Chapter Ten The Recluse [ Spider. *looks up to make sure that's a thing* Yep Spider ]
"EVERONE FALLOW ME" meowled StarPleam as see charred for th3 entranse to eh camp. Tares stremmed down her face1 she wuss so sad her fahter had deid her leader was gunn. "FLAMEPAW LAKEPAW DUSTPELT MOM LOINBLAZE FALLOW ME." She said. "I NEDD A PAROL." [ Yes, you need to go on parole ]
The run into the frost their pass working fastly. She wood kill HolyLeaf and TigerSar for what thed don! [ Wait... didn't she already kill Tigerstar? ]
She batlecried using his nose to tar down the evill cats. Her heat burneded!
Sune they had funded them. They were hidnig bwhind a bolder. [ OMG WHERE DO I HIDE. I KNOW! BEHIND THIS ROCK. THEY'LL NEVER FIND ME THERE ] "HAHAHAH" LAUGHED HOLylesf putting er claw on FiresTarS thort. "IVE GOT YOU KNOW!" [ YESSSSSS! ]
StarGleam gasped. "noooooo Fireheat!" she scemmed "FalmePawgo!" she said. [ I thought that said flamingo. Just imagine Stargleam yelling out 'flamingo' and then a huge flamingo just goes running across the battle. Imagine it. I know you laughed. ]
Flamepaw hurled at HolyLeaf. Hollyleaf laked at her in suprise. "What how could they have fallowd me." She dogged at Flamepaw her blue eys fallshig.
"NO FLAMEPAW" whaled LakePaw seing her sisters about too die. "I LOVE YOU FALMEPAW." She yowled jumping herself in front of HOlyLeaf.
HollyLaffs paw cutt into hir throt blood came out LakePaw felt down. [ *cough cough* Mary-sue *cough cough* ]
"NOOOO!1!11" StarPaw screamed. "FLAMEAPWWW!" She ran for HoltLeaf but it wass no us. LakPaw was dyeing. "I lofe you StarGleam." [ She completely ignores her other sister who is screaming with mourn ] She wisperd before er blue I's cosed.
"NO WAKE UP LAKEPOOL" [ Lakepool? ] shoited Stargleam-she was so sad and depersed she was cyring!
"hahaha" laughed HollyLeaf evil. "u just dunt gedot d o you Im one of teh Tree! [ Yes, she is one of the tree ] I have pows beyound ur emaginating!" nd then.... She turned in.... A BARE!
"Gasped" gasped everyone. It was a bare!
"IM A SHAPSHITTER!" [ Nope, not going to comment. Don't do it Roxy ]siad Hollylea joyly.
"stargleam." Said FalmePaw cryingly. "I nedd to go back 2 the damp. I goat bury laekpaw. Ive neverbeen out of camp before how do you get back!" [ Yes, because the cat who was an apprentice before Stargleam, doesn't know how to get back to camp. Because logic. ]
"U ju wak to te the est. said StarPaw."
Thaks said FlamePaw crying she piced up the LakePaw and putter on her back and run.
"nut so fast!" said Holyleaf! "Your not gunna get away that easly!" Wit a rar like an volcano eruption she jumped at StarGlaem! [ Ummm, volcano eruptions can't jump... ]
Everone! Gasped! "NOOOO." Yowled STarGleam as sumething lung and sarp pluned into her bk. "YOU CANT GET ME THAT EASLY."
Everyone jumped at the HoBare! The bare rared in pane! Starepaw sent her teeth into its for. It rared.
"oak oka" HolyLeafthe bare said. "i no know Your not guna be bettin that esliay." Suddenly she was a cat1 then her body dropped her eyes went drka she was on the grund. Suddly ther wass howl from the other side of the froste. It was LaFlamePaw! [ OMG FLAMEPAW IS FRENCH ]
"LAKEPAW UR BACK!" SHE SAD
WHT SAID SPARGLAME. Thenshe locked. It was LakePool! [ You are such a good sister Stargleam, forgetting your sister's name ]She was runnin tord the forest starGleam was so appy. Then she sawyer eyes.
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THEY WERE OLLYLEAFS!
the next chatter wil coke soon! AND STUP FLAMMING YOU HAETRS. YOU JUST DONT BELVE IN GOOD.
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