Fallen Fire

By Doctor_Dispatch

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Njn inni padikkunilla.. ahh athe thanne..

Wait wait... Ee chapter muthale nalla reethiyile pedikkum... Pedikkune chodhicha ..  the way I present.. eantte presentation best akkan vendi cheyuvanathintte maximum effort njn idum... Kettalo... Please don't misunderstand me .. avasanam njn athane ithane eanne onnum paranjekkaruthe ....

Appo nammale eandha paranje...
Onnulla vote and comment..

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Ahh angane Nammade kookie kili poyi irikkuvalle??

Jin : joonie edi Innaa...
Joonie : alla ithe Ippo eannatha??
Jin : Apple kandude??
Joonie : Sheda ithe Ippo eandhina tharunene..
Jin : Kochine kodukedi..
Joonie : eathe kochine.. ooo ahhh ahh okay okay..
Jin : Inna ithum koode ..
Suga : Eanikile appa..
Jin : Ninake njn thanitte inde... Eantte ponoo , anne Eannathayirunu ee fridge full tangerines allayiruno.. nee athrayoke thinna mathi..
Suga : njn jenichitte 10,20 kollam aayile.. ippozhum ee fridge thanna use cheyune?
Joonie chuckled...
Jin : Ninake illedi... Ninake ingane thanne varanam...pointed to Suga
Joonie : ohh njn ange sahichu.. eantte koche vaa..

Hobi : aisheri appo eanne vende??
Joonie : ammade ponne odi vaayo.. and hobi moved to Joonie...
Jin : kookie eandhedaa??
Hobi : Roomile inde...
Joonie : Ksheeniche kidakkuvale .. athe eangane aa kochintte (Felix) mondha kaniche vechekkune kandille??
Jin : Joonie kochine vazhake parayalle..
Joonie : Illa parayunilla.
Nammade kookie Tae evide poyathe ayirikkune orthonde irikkuvaa...

Meanwhile Tae


Tae was walking through the town..
Pullikarithi full depressed anne...
Avalde manasile otta Chindha mathre ollu... She wanna find out where her dad is...
Appo pettane she collapsed with some one ..
Tae : Evide nokkiyado nadakkune??BBB : Sorry
Tae : Ehhh?? Ningalo??nokkumbo aara??? Chanyeol...
Eanoke njn paranjene... But aayittila mathaa..
God : Ahh njn thanne... Ivide eandhe edukkuva??
Tae ignore him and starts to walk...
God aara mone...

God : athe onne ninne...
Tae : Ippo eandha vende??
God : Well , ee sthalam eangane inde?? Beautiful alle??
Tae looks around... Atmosphere is full of dust , CO2 ..
God : ehh?? Eyyy athe okke ivanmarude contribution anne..
Tae : hmm...
God : eyy avide ninnee... Chodhikette and he put his hand through his granddaughter's shoulder...
Tae thatti mattan sremikal...

God : Ohh oru jada kari... Than vaado..
And he drag her to coffee shop..
God : Chetta 2 tea.. nee irike..
Tae : *onnum mindathe irikkuva*
God : mm.. avale ninne anveshichu..
Tae : ........... Aree?
God : Baekee..
Chaya chettan : Inne chettaa .. kazhikan eandha vende??
God : Rande redhish..
Tae : whattttttt???
God : pazhampori...
Tae : uffff...
God : Nee eandha ammane kuriche onnum chodhikathe??
Tae : .........................
God : ivanmare ithile pinneyum vellam ozhicho.. eandhengillum aavatte...*sip the tea*

God : appo eandhane Taede future plan??
Tae : .................
God : 5 varsham chumma ingane kalayan pattuvo?? Vellathum padikan povundo?? Nammake Twilight saga yile polle nalla mass entry okke koduthe varam...
Tae : ...................
God : alle Venda Vella Jollyum tharatte?? Nammade My Girlfriend is alien ne polle
Tae : ....................
God : atho inni oru kalyanam aayalo?? Patti oru kottare inde.. Ivide adutha .. ee njayarazhicha varan paray--
Tae : Onne mindathe irikavo...
God : Ombraa..

Tea chettan : Inna chettaa...
God : ahh.. eannevunde chetta vishesham??
Tea chettan : ohh eanna parayan... Angane ange ponne..
God : athe eannada Uvve?? Montte karyam sheriyalile?
Tea chettan : ohh avane polle oru thalatheriche oranam... Eallam dheyvam therumanikkuna polle alle?
God : aisheri inni athe Angerde thale vekke..
Tae chuckled..

God : appo sheri vaa..
Tae : alla appo bill...
God : bill adakkano?? Sheri nee adachitte vannere njn aa postintte avide kannum
Tae : Njano??
God : Vegam vannere... And he left the chat..
Tae : aishhhhh... She just got up and followed him.. cause she can also invisible too..

Pullikarithi purathe vannapo God is chatting with a girl...
God : Mudi eandhina muriche?.
Girl : Eanike cancera..
God : aare paranje?? Njn arinjillalo? And he tick His finger on her head..
Tae ignore him and walk through his front ...
God : eanna sheri povane... Byee ddd Tae nikkee ... Ahh eanna pokkadi povune...onne ninne.. Ahh chodhikette..

Tae : Ippo eandha vende??
God : Ninode oru karyam parayana vanne..
Tae : Eandhe??
God : Nee vaa parayam... And he walk through her front..
Tae followed him..
God : Nintte amma ninne anuveshichu... Avake ninne kannane inde.. nee varuno?? Onne poyitte varam..
Tae : eanike arayum kannenda..
God : Tae...  She is your mother..
Tae : So what? Where is my dad..
God : aaaa? thamburane ariyam..
Tae : best...

God : alla Ippo eandhina avane anuveshikkune??
Tae : Ningale eandhina eanne anuveshiche vanne??
God : Ohh atho... Mm nee ingane veruthe karangi nadakaruthe eanne parayan.
Tae : Athendha??
God : Thekkiniyile tamizhathi irangitte inde.
Tae : Ayine??

God : Ayine nee ... You should better get marked ..
Tae : eannane??
God : Alla.. njn onne orumipichune ollu... 
Tae : Vere Vella paniyum ille??
God : eanike pani inde... Athe nee nokkenda..
Tae : eanne nokkan eanike ariyam...
God : Mm kanda mathi..
Tae : Ahhh.. evide nokki ado nadakkune??
BBBB : Sorry...
God : Kando..
Tae : ithe ningale manapoorvam idipuchathe anne eanike ariyam..
God : Ahhaaa manasilaki kalanjalo..
Tae : Than podo..
God : Nee podi..

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Appo athe samayathe vere Oridathe..

Eminem : B78 , 29 ..
Robin : Noted ..
Kevin : here is the forensic report..
Eminem took it and go through it...
Eminem : CA?? *Smirked* clear cheytheke. Vechonde irikenda ... Venom is dangerous..
Robin : ok..
Then Eminem got a message : Clear the way , Master is here..



















Mmm eangotta... bgm ide ide...
Rakshasanile Christopher bgm





























Don Lee (The devil of his world)
One of the most 4 popular devil's orale... The real Devil Monster..

Eminem wish his Master ..

Eminem : Master , The leading rate was at it's optimum till Last month , but According to yesterday's result.. we are the no.1. And the main update.. The Council board is waiting for your presence and the cult will be in minutes...
Don : Take me to there..
Eminem : This way sir...









And they entered to the hall...
With in second The door opened for him..

(Wow nice shot)
And they all got in...

Pullikarane avide chennapo bakki members already ready ayiite nikkuva for the ritual...
(I repeat one more time .. it's just my imagination.. as you all know that I have Wild imagination.. that doesn't mean like I am a part of this community.. I am a Christian for God sake.. eandhe cheyana Wide imagination oru weakness aayi poyi)

Mupare aa roomileke eathiya pade..


The girls for the cult got Alert...
Possessed ... He just smirked and move forward

And he saw the ee sathanathine eannaayirunnu parayune... Ahh Throne .. he saw the Throne ...
He just look at that.... And stood in front of it...

Eminem : Master this way . And then
Don move to his seat ..
He is the second devil na?? So everyone respect him..
Mm eanitte ...

Eminem : master can we--
Don Lee : Rocky??

Rocky : I am here dad..
Don Lee 's 3 rd son..
Muparede 4 makkalile orale..
Don : Avan Eandhe??
Rocky : Varum.. roomilund-- I am here...

Don Lee's first Son Taemin. 
Just like his dad...
Mupare nalla mona... Onne cheyulla.. pedikenda Kuttetta . Njn ille??

Mupare kanda pade Girls inne illaki.. oru mathri Y/n bhadha keriya Fangirls ine polle...
Mm veruthe alla haters indavune ... Ahh ivide. Sredhike..

When he moved to his dad..
He just hugged him... And joined the Cult... Uffff...
Taemin : Ee Throne eanne nammake swandhamavum
Don : samayam varum... when he looks at Lil nas's Coronation

Lil Nas (The Leader of The hell)
Ee positione vendi anne ee achanum makkalum nokki irikkune..

Rocky : Why he always?
Don : Avan varathe konde... ahhhh--
Taemin : Daddd.. you okay
Rocky : daddy
Eminem : Master...
Don : he is here...

Meanwhile at Earth..

Tae : Eanike onnum kekkenda..
God : angane paranja eangana ponnu??
Tae : Eanike arayum kannenda ..
God : sheri kanenda... Nee eandhinadi ee kuruthakede okke Katti koottune?
Tae : ...................
God : Nee eandhina Avanode ee kadhayoke parayan poye?? Nattukare arinjille?
Tae : Eanike istamallullavarode njn parayum.. ningake eanna??
God : appo avane istamane  .... Le??
Tae : ahh athe athine Ippo eandha??
Angelsine manushane snehikan pattillalo... That's the rule right... They will never called as angel again alle??
God : I can see my marimone in you .. same DNA...
Tae : Karanam njn eantte appantte mola...
And she starts to walk...

God : Edi onne avide ninne .. parayune kekke ..
Tae : Ippo eandha vende??
God : Eanike onnum Venda...nee ingane purathe irangi nadakkenda ....
Tae : eangotte ponane njn thirumanicholam..
God : nee evide poyalum I will be there...
Tae : Njn hellile poyalo??
God : vere vazhi illalo... Vannale pattu..
Tae : eanne onne veruthe vidavo...
God : Naaa.... Nooo...
Tae : Ohhhhh 😤😵😵😵..

God : atha njn paranj--- (ahh some one collided with him )
Nikhil : ohh sorry chetta kandilla..
Tae hold by his collar..
God : eannatha koche ee kanikkune ayale vitte.. sorry eantte koche mole kurache aggressive anne..
Nikhil : But she looks cute ...
Tae was still looking at him in an angry mood.
God : Sorry eandhe cheyana avalde appantte athe DNAya...
Nikhil : Ningale grangpa anno ee kuttide?
God : Kanditte brother ayitte thonniyalle?? I know...
Tae rolled her eyes....
God : Oppss... Sorry 😐
Tae again walks forward....
God : aisheri eanneyum konde po.
Nikhil just chuckled and moved forward in his way....

Again Tae couldn't understood Her dad...
Karanam God intte koode ayirikkumbo they two were like humans.. athonde anne Arengillum vanne thattiyalo muttiyalo avarke feel cheyune... And same for humans avarkum Taeyine kannan pattune...
(Uppitte oru shoda)

Tae again walk forward...
God runs back to her ...
God : Ninake eandhengillum feelings indo??
Tae : Ahhh kollan ...
God : athalledi mandi... Ninake ee bhumi eandha ithra sundharam ayirikkune ariyavo??
Tae : Cause fuel intte excessive use Karanam CO2 intte amount rase ayathe konde
God : Nee science videe . Allathe...
Tae : Onne povamo...
God : Ninake manishanmarum Angelsum thammilulla difference eannane ariyavo??
Tae : Ahhh avarke Wings illa Nammake wings inde ..
God : But BTS ine Wings indalo... Athine artham they are angels eanne anno??
Tae : Aayikodane illalo??

God : muthee nee ithe kekke.. Wings konde mathram alla Angelsum humans um thammilulla difference...
Angels Eallarum Controlled anne to their feels , to their attitudes and everything.. but human's angane alla .. they are free to choose everything... Oru manishan nallavan agano thette cheyano eanne avan thirumanikkum... Athine idayile God eanno Devil eanno avan nokkarilla... He do it for his own goods ..
Tae : Then why you love them the most than us??
God : Cause... You are with me... Avaro?? Alone... Feeling the pain ..
Tae : then Why you making them suffer? End this shits..
God : Swargathilekkula vazhi idungithane monee...  Aa oru seatilekulla Audition anne ee Earth...
Tae : wow what an explanation...
So you mean suffering is better way??
God : not at all... Ninne njn eandhina ivideke ayachathe??
Tae : Suffere cheyan...
God : Then Suffer... Life is not  suffer..nee paranjathe nokkuvanengile Ee 5 varshathe sufferingintte idake oru thavana eangillum nee karanam mattoralke happiness kodukan kazhinja.. That the meaning of your life...
Tae : Mathlab??
God : Mathlab .... Nintte ee life spoil cheyaruthe... You life is meaningful for someone .. ninake athe Ippo manasilavilla...
Tae sighss...

Tae : uffff...
God : Keri Chelle..
Tae : eangotte??
God pointed to the house...
Tae : 😦😦😦😦. Again...
God : nadakke angotte vaa.. eannathayallum ividam vare eathiye alle?? Kochine onne kanditte povam..
Tae : Eathe kochine??
God : edi Joonie debut alle?? Vayittile ulla vavaye.. and They two enter the house again...

Jin : ariyathille?? Ninake onnum ariyathilleda ???
Suga : eantte appa onne mindathe irikke njn onne urangikotte...
Jin : Edaa Pucha kadha , Squarrelintte kadha , bunny de kadhaa.. inni eandhintte kadhaya parayendene ninake ariyille??
Suga : Vella pattikadhayum paranje kodukke...
Jin : athe nintte kochine paranje kodutha mathi..
Suga : Singlesine appamanikale appa...
God : soo sed lyf... Ivane ithe vare aarum set aayille?? Oru thepe kooduthalo?.
Tae : Ningake ithe eandhane??
God : Just for a resam..

Tae : Best ..
Joonie : Ahh Best...
Tae : ehhh???
Joonie : ningake nanam indo manisha..
Jin : illadi oru manavumilla..
Suga : athanalo vayasam kalathe ingane irikkune..
Jin : Phaaaa nintte thandhake aada vayase aaye??
Suga : mmm...😴😴
Jin : njane world wide handsome aa.
Dheyvame thamburane vanne paranja pollum njn young forever aada
God : eantte dheyvame...
Tae : ehhhh??!

God : Ohhh ponneee...
Joonide vayittile vava : Chachaa..
God rush to Joonie who is sitting on the couch...
God : Ponnee🥰
Vava : Chachaa 😘..
God : ponne🤩
Vava : chacha🥰
God : ponn🥳
Vava : chach😇
God : pon👻
Vava : cha😎
God : Po😄
Vava : ch😃
God : P😡
Vava : C😠
Tae : 🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦....

Appo angotteke Hobi vannu..
Hobi : amma eanike.. oru Karyam parayan inde .
God : Entte Joonie angotte samadhike.. tour alle pillere potte..
Joonie : Ohh tourintte karyam anno..
Hobi : ehhh?? Eangane manasilayi .
Joonie : Njane nintte ammaya.. eanike ariyam..
God : ahh Ippo eangane irikkune ..
Tae : 😐😐😐😐

Hobi : amma Please amma ee oru otta thavana Please please..
Joonie : appayode chodhichitte pokko
Hobi : Appaa Please appa..
Jin : Ahh tour alle poko--*Joonie rolled her eyes* vendaa...
Hobi : pokovendayo??
Jin : Povendaa ..hobi looks at Joonie
Joonie : 🤷
Hobi : Please amme eannane??
Kookie : eanna amme Please
Tae looks at his direction.
God : *ahem*....mm
Tae rolled her eyes . And sit straight beside God at the couch...

Kookike Taene kannan pattila .. Taeke vashi anne vashi... Mm nallatha..
Joonie : mm eanna venne cheye...
Hobi : Orappale.. pere koduthotte..
Joonie : Mm eathra rupaya??
Hobi : Only 5000 rupees
Joonie : eathrane??
Hobi : 5000 ...
Joonie : Ponne mone povendaa .
Kookie : appo njn pokkotte??
Joonie : Neeyaa??
Kookie : ahh njangale rande perum povunundee...
Jin : Ningale appane picha chatti edupikkuvo??
Hobi : Ingane eachi kannake parayalle appa ..
Jin : Illada 10000 rupaa verum nisharam..
Joonie : pinne 10000 rupayee.  Onne po manisha eantte makkale amma nale parkile konde povam ketto...
God : Ee dialogue keralathile ammarude masterpiece slogan anno??
Tae : Eanike ariyillaa..
God : Nintte amma athine ninne evide eangillum vittitte indo??
Tae : Illa athonda njn ingane irikkune.
God : njanjayii..
Tae : njanjanjanjanjanjanjanjanja
God : konjakonjakonjakonjakonja

Angane avare veetile irikkuna idathe ee chapter theernu...

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Eangane inde kuttetta??

Horror + Thriller + Comedy+ Romantic .. chumma ee combo onne nokkithaa....

Eanna sheri bye..

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