THE LOVE MAZE

By Luci_form

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Namjin Yoonmin Sope Taekook. Baki oke vazhiyae ariyam. Pinae ithoru typical manglish FF annu, athre enik epo... More

Prologue
Chapter 1
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
chapter 6
Chapter 7
chapter 8
Happy news
chapter 9
Chapter 10
chapter 11
Chapter 12
chapter 13
chapter 14
chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
NEW STORY
chapter 20
Chapter 21
Chapter 22
Chapter 23
chapter 24
Chapter 25
chapter 26
Final

Chapter 2

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By Luci_form

2days after

Puthenpurakal House.

Samayam epo ekadesham ravile 5 mani aayikannum. Randu divasam aayitu YoonJiyum Hobium ivide thannae stay cheythae.

Ellarum nalla urakam.

Pettan Hobi aro callingbell (doorbell) edukunae kettanu njetti ezhunaettae. Avn adhyam thannae avnte side nalla sugam aayi pothinae pole puthachu moodikidakuna avnte wife ine noki. Avl onnum arijilla sughanidrayilann.


Hobi :Oh.. itu enthinte kunjano entho.. Di YoonJi.

Hobi randu pravisham avale thatti enipikan noki... but no raksha. Avasanam avn ah task angu upekshichu. Becoz bed kanda aval shavam ah en avn ariyam.

Appo deh pinaem Calling bell sound.
Hobi avasanam bedil innu enittu door urakam poyi. Angane hallile light oke ittu pathuke door turannu.

Hobi : Ahh... neyo?

??: Hobichaan ivadyiruno ?

Hobi : Ahhada .... innale vannaya. Ah ne keriva.

?? : Avl enthiyae?

Hobi : Bed kanda ninte pengal shavam anen ninak ariyalo.... Alla ne itu evidayirun Tae.. ?

Tae : Njan Chennayil indayirun... ente oru frnd inte wedding nj vannatha.. appozha news arijae.

Hobi :Ah.. enthayalum ne irik.. njan chaya edukam.

Tae : Venda Hobicha.. enik on kidakanam..... Hobichanum poyi kidano.

Hobi : Samayam 5 aayi.. ene njan urakam pidichu varumbo oru neram akum.

Tae *smiling* : Sorry.

Hobi : Mmm.. chellu poyi kidano. Ninte room oke innale thannae Appachan clean cheyichayirun.

Tae : oh..  appo njan varum enurapayirunale.

Itu paraju Tae nere roomilek keri poyi. Cherkante room upstairil ah so step keranam.

Hobi nere avrde roomilekum poyi. Adyam oke thirijum marijuana kedanekilum alki urakam vanilla. At last YoonJi yeh angu kettipidichu.. athe flowil avalum. Angane avr parasparam kettipidichu kidanu urangi.

Ravile 7 am

(Oh ingane time ezhuthumbo Big Boss ahh orma varunae)

YoonJi : Saraamma chechi e Dosha onn nokiyeku njan ichayan ezhunetto en nokattae.

(Sarama avidathe servant ann. Yoonji um avlde angalamarum oke kunjayitunapo thottu ivar avide Joli cheyandu... she like a family).

Avl oru cup Tea um eduth roomilek poyi.

YoonJi : Hobicha.. enikan.. Ningalk innu hospitalil povande.

But reply onumilla.. allu nalla urakthil ann athondu cheriya oru moolal matram kelkam.

YoonJi : Ah bestt... ethu nerom njan kattil kanda shavam ah en paraju nadakunae aalla. Ingerde urakthe pattiyonum arkum oru complaintumilla.

Avl pinae onnum nokilla,  Hobie kuliki kuliki avasam enipichu.

Hobi: Ohh... pandaram, manshyane uraganum samathikilae.

YoonJi : ahh Illa.. ninak innu Hospitalil povande... vene kulichu ready aayi vaa.

Itum paraju avl avidun enittu.

Hobi : Di kopee

YoonJi : Poda.

Avl pinaem Kitchenilek poyi.

Sarama : Mole dosa njan dinning table vechitund Sambar epo akum .. Hobimon vanno.

YoonJi : Evidun, enittitu polum illayirun.. (plates oke eduthond polka and arranging the table) Apo angottek Sarama yum vann.

Sarama : Appachanu vayatheuayatu karanam .. ellarum varuvayirikum allae mole.

YoonJi: Ah.. ellarem ariyichitundu ... varathirikilla.

Appozhanu angoteku Hobi vannae.

Hobi vannu irunu plateleku 2 dosaum  vechu samabarum vilambi.

Sarama : Avn enna vendae enn vecha villabi koduku mole.

YoonJi : Icchyaa chutney venno?

But ah Ichaaya viliyil Hobi vennu. Avn 2 second avale thannae nokiyirun. Sarama itu kandu nice ayittu avidun escape aayi.

YoonJi Sarama poyath kanda udane Hobi de aduth irun.

Hobi : Ennane pathivillathe oru ichaya vili.

YoonJi : ohh..  ath karyakanda Saramachi ninakonda.. pullikari alloru pazhajan ann... Kettu kazhija edkakentho  njan nine Da enn vilikunae kettu ene kore updeshichaya... athond ah angane vilikunae.

Hobi : Ohhhooo.

YoonJi : Ah pinae innu rakshapettu ennum vicharikanda.. nale vtyl ayirikum namal ... innathe duty ann cheythekanm.

Hobi : Ohh.. cheythekave.
(Hobi eat cheyan start cheythu). Ahh Ede parayan maranu ninte appante ettavum ilaya santhathi inn mrng land ayi.

Yoonji : Eh?

Hobi : Tae roomil ind..

YoonJi : Avan eppo vann?

Hobi : oru 5 oke aayikannum... kattil kanda ninak pinae bodham illathondu avn vannath njan poyathum onnu ne arijilla.

Yoonji *suspicious* : Ningal evide poyae?

Hobi : Uyyoo.. njan avanu door turanu kondukan poyatha.

Kottayam Bus Stand .

Ahh aaro varundu epo.. marano entho ah vaa nokam.

Some random Soshama checchi: Dohh.. atha ah ah Jackson alae... manasillayila..ede ah palishakaran varkichathe mole illae .. avle adichondu poya cherkan. Ohh athoru sambhavam thannae ayirun... enthoke bhahalagal aayirun.. avasanam avalem vilichondu ivan angu irangi ponnu .... epo randu piller indenna kettae... Ennalum , Ivan entha ivide??.. Daivame ene valla avihithavum anno.. alla cherkan kuraekalam Chinail oke ayirun.. valla kaiabhathavum pattiyvo avo??

Some random person : Ayyae ... ne ingane orunu paraju manshyane kothipikallae.. avan dhoonde ah varunna sathanathe noki ninayayirkum.. Joon um ivanum pande nalla kootanalo.

Appo adutha santhanavum land aayi makale.

Jackson : Daa.. ivide.

Joon avnte luggage um eduth Jackson nte aduthottu vannu.

Jack : Entra naal ayada ninae kandittu? Ninak sughano?.

Joon : Ahhda... avlaum pillerum oke enna parayun?

Jack : Ellarkum sugha.

Luggage oke eduth caril vekun.

Jack : Njan orth ninae vilikan ninte appan vandi ayakum en.

Joon : Hobicha varam enn parajya ... pinae najn ah parajae venda en.

Jack : Ahh.. enthayalum ne vaa.. vtyl kerittu pokam.

Joon : Ath athrae ullu pillerku medicha chocolates oke kodukandae.

Jack : Ohhoo.. pillerk matrae ulloda?

Joon : ne vandi eduku namuku pokam.

Joon and Jack angane oro vishesham oke paraju drive cheythondirikuva. Appo Joon inte phone ring cheythu.

Jack : Enthada ah Ernakulathe ah pen anno?

Joon : Mmm
Avan phone eduthu.

??. : Ethiyoo?

Joon : Ahh ethi.. Jackson vannu pick cheyan...

??. :  Mmm.. Avide chenittu neyayittu vazhakinonum povandatto.

Joon : illa ne tension adikanda.

Itu paraju call cut aaki.

Jack : Ne ethiyo enariyan vilichae ayirikum. Allayo?.

Joon : Ahhda. Enthumbozhae vilikan parajaya.... njan onum settle ayittu vilikam enorthaya.. but athinu munbae avl ingottu vilich.

Jack*hesitation*: Eda.. Ningal thammil sherikum ishtathillano.

Joon: Ariyillada.. avlde aduthu njan orupadu comfortable ah.. avlaum angane thanna.. ishtam anno enoke chothicha... angane oru talk ituvare njangal randuperde bhagathunum indayitilla.

Back to..

Puthenpurakal Tharavadu

Hobicha oke Hospitalil poyi, epo time ekadesh 9 mani aayi. YoonJi chennu Tae ide roomil chennu , sry knock onum cheyan time illa.. I mean athonum namuku sheelam illa.

Nere keri angu chenu. Appo Tae avide... avl athu kandu albudapettu.

Vernonum alla.

Cherkan vettiyitta bazha thandu pole kidakuva.

YoonJi : Da yerka.. enittae.. vannae vannu vellathum thinnitu kida.

E dialogue um paraju avne kuttipokuva...

Tae : Ennatha.. chechi.. manshyane uranganum samathikilla..

Avn sahikettu kannum theerumi ezhunettu.

YoonJi : Oh.. kanda naadu mallae thendi thiriju nadakunaen onum ninak kuzhappam illa... njan urakathinu vilichayano kuzhappam..

Tae : Oh.. Phone edukanjaen anno ravile thannae itu.... ah Hobichan ninae engane sahikunade.

YoonJi : Ayyoo.. valya kashtayipoyi.. ne phone eduthillae enik enna.. pinae Hobichan.. angerde karyam orthu ne tension adikanda..  athu njan noki kollam...
Vene enittu vannu vellathum kazhi.

Tae : ohh.. varuva.

Tae angane pallu oke theechu kannum thirumi thazhae chennapo avide irikum Davis.

Davis : Ah.. appanu vaya enarijapo engilum mon vannel santhosham.

Tae onum midiyilla avan food eduthu kazhikan tudagi. YoonJi anel randu perm noki dergahshwasam vittu. Food kazhichu kazhiju oru koosalum illathe avn avnte roomilek poyi.

YoonJi : Ninak enna appanodu mindiya?

Tae : Ne angerde varthanam kettilae, chumma choriyan varuva.

Yoonji : Eda.m neyengilum onum mayathil perumarikode? Enthina ingane oke.

Tae : ahh.. ennae kondu ithoke pattu. Illel parajaeku njan angu pokollam.

Avl pinae onum parayan ninilla angu irangi poyi.

Jacksonte veedu.

Mariya annu door turannthu.

[Mariya Elizabeth Jackson, Jackson nte wife.. nerthae mention cheytha palishakaran Varikichathe moly, Epo Jackson nte randu pillerde mom ]

Mar : Ahha.. nere ingottu ponno?

Jack: Ahhdi.

Mar : Ethra naal aayi Joonie inne kandittu.. vallapozhum oke ernakulathinu ingottu varattoo.

Joon : Thirakayi poyundalledi.

Jack : Uvvaa.. Edi piller enthiyae?

Mar : Enititilla..

Jack : Ahhdi.. ne kazhikan enthelum indel eduku.

Mar : Mm.. nalla chhoodu puttum kadalayum ind.

Joon : Ahha.. polichaene athu ingu edutho.

Angane Mariya food oke table nirathi vechapo annu oru item nalla super aayittu avide kaaripolikunae.

Jackson athine kettapo thannae oodichen eduth.

Jack : Ahhaa.. appade ponn in nerthae analo.

Mar : Ichaya ningal kazhicho... avale njan edutholam.

Jack : Ameedaduth ponno ente kochine..
Kochu onnum mindathe Jack inte thollil angu kidanu.

Mar : ah best.. allelum inger kittiya avlk ene venda.... athungal ingane nadanolum Joonie ne kazhiku.

Jackson : Paraythirikan vayya Mariyae, ninte mon oru kuzhimadiyana, ente kochu ezhunettu enittu avn enna ennitta.

Joon : Avn ninte swabham ahda , ninte madiyum athe pole kittitund.

Jack : ohhoo.. enikittu vekuvanallae.
Be putt thinnu.

Vadakethalakal House.

Ivide pathiv kazhcha thannae ah, pazhayathu pole thannae Sini  kitchenil ninu pirupirukuva.

Sini : Allelum oru karyathinum ninae kondu upakaram illalodi... kettichu vitta vittaduth nikanam... ennum ninte perum paraju nanam kedana ninte appante vidhi.

Felix : Ammachi onnu nirthundo food kazhiumbo engilum avlk ithri samathanam kondu.

Sini : Oh eppo njan parayunae anno kuzhappa... di ne ethu kaivesham koduthitta ente kochine ninte vasathakiyae.

Jini onnum midathe food kazhicha sheesham , avldem avide sinkil vere indayiruno platesum kazhuki vechu.

Sini : Nattukardem veetukardem mumbil ninte appane ne nanam keduthilledi... Ninte thallayum ingame thannae ayiruno.

Jiniku athu matram sahikan patiyilla.

Felix: Amma!!

Jini *ippo karayum avastha* : Deh... ene enthu vene parajo pakshe ente ammaye paraja njan athu kettond nokilla.

Sini : Ahhaa.. ne ennodu thirichu samsarikaryi allae .. ninte appan varatadi njan ninae sheriyaki tharam.

Jini : Ithil koduthal ningal ini enthu cheyana.. ningalku cheyan pattunathinte maximum ningal enne upadravichu... ene e tharunae foodil ithri vesham kode kalaki tharan alae baki ullu.

Itum paraju Jini avlde roomil keri kathak adachu. Itu e vtyl sthiram ah ennum ethengilum oke paraju Jini yeh karayichillengi avkde randanamk urakam varilla.

Sini : Eda innu clginu nerthae varan pattuvo enn noku?

Felix : Ennathina igottu vanittu? Enik ivide varumbozhae pranth pidikum.

Sini : vanekam innu, ninte ammama innu varum athonda.

Felix : Oh varam.

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Appo Sheri bye.

Be safe 💜

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