The Grand Journey (Rewrite)

By Supernova121

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This is a rewrite of the story The Grand Journey as the character will be someone from a world that is simila... More

Bio
Entering The World of Pokémon Every Child's Dream
The World of Pokémon
Adjusting to The New Life
The New Pokémon and New Assistant
Keenan's First Task Pt.1
Keenan's First Task Pt.2
The Battle in The Volcano
Back at Kanto
Onto The Unova Region
New Captures and Aura User
The New Pokémon Dome
Meeting The Princess of Viridian City
Latios The Eon Dragon
The Hardened Shelgon
Entering The Kalos Region
The Gym Leader Viola and Idol
Keenan's First Gym Battle and New Rivalry
The Secret's Out
Keenan The Prodigy
Galar Expedition Pt.1
Galar Expedition Pt.2
Off To Sinnoh
Gyomei's Power
The Grave In Paradise
Alone Time With Chloe
The Mysterious White Riolu
A Rival's Reunion
The Return of Rizevim Pt.1
The Return of Rizevim Pt.2
Adventure in Kanto and Alpha
Misty's Visit
The Electrifying Gym
An Electrifying Result
Uncle Tobias
Shiny Beast of Wind
Iron Island Adventure
A Gift From Someone and A Third Rival
New Rival Arrvies
Keenan's Mission and A Shocking Revelation
Keenan's Adventure in Kalos Spheal's Development
Keenan's Adventure in Kalos Meeting Korrina
Shalour Gym Showdown
New Captures Here and There...Korrina's New Crush
Chloe's Big Surprise
Alola Here We Come
Family Vacation Pt.1
Family Vacation Pt.2
Family Vacation Final
Small Future Teaser's
Turning Up the Heat
Danger's of The Orbs
Healing and New Evolutions
Battle of Hatred
Keenan's and Chloe's Alola Trip
Keenan's "Grandmother" of The Pokémon World
Snowpoint City Troubles Pt.1
Snowpoint City Trouble's Pt.2
The Colossal Aftermath
The Final Gym Battle Pt.1
The Final Gym Battle Pt.2
Keenan's Birthday Party Pt.1
Keenan's Birthday Party Pt.2
Tobias vs Keenan, Battle of Growth
Hanging With The Hoenn Champion
Welcome To Fatherhood
Tatsumi's Time To Shine
Johto League Conclusion Pt.1
Johto League Conclusion Pt.2
Calm Before The Storm
The Sinnoh League Rumble
Brain's vs Stupidity
Semi Final Opponent Maiden of Fire
Johto's Maiden of Fire vs Mysterious Prodigy Pt.1
Johto's Maiden of Fire vs Mysterious Prodigy Pt.2
Johto's Maiden of Fire vs Mysterious Prodigy Final
Intermission Before The Finals
The Legendary Battle Pt.1
The Legendary Battle Pt.2
The Legendary Battle Finale
Award's Ceremony
After League Clarity
3 Idiots In A House and Battle Start
Backed Into A Corner
The Ever So Obvious Conclusion
Welcome Back To The Beautiful Paradise
Nightmare Tapu Koko
Alolan Beach Relaxation
What Takuto Battle's Goh Who Will Win
3 Way Split
The New Orb Mission
Titan of Iron Metagross
Parenting 101 and Kala's League Battle
Limit Breaking Problems
Kalakaua's Semi Final Battle
Kalakaua's Semi Final Battle Pt.2
Hoenn League Finals Pt.1
Hoenn League Finals Pt.2
Kalakaua's Award's Ceremony and A Warning
Chapter 100 Milestone
The Coordinator's
James True Power
Keenan's Elite Four Challenge...Aaron
Keenan's Elite Four Challenge...Aaron Pt.2
Aaron's Fate and Takuto's Birthday
Revavroom Mayhem and Takuto's Birthday Pt.2
Takuto's Birthday Final
A Taste of Power
Agni The God of Fire Pt.0
Agni The God of Fire Pt.1
Agni The God of Fire Pt.2
Agni The God of Fire Aftermath
The Beast of Volcano's Entei
Been Awhile Kalos
Tatsumaki The Psychic Empress
Battle Assault on Tatsumi
Ryuga The Dragon Emperor
The 4 Horseman
Alain The Mega Evolution Expert
Double Trouble
Psychic Nuisance Pt.1
Psychic Nuisance Final
The 4 Destroyers
Primordial Pokémon
Alola's Secret Pt.1
Alola's Secret Pt.2
Disaster In Alola
Oceanus The Princess of Oceans
Oceanus Aftermath
Make Up
The House of Keenan
Domino and The 3 Stooges
Prelude of The Alola League
Battle Royale Massacre
Define Humiliation
Mallow vs Ohia, The Flower's Power
Semi Final Tension
Kalakaua vs Ohia, Flower vs Beast Pt.1
Kalakaua vs Ohia, Beast vs Flower Pt.2
The Final Countdown
Let The Finals Begin
The Climax
Moments Before Disaster
Prologue to Namakaokahi
Leviathan of The Seas and Possession Namakaokahi
Namakaokahi's Fall
The Aftermath and Moving On
Shiny Beast of Thunder
Keenan vs Amethyst, Battle of Realities
Shiny Ho-oh Battle
Worlds Strongest vs Worlds Mysterious Prologue
Worlds Strongest vs Worlds Mysterious Pt.2
Worlds Strongest vs Worlds Mysterious Final
Preparing for Lance
Champion of Dragon's Pt.1
Champion of Dragon's Pt.2
Haleakala and Espie's Date
Anomaly Mission Pt.1
Anomaly Mission Pt.2
Hoenn's Star Trainer
Steven vs Kalakaua Pt.1
Steven vs Kalakaua Pt.2
Steven vs Kalakaua Final
Primordial Hydreigon
Project Mew and Tatsumi
Arriving in Sinnoh
The Undefeated Champion Pt.1
The Undefeated Champion Pt.2
The Undefeated Champion Final
Adventures with A. Haleakala
Welcome to He-I Mean Youngster's Camp
Generation's of Miracles
The Esper Orb and Lake Guardians
Winter Land of Icirus
A True Dragon
The Primordial Decidueye
James vs Keenan Test Run
'O ka Pō'ino A Puni Ke Kihi
Movie Event Prologue
Movie Event Battle
Movie Event End
Fun Things Are Fun
Filler's Are Nice
Old Faces Makes An Appearance
Bringing Back Memories
Audrey and Amethyst
Haleakala and Lehua's Other Worldly Adventure
A Baby and Mom Related Chapter....FINALLY
Ash vs James Rematch
A. Haleakala and Haleakala
Tatsumi and Kalakaua Chronicles
The Kalos Gathering
Let it Begin Fight for The Title
Tag Team Massacre
Official Round's Start

Keenan's Progress

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By Supernova121

Chapter 12


No One POV

About 4 days had passed since Keenan has gotten his new dome which he is happy about and also a whole crap ton of items that he gotten from Mr.McKenzie as he stuffed them somewhere in a shed for whenever he needs one of the items he'll go in there and get it, but over the course of those 4 days he has captured a few more Pokémon. The first Pokémon he caught was a Nidoran male as apparently the poor Pokémon has been trapped inside the dome ever since it was built so Keenan had offered him to be with him which the Nidoran agreed to.

Another Pokémon he caught was a Spheal when he went to the Hoenn region with Ash and Goh since they went there for a little assignment that involved research on Spheal's located on a beach as apparently they only go upon that beach once every year for breeding.

Keenan:*looking at his Rotom phone*hmm I have a poison and ground type and a water and ice type now I have used a Spheal before and Walrein's are decently powerful plus it reminds me of Katie's Walrein as well.he said as he's looking at the 2 new additions talking to one another

Keenan:*turns toward Deino*but the problem right now is you.he said as he's watching Deino smash it's head against a tree

Keenan:that Deino sure is feisty I need to find a way to calm it down unless it wants to battle, hey Rotom what kind of moves does Deino know.he asked the machine

Keenan's Rotom Phone:Deino knows the following moves Bite,Head Smash,Dragon Breath and Body Slam.the machine said to him

Keenan:hmm that's a pretty good move set and Head Smash is a egg move I wonder if one of it's parents are.he wondered to himself as the Deino had stopped ramming the tree

As Keenan then turned toward his Rowlet as he's currently sleeping in a tree which he already made his nest and home as he also needs to train Rowlet since Decidueye can be a real powerful Pokémon although he won't want his Deciueye to be like Hau's since it lost against Ash's Rowlet he will actually use it to its fullest potential but to Keenan this Rowlet felt odd. Then there's 4 of his current strongest Pokémon which is Rhyperior,Togekiss,Heatran and Rayquaza as they are doing their own thing well besides Rayquaza since he's to big to fit inside the dome.

Keenan:man I really need to get to train my Pokémon I think I'll do that now *yells* HEEEY EVERYBODY COME HERE.he yelled loudly as it echoed throughout the dome

A little while later all of his Pokémon had started to come toward him and that includes his Heatran as he was making his way toward Keenan as Spheal,Nidoran and Deino are amazed by it since he never really seen Heatran before until now, as Keenan looked toward the tree where Rowlet is as he sighed. He went up to the tree to wake up Rowlet as he shook him awake as he looked groggily at Keenan until he seen that all of his Pokémon were all gathered up as he immediately woke up and made his way down toward the rest.

Keenan:alright since everyone is here I decided to do a bit of training and I'm sure some of you will enjoy it *as he looked toward Deino,Rhyperior and Rowlet* and some of you might hate it or don't even know where to start but that's why I'm here.he said to them as they let them process

Keenan:it's my job as your trainer to make you guys stronger and use your natural abilities and powers to its fullest potential as I am still a beginning trainer myself but I'll try my best so onward to the training groups.he said as he's looking all of his Pokémon

Keenan:since Deino likes to battle a lot you'll be paired up against Rhyperior and then Rowlet,Nidoran and Spheal you guys will train with one another but don't worry the stronger you guys get the more powerful training partners you'll get got it.he said to them as they called out their names in agreement

He then turned toward the only 2 remaining as he does need to train Heatran a bit but for Togekiss he has something in mind for him.

Keenan:actually Togekiss could you help out Rowlet with his fly techniques and aerial maneuvers please I'm sure you'll be a great teacher.he asked him as he happily agreed as he flew off toward Rowlet and the others

Keenan:*looks toward Heatran*now for you I have someone special for you can train up against, you most likely already know who it is so your coming with me.he said as he nodded

Timeskip brought to you by Leaf,Danika and Misty doing the Caramelldansen with embarrassed blushes on their faces.

Still No One POV

Keenan is now currently in the mountain area of the Kanto region as he trust that his Pokémon will be training when he gets back as he doesn't mind them taking a break but in his mind he really needs to train them and get them for whatever battles come in the future and especially his upcoming battles against Tobias and Riley. As he is watching both Rayquaza and Heatran battle up against one another as they are totally destroying the entire landscape of where they are but luckily no one is within the area well at least to his knowledge, because a certain someone is watching him train right now.

Tobias:well well it seems your finally training them that's good to see.he said as he came out of nowhere

Keenan:*jumps in shock*whoa what the fuck where the hell did you come from.he said in shock as he wasn't expecting Tobias to just pop up out of nowhere

Tobias:I just arrived here and also i heard explosions so I came here to check it out, but how have you been since we last seen each other.he said back to him

Keenan:I've been good I guess just wasn't expecting you to literally pop up out nowhere someone needs to put a dam bell on you.he replied to him

Tobias:*chuckles*sorry if I scared you Keenan but where's the rest of your Pokémon if I might ask.he wondered

Keenan:their back at the lab training with one another I gave them their assignments and their currently doing it right now, and after all I need to start training if I want to battle against you and Riley who is apparently our dam cousin.he said to him as he's still a bit surprised about that

Tobias:Ah I see so you encountered Riley where was he been a while since I last seen him.he asked

Keenan:in the Unova region although I'm not sure if he's there anymore been 4 days since I've been to Unova, and he also gave me this Riolu egg but to me it just feels weird.he said as it caught his interest

Tobias:*raises an eyebrow*what do you mean by weird.he asked

Keenan:I don't know but I guess I'll find out whenever it hatches it's in the incubator right now in my room but why are you really here.he asked his brother

Since Keenan knows that Tobias won't just pop up out of nowhere just to watch his brother train his 2 Legendaries as from what he can remember Tobias is always on the move and if he remembers correctly that the International Police are also on the hunt for him since they want to question him as to how many Legendary and Mythical Pokémon that he has. But they'll never catch him he's to smart to be caught and he always have other plans in case he does somehow gets spotted or recognized but Keenan knows one thing for sure is that Tobias is a complete mystery.

Tobias:I just came by to see if there's any Legendary Pokémon that came around lately.he asked him

Keenan:*shakes his head*um no not to my knowledge but why do you ask.he asked him

Tobias:well there's a Mew following you.he told him as his eyes widened

Keenan:*wide eyed*what a Mew why is there a Mew following me and how do you even know this.he said in surprise as he wasn't expecting that

Tobias:I have my ways but it's not just any Mew it's a shiny Mew I seen it before I left Stark Mountain and ever since then it started following you, noticed anything odd.he asked him

As Keenan stood there thinking about anything that seemed out of place or anything in that matter as he really couldn't really think of anything aside from him losing the pendant Arceus gave to him as he panicked a bit, but when he went back into his room it was there.

Keenan:well now that you've mentioned it I did lose something but when I came back to my room it was back where I put it, is that the work of Mew.he said back to him

Tobias:*nods*yes that's no doubt the work of Mew, you see Mew's are one of the most ancient Pokémon in the entire world and they are full of mysteries aside from being extremely rare they are also really playful and like to play pranks. But above all else when they find someone that catches their interest they will follow them to just see if their worthy, they might take some stuff that belongs to you but they will always return it.he said to him as Keenan is processing that

Keenan:I see but how do you know about this do you have a Mew of your own or something.he asked him

Tobias:no I do not but I do know where I can find a Mew but I believe the Mew that's following you now is someone quite dear to you, you'll find out sooner or later.he said as he started to walk away

Keenan:*raises an eyebrow*your leaving already.he asked him

Tobias:*nods*yes gonna go to the Kalos region there's something I need to do I'll see you sometime later little brother and oh before I forget I hope you like the Shiny Charm, it was our sisters prized position so take care of it.he told him

As Keenan's eyes widened in shock as he knows that Mr.McKenzie couldn't just find a Shiny Charm just like that as he knew that it had to be Tobias or someone else he doesn't know as he now knows where the Shiny Charm is from as he gotten more memories of his sister as she really liked the charm until she gave it to Tobias before well she gotten killed. He stood there as he tuned back toward Rayquaza and Heatran as they are still battling one another as that's when he decided to stop the training session as it's time to head back home, and plus Professor Cerise will start to wonder where he went since he didn't exactly told him where he was going.

Timeskip brought to you by Keenan sleeping as the shiny Mew teleports into his room and curls up besides him falling asleep.

Change POV Keenan

I finally made it back to the lab as i went back to the dome to drop off Heatran for he can go back into his home as I do need to feed my Pokémon later on but first I'm gonna take a shower since I do really need a shower after all the training that Rayquaza has been doing with Heatran as they really flew dust and such all over the place. As I made my way into the lab and walked into the kitchen area where I seen Ash and Goh as they just came back not to long ago from their next mission of what not that Professor Cerise gave them which he doesn't really care about but he does want to have another mission.

Cerise:oh there you are Keenan where did you run off to I went to your room and you weren't there.he asked me

Me:I went out to train for a bit that's all.i answered him

Ash:really you trained with your Pokémon and you didn't asked anyone to help you train.he said to me as I rolled my eyes

Me:I can train by myself thank you very much I don't need help with training you know and besides when are you going to train your Pokémon.i asked him

Ash:*scratches the back of his head*um I'm not really sure to be honest I need to catch a few more Pokémon first before I do decide to train them.he said to me as I looked at him

Me:don't you have other Pokémon at Professor Oak's lab couldn't you just use them.i asked him

Ash:well you see I don't really like using any of my old Pokémon I like to start from 0 and make my way up.he said to me

Me:and yet you have Pikachu with you, it doesn't make a difference it's not really starting from 0 if you always have that Pikachu with you now is it.i said back to him

Ash:*sweat drops*well you see Pikachu has been with me ever since I begun my journey and I can't exactly leave him behind.he said to me as I scoffed

Me:*scoffs*don't give me that crap I know what that Pikachu is capable of, I seen it defeat Pokémon that's way larger then he is like Brandon's Regice and defeating Tobias's Latios although it was a tie. And of course Gladion's Silvally and Tapu Koko and you say that you won't use any of your old Pokémon when you have a Pikachu that's way above average your such a hypocrite.i said back to him as he narrowed his eyes at me

Ash:*narrows his eyes at me*and what do you mean by that huh.he asked me

Me:what I mean is that you could've won a lot more leagues if you used your older Pokémon hell if anything the most embarrassing lost you ever had was up against that dumbass named Cameron who forgot to bring 6 Pokémon at a full battle.i said back to him

Ash:*glaring at me*hey don't talk about Cameron like that he won because he-.i cut him off

Me:*looks at him*no he won because you were an idiot for not using your older Pokémon in the Unova league, you used your older Pokémon in the Sinnoh league and look how far you've gotten. Don't give me that crap Ash because I know you can do better then that if you used Charizard or your Infernape in that battle against Cameron you would've easily won, just start using your old Pokémon because you not using them is just a waste of potential.i said to him

As I grabbed my tea and made my way out of the kitchen area as Professor Cerise and Goh was just sitting or standing there in shock as I made my way back toward my room as Ash hadn't said anything as he was most likely thinking of what I told him. After my little talk with Ash I grabbed some clothes from my drawers and made my way toward the shower since I do need a shower after everything that had happened up at the mountains.

But what I didn't know is that there was someone else in the shower and they didn't even bothered to lock the door as I opened the door and walked into the bathroom and what I seen was something I was not expecting and that was Chloe. All Chloe was wearing was nothing but a towel wrapped around her body well partially wrapped around her body as I could see some parts of her breast and her sacred area as I stood there with a small blush across my face.

Chloe:*blushes*what Keenan what are you doing why didn't you knock.she said in surprise

Me:*blushing a bit*what am i doing here you mean why didn't you locked the dam door it would be common sense now would it that you would lock the door while taking a shower right.i said back to her as this girl is crazy not locking the door unless she wanted to be walked in on

Chloe:*blushing*it doesn't change the fact that you seen me naked just get out of here.she said to me

Me:technically I didn't exactly see your whole body just seen well parts of your breast and ugh vagina.i answered her

Chloe:*blushing as she throws her bra at me*your impossible pervert.as the bra had hit me as I'm now outside the bathroom

Me:*looks at her bra*seriously why the hell would she throw this at me doesn't she need it.i said in confusion

As I'm admiring the type of underwear that she's wearing as it's only a plain red bra as I'm just holding it in my hand until the door had cracked opened as she grabbed her bra as she slammed the door again.

Me:*sighs*can I at least know how long your going to take in there.i asked her as she didn't answered

Me:*groans*fine whatever I'll just feed my Pokémon in the meantime.i said as I started to walk away

Change No One POV

When Keenan went out to feed his Pokémon Chloe is seen in the bathroom still with a blush across her face as she still can't believe that it happened that Keenan had seen her naked body although according to him he didn't see as much just part of her naked body but nonetheless he still seen it as she's embarrassing at what just happened.

Chloe:*blushing as she sighs*idiot why did he had to say it like that looking at my body.she said in embarrassment as she covers her chest

Chloe:*blushes*but why does it sorta turned me on tho, this is different from when I liked Goh before he started his obsession with Pokémon.she said to herself as she's now having these new feelings

As Chloe is experiencing new emotions in the bathroom as she's starting to feel odd around Keenan and she doesn't know what to do in this situation but then she finally figured out why she's feeling this way.

Chloe:*her eyes widens*wait no way do I have a crush on Keenan no no it can't be my heart belongs to Goh...even though he doesn't really seem to care or notice.she said to herself

Chloe:*groans in confusion*why does he emotions need to be so confusing that not even I can understand it.she said to herself once more as she finishes changing

As Keenan is definitely making progress that's for sure of not only it has to do with his Pokémon but also his personal life that involves the residents at Cerise Laboratories.


A/N:This is it for the chapter hope you guys enjoyed it as Keenan is slowly making progress as he now has 2 new Pokémon and is also gonna start training them, and also expect him to get a few Pokémon that isn't within the chapters but I will try and say how he got them. As for why I chose Walrein as his water type Pokémon well I for one used one before and it was actually quite decent and it's also quite bulky if i might add so Walrein will be a good addition to his team and the same can be said for Nidoking whenever his Nidoran evolves.

I also decided to do a small little lime scene although it's not much of a like scene but I wanted to give Keenan and Chloe some attention as there will be other moments with the girls in his harem as the first ones will be a little spoiler and that's Misty,Leaf and Danika since I do plan on him meeting her a bit early.

Next chapter is gonna be "Meeting The Princess of Viridian City"

Stay tuned✌️

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