Becheniya๐Ÿ’”๐Ÿ’”๐Ÿ’”

By preetakaran1116

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๐Ÿ–คLOSE OF TRUST ๐Ÿ–ค
๐Ÿ’”SHOCKING NEWS๐Ÿ’”
MENDING BROKEN RELATIONS
โฃ๏ธCAREโฃ๏ธ
๐Ÿ˜๏ธTO HOME ๐Ÿ˜๏ธ
TRYING TO MAKE NORMAL
๐Ÿ˜ขSUFFER๐Ÿ˜ข
๐Ÿ–คACHING HEART....S๐Ÿ–ค
๐Ÿ˜ญPAIN ๐Ÿ˜ญ
AUTHOR'S NOTE
DECISSION
AUTHOR'S NOTE

BROKEN ๐Ÿ’”๐Ÿ’”๐Ÿ’”

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After doctor left from there,karan was just like statue rooted at same place and trying to register what doctor had said that preeta will may or may not be recover, while others also numb , Kareena also feeling sad for preeta even sherlyn too having tears in her eyes. Sameer trying to console sarla & srishty who was not at all speaking a since seeing her sister who was motherly figure for her from childhood in that condition her words are died in her throat,dadi & kareena are trying to console rakhi & Mahesh who were sobbing silently for their daughter in ICU. Karan slowly takes step towards ICU keep hand on its glass sees preeta lieing lifelessly with machines attached to her, tears runing down the cheeks.

Other side kritika brings pihu to waiting hall, make her to sit on couch takes food to her seeing pihu dull tries to cheer her

Kritika: pihu app jaldise kana kayatho bua app ko ik badi Vali chocolate lake dogi chalo app mu kolo....

Pihu: bua muje chocolate nahi chahiye

Kritika: tho hamari pihu ko chocolate nahi chahiye?? (Pihu nods no) tho kya chahiye hamari bacchi ko haa? icecream vo bi chocolate valla....(While feeding her)

Pihu : nahi bua, pihu ko ice cream bi nahi chahiye pihu icecream kana Kam Kiya hai

Kritika: kyu Bala???

While eating pihu says
Pihu: mumma kaha hai ache bache jyada ice creams nahi Kate thand lag jayegi, tho papa ne kaha mumma abi thak gayi hai vo Aram karahi hai agar une pata chala tho mayi ice cream karahi hu tho vo pareshan ho jayegi, isliye pihu ko icecream nahi chahiye, bua app muje jaldi kilayiye na me mumma ke pass chaltha hua jab vo uthegi tab me unke pass rahunga unko bahot acha lagega haina???
Listening this from pihu kritika eyes become wet, unable to control,she hugs pihu, pihu sees tears in Kritika's eyes

Pihu: bua app ro kyu rahaho?

Kritika: nahi pihu me ro nahi rahi, ankh me kuch chalagaye isliye, aoa ab app kana complete karona(feeds pihu thinking about preeta and pihu how pihu will bear when she knows that her mother may not be with her like before & she can't any talk or play with her mother)

Meanwhile near ward
Sameer somehow convince sarla for srishty's sake that she may not recover from taurma seeing her sister & take them to Arora house . Sarla & Srishty goes from there unwillingly. All others also going home as doctor said all members are not allowed to stay with patient Mahesh convinces rakhi to go home as they all know karan will not move a inch from there even how hard they try then only kritika comes there with pihu.Pihu goes to karan who was standing there facing ICU, catches his jeans starts pulling it to gain his attention, karan sees her wipes his tears takes her in hands, pihu wipes karan's tears
Pihu: papa ro raheho?

Karan: nai beta papa ni ro rahahai.app kana kaya?

Pihu: papa pihu achi bachi hai , mumma ki bat pihu manti hai, aur mai kana kaya.papa mumma kab uthegi vo kyu ithna so rahehai, vo gandi aunty kuch kiya hai kya mumma ke sath isliye mumma aise so rahehai? (she says in inocent tone)

Karan: (don't know what to say) pihu app bua ke sath Ghar chalo , mai bad me mumma ko lekar atha hu, vaha Jake kisi ko
tang mat karna, u know ur r a good girl na?
All sees karan with pihu ,how he was trying to handle situation, they are seeing his new side ,that was not the karan they know he just handling that situation very maturely trying hard to gulp his tears , not to fall, while karan saying that gives pihu to kritika asks her to take care of her,all started leaving from there, rakhi comes to karan keep hand on his shoulder,karan turns sees her hugs her,both were sobbing karan broke the hug wipes his eyes and rakhi's too
Karan: mom app chinta mat kijiye vo apki Bahu haina vo badi dramebaz hai app ni pata madam muje kitni tauntrams dikati hai jab vo mujse naraz hotitho. Abhi bhi vise hi kuch jyada tauntrams dikharahihai kuch jyada upset haina mujse isliye. app dekhna jaise hi thik ho jayegi tho app ke pass akar kehegi " rakhi ma dekhina karan muje kithna pareshan kar rehahai"(chuckles remembering her irritated face. )Kahegi na mom vo ?🥺
Rakhi sees karan nods her head blessed him goes away.
Now it was evening time karan was at hospital, others at home no one ate anything since yesterday day night,not even a glass of water.Kritika takes pihu to room so that she should not question about y family was dull or not eating. She made an excuse that karan was in urgent meeting when she aks about there parents.
At hospital,
Doctor asks karan to visit his cabine, karan enter the cabin saw doctor going through some reports, doctor sighs karan to sit
Karan: kya hua doctor app bulaye , kya aya reports me ? Preeta kaisi hai ab?
Doctor: (sees him) dekhiye Mr.Luthra muje pata hai app pe kya gujar rahe hogi pr as a doctor ye kehna meri jimedari hai shyad apko pata nahi ho infact muje doubt hai ki patient ko shyad nahi pata hai ki unka kuch din pehle miscarriage hogaya hai.(this was another huge blow of karan's life that he lost his unborn child, even he don't know that his baby was existing few days before, doctor continues bringing back him)vo me isliye kehrahahu kyunki unki blood sample me humko aise sedatives mileki vo pregnancy ko harm karsaktha hai. Agar kuch din aur vo sedatives unke blood me Gaye ho tho unka mental stability pr bi asar hua hota hai isliye app unka kuch jyad dhyan rakhiye. Aur app unhe leja sakhte hai , Mahesh ji humse baat ki hai hum unhe apke ghar me hi monitor karenge Mai ik nurse ko appoint karunga aur ik permanent doctor ko bi assign karlunga.
Karan: thank you (only can manage to say these two words after listening doctors words, hruddilly ce out of the cabin sees his one his support runs into his arms.
Rishab gets to know about conditions in house by rakhi , when he returns to home an hr before, & came to hospital to see karan & preeta.
Rishab broke the hug, slaps karan tightly as he could, karan don't react to that as he knows he deserves that
Rishabh: Tera dimak karab hoga karan, seriously tu preeta ji pe ilzam lagaya ki vo pihu ko.....,sach me tera dimak karab hogahai.....
Karan: rishab......(karan breakdown into tears seeing his cheerful brother like that, rishab hugs him tightly)
Rishab: karan kuch nahi hoga preeta ji ko dekh, tu strong rehna hoga,tu aise tut nahi sakte, hosla rak Mera bai..
Karan: nahi, rishab tume pata hai me use deserve hi nahi karta, me use protect karne ka promise Kiya tha kudse dekho baar baar meri waise vo apna sabse bade kushi ko baiti hai.

Rishabh: kya keh rahai tu karan?

Karan: ha rishab, preeta pregnant thi, use kisine sedatives deyete thaki uski pregnancy kojaye
Rishabh shocks listening karan's words,  he consoles him,& something strikes in his mind,asks preeta's blood reports, leaves to home after asking karan to take care of him & preeta.

At LUTHRA HOUSE 🏡,
Sherlyn was in deep thoughts & crying miserablly, she was thinking about rishab's arrival, y she became exited to know that he was back.
And y she was not able to come out of his thoughts,she was even feeling not well with prithvi now a days and after listening prithvi's words

Few hrs ago, when all get back to luthra house,
Sherlyn: mummy ji me jara mandir Jake athi hu , preeta keliye muje manat mangni hai.(it's a lie)

Rakhi: thik hai puttar, jara sambalke Jana, apna dhyan rakna.

Sherlyn: thik hai mummy ji.
She goes to meet prithvi in police station to give the update of drama happened on luthra house, & about preeta's condition. When she reached there prithvi was talking to his lawyer
Prithvi: kis kam ka lawyer hai tu? Ha? Kitne din hogaya kuch nai karhai tu?kya chahthi hi tum ha me esehi police station me pade rahu kya.

Lawyer: me koshish karahahu, is case sare proofs hamare khilaf hai, hai to hame proofs ke saath chedkani nahi karsaktha  hai ya proofs hi bald kar phir se case reopen karana hoga iske liye hame us Ghar me se kisika help chahiye.

Prithvi: ha to haina vo murkonki maharani (lawyer makes confused face) arre vo sherlyn ki baat karahahu, vo kis cheez ki hai vaha ,muje help karne keliye tho me usse vaha rakha hu.

Lawyer: ha me baat karunga sherlyn, waise aise situations me tumhe sherlyn he help karthe hai hamesha.

Prithvi: isliye tho me abi thak usse kuch nai kiya,ik bar usse Mera Kam hojayenge uska Kam bi thamam kaduga, jab se uske pet bachha margaya vo bhi kich kich karnelagi.jaldi uska Kam bhi katham karna hoga , nahi tho muje hi nuksan hoga.
thik hai ab tum jao apna kam karo.
Lawyer nods & lefts from there

After listening these words from prithvi, sherlyn left from there cryingly to luthra house , there she got to know about rishab's arrival, after that she directly goes to her room started crying.

Rishabh arrives at luthra house, he first wants to confront sherlyn & don't want to involve family in that because already they were going through a lot, he directly goes to his room,opens door
Rishabh: sher......(he was about to shout at sherlyn, his words struck in his throat seeing the scenario in front of him, suddenly came back to senses goes towards sherlyn) sherlyn.. chodo is knife ko chodo...chodo isse

Sherlyn: rishab ji ,chodiya rishab ji me yehi deserve karta hu, muje nahi Jena. muje Jena ka haq hi nahi hai, muje Marne dejiye.(saying this she again tries to cut her wrist)
Seeing no other option rishab slaps sherlyn tightly, so that  knife in sherlyn's hand fall away, & she started crying falls on his knees rishab holds her, he was trying to calm her by patting her back, sherlyn not able to control hugs rishab tightly & sobs continuesly.

Rishabh:kya karne jarahithi sherlyn tum ha? tume andaza bi hai aisa kya hua janlene cheligyi tum ha? Bolo(shouts making her starling)

Sherlyn: mai kya karu rishab ji, kya karu me, app jaise ache insan ko hurt Kiya Maine isliye muje e saza milni chahiye, jis Insan ko me sab kuch samza, uske liye muje Jo karna pade , jo jo kaha vo vo kiya par muje kya mila usse......

Rishabh: (gets anger on prithvi seeing that condition of sherlyn as she was very devastated state even reddy to give her life) kya kiya us prithvi ne?

Sherlyn: (sees directly into his eyes , she can see concern towards herself & rage towards prithvi at a time) app kyu intne ache ho rishab ji,( listening this rishab's eyes softens,sees sherlyn)me app ke sath intana bura kiya aur app mere fikar katha hai, me apke fikar deserve nahi karta hu.

Rishabh:(averts his eye contact) e mere saval ka javab nahi hai sherlyn? meme Jo tumse pucha uska jawab chahiye muje? Kya kiya usene Jo tum janlene jarahiho

Sherlyn: (just bows her head) mere kiye ki saza mil rahi hai muje

Rishabh: (lossing his cool shouts at her) meme jitna pucha utna jawab do muje
Hearing his shout sherlyn scares & tells how prithvi used her & wanted her to get out of his way after his work gets over, hearing all this rishab's blood boils

Rishabh: uski itni himmat, Insan intana kaise girsakte hai , uski tho me...
he was about go but sherlyn holds his hand & stops him

Sherlyn: nahi rishab ji app mat jayiye ,vo apko kubi karsakta hai, agar apko kuch hogaya tho me apne apko kabhi maff nahi karpavunga.pls mat jayiye.
Rishabh nods and consoles her gives her water makes her completely calm, sees her getting normal

Rishabh: agar tum muje galat mat samjo to kya me tumse ik baat karsaktha hu kya?.....

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