SS -
1) A trip to Paris by varia_is_heart
Title: 5/5
Amazing title.
Cover+blurb: 8/10
Cover is nice but could be more attractive. Blurb is too short you could have added some more things to it to attract the readers towards your book.
Originality+Creative: 8/10
It was a original work done by the writer and was really good.
Character development: 18/20
Definitely the characters were different in their own ways. There development have been done beautifully.
Grammar: 7/20
Grammar is good yet the writer needs to improve their writing skills.
Interaction with readers: 10/10
Writer had interacted to readers and also had replied to their comments which is a nice thing.
Draw: 5/5.
overall I really liked the story and enjoyed it too.
Overall impression: 19/20
It was an amazing story with different storyline which I enjoyed thoroughly. Yet I will repeat the writer needs to improve their writing skills overall it was good and enjoyable story.
Total: 80/100
2) Perfectly imperfect by angelhuex
Title: 5/5
Amazing title and is matching with the story too. Great.
Cover+blurb: 9/10
One mark is lessened because of the cover like it's good but not that attractive you could have added some pictures of the main leads of your story to look it more attractive. Blurb is nice and is matching with your story.
Originality+Creative: 10/10
No doubt it's author's original work and is creative too. I really liked the storyline which is unique in its own way.
Character development: 20/20
Characters are amazing. And their development had been done amazingly.
Grammar: 19/20
Grammar is fine just a little bit mistakes.
Interaction with readers: 7/10
Writer had interacted with their readers but not much, he/she has replied to the comments but not to the all so yaa..
Draw: 5/5.
As mentioned above I really enjoyed reading the story, it was an amazing experience.
Overall impression: 19.5/20
Amazing story with amazing story line, which helps the readers to hooked up with the story but a small thing is that the chapters are little short which could be a more lengthy but still it's fine.
Total: 94.5/100
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LS (FF) -
1) Tum mere saath ho by -desigurllx
Title: 5/5
Amazing choice of title.
Cover+blurb: 8/10
Cover Is Amazing yet blurb is not written by the writer.
Originality+Creative: 10/10
Definitely an original and creative work is done by the writer.
Character development: 20/20
Grammar: 9/20
Grammar is fine but the writers needs to improve their writing skills.
Interaction with readers: 10/10
Writer had interacted with the readers and had tried to reply to all of their comments.
Draw: 5/5
The storyline will definitely keep you attracted to the story
Overall impression: 18/20
It was An amazing experience to read this story which was actually nice but yaa again I will say writer needs to improve their writing skills.
Overall it was a good story.
Total: 85/100
2) Unpredictable Love by jacquelineslaysx
Title: 5/5
Amazing choice of title.
Cover+blurb: 8/10
Cover could be more attractive. Work on Blurb had been done greatly.
Originality+Creative: 10/10
Original work done by the writer along with keeping the creativity their first priority.
Grammar: 20/20
Amazing vocabulary of the writer.
Interaction with readers: 7/10
Writer had not interacted with their readers much and also haven't replied them except 2 or 3 people's.
Character development: 20/20
Character development has been done amazingly.
Draw: 5/5
The book will surely keep you'll hooked up with it.
Overall impression: 20/20
It is an amazing story and if you will read it you will surely love it.
Total: 95/100
3) Mere Brother ki Dulhan by -livechic
Title: 5/5
I really liked the title and its matching to the story too. So it's good choice of title.
Cover+blurb: 9/10
I liked the cover but I cut 1 mark because the blurb is little too short, you could have added more things to it to make it look more attractive like some scenes from your story.
Originality+Creative: 9.5/10
It was definitely Originally written and was creative and I enjoyed reading it throughout.
Character development: 19/20
yeah surely the characters were different in their own way. The way you have written their POV's is amazing.
Grammar: 9/20
Amazingly written but there are mistakes too.
Interaction with readers: 4/10
This marking is because you haven't interacted with your readers and nor replied to them so yaa..
Draw: 5/5
Yeah it kept me hooked to the story and I really liked it. And also the readers to liked the story.
Overall impression: 18/20
It was an amazing story with amazing story line. I liked it thoroughly. I had already read that story once and it was amazing experience to read it again and it was enjoyable throughout.
Total: 78.5/100
4) Hum Saath Saath Hain 2 by YJHDmeetsKARD
Title: 5/5
Amazing title.
Cover + Blurb : 8/10
Cover could be more attractive and you could have added some more things in your book.
Originality + Creativity : 5/10
It isn't original plot but creativity is there.
Character development: 19/20
Nice characters and their development have been done beautifully.
Grammar : 8/20
There are lots of grammatical mistakes and spelling errors.
Interaction with readers: 10/10
Writer had interacted with every readers of their and also replied to their comments.
Draw: 5/5
Amazing story keeping the readers hooked up.
Overall impression: 18.9/20
Amazing story dear, you have written it Amazingly well, I will be glad to read it again.
Total: 78.9/100
5) Destined Love by jacquelineslaysx
Title: 5/5
Nice choice of title
Cover+blurb: 10/10
Cover Is beautiful, blurbs are amazing.
Originality+Creative: 10/10
Very original and creative work done
Interaction with readers: 7/10
Writer had interacted with less people.
Grammar: 20/20
No improvement here.
Character development: 20/20
Character development has been done amazingly.
Draw: 5/5
Amazing story
Overall impression: 20/20
Amazing story with amazing story line. I loved the story.
Total: 97/100
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Series -
1) Bollywood house 1&2 by varia_nv
Title: 5/5
Nice title
Cover+blurb: 9/10
Nice cover and the blurb is good enough.
Originality+Creative: 10/10
Original work is done by the writer and is creative too, I really liked the way they had written all the POV's
Character development: 20/20
Characters are amazing. All the characters have been developed nicely.
Grammar: 18/20
Grammar is OK with little bit of mistakes which is fine.
Interaction with readers: 8/10
Writer had interacted with their readers but not much, he/she has replied to the comments but not to the all so yaa..
Draw: 5/5
It definitely attracts me towards the story and it was an amazing experience to read it.
Overall impression: 20/20
I loves the story, as mentioned above writer had done a great job in writing POV's. It was a great experience.
Total: 95/100
2) The Carefree best friend's 1,2&3 by jacquelineslaysx
Title: 4.5/5
Title could be more attractive but it's good too.
Cover+blurb: 9/10
Covers are need to be more attractive, blurbs are amazing.
Originality+Creative: 10/10
Very original and creative work done
Interaction with readers: 7/10
Writer had interacted with less people.
Grammar: 10/20
Needs improvement.
Character development: 20/20
Character development has been done amazingly.
Draw: 5/5
Amazing story
Overall impression: 18.4/20
Amazing story with amazing story line. I loved the story.
Total: 83.9/100