Tied With Threads Of Luck {UN...

By JustacupofCoffee0

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"Two bestfriends, always present for each other... The bond which everyone used to adore has now changed to b... More

Some intro before starting...
•Character Sketch And Note•
Ch1 ~Everything Changed~
Ch2 ~Rain of Anger~
Ch3 ~Loving the food~
Ch4 ~A song for dare~
Ch5 ~A glimpse of the bffs~
Ch6 ~He felt her love?~
Ch7 ~Rulake gaya ishq tera~
Ch7.2 ~Paining hearts~
Ch8 ~Truth of Past & His Guilt~
~CHARACTER SKETCH 2.0~
Ch9 ~The awaited guests~
Ch10 ~Ulti Khopdi V/S Tsunami~
Ch10.2 ~Ulti khopdi VS Tsunami~
Ch11 ~a slip of tongue😝~
Ch13 ~His Care for Her~
Ch14 ~Breakdown & Confession~
Ch15 ~Fake missions ka confusion~
Ch16 ~Karan meets KD~
Ch17 ~Shivam and Saksham~
Ch18 ~Shivam knows the truth~
Ch19 ~DO THEY KNOW?~
Ch20 ~Flashbacks~
Ch21~ You can never fail!
Ch22 ~ Fishes in the trap?
Ch23 ~Monami hui kidnap!
Ch24 ~SHE IS ALIVE!!
Ch25 ~Monami or Kavya?
Ch26 ~ KD's plan backfires
Ch27 ~ One Pillar Down
Ch28 ~ And the game is over!
Ch29 ~ A new beginning?
Ch 29.2 ~A new beginning
Ch 30 ~ Tom and Jerry
Ch31 ~ Prank wars!
Ch 32.1 ~Drunk Monami!
Ch32.2 ~Drunk Monami!
Ch 33 ~ Karan ko ho kya gaya?
Ch34~Karan shares his insecurities
Ch35 ~Glimpse from past
Ch36 ~ Karan's flashback
Ch37 ~ Marriage hui fix??
Ch38~ Karan convinces Monami?
Ch39~Karan realises his feelings
Ch40 ~Karan declares his love
Ch41 ~That's how much I love her!
Ch42~ Wedding bells won't ring!
Ch43~ A mini date !
Ch43.2 ~ A mini date!
Ch 44 ~ Monami's nightmare?
Ch 45 ~ Jealous Shergil
Ch 46~ Nazdeekiyaan
Ch 47~ Can i call you mine?
Ch 48~ Tere Hawale Kar Diya !
Ch 49 ~ Tu hi saza hai.. Tu hi Rihai
Ch 50 ~ Mr and Mrs. Shergil !
For You All❤️💫
~EPILOGUE~
AUTHOR'S NOTE

Ch12 ~Wake up Monami😢~

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By JustacupofCoffee0

Karan: Bha...bhai..bhaiya...mo...monami ka....monami ka accident ho...hogya hai..

Saying this, Karan fell on his knees and cried..

Everyone was shocked hearing this.. Param being the eldest one didn't let his tears fall.. He went to Karan and tapped his shoulders.

Param: Karan.. Abhi rone ka waqt nahi hai... Hume jaldi wahan jaana hoga..

Karan nodded in yes. He was still in tears.

K: City hospital... Wa..wahan..ad..mit kiya hai usse..

Everyone rushed to the hospital.
Karan rushed to the reception.

K: Wo..wo acci...accident case...kahan hai wo..

Receptionist: Sir.. Wo OT me hai.. Aap please ye formalities puri kardenge..

Karan didn't answer and rushed to the OT area. Param did the formalities. Sid and Sanju even came to the hospital hearing the news. Sid was crying hysterically and sanju was calming him down.

A nurse came running from the OT. Karan was going to stop her and ask about monami but she said,

Nurse: Sir please abhi nahi.. Patient ki haalat bohut kharaab hai..

Hearing this, karan sat down on the chair with a thud.

Faizi: Karan.. Karan sambhal khudko.. Kuchh nahi hoga monami ko.. Wo theek hojaayegi...

Karan: Mene kaha tha us se faizi.. Ki mujhe kuchh theek nahi lagraha.. Par wo sunti hi kahan hai meri...😭😭😭😭

Koel: Karan sambhalo khudko.. Apne pyaar pe bharosa rakho.. Tumhari monu ko kuchh nahi hoga...

By the time Shivam and Nisha also came there. Its almost 2 hours. The operation is still going on..

"Yeh lo.. Yeh tumhali chocolate. Aul ye meli"
"Tum hamechha mele best fliend banke rahoge na kalan? Plomish karo"
"tumhein kya aur koi nhi milta pareshan karne ke liye"
"Karan please..tum to mera yakeen karo.."
"Yeh shaadi sirf tumhare liye, mere liye bhi saza jaisi hi hai Karan Shergil"
"Pyaar karti hoon me us se, nahi dekhsakti usse aise"
"kaise baap ho tum..Apne hi bachon ko maarne ki baat karrahe ho😂"

Karan was lost thinking about all the memories with monami... From their childhood till now.. His trance was broken by the doctor. The operation was over. All rushed to him and asked him about monami.

Doc: Dekhiye.. Operation succesful hua... Patient ki jaan to bachgayi.. Par..

Sid: Par kya doc. Monu...monu theek to hai na.

Doc: Patient ki haalat abhi bhi naajuk hai.. Agle 2 ghanto me unka hosh me aana zaroori hai... Hum unhein kuchh der baad ward me shift kardenge... Aap unhein wahan milsakte

All were dumbstruck. The most affected was Karan. All looked at him. His eyes were red. Tears formed in his eyes but weren't falling.. Param went to him, put his hand on his shoulder.

P: Karan..
K: Wo uthegi... Usse kuchh nahi hoga bhai.. Meri monami fighter hai.. Wo fight karegi... Wo mujhe chhod ke nahi jaayegi.. Wo... Wo..(his voice cracked)😭😭😭😭

He hugged Param tightly.. Param was rubbing his back to calm him down.. Koezi, Sidsa and Shisha too composed themselves.. They were the much needed strength..
All of a sudden, Karan turned to shivam, faizi and sid and said in anger

K: Pata lagao.. Accident kisne karwaya..
F: Karan..tujhe lagta hai isme..
K: MUJHE YAKEEN HAI
Shivam: Me pata lagwata hoon.. Agar yeh uska kaam hai to.
Sid: To wo nahi bachega😡😡

......................................................................

SR: KD😡😡KD😡😡
An angry SR stormed into their adda, just to find KD chilling on her chair,looking at the screen which had monami's picture..

SR went and held her by her collars..

SR: Tumhari himmat kaise hui monami ka accident karwane ki😡😡😡 how dare you😡😡

KD: Jaise to taisa.. Tumne mera plan bigada.. Mene tumhari chahat.. Hisaab barabar SR..😈😈
She jerked off SR's hand.

SR: ABE KAUNSA PLAN.. KAISA PLAN.. TUMNE GADDARI KI HAI.. YOU BACKSTABBER😡😡😡

KD slapped SR..
(Lo bhai.. Inka to aapas me hi tu tu me me chalraha.. Yeh kya ladenge)

KD: BACKSTABBER ME NAHI TUM HO SR... YOU WERE THE ONE JISKE WAJAH SE SHERGILS KO PROOFS MILGAYA.. MONAMI AUR KARAN KA MISUNDERSTANDING CLEAR HOGAYA. AND MERA PLAN EK STEP PICHHE AGAYA😡😡😡

SR: Kavya deshmukh... Usike proofs right.. Tumhein uske proofs ke kya lena dena.. Arre mar chuki hai wo.. Us se related baaton ko use karke kabtak game khelti tum..

KD smirked : Me chahti nahi thi itni jaldi tumhein kuchh bataun SR.. Or i shall say... SAKSHAM RAY😈😈

(Shivam to pehle se hi postive tha.. Jinlogon ko saksham pe doubt tha.. Bhale hi uske zyaada scenes nahi the... Still.. Well.. Congrats😝u were right)

With this, KD removed her mask and SR moved two steps back.. His eyes widened.

SR: Ka..ka..kav...kavya😶😶😶

......................................................................

One hour has passed.. Monami had been shifted to the wards. She hadn't woken up yet.. All were tensed.. Karan was sitting beside monami, holding her hands and caressing her hair..

Karan (crying): Monu.. Mo...rani sahiba.. Utho na😭😭please.. Tum tk pyaar karti ho na mujhse.. Meri hi baat nahi manogi.. Apne...apne khadoos ki baat nahi manogi😭😭 uthjaao naa please😭😭😭

Half an hour passed.. Tension increased. If monami doesnt gain senses in the next 30mins, she can slip to coma.. Suddenly karan remembered something..

Flashback..

K: Mo.. Utho yaar.. Arre oo kumbhakaran ki behen... Utho jaldi...

M: Kya yaar karan.. Sone do na.. Kyun meri neend kharab karrahe...

K: Tum uthogi ya nahi.. Utho jaldi warna me tumhein gudgudi karunga..

M: You know it wont work... Chalo ab niklo mere room se. Aur shaanti se sone do... I love my sleep more than your bakbak😴😴😴

K: (aise nahi manegi ye.. Idea)
He started singing her favourite song.. But with Ulti Khopdi tadka😂😂 Mtlb gaane ke lyrics ki aisi ki taisi karke gaana😂😂😂

Monu wakes up and puts her hand on his mouth..

M: AAAAA.. Khadoos khadoos khadoos khadoos khadoos shergil😩😩 (she hit him with the pillow) Mene kaha tha na mere favourite gaane ko agar tumne kharab kiya to me tumhein maar maar ke tumhara bharta banadungi😡😡😡

K: (laughing) finally uthi to sahi tum😂😂😂 mujhe to aisa lagraha abhi... Ki tum jab budhi hogi na.. Tumhare pati ko bolunga.. Iske favourite gaane ko bigaad de... Yeh agar mar gayi hogi.. To bhi wapas zinda hoke maaregi tujhe😂😂😂😂

Flasback ends...

K: Dekho.. Monami.. Agar tum abhi nahi uthi na.. To sachme tumhare favourite gaane ke lyrics bigaad ke tumhein sunaunga😡😭 utho utho utho😭😭

Still no response from monami...

K: theek hai.. Nahi maanogi na... Ab mujhe mat kehna mene pehle kyun nahi bola..

And with this he started singing to wake her up..

Pal.. do pal.. ki hi kyun hai zindagi
Is pyar ko hai sadiyan kaafi nahin
To khuda se maang loon
Mohlat main ek nayi
Rehna hai bas yahan
Ab door tujh se jana nahin..
Jo tu mera humdard hai...
Jo tu mera humdard hai..
Suhana har dard hai..
Jo tu mera humdard hai...

Tears were flowing from his eyes.. He was imagining a the moments he had spent with monami.. How she used to take care of him even when he was angry on her... How she loved him unconditionally.. It was as if he was singing for her.. expressing all his feeling to her through the song..❤❤❤

Teri muskuraahatein hain taakat meri
Mujhko inhee se ummid milee

He thinks of her smile. The blissfulness she carries.. The positivity she has..

Chahe kare koi sitam yeh jahan..
Inmein hi hai sada hifazat meri
Zindghani badi khoobsurat huyi
Jannat ab aur kya hogi kahin.


He caressed her hair, planted a soft kiss on her forehead. He entangled his fingers with hers and looked at her lovingly...

Jo tu mera humdard hai
Jo tu mera humdard hai
Suhana har dard hai...
Jo tu mera humdard hai


Everyone else were watching the two from outside.. Karan singing and monami still lying on the bed, without any movement😢😢 All had tears in their eyes.
Sid: (in mind) Ab to uthh jaa monu bro.. Aur kitna rulayegi hume kamini😭😭

Sanju: (in mind) Uth jaao na monami.. Dekh... Tumhare laane sab pareshan hogo.. Ab to uthjaao

Faizi: (in mind)tum to hamesha hume hasati ho na monami.. Aaj kyun rularahi.. Uthjaao naa.. Dekho.. tumhare iss ulti khopdi ko.. Bachon jaisa roo raha..

Koel: (Uth jaa yaar monu darling.. Please uthjaa)

Param: (uth jaa na bachi.. Dekh. Koi tujhe aise nahi dekhpaaraha)

Barkha: (Tumne to hume hamesha se badi behen maana hai na monami.. Apni behen ke man ki baat bhi sunleti ho na.. To aaj bhi sunlo aur uthjaao😭)

Shivam: (Oye pagal.. Uth yaar. Sab pareshan hogaye hain tere liye😭)

Nisha: (Monu.. Uthjaao na please😭)

Baby: (Dr chachi.. I know aap uthjaaoge.. Par please jaldi utho na.. Mujhe aapse bohut saari kisses and hugs chahiye. Aap to jaante ho na baby kitni ziddi hai.. Chalo ab utho jaldi😢😭)

Inside the ward

Karan rested his head on monami's stomach and continued the song..

Teri dhadhkano se hai zindagi meri
Khwaahishein teri ab duayein meri
Kitna anokha bandhan hai yeh..
Teri meri jaan jo ek huyi
Lautoonga yahan tere paas main haan
Vada hai mera mar bhi jaaoon kahin

Tears were flowing from his eyes on to monami's dress.. Karan gets up and holds her hands as if begging her to get up soon.. As if his life depended on her😭😭

Jo tu mera hamdard hai
Jo tu mera humdard hai
Suhana har dard hai...
Jo tu mera humdard hai


He sang the last lines stammering.. The tear drops fell on monami's hand now.. She moved her fingers.. Karan was hugging her and crying so he didn't notice.. Monami opened her eyes and said...

Mo: K..k..ka..karan

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So thats it for this chapter.. I really dont know if i could express the real feelings through the chapter or not.. Par jaisa bhi hai.. Manage karlo please👉👈

Mene pehle se hi story likha tha.. Par baad me pata chala saving ka kuchh issues hua.. And restore nahi hopaaya.. To dobara likhna pada.. Isiliye late update kiya😢😢

Also.. I have published a new book : ZDMN STORIES..
if you haven't seen, then do check that out and give ur honest reviews❤❤❤

Meet you in the next chapter..

Peace out
~COFFEE❤❤

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