
GRAMMAR:- 5/20
reason :- No such usage of english grammar and even if it was there then also wrong.
INTERACTION WITH THE READER:- 5/10
reason:- Better than previous response.
DRAWN:- 4/5
reason:- Was a bit inclined.
OVERALL:- 7/20
reason:- A Nice story and there is a lot of potential within the writer.
Total:- 41.5/100 or 42/100