RAANJHA

By inkie_love

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preeran kaira ss More

char sketch
part 2
part 3
part 4
part 5
part 6
Part 7
Part 8
part 9
part 10
part 11
part 12
part 13
part 14
part 15
part 16
part 17
part 18
part 19
promo
part 20
part 21
part 22
part 23
part 24

part 1

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By inkie_love

Scene opens up in haveli of small village

"oyee preeta... Patang sambhal apni... Dekh zara" kishore the sarpanch of village nd preeta's father voice echoes

Preeta : ji papa ji... Oyee gauri sambhal na charki... Dheel de.....dheel de....

Kishore (smiles proudly) : oyee katt gyi... Dekha sab ne kaat di meri kudi ne patang... Aaja mera puttar... (preeta smile running to his arms)

Preeta : aaj tk kisi ki majaal nhi hui ki mere papa ji ki patang koi kaat sake... Waise hi koi meri patang kaise katt dega.... Mai mere papa ji ki hi puttar hun...

Kishore : woh toh h... Meri puttar... Mera maan.... (kissed her forehead)

Gauri : mama ji... Ab patang baazi ho gyi... Toh hum jaa rhe hn mele mein...

Preeta : haan papa ji.... Aap ko pta h mele mein baht bde fakir baba aayein h... Sab unke paas apna bhavishya janne jaa rhe hn...

Rajni (preeta's mother) : oyee tujhe tera bhavishya kyun janna h haan...

Gauri (hug her from back) : mami ji....preeta ko uske raanjhe ke baare mein janna h kyun... (hit her shoulder with preeta's) kudiye..

Preeta : ayee chup kr... Kuch bhi mt bol... Maa hum jaayein... (looked at her father who was with other people) papa ji ko bhi bol diya h... Jaane do na...

Rajni : thik h jaa jldi... Pr jldi aana thik h...

Preeta and gauri left hurriedly...but collides with Vinod a local goon

Vinod : aree kudiye dheere.... (preeta gauri started to leave) oye soniyo.... (preeta glares him)  tere yeh tevar na thode thande kr le... Tera hone wala pati hun.... Patni hone ka dhang seekh le..

Gauri : oyee... Kisne tujhse keh diya ki preeta teri heer bnegi... Abe tere jaise sadakchaap gunde ka heer bnna meri behn ki kismat me baba ji be likha hi nhi h.... Uske liye toh bdi dur se ranjha aayega....

Vinod : oyee gauri....

Gauri : kya oye bol.... Mama ji se shikayat kr deni h teri maine... Chl hatt jaane de hume.... Chl preeta.... Chl na... (hold preeta's hand nd dragged her away)

Preeta : tu kyu us vinod se pange leti h gauri.. Jaanti h na woh gunda h... Acha insaan h... Khin kbhi bura maan kr...

Gauri : oye tu itni darti kyu h haan... Tu is gaon ke sarpanch kishore lal ki beti h.... Thoda raub rkha kr meri tarah... Jaise mai mama ji ka raub rkhti hun...

Preeta : tu yhan rehti ni gauri.....na hi tujhe pta h yeh vinod kaisa h.... Tu na jyada pange mt liya kr wrna... Preshani mere liye khdi ho jaani h... (gauri look at her)  chl ab... Ghurti rhegi toh woh fakir baba nikl jaane h kisi aur gaon... Kisi or des... Or ranjha bhi ho chlega kisi aur ka...

Gauri (smiles) : chl ab....

Both reached the village fair.... Preeta look around happily..... Gauri smile seeing her...

Preeta : kitna bda mela lga h na.... Tujhe pta h gauri mai akele kbhi nhi aayi... Papa ji aur maa woh humesha saath rehte the... Aur mai kbhi bhi maza kr hi nhi paayi.... Gaon walon ki baht bdiya kahavat sunega... Ldkiyan jyada maza krengi toh parivaar ke liye saza saath le kr aeyengi..

Gauri : aur tu kya sochti h... Mama ji tujhe puttar bolte hn... Kya woh bhi..

Preeta : sarpanch ki soch gaon ki soch hoti h (smiles sadly) mujhe khuli hawa me apna dupatta lehrana h... Bina kisi ki baatein sune... Mujhe khub nachna h jb dholi dhol bajaye... Bina kisi bandish ke.... Mujhe mere ranjhe se vyaah krna h... Bina yeh sune ki ldkiyon ka prem krna.. Pyaar krna paap h.. Pr yhan... Aisa kuch nhi ho sakta... Tu baht kismat wali h bui or fufa ji tujhe is gaon... Is mahol se dur le gye..

Gauri : toh tu chl na is baar mere saath.... Baht achi job krti hun mai.. Wahan tu bhi join kr liyo... (preeta looks around)  tu khud nhi kadam bdayegi... Toh kbhi is pichdi duniya se nhi nikl payegi... Tujhe pta h dhkke ki zarurat h (gauri stood behind her)

Dhoondhe har ik saans mein
Dubkiyon ke baad mein
Har bhanwar ke paas Kinare
Beh rahe jo sath mein
Jo hamare khaas thhe
Kar gaye apni baat kinare

Gauri pushes her.... Preeta took a step... She again pushed her... Preeta again took a step....

Gar maajhi saare sath mein
Gair ho bhi jaayein
To khud hi to patvaar ban
Paar honge hum
Jo choti si har ik nehar
Saagar ban bhi jaaye
Koi tinka leke hath mein
Dhoondh lenge hum kinare
Kinaare… kinare…

Preeta took a step... She starts walking forward with smile.... Gauri look at ger with smiles nd run to stood beside her....

Gauri : humesha dhkka ni dungi... Kbhi na kbhi yeh kadam khud bdane honge tujhe.....jyada dhkke dene se tu gir sakti h... Pr kisi ke zor daar dhkka mil gya na toh 4 kadam aage bhi bd sakti h... Kadam rukne nh chahiye preeta...

Preeta looked at her with smile nd nods.....both smiles walking forward....

But were stopped by Fakir baba who came infront of them...

Fakir baba : is baar heer ranjhe ki talaash mein nikli h.... (preeta look at him) khuli hawa mein saans lene chli h... Ranjha yhi khin h tera.... (preeta looks around) yeh ranjha heer ke liye ldega... Pr jhukega nhi.... Zeher teri zubaan pr lgne nhi dega.... Yeh raanjha tera saath aur yeh haath nhi chorega... Jaa dhundh usee... Yhi h woh... Yhi h woh... (keep his hand on preeta's head) maalik tere saath h... Jaa....(he put taabiz on her hand) yeh humesha saath rkhiyo.. Yeh taabiz tujhe tere ranjhe se jode rkhega... Humesha tum dono ki raksha krega...

Preeta gauri looked at fakir baba nd then each other...fakir baba left from there blessing them both... preeta looked at taabiz....

Gauri : oyee baba ne toh tere ranjhe ka pta hi bta diya.... Itne sare mundon me se koi na koi tera ranjha hoga...

Preeta : sach mein....

Gauri : chl dekhein... Aakhir yeh ranjha h kahan... Isi bahane mujhe bhi koi mil jayega.... Shehr me toh koi futi aankh mujhe nhi dekhta (preeta chuckles)

Both started looking around at the same time enjoying fair..

While other side

"bro....bro.... Ohhh hello bde bhaiya" karan turns around to Rudra his younger brother


Rudra : hum is mele mein ghumne aayein hn.... Phone calls or business krne nhi aaye...

Karan : ohk mrs mehta.... Aap ko kl shaam tk us site ke blue prints mil jayenge.... Not to worry... (karan disconnected the call... Nd looked at rudra) dont disturb me while i m on call...

Rudra : okay... Can we pls enjoy now.... Mom ne aapko aur mujhe enjoy krne bheja h.... Kaam ke liye ni...so no phones...

Karan : mai yhan kaam ke liye aaya hun.....sarpanch se meri kuch der me meeting h.... I have seen a land... Nd it would be good for our new project....this town needs development...this town needs its own college aur humara project help krega....

Rudra : bro..... Rehne do... Aap se baat krna bekaar h... Uh r too workaholic...ab is town ko kyun develop krna h.... Yhan se nikl kr sab log apne shehr me hi aate hn pdne..

Karan : apne parents se dur....nd i bet... Is chote shehr mein kitni ldkiyon ko woh ijazat hi nhi hogi... Agar apne shehr me hi college hoga... Woh atleast pd toh sakengi... Aankhon me dabe sapnon ko mehsus kr sakengi... And then we will be benefitted with it too uh knw.... The money we will earn...

Rudra : khin toh yeh Business tactics dur rkha kro bro... Abhi mujhe lga.. Mera bhai mahatma bn gya.. Nd then the money came... Bro money is not everything..

Karan : yeah i knw money is not everything.... But money is part of everything....

Rudra : now i cant retort with it...comeon bro... Itni soni soni kudiyan h... Unse baat shaat krte hn.. Mele ke tasty tasty chaat gole ka maza uthate hn.. (surround his arm around karan's shoulder)

Karan stare him nd then rudra's arm...

Rudra : sorry.. Ab chlein... (karan nods)

Karan rudra looks around...rudra was looking at everything amusingly seeing it for first time...while karan was uninterested... His main attetion was on his phone only....

Gauri : aree bhaiya ji... Woh wali chudiyan dena.... Dekh yeh kaisi lg rhi hn.... (rudra who was standing at another stall look at her) bol na preeta yeh green wali lun ya yeh laal wali...

"laal waali" preeta looked at rudra confusedly... Gauri wide her eyes...

Gauri : rudra.... Tum... What a pleasant surprise..... Hii...

Rudra: hii... What are uh doing here?  Ohh so office leave tum is tarah enjoy krti ho..

Gauri : aree nhi nhi rudra...  mere mama ji ka gaon paas mein hn... Hum log wahin aaye the... Yeh meri cousin.. Meri behn preeta..... Nd preeta yeh mere colleague or should i say one of my boss...

Rudra (forward his hand) : hii...

Preeta smiles joining her hand... Rudra smiles joining his hand...

Gauri : umm rudra... Woh MD bhi aayein hn kya.... (rudra nods) 

Preeta : MD?

Gauri/rudra : Mr Dhadkan.... (preeta look at them confusedly)

Rudra : mai samjhata hun... Mere bde bhai... Office ki har ldkiyon ki dil ki dhadkan h... Unhe dekh ke inki dhadkane tez ho jaati hn... (gauri nods)  aur unke gusse se har ldke ki dhadkan ruk jaati h... So sabne collab krke bro... Yani mere bhaiya... Inke boss ka naamkaran kiya Mr Dhadkan.... Aree woh dekho fir phone pr lg hue hn...

Gauri : hayee...dhak dhak chalu ho gyi....

Rudra : broo.... (karan walks towards them busy on phone)

His leg stumbles by stick nd bumps with preeta..... Preeta startles holdong on to him nd looked at him..

Karan : are uh fine... (he makes her stand properly... Preeta nods blinking her eyes) can we go now rudra... I'll get late.... Gauri tum..

Gauri : umm sir.. (his phone start ringing... Rudra groans)

Karan (cuts in) : excuse me...(he moves to other side)

End with this chapter

Precap

Some goons eve tease preeta finding her alone




Suggest actor/actress to play rudra and gauri (they will have main role in preeran's life)






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