Tum Dena Saath Mera

Od Sunflower_Shakhi

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This story takes place after Shaurya fills anokhi's Maang. Shaurya reached home but his mind was still roami... Více

Author's Note
Sach
Saat
Raat Akeli Hai
Dosti
Shakti
Golmaal
SIAC Fest
Grah Pravish
Ghar
Tu Zaroori
Kaise Katega Pal har Pal
intezar hai tera intezaar hai
Shaadi Mubarkh
Taayari
Aaj Hai Sagai
Mehndi Hai rachnewali
Haldi
Vivah
Calm before storm
Judai
Majboori
Tum hi anna
Phir bhi tumko chaahunga
Ruke na ruke naina
Jeena
Hamari Aduri Kahani
Tere bina zindagi se
sukon mila
Sanu ek pal Chain na aaye
Tere saath hoon main
Chandaniya
KYA KEHNA
Mubaraka
Ghar
Likh Ke Mehndi Se Sajna
Nach na jane aangan tedha
Nachde ne saare
Pyaar ka rang
Note
Happy Ending

Lakh Lakh Vadhaiyan

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Od Sunflower_Shakhi


A week passed. Shaurya had recovered and also the shine and happiness in their life seems to be back. Anokhi was to be discharged and when Devi and Tej came...everyone was quite...when tej spoke "delho jo hona tha woh ho chuka...ab saab nayi shuru vaat karte hai... gahr ke badi bahu ko hum ghar ke jane aaye hai...

Shaan said getting bit angry and disappointed, "Shaurya, kaan khol kar sun lo... tum donon kahin nahin jaaoge...tum dono mere flat mein shift hoge.... meri har cheej par mere saare bachchon ka barabar ka haq hai ....toh maine haq diya hai apne bete bahu ko yahaan rehne ka... aur mein nahin bardasht karunga ki koi bhi meri beti ko takleef pahunchaye... apne bachchon ko badon ki wajah se dukh jhelte dekha hai maine par ab aur nahin.." he stood in front of her saying strictly, ... aisa na ho ki mein bhool jaaun ki hamara rishta kya hai..."

"Papa mein aur Anokhi Flat mein shift hojaye abhi..."

Before Shaurya moved Tej firmly hold his hand firmly, "kahin nahin jaaoge tum aur Anokhi... aur yeh mera aakhiri faisla hai... yeh ghar mera hai aur mere bete bahu ko iss ghar se koi nahin jaygaye..."

Shaan shouted back on her losing all his tempers, "bas... aap kabhi nahin samjhengi rishto . jitna maan samman mera Shaurya app dono ko deta hai na utna toh Astha aur mujhe bhi nahi bhi nahin karta, par yeh sab samajhne aur mehsoos karne ke liye ek saaf dil chahiye hota hai jo aapke paas toh bilkul nahin hai... kLooking at he said caressing Anokhi's head, "aaj aapki wajah se mere bachchon ko takleef huyi hai jise mein aakhiri baar maaf kar raha hun... ab aap yahaan se jaaiye isase pehle ki mein bhool jaaun hamara rishta kya hai..

Anokhi said, "par Papa, aapne unhein yun ghar se jaane ke liye na kaha unhein kitna bura laga hoga... voh ghar ki badi hai..."

Shaan said giving him assurance, "jab tak mein zinda hun, mere bachchon ko darrne ki koi jarurat nahin... ab koi tumhein dukh takleef nahin de sakta, yeh mera vaada hai... aur dhyaan rahe aaj ke baad kabhi mujhse dur jaane ki baat sochna bhi mat... itni mushkil se ek pyaar bhara pariwaar mila hai, mein ab kisi ko nahin kho sakta..." he pulled Shakhi in his embrace blessing them both...

Anokhi still feeling bad for Devi and Tej , tried to convince him, "Papa, mujhe maloom hai aap Badi maa se naraaz ho par aise unhein iss umra mein akele chhod dena bhi theek nahin hai... mein jaanti hun unhone iss pariwar mein sabko dukh diya hai par isase hamari jimmedari toh khatam nahin ho jaati... hum apna farz kaise bhool sakte hai..."

Shaan caressing her head lovingly, "tumhari yahi baatein toh tumhein sabse alag aur khaas banati hai... jis insaan ne tumhein itna dukh diya, tumne itna dukh saha tum usake baare mein bhi itna sochti ho... aaj bhi unki jara si galti se tumhein kitni chot lag sakti thi... par tumhein unki hi chinta hai..." she looked at him with pleading eyes, "mein chati hoon ke humara bacha ke bhare pure parivaar mein baad ho...usse sabka pyaar mile...mein chati hoon ke yeh bacha apne Papa ke ghar mein baad ho......" after everyone's finished talked they came up with Anokhi and Shaurya along with Astha and Shaan will be moving back to the mansion

Anokhi got comfortable in Sahurya's room when Astha came with a bowl of khichdi

"Maa nahi khichdi nahi...mujhe chat khani hai...Anokhi said

exclaimed Astha caressing her cheeks. Abhi yeh Khao baad mein chaat khana Anokhi smiled and ate 

"Maa wo mujhe Kuch baat Karni thi aapse" said Anokhi nervously.

"Haan bolo na beta" asked Astha softly.

"Maa mujhe Lagta hai mujhe apne gharwalon ko maaf kar dena Chahiye kamse Kam mummyji aur papaji ko toh zaroor. Parso Aaye the maafi maang rahe the, mujhe bilkul Acha Nahi laga maa. Koi bada Apne bacchon ke aage haath jode, ye kisse Dekha jaa Sakta hai. Us waqt toh main gusse mein bhi thi ya shayad Mera ego Jo us waqt unhe maaf Nahi Kar saka par main khud unse Itne time tak door aur naraz Nahi reh sakti. Meri wajah se Babli Di bhi itna Kuch suffer Kar rahi Hain. Wo bhi un sab se door ho gayi Hain."

"Main unse bohot pyaar Karti hoon maa. Unhe us din itna Kuch sunake itna Bura laga itna guilt feel Hua aakhir Itne Saalon tak wohi toh mere maata pita the na toh aise kaise unse zindagibhar ke liye Mooh mod loon? wo bhi apni Galti ko samajh Gaye Hain aur Maine bhi maan liya hai ki shayad Maine unhe zyada hi galat samajh liya toh main chahti hoon ki Mere aur Shaurya ke rishte ko unka bhi aashirwaad mile" completed Anokhi hugging Astha.

Astha caressed her back and kissed her forehead saying "main jaanti thi Anokhi ki tumhe ye realize zaroor hoga kyuki tum Dil ki bohot saaf hai. Wo tumhara gussa tha jis wajah se tum chahkar bhi maaf Nahi Kar paa rahi thi, apna Nahi paa rahi thi magar ab tumhare Dil mein sab Kuch clear ho Gaya hai. Chalo Rona band Karo. Koi kitna bhi naraz ho le Apne Mata pita se, zyada samay tak Nahi reh sakte aur aakhir Tumhare asli parents toh wohi Hain na. Kuch Dinon mein tumhara Ghar choot jaayega, Shaadi Karke humare yahan aa jaaogi tab aur realize aur dard mehsoos Hoga unse door hone Ka. Chalo bas bas ab mat ro" consoled Astha and rubbed off her overflowing tears.

"Par ab kya wo mujhe wapis apnayenge?" asked Anokhi holding back her tears.

"Kyun Nahi. Jis Tarah bacche Apne parents ke Bina Nahi reh sakte waise hi wo bhi toh Nahi reh sakte Apne bacchon ke Bina. Aakhir bacchon mein Jaan Jo basti hai maa Baap ki. Hmm? Ab pareshaan mat ho. Phone lagao unhe.?" said Astha cupping her face.

Anokhi nodded and called Rama.

"Mummyji"

After a few hours Shaurya was sitting with Anokhi

"Anokhi humari Shaadi Ka kya? Kitni Baar cancel hogi? Is Baar toh humari Shaadi hokar hi rahegi. Main abhi Maa ko kehe kar aaya" exclaimed Shaurya .

"Shaurya kya Kar rahe ho. Kya sochenge maa. Abhi abhi hospital se Aaye ho aur Shaadi wagerah. Itne utavle mat bano..." scolded Anokhi shyly.

"Khudse toh sabra ho Nahi Raha hai aur mujhe bol rahi ho" smirked Shaurya while Anokhi looked at him with wide eyes "Huh bohot Acche se jaanta hoon main tumhe. Itna bhi seedha banne ki zaroorat nahi hai"

Anokhi smacked his chest saying "Buddhu ho tum. Zyada hi sochte ho aur Mr. Hero ji itni jaldi machaoge toh gharwale humari Shaadi Mandir mein hi Kara denge" mocked Anokhi.

"Mujhe manzoor hai" answered Shaurya excitedly.

"Nahi Shaurya... Shaadi sabki zindagi mein sabse badi cheez Hoti hai aur har ladki Ka Sapna Hota hai ki uska dulha usey ghodi par Lene Aaye and doli mein lekar jaaye" exclaimed Anokhi dreamily.

"Meri Anokhi ke Itne Sundar sapne Hain aur main in saare sapnon ko zaroor poora karoonga" assured Shaurya kissing her forehead.

"abhi tak mitne Nahi Diya aur jab tak tum Apne haathon se Nahi bhar doge, yahi humare Saath ki nishaani rahega" exclaimed Anokhi blushingly. Shaurya looked at her lovingly, how pure her love is. Being in this modern generation also, the way she follows the traditions and believes in them is so underrated.

"Itni pyaar kaisi ho tum Anokhi" exclaimed Shaurya kissing her cheeks. Anokhi blushed profusely moving her face in other direction.

"Sachme, tum jab aise sharmati ho na, mann karta hai ki bas tumhe aise kaske pakadke din Bhar baitha rahoon (he pulls her and holds her tightly in his arms) aur tumhare in soft soft cheeks ko bas din Raat kiss karta rahoon (and placed a trail of kisses on her cheeks)"

"Shaurya" whinned Anokhi hiding her face in his embrace due to extreme shyness.

"Tumhara poora chehra laal ho Gaya hai" chuckled Shaurya caressing her face while Anokhi hid herself more in him. Both spend some lovey dovey moments and then spend the whole day with each other, talking, laughing remembering the good old days.

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The Bhallas,Sabherwal and Reema had come to the Sabherwal mansion for dinner when Shaurya came down with Ankohi making her sit comfortable

"Maa ab toh pakke mein Shaadi Karni hai. Ab bas bohot ho Gaya. Aur Nahi" whinned Shaurya cutely while Anokhi looked down in shyness making others chuckle.

"Haan Haan humare utavle dulhe!! Kara rahe Hain Teri Shaadi" mocked Shaan making him embarrassed.

"Behenji, Dekha jaaye toh Shaadi ki saari taiyaariyan karni hogii, sab samaan wagerah khareed na tha" exclaimed Rama.

"Haan toh aap log bata dijiye kab Kahan kaise shaadi Karni Hain. Hum saara intezaam Kar lenge" assured Ramesh.

" bhaisahab, humne firse tareekh toh nikalwa li hai Shaadi ki jo ek hafte baad hai. Jaanta hoon bohot jaldi hai magar bacchon par itni pareshaaniyan aayi Hain ki ab toh Lagta hai jitni jaldi Shaadi ho utna hi Accha hai. Shaadi chandigah se hi ho toh behtar rahega. Aap logon ke liye asaan bhi padega" explained Shaan

"Haldi mehendi toh sab Ghar mein hi ho jaayegi Babli said smiling

rahi baat Sangeet ki toh Humara Ghar kaafi bada hai toh Sangeet toh wahin ho jaayega aur Shaadi ke liye hum sab milke ek badiya sa hotel book Kar Lete Hain. Kanchan added

" behenji ye toh bohot hi Accha Soch rakha Hai aapne. Aisa hi Sahi rahega hai na ji?" asked rama looking at ramesh.

He nodded in agreement saying "Haan ye Acha rahega. Hum kal hi se saari taiyaariyan chalu Kar denge"

"Ek minute" exclaimed Anokhi drawing everyone's attention "matlab humari haldi saath mein nahi hogi?" Shaurya too looked at them hopefully.

"Nahi Anokhi. Maana ki aajkal saari rasmein Ladka ladki ki Saath mein hi Hoti Hain magar is baar sab itni jaldi mein hai aur waise bhi asli haldi toh aise hi Hoti hai, pehle ladke ko lagti hai aur fir uski utari haldi ladki ko

Ramesh smiled and said " je woh hum Shaadi Kapurthala se karma chaathe hai...woh kya hai ghar ke akhiri Shaadi hai aur aakhir baar Anokhi ke spath usa ghar mein jana hai....

bulaye jitni paramparik tareeke se tum dono ki Shaadi ho, utna hi Acha Hai. Jitna aashirwaad milega utne hi sukh se sampann Hoga vivah" explained Devi.

All the elders agreed and too half heartedly exchanging sad expressions but then smiled in assurance.

All the elders kept discussing for the events while they went inside to spend sometime.

"Shaurya ab humare paas sirf ek hafta hai Shaadi mein ." exclaimed Anokhi "par finally humari Shaadi ho rahi Hai...itni saari hardships ke baad finally. Shaurya is Baar toh koi adchan Nahi aayegi na?" asked Anokhi hopefully.

"Anokhi relax. Sab Accha hoga. Is Baar Kuch bhi Nahi hoge I promise." assured Shaurya.

"Shaurya hum abhi tak pata Nahi Laga paaye ki kaun hai Jo Hume Itne time se nuksaan pahucha Raha hai agar firse aisa Kuch hua toh..." Anokhi shut her eyes getting scared.

"Anokhi please... Think positive. Sab Accha hoga. Mujhpar bharosa hai na? Main sab theek rakhunga I promise. Kuch Nahi Hoga. Tum sab mujhpar chhod do. Is Baar pakka na tumhe na mujhe, kisiko Kuch Nahi hone doonga. Humari Shaadi Tay date par hi hogi. Ye Shaurya Ka Waada hai apni Anokhi se" determined Shaurya.

"Anokhi beta, saara samaan ache se pack Kar Lena is hafte mein, kamse Kam ab aakhri Baar toh humare Saath rahegi Ghar par fir Vida ho jaayegi" exclaimed Rama emotionally. Tears welled up in her eyes and she hugged him tightly. Everyone adored them with misty eyes.

"Bas bas. Abhi hi saare aansu baha legi toh Vidai mein kya haste haste jaayegi" exclaimed Ahir dekho police aur safety ke zimmidairi meri

trying to make her laugh but ended up making her cry more a

"Ab toh hum ghodi lekar aayenge humari bahu ko Lene" exclaimed Gayatri excitedly.

"Aur Haan doli mein bithakar le jaayenge" added Alok making her blush deeply.

"Sharma gayi" teased Astha and laughed loudly. 

Anokhi blushed but then became sad."Kya Hua? Chehra kyun utar gaya tumhara hmm?" asked rama sitting beside her."Anokhi, isme tumhari koi Galti Nahi hai...Tumne Sahi hi Kaha. Humne kayi Baar tumhe Nahi samjha aur tumhara ye mehsoos Karna jaayas tha. Humse zyada humesha Babli ne hi tujhe pyaar Diya. Kitni Baar toh tere kade samay mein hum tera Saath Nahi de paaye hum bhi utne hi gunehgaar hain toh ab tum zyada mat socho. " she explained. Both hugged Anokhi tightly from both the sides soothing her.

Bhai sahab, waise toh hum apni taraf se poori koshish karenge ki aapko iss shaadi mein koi shikayat na ho lekin agar aap kuch batana chahe toh keh sakte hain." Ramesh courteously asked Shaan.

"Aap kaisi baat kar rahe hain... yeh hamare bachhon ki shaadi hai, koi business ki deal nahi... hum dono mil kar saari taiyari karenge... chahe woh sagai ho ya shaadi... saara kharcha aadha aadha hoga." Ramesh was aghast at Shaan's hint.

It was a shock for Ramesh and Rama.

"Aap kyon kharcha karenge? Hamari beti ki shaadi hai toh yeh sab hamari zimmedaari hai." He enforced.

Astha gently smiled, "Shaadi toh hamare bete ki bhi hai."

"Lekin aisa toh Astha again.

"Dekhiye i, hum inn purane riwaazon ko nahi maante... haan, samaaj ke niyam ke hisaab se shaadi ke baad Anokhi hamare ghar ahegi lekin uske alawa aap kabhi bhi aisa mat samajhna ki aapko apni beti se alag hona hai... aap jab chahen wahan aake mil sakti hain ya usse bula sakti hain... aur Sahurya ko bhi... yeh dono hamare liye barabar rahenge hamesha... isliye inki shaadi bhi hum do parivaaron ki barabar ki zimmedaari honi chahiye... aur ismein hum koi samjhauta nahi karenge." Her words were even a bigger surprise for Rama.

She looked at her husband. He blinked... silently assuring her that it was all right.

Looking back at the, he said, "Dekhiye, shahyad tej bhaisab unhe thoda aitraaz ho iss baat se."

Shaan placed one hand on Anand's shoulder, "unko ko jaanta hun main... unhe yakeenan bohot si baaton se aitraaz hoga, aur unki patni ko bhi... lekin main khud unse baat karunga, apke saath baith ke... humein iss samaaj ki ladkiyon ke prati dharna ko badalne ki koshish karni chahiye... maa baap apni ladki bhi dede aur iss baat ke liye jhuke hue bhi rahe, aisa mujhe bohot galat lagta hai... khaaskar jab mata pita ko yeh sab karne ke liye karz tak lena pad jaata hai... maine apni behen ke saath iss tarah ka bartaav hote dekha tha apni shaadi se pehle... tab toh main kuch kar nahi paaya lekin jab meri shaadi hui tabhi soch liya tha ki na meri beti aise saude ke saath kisi ke ghar jayegi aur na kisi aur ki beti apne maa baap pe yeh bojh daal ke mere ghar aayegi... ab bhagwan ne beti toh di nahi, lekin humari Anokhi hamare ghar hamari sharton pe hi aayegi... aur aap iske baad iss baare mein kuch nahi bolenge."

Ramesh  felt the dampness in his eyes... first Anokhi, and now Babli, both his daughters had chosen such good life partners for themselves... he would not have been able to do so for them. Babli was married to Vineet who was a terrible boy but there had been several issues during her marriage and even after that, regarding the gifts that were given or the food being served, or even the respect being shown to them by girl's side... her in laws seemed to be highly unsatisfied with everything.

Ramesh accepted the terms without any further reluctance, showing his gratitude at their thinking.

"Agar aap jaisi soch samaaj mein aadhe log bhi rakhein toh ladkiyon ki zindagi bohot aasaan ho jayegi... aur unke ghar walon ki bhi." He folded his hands.

"Wow Shaadi hashtag Anorya ya Phir Shahki' exclaimed Bebo...."I think Anorya not Shakhi" no I think Shakhi is better .....Beta Ganpati bapa Morya hota hai Anorya nahi Alok said Dad hum couple name bana rahe hai Bebo responded....Anokhi And Shaurya watched everyone smiling and keeping their hands on the baby....

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