The Grand Journey (Rewrite)

By Supernova121

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This is a rewrite of the story The Grand Journey as the character will be someone from a world that is simila... More

Bio
Entering The World of Pokémon Every Child's Dream
The World of Pokémon
Adjusting to The New Life
The New Pokémon and New Assistant
Keenan's First Task Pt.1
Keenan's First Task Pt.2
The Battle in The Volcano
Back at Kanto
Onto The Unova Region
New Captures and Aura User
The New Pokémon Dome
Keenan's Progress
Meeting The Princess of Viridian City
Latios The Eon Dragon
The Hardened Shelgon
Entering The Kalos Region
Keenan's First Gym Battle and New Rivalry
The Secret's Out
Keenan The Prodigy
Galar Expedition Pt.1
Galar Expedition Pt.2
Off To Sinnoh
Gyomei's Power
The Grave In Paradise
Alone Time With Chloe
The Mysterious White Riolu
A Rival's Reunion
The Return of Rizevim Pt.1
The Return of Rizevim Pt.2
Adventure in Kanto and Alpha
Misty's Visit
The Electrifying Gym
An Electrifying Result
Uncle Tobias
Shiny Beast of Wind
Iron Island Adventure
A Gift From Someone and A Third Rival
New Rival Arrvies
Keenan's Mission and A Shocking Revelation
Keenan's Adventure in Kalos Spheal's Development
Keenan's Adventure in Kalos Meeting Korrina
Shalour Gym Showdown
New Captures Here and There...Korrina's New Crush
Chloe's Big Surprise
Alola Here We Come
Family Vacation Pt.1
Family Vacation Pt.2
Family Vacation Final
Small Future Teaser's
Turning Up the Heat
Danger's of The Orbs
Healing and New Evolutions
Battle of Hatred
Keenan's and Chloe's Alola Trip
Keenan's "Grandmother" of The Pokémon World
Snowpoint City Troubles Pt.1
Snowpoint City Trouble's Pt.2
The Colossal Aftermath
The Final Gym Battle Pt.1
The Final Gym Battle Pt.2
Keenan's Birthday Party Pt.1
Keenan's Birthday Party Pt.2
Tobias vs Keenan, Battle of Growth
Hanging With The Hoenn Champion
Welcome To Fatherhood
Tatsumi's Time To Shine
Johto League Conclusion Pt.1
Johto League Conclusion Pt.2
Calm Before The Storm
The Sinnoh League Rumble
Brain's vs Stupidity
Semi Final Opponent Maiden of Fire
Johto's Maiden of Fire vs Mysterious Prodigy Pt.1
Johto's Maiden of Fire vs Mysterious Prodigy Pt.2
Johto's Maiden of Fire vs Mysterious Prodigy Final
Intermission Before The Finals
The Legendary Battle Pt.1
The Legendary Battle Pt.2
The Legendary Battle Finale
Award's Ceremony
After League Clarity
3 Idiots In A House and Battle Start
Backed Into A Corner
The Ever So Obvious Conclusion
Welcome Back To The Beautiful Paradise
Nightmare Tapu Koko
Alolan Beach Relaxation
What Takuto Battle's Goh Who Will Win
3 Way Split
The New Orb Mission
Titan of Iron Metagross
Parenting 101 and Kala's League Battle
Limit Breaking Problems
Kalakaua's Semi Final Battle
Kalakaua's Semi Final Battle Pt.2
Hoenn League Finals Pt.1
Hoenn League Finals Pt.2
Kalakaua's Award's Ceremony and A Warning
Chapter 100 Milestone
The Coordinator's
James True Power
Keenan's Elite Four Challenge...Aaron
Keenan's Elite Four Challenge...Aaron Pt.2
Aaron's Fate and Takuto's Birthday
Revavroom Mayhem and Takuto's Birthday Pt.2
Takuto's Birthday Final
A Taste of Power
Agni The God of Fire Pt.0
Agni The God of Fire Pt.1
Agni The God of Fire Pt.2
Agni The God of Fire Aftermath
The Beast of Volcano's Entei
Been Awhile Kalos
Tatsumaki The Psychic Empress
Battle Assault on Tatsumi
Ryuga The Dragon Emperor
The 4 Horseman
Alain The Mega Evolution Expert
Double Trouble
Psychic Nuisance Pt.1
Psychic Nuisance Final
The 4 Destroyers
Primordial Pokémon
Alola's Secret Pt.1
Alola's Secret Pt.2
Disaster In Alola
Oceanus The Princess of Oceans
Oceanus Aftermath
Make Up
The House of Keenan
Domino and The 3 Stooges
Prelude of The Alola League
Battle Royale Massacre
Define Humiliation
Mallow vs Ohia, The Flower's Power
Semi Final Tension
Kalakaua vs Ohia, Flower vs Beast Pt.1
Kalakaua vs Ohia, Beast vs Flower Pt.2
The Final Countdown
Let The Finals Begin
The Climax
Moments Before Disaster
Prologue to Namakaokahi
Leviathan of The Seas and Possession Namakaokahi
Namakaokahi's Fall
The Aftermath and Moving On
Shiny Beast of Thunder
Keenan vs Amethyst, Battle of Realities
Shiny Ho-oh Battle
Worlds Strongest vs Worlds Mysterious Prologue
Worlds Strongest vs Worlds Mysterious Pt.2
Worlds Strongest vs Worlds Mysterious Final
Preparing for Lance
Champion of Dragon's Pt.1
Champion of Dragon's Pt.2
Haleakala and Espie's Date
Anomaly Mission Pt.1
Anomaly Mission Pt.2
Hoenn's Star Trainer
Steven vs Kalakaua Pt.1
Steven vs Kalakaua Pt.2
Steven vs Kalakaua Final
Primordial Hydreigon
Project Mew and Tatsumi
Arriving in Sinnoh
The Undefeated Champion Pt.1
The Undefeated Champion Pt.2
The Undefeated Champion Final
Adventures with A. Haleakala
Welcome to He-I Mean Youngster's Camp
Generation's of Miracles
The Esper Orb and Lake Guardians
Winter Land of Icirus
A True Dragon
The Primordial Decidueye
James vs Keenan Test Run
'O ka Pō'ino A Puni Ke Kihi
Movie Event Prologue
Movie Event Battle
Movie Event End
Fun Things Are Fun
Filler's Are Nice
Old Faces Makes An Appearance
Bringing Back Memories
Audrey and Amethyst
Haleakala and Lehua's Other Worldly Adventure
A Baby and Mom Related Chapter....FINALLY
Ash vs James Rematch
A. Haleakala and Haleakala
Tatsumi and Kalakaua Chronicles
The Kalos Gathering
Let it Begin Fight for The Title
Tag Team Massacre
Official Round's Start

The Gym Leader Viola and Idol

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By Supernova121

Chapter 17


No One POV

After both Keenan and Tatsumi had gotten their rooms at the Pokémon center as they made sure that everything is in order the 2 of them had decided to go out for a bit as they separated from each other for the time being as Keenan had made his way toward the gym where the leader is while Tatsumi went well who knows where. While Keenan was making his way toward the gym he started to think of what Pokémon he should use as he can just use Heatran and easily get the badge but he won't be doing that, or either use Rhyperior as he'll also try and refrain from using him.

Because the Pokémon he wants to try out is Nidorino which he evolved while he was away as his Rotom phone and notified him about his sudden evolution which surprised both him and Tatsumi as Tatsumi had congratulated Keenan on his Pokémon's evolution which he thanked him for although he wished he was there to see it.

Keenan:huh so this is the gym looks just like the anime in the XY series not much have changed.he said to himself as he's looking at the building

Keenan:well time is wasting time to see if she'll accept a gym challenge or not.he said as he made his way into the gym

When he walked into the gym he was greeted with many pictures of bug type Pokémon and even some other Pokémon but mostly bug types which he expected from gym that specializes in bug types, he made his way more into the gym looking around until a voice had called him out.

???:hey are you here for a gym battle by any chance.the person asked him as the voice is a female

Keenan had turned his head toward the voice as she's at least 5'7 or so as he's a bit taller then her as she has brown hair and light green colored eyes and is also wearing a tight red shirt that really shows off her curves which Keenan had mentally slapped himself for having that thought as he could hear Latios chuckle inside his mind, as the person that's standing in front of him is Alexa.

Keenan:*nods*um yeah you could say that is the gym leader here or your the gym leader.he asked the girl in front of him

Alexa:oh no no I'm not a gym leader I'm a journalist my names Alexa nice to meet you.she introduced herself although he already knows her name

Keenan:nice to meet you too my names Keenan but is the gym leader here.he asked her

Alexa:*nods*yes she is cmon follow me I'll show you where she is.she said to him

With that Alexa had lead him through the gym toward the battlefield as he seen that she was already battling someone as from what he can tell that this trainer is not a beginner as she's using a Volcarona against this person as he was surprised to see that she's using a rare Pokémon, as he seen that her Volcarona had defeated Viola's Pinsir.

Ref:*raises her flag*Pinsir is unable to battle Volcarona is the winner therefore the winner is the challenger Iori Minase from Fleurrh city.she announced

Iori:*jumps up*alright we did it Volcarona you did incredible.she cheered as she petted her Pokémon

Viola:*returns her Pinsir*that was a fine battle haven't had one like that in a while.she said to her

Iori:thank you Viola I strive to try my best.she said back to her

Viola:*looks at her Volcarona*and you certainly have a real interesting Volcarona never seen one in person before since their so rare and hard to find mind if I get a picture of her.she asked her

Iori:*nods*sure no problem I'm sure she wouldn't mind right Volcarona.she said to her as her Volcarona nodded

As both Keenan and Alexa are currently making their way toward Viola and the challenger that just won her gym battle as Alexa is seen taking a few pictures of Volcarona as Keenan wasn't paying attention to her but toward the girl as she has long brown hair and pinkish colored eyes as he would have to guessed that she's a year younger then him.

Viola:*notices them*oh hey there sis that was fast I thought you was gonna go to the Pokémon center.she asked her

Alexa:well I was until I bumped into this trainer here he was wondering if he could have a battle with you.she said as she looked toward Keenan

Keenan:hi the names Keenan and i'm here for a gym battle.he said to her

Viola:*sweat drops as she scratches the back of her head*yeha well sorry I can't really do that you see I just finished having a battle against her so it'll have to wait till tomorrow, how about we have our battle first thing tomorrow morning alright.she said to him

Keenan:*nods*well alright then I'll be looking forward to our battle tomorrow I'll see you later I guess.he replied to her as he started to make his way out the gym

Viola:geez not much for socializing now is he.she said out loud

Alexa:hmm yeah I guess so but congratulations on your win Iori I see that your taking a break from your acting and singing work.she asked her as she nodded

Iori:*nods*yup wanted to give battling a shot so here I am entering the Kalos league, so far I have 1 badge this is my first one.she said to her

Alexa:I see well again congratulations but I should really be going to the Pokémon center I'll come by later alright sis.she waved at her sister as she waved back

Iori:*realizes*oh no Sakura I hope she's ok I told her to meet me at the forest sorry I gotta go quick return Volcarona.she said as she returned her Pokémon as she quick made her way out the gym

Timeskip brought to you by Keenan and Tatsumi trying to stop Rayquaza and Mewtwo from  killing each other.

Change POV Keenan

After I've gone to the gym as I had a feeling that she wouldn't be able o battle since she just finished a battle up against that other trainer that was there as it turns out that she's also aiming to enter the Kalos league as it seems that she's getting the badges a bit early, but I didn't think to much of it since it has nothing to do with me although she is going to be somewhat of a rival since she's gonna be entering but still.

Me:hmm aside from her Volcarona I don't know what other Pokémon she has maybe I should do some research on her.i wondered out loud as i took out my Rotom phone

Me:let's see her name was Iori right I guess I'll just type that into the search bar and see what pops up.i said as I typed in her name

Well what showed up somewhat surprised me as it turns out that she's a real popular idol and singer as she also has been added to the movie industry not to long ago as I was surprised to see that someone like her is planning on entering a Pokémon league which got me curious as to what other Pokémon she has so I scrolled through the page.

Me:so she also has a Ursaring and Aurorus and here I was thinking that she'd have a Kricketune or something like that.i said to myself as that all it shows

Me:hmm so the rest of her Pokémon are mystery huh interesting.i wondered what Pokémon she has

But my thought was dropped when I heard a loud scream Pierce through the sky.

???:*screams*AAAAAAAHHHHHH SOMEBODY HELP ME.the voice yelled which sounded like a girl but who knows or could be a boy

Me:*blinks in surprise*what the hell was that *I wondered to myself*well whoever that is it's clear that the person is in trouble hope I can make it in time.I said as i started to run toward the direction of where I heard the scream

Change POV No One

With the person that had screamed out loudly for someone to help her as it's a girl wearing a bluish green shirt with a white dress and have pink hair along with pink colored eyes as she's currently sitting on the ground scared as to what's happening right now as she is currently cornered by an angry looking Golem.



???:somebody please help me I don't want to die from a Golem of all Pokémon, no scratch that I don't want to die at all so help me.she said out loud as she hears a voice

Keenan:quick Dartrix use Razor Leaf get it away from that girl.she heard a command

From on top of a hill she seen a swirl of glowing leaves making  its way toward the wild Golem as it covered its face from the super effective attack as it was growling in pain as Keenan is seen landing in front of her as Dartrix came flying down as well as her eyes widened in surprise.

???:*wide eyed*wha-who are you thanks for sa-.she was cut off when he said

Keenan:just shut up and get away leave this Golem to me now before it's too late.he quickly said back to her

???:but I want to thank you for-.she was once again cut off

Keenan:*looks at her*this is no time to be thanking me so just leave alright hurry the hell up before the Golem stands back up.he told her

As Sakura had hesitated a bit but nodded once she seen that the wild Golem is almost back onto his feet as she quickly gotten up and ran away back toward the city which just left Keenan alone with the wild Golem as it glared at him which made him grin.

Keenan:*grins*alright there's no more distractions it's just you and me now Golem you'll be a fine addition to the team let's see how much stronger you've gotten Dartrix.he said as he chirped loudly accepting the battle

The wild Golem had created rocks out of thin air and dropped it above Dartrix as it was using Rock Slide which Keenan ordered Dartrix to dodge the attack and get in close.

Keenan:you know what to do Dartrix dodge it and get in close as you can and unleashed Leaf Blade.he commanded him

Dartrix had easily carried out the order as he spread open his wings and gracefully dodged the falling stones with ease as well as flying at high speeds as Keenan was impressed at Dartrix as he wasn't expecting him to fly that fast as he could give Togekiss a run for his money at how fast he's flying as he made it in front of Golem in no time as it's eyes was wide with shock. As Dartrix did not wasted anytime as the back feathers has gotten a green glow to them and a bit longer sharp as a sword as he swung his entire body which slashed it across its chest as she cried out in pain.

Keenan:alright let's see you handle this finish it with a storm of Razor Leaf's gooo.he commanded

He gave out the command as he did created a swirl of leaves but it got progressively bigger and bigger as it wasn't a swirl of leave it was a storm of leaves as Dartrix had learned Leaf Storm which made Keenan surprised as he learned a new move and a powerful one at that.

Keenan:*surprised*what you learned Leaf Storm good job Dartrix hit her with everything you've got.he said to him

As Dartrix had sent the storm of leaves toward the wild Golem as it was charging a Flamethrower attack which made Keenan surprised that it knows that move as he was definitely Impressed by it, but it was too late since the Leaf Storm had completely consumed her as it made an explosion of leaves as it went everywhere Golem is seen with swirls in her eyes.

Keenan:*takes out a poke ball*alright go poke ball.as he chucked the ball at the wild Golem

It made contact with it as it opened up with the usual red beam as it fell onto the ground as it started to shake.

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2...

3...

Ding

Golem has been caught and it's also his first female Pokémon as well.

Keenan's Rotom phone:Golem's data has been registered to your poke dex.the device stated

Keenan:got my 2nd rock type Pokémon now this should be interesting and the Golem is also a girl my first girl Pokémon.he said as he walked up toward the ball as he picked it up

Keenan:*pets Dartrix*you did really well Dartrix your improving and getting stronger everyday and congratulations on learning Leaf Storm.he thanked his trusty owl Pokémon

Keenan had then returned Dartrix back into his ball as he then turned back toward the city as he does need to heal up his newly captured Golem and also meet up with Tatsumi since they did say that they'll meet up with each other afterwards as he also begun to think about that girl that he saved earlier as he hopes that she gotten back into the city safely.

Timeskip brought to you by Sakura and Aria cheering on Keenan in the Unova league.

Still No One POV

Keenan is currently at the Pokémon center as he met up with Tatsumi as he only explored a bit as he also gotten himself something to drink which he was nice enough to get Keenan one as well which he thanked him for it as he was going to pay him back but this time it was Tatsumi telling him not to so he agreed to it although a bit reluctantly.

Tatsumi:so I'm guessing you couldn't have your gym battle with Viola.he asked him which he nodded

Keenan:*nods*yeah someone already beaten me to it although I should've seen it happening I guess but what about you anything interesting in the city.he asked back

Tatsumi:*scratches his cheek*hmm well not really although I did found a store that sells evolutionary stones and I was planning on getting one but I didn't have enough money with me.he told him as it was when Keenan replied with

Keenan:oh and what stone were you looking for anyways.he asked him

Tatsumi:well it was a thunder stone I'll just come back here unless I find one on my own.he said back to him

Keenan:want one I can get you one I have a bunch of evolutionary stones back at my place if can ask the Professor to send one over for me.he asked him as his eyes widens

Tatsumi:*wide eyes*wait what you'll just give me one like that but their sorta expensive and such I have to pay you ba-.he said to him

Keenan:there's no need to pay me back because the only thing I want you to pay me back is with a good battle got it.he said back to him as Tatsumi was taken back but nodded

Tatsumi:*nods*right if that's what you want then I'll try my best not to disappoint.he said to him

They were enjoying just relaxing until the T.V that's within the lounge area had changed channels of some sort as they seen a news anchor on it as both Keenan and Tatsumi had turned their heads toward the T.V wondering if anything bad had happened as the person on the T.V had said as Keenan had recognized her to be Malva of the Kalos Elite Four.

Malva:Malva here today I have a report of the famous pop idol,singer and just recently actor Sakura Kirishima has been saved by a boy with a shiny Dartrix, as she's asking her fans and friends to try and look for him as he has long black hair with purple colored eyes and is also wearing a long white sleeved shirt. So if you do see him please tell us because she is deeply in his debt for saving her from a wild Pokémon.she said as both Keenan and Tatsumi sat there

Tatsumi:*wide eyed*wait WHAT YOU SAVED SAKURA KIRISHIMA THE SAKURA WHEN THE HELL DID THIS HAPPENED.he said to him in shock as he yelled as Keenan is sitting there wide eyed

Keenan:*wide eyes*fuck I didn't know that was Sakura Kirishima I thought it was just some random girl lost in the forest.he said to himself as Tatsumi is looking at him

Tatsumi:*surprised*dude do you have any idea what you just did you just saved a super popular idol and she's out looking for you, you have to let her see you this is a once in a lifetime opportunity.he said to him in shock

Keenan:*grits his teeth*fuck and I didn't wanted to gain any attention to myself now I know how Isaiah feels when Lehua was being hunted by Elena.he said to himself as he did a 4th wall break

Tatsumi:*raises an eyebrow*huh who the hell is Lehua and who the hell is Isaiah.he asked him

But Keenan didn't said anything as he Immediately gotten up from his seat and hastily made his way toward Nurse Joy as he slammed his hands onto her counter which made her jump as she looked at him as her eyes widened in shock as she realized who she's looking at.

Nurse Joy:*wide eyed*what no way your that person who helped Sakura I ha-.she was cut off when he intensely stared at her

Keenan:*intensely staring at her*you won't tell anyone that I'm here got it I do NOT want anyone trying to find me, look all I did was help her from that wild Pokémon that's it she doesn't need to thank me so I'm telling you this DO NOT let anyone else know that I'm here got it.he sternly said to her as she's a bit shaken up

Nurse Joy:*nervously nods*right got it I won't tell anyone but the media will still be looking for you.she said back to him

Keenan:just tell them I'm not here.he simply said back to her

He then begun to make his way back toward Tatsumi who is in the cafeteria area of the Pokémon center as he's seen already eating some food as once again he was nice enough to make Keenan a plate as well which he thanked him for it as the 2 of them started to eat their dinner as Tatsumi is still in shock that he saved Sakura Kirishima the really famous and popular idol.

Tatsumi:dude I still can't believe that you saved Sakura Kirishima that's like everybody's dream saving a cute and popular idol like her why won't you let her see you she just wants to thank you.he asked him

Keenan:*sighs*look Tatsumi you may like it being able to save a famous pop idol or whatever the hell she is but I for one don't like It, to my eyes I saved a girl lost in the forest being attacked by a Golem not some pop idol so just drop it.he said to him as he doesn't need any more stuff on his plate

Tatsumi:*nods*well alright fine I'll stop but you do realize that everyone is basically looking for you especially Sakura so your gonna have to see her eventually.he said to him

Keenan:*groans*yeah I guess your right but still she doesn't need to thank me anyone would do that.he said back to him

As Keenan's trip to Kalos has certainty took a real interesting turn as he was not expecting to save Sakura Kirishima the same girl that makes music and other such things and also the same person that Tatsumi is a fan of and he just saved her, but he doesn't want to think about it to much since it'll just add more crap onto his plate and he doesn't like it.

Change Scene

Meanwhile at a penthouse within the city the said girl named Sakura is currently trying to look for the trainer that helped her with the wild Golem as she's calling her manager as he manager told her that she still hasn't found him, as Iori her friend had just came into the room drying her hair as she finished taking a shower not to long ago.

Iori:geez your still looking for him when are you going to give up.she asked her as she started to put on her clothes

Sakura:I'm not going to give up that easily you know how I am, I'm going to find him and thank him personally.she said back to her

Iori:well do you at least know what his name is I would've saved you but I had no idea where you were until I seen you running.she asked her friend

Sakura:*sweat drops*well no he didn't told me his name but I do know what he looks like, he has long black hair down to his shoulders and purple colored eyes and he was also wearing a long white sleeved shirt.she told her the description as her eyes blinked in surprise

Iori:*blinks in surprise*wait a minute I think I saw him he was asking Viola for a gym battle but I already battled her.she said to her as she immediately gotten up

Sakura:what please tell me he's going to challenge her tomorrow I can thank him after his battle.she asked him as she grabbed her hands

Iori:*blushes in embarrassment*yes he is and it's first thing the next morning and could let go of my hands.she said back to her as Sakura had let go of her hands

As it's been decided that Sakura will be going to the gym tomorrow not to workout but to see and thank her savior up close in person.


A/N:This is it for the chapter hope you guys enjoyed it as Keenan is in somewhat of a pickle as he accidentally saved a real famous pop idol and singer which he was not expecting to say the least but he now has to deal with people constantly hunting him down, but luckily or unluckily Iori knows where he's going to be so it's a possibility that their gonna meet each other over at the gym.

I also do have something planned for Tatsumi and Keenan as both Mewtwo and Rayquaza will be meeting each other for the first time after his gym battle as let's see how this will go as it might start a new rivalry.

In this story there will be some OC's which is seen from Tatsumi and Iori which she's from Idolmaster as I might do another OC or 2 not to sure.

Another thing Keenan's 4th wall break is from ArchieX2Y as it's from his story Fated Dreams  as it's a really good book and if not the best book out there for an OC In Pokémon Journeys I guess you could say that this book is somewhat inspired by it, so if you haven't read it go check it out.

Next chapter is gonna be "Keenan's First Gym Battle and New Rivalry"

Stay tuned✌️

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